Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYXP8AGF0CE5Q6W6B2E2WT

Run Details

Duration:
3m 22s
Cost:
$0.016369
Provider:
SiliconFlow

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon bled across the wet pavement, turning the November rain into liquid emerald. Aurora pushed through the heavy oak door of The Raven’s Nest, her shoulders hunched against the wind that had chased her down Greek Street. She had avoided this room for six days, taking the external staircase to her flat, pretending the buzz of voices below was merely city static. Tonight, the silence upstairs had grown teeth. She stood at the threshold, dripping onto the scarred floorboards. Maps papered the walls—Budapest, Prague, Belgrade—cities pinned with rusted tacks like specimens in a case. Black-and-white photographs crowded the gaps between cartography: anonymous men in trench coats, women with cigarette holders, landscapes blurred by motion or time. The air tasted of charred lemon peel and whisky fug. A man moved behind the bar, his gait uneven, favouring his left leg. Auburn hair, heavy with grey at the temples, caught the low light. He reached for a bottle, and the silver signet ring on his right hand scraped against the glass with a sound that made her teeth ache. Aurora’s fingers twitched toward the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, hidden beneath her jacket cuff. She stepped forward. A floorboard creaked. He turned. Hazel eyes, flecked with gold, tracked from her boots to her face. For a moment, nothing registered beyond professional assessment— sizing up a potential threat, a potential customer. Then the cloth in his hand stilled. "Brendan Carter’s girl." Not a question. His voice had acquired gravel since she’d last heard it, a whisky-and-cigarette rasp that belonged to someone older than the fifty-eight she calculated him to be. "Silas." The name emerged flat, toneless. She had not prepared for this collision. In her mental geography, Silas Blackwood remained sealed in the Cardiff years, a figure who appeared at her father’s dinner table in a linen suit, discussing jurisdiction and Vienna over her mother’s lamb stew. She had been fifteen, ambitious, convinced that law was a sword she would wield with surgical precision. She had not expected to find him here, limping between beer taps in a Soho basement. "You’re taller." He resumed polishing the glass, the motion deliberate, circular. "Or perhaps I’ve simply shrunk." Aurora slid onto a stool. The leather sighed beneath her weight. "The leg?" "Prague. A disagreement about departure routes." He set the glass down with a precise click. "You’re living upstairs." It wasn’t an accusation, but the weight of it settled between them like sediment. She had rented the flat through an agency, a faceless transaction involving deposits and terse emails. She had not known the building belonged to him. If she had, she might have kept running. "I arrived last Tuesday." "I’ve been in Berlin." He reached for a bottle of Bushmills, pouring two fingers into a tumbler without asking. The amber liquid caught the neon light from the window. "Your father wrote to me. Said you’d left Cardiff." The mention of Brendan Carter—still practicing, still disappointed—sent a sharp pain through her sternum. She took the glass, her thumb brushing the scar on her wrist. The crescent shape, a childhood accident with a bicycle chain, had faded to white, but it still itched when she lied. "I left university," she said. "I know." "You know everything, then." "I know you were third in your cohort. I know you clerked for Justice Harrow in your second year." He braced his hands against the bar, the signet ring tapping a slow rhythm against the wood. "I know you were meant to be called to the Bar next spring." The past conditional hung in the air, heavy as incense. Aurora brought the whisky to her lips. It burned clean, medicinal. She remembered Silas differently—broader, unbroken, laughing at something her father had said about the European Court. Now the lines around his eyes ran deep as trenches, and his left knee stiffened when he shifted his weight. "Evan," she said. The name tasted of copper. Silas’s expression shuttered, not with surprise, but with a recognition that suggested he had been waiting for this particular ghost. He reached beneath the counter, producing a second glass for himself. "The boyfriend." "Fiancé, briefly." "Until?" "Until I realised the bruises weren’t accidents." She rolled the glass between her palms, watching the light fracture. "Until he locked me in the bathroom during a dinner party because I’d spoken to his colleague for too long. Until I stopped being Laila Carter and became something he kept in a box." Laila. She hadn’t used the diminutive in months. It had died somewhere between the M4 and the Severn Bridge, along with her textbooks and her certainty. Silas drank. His throat moved, the grey in his beard catching the dim light. When he set the glass down, his hand remained wrapped around it, knuckles white. "I should have been there," he said. "You were in Prague. Or Berlin. Or wherever the Crown needed you before they put you out to pasture." The bitterness surprised her. She had not known she was carrying it. "I retired five years ago." He touched his left knee, unconsciously, a soldier’s check on an old wound. "But I knew Evan’s family. Shipping, primarily. Some concerns in the Baltic. I had reports—" "You had reports." Aurora laughed, a short, hollow sound. "Of course you did. You’re the Spymaster, even when you’re pulling pints." The accusation landed. Silas straightened, and for a moment she saw the field agent he had been—the straight spine, the predator’s stillness. Then the barkeeper returned, shoulders rounding, the limp asserting itself as he moved along the counter. "I had reports," he repeated, quieter. "And I did nothing. Because you were civilian. Because Brendan assured me you were happy. Because I told myself that the girl who argued Habeas Corpus at sixteen could handle a man with soft hands and a hard temper." He reached across the bar. Before she could withdraw, his fingers closed around her wrist—not the scarred left, but the right, turning it palm-up. His grip was warm, dry, trembling slightly. "I failed you," he said. "Not as an agent. As your father’s friend. As someone who watched you once, at a garden party in Penarth, explain the finer points of the Geneva Convention to a Border Collie with more conviction than most QCs." Aurora looked at his hand covering hers. The silver ring pressed cold against her pulse point. Outside, a siren dopplered past, red light washing through the green neon, turning the maps on the wall the colour of old blood. She thought of the secret room behind the bookshelf—she had heard the rumours from the delivery drivers, the ones who whispered about Silas’s "meetings"—and wondered how many other bruised girls he had catalogued without touching. "I’m not her anymore," she said. "The girl with the dog. The one with the future." "Neither am I." He released her wrist, the loss of contact immediate. "I’m a landlord with a bad knee and a cellar full of Czech beer I can’t sell. I’m a man who looks at maps and sees only exits, never destinations." He poured again. The bottle gurgled, emptying. Aurora touched her left wrist, tracing the crescent scar through the fabric of her sleeve. In the low light, Silas’s hazel eyes were opaque, unreadable. "What now?" she asked. "We drink." He lifted his glass. "We acknowledge that time is a blunt instrument. Tomorrow, if you like, I’ll show you the back room. The books need cataloguing, and you always had a systematic mind." The offer hung suspended, a thread connecting who she had been to whoever she might become. Not penance. Not rescue. Simply work, and walls that knew how to keep secrets. Aurora clinked her glass against his. The sound rang clear in the empty bar, drowning out the neon’s electric hum. Outside, the rain continued, washing the streets clean, or as clean as London ever got.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.462
leniency0.923
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.25% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1333
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
51.24% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1333
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"potential"
count2
2
word"calculated"
count1
3
word"weight"
count3
4
word"predator"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"tracing"
count1
7
word"unreadable"
count1
8
word"systematic"
count1
9
word"electric"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"potential"
2"calculated"
3"weight"
4"predator"
5"pulse"
6"tracing"
7"unreadable"
8"systematic"
9"electric"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences88
matches
0"t with surprise"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences88
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences109
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1317
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount968
uniqueNames23
maxNameDensity0.83
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
November1
Raven1
Nest1
Greek1
Street1
Budapest1
Prague1
Belgrade1
Silas7
Blackwood1
Cardiff1
Vienna1
Soho1
Aurora8
Bushmills1
Brendan1
Carter1
European1
Court1
Laila1
Severn1
Bridge1
London1
persons
0"November"
1"Raven"
2"Silas"
3"Blackwood"
4"Aurora"
5"Bushmills"
6"Brendan"
7"Carter"
8"Laila"
places
0"Greek"
1"Street"
2"Budapest"
3"Prague"
4"Belgrade"
5"Cardiff"
6"Vienna"
7"Soho"
8"Severn"
9"Bridge"
10"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
48.14% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.519
wordCount1317
matches
0"not with surprise, but with a recognition"
1"not the scarred left, but the right, turning it palm-up"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences109
matches
0"convinced that law"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean29.93
std21.43
cv0.716
sampleLengths
071
157
267
36
437
53
629
71
879
916
1013
1118
1247
134
1438
1547
165
172
184
1949
2057
218
2233
232
241
2552
2626
2728
287
2931
3033
3121
3238
3345
3431
3543
3674
3716
3842
3932
404
4135
4230
4335
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"been fifteen"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs170
matches
0"was carrying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences109
ratio0.064
matches
0"Maps papered the walls—Budapest, Prague, Belgrade—cities pinned with rusted tacks like specimens in a case."
1"For a moment, nothing registered beyond professional assessment— sizing up a potential threat, a potential customer."
2"The mention of Brendan Carter—still practicing, still disappointed—sent a sharp pain through her sternum."
3"She remembered Silas differently—broader, unbroken, laughing at something her father had said about the European Court."
4"Silas straightened, and for a moment she saw the field agent he had been—the straight spine, the predator’s stillness."
5"Before she could withdraw, his fingers closed around her wrist—not the scarred left, but the right, turning it palm-up."
6"She thought of the secret room behind the bookshelf—she had heard the rumours from the delivery drivers, the ones who whispered about Silas’s \"meetings\"—and wondered how many other bruised girls he had catalogued without touching."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount983
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"registered beyond professional assessment—"
1"many other bruised girls"
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.018311291963377416
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.00508646998982706
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean12.08
std8.97
cv0.742
sampleLengths
015
124
225
37
410
515
622
710
813
912
1026
1116
123
133
142
1512
1616
177
183
193
2026
211
225
237
2434
2517
2616
2711
285
295
306
312
3215
333
3414
3516
369
378
384
3919
4010
419
4214
4312
4421
455
462
474
4836
4913
50.46% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3577981651376147
totalSentences109
uniqueOpeners39
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences77
matches
0"Then the cloth in his"
1"Then the barkeeper returned, shoulders"
2"Simply work, and walls that"
ratio0.039
53.77% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences77
matches
0"She had avoided this room"
1"She stood at the threshold,"
2"He reached for a bottle,"
3"She stepped forward."
4"His voice had acquired gravel"
5"She had not prepared for"
6"She had been fifteen, ambitious,"
7"She had not expected to"
8"He resumed polishing the glass,"
9"He set the glass down"
10"It wasn’t an accusation, but"
11"She had rented the flat"
12"She had not known the"
13"He reached for a bottle"
14"She took the glass, her"
15"He braced his hands against"
16"It burned clean, medicinal."
17"She remembered Silas differently—broader, unbroken,"
18"He reached beneath the counter,"
19"She rolled the glass between"
ratio0.416
50.91% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences77
matches
0"The green neon bled across"
1"Aurora pushed through the heavy"
2"She had avoided this room"
3"Tonight, the silence upstairs had"
4"She stood at the threshold,"
5"Maps papered the walls—Budapest, Prague,"
6"The air tasted of charred"
7"A man moved behind the"
8"Auburn hair, heavy with grey"
9"He reached for a bottle,"
10"Aurora’s fingers twitched toward the"
11"She stepped forward."
12"A floorboard creaked."
13"Hazel eyes, flecked with gold,"
14"His voice had acquired gravel"
15"The name emerged flat, toneless."
16"She had not prepared for"
17"She had been fifteen, ambitious,"
18"She had not expected to"
19"He resumed polishing the glass,"
ratio0.818
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences77
matches
0"If she had, she might"
1"Now the lines around his"
2"Before she could withdraw, his"
ratio0.039
90.59% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Aurora pushed through the heavy oak door of The Raven’s Nest, her shoulders hunched against the wind that had chased her down Greek Street."
1"His voice had acquired gravel since she’d last heard it, a whisky-and-cigarette rasp that belonged to someone older than the fifty-eight she calculated him to b…"
2"In her mental geography, Silas Blackwood remained sealed in the Cardiff years, a figure who appeared at her father’s dinner table in a linen suit, discussing ju…"
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"He braced, the signet ring tapping a slow rhythm against the wood"
1"he repeated, quieter"
2"He released, the loss of contact immediate"
98.72% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Aurora laughed (laugh)"
1"he repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.205
leniency0.41
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.103
85.6579%