Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYXRV2ZJPZ9NRBZEGVSKJP

Run Details

Duration:
1m 42s
Cost:
$0.001937
Provider:
Venice

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The gravel crunched under her sneakers. Each footfall sounded deafening in the sudden silence of Richmond Park after midnight. The streetlights of Chiswick receded, swallowed by the encroaching density of the woodland, leaving only the faint amber glow of her iPhone. She tapped the screen to kill the brightness, leaving the device dark against her palm. This was the third vague text, the third coordinate dropped like a breadcrumb for a hunter. Or a benefactor. The ambiguity always stuck in her craw, but the pendant provided the one thing she needed—a lifeline out of the rut of her life, out of the lingering panic of Evan’s hands. Aurora stopped. She pressed her back against the rough bark of an oak tree. Her heart hammered a slow, rhythmic beat against her ribs. She exhaled, forcing the air out until her lungs burned. "Alright, Carter. You know the drill. Assessment. Execution." She pushed off the tree, the bark scraping her coat. The GPS beeped again, a shrill sound in the quiet. She followed the line of the park road until the pavement gave way to rutted earth. The trees here were taller, the canopy thicker. Darkness hung low, a physical weight pressing down on her shoulders. It wasn’t natural night. It felt stagnant, as if the sun had set ages ago and simply refused to rise. She found the trail after ten minutes, barely a scar on the ground. It led toward the old quarry site. As she stepped off the path, the air changed. The scent of diesel and exhaust vanished, replaced by something sweet, cloying, like rotting fruit left in the summer sun. Her fingers brushed the rough stubble of a bramble; thorns pricked her skin, but the reaction was delayed. She pulled her hand away and stared at the drop of red on her thumb, confused. It hadn't hurt instantly. Ahead, the ancient oaks thinned, revealing a clearing marked by standing stones. Rough, grey pillars of earth-encrusted granite rose from the turf like teeth. They formed a rough circle, incomplete at the top. The Heartstone pendant, a rough crimson gemstone set in silver, suddenly felt heavy around her neck. It wasn't just jewelry; it was a compass. Aurora stepped into the circle. Immediately, the silence fractured. It was the sound of breathing. Not her own. Deep, rattling intakes of air that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once. She spun in a circle, iPhone raised, the screen illuminating only grass. The moss was vibrant, unnaturally green, every strand upright as if tensed for flight. "It’s a prank," she said, her voice tight. "Whoever sent this. Silas? Eva? This isn't funny." The answer came not as a voice, but as the rustle of leaves. It sounded like dry parchment sliding against paper. She took a step toward the gap between two stones. The ground beneath her felt spongy, yielding in a way that felt unsettlingly liquid. The pendant warmed. The heat spread through the silver chain, a low-grade fever pressing against her sternum. It pulsed, a thump-thump-thump that synced with her own heartbeat. She looked down. The grass beneath her feet was flattened, tracing a path that led away from the stones into the trees. She moved forward. Her instincts screamed at her to run, to go back to the car, to London, to anywhere that wasn't this damp, artificial darkness. But she looked at the pendant. It wanted this. The time dilation hit her first. She glanced at her watch. 11:42 PM. She took five steps. She looked at the watch. 11:45 PM. Five more steps. She looked again. 11:48 PM. She frowned. She adjusted her stride, trying to walk faster. Ten paces. 11:50. Something in her brain clicked. The trees were casting shadows that were too long, sweeping across the ground in slow, graceful curves that mimicked a slow-motion dance. The sound of the city was gone, completely. No sirens, no distant hum. Just this place. She reached the edge of the clearing and stopped. The forest here was black, a void of absolute night. The Heartstone was burning now, hot enough to blister her skin. It pointed straight into the tree line. "Aurora?" The whisper was soft, feminine, and laced with a melodic quality that made her skin crawl. She froze. The blood drained from her face. She hadn't spoken. The sound came again, closer. To her left. Behind her. "Don't move." She clenched her fist, fighting the urge to sprint. She knew the pattern now. Panic was a wasted resource. She needed to remain cool-headed. She scanned the darkness with her peripheral vision, refusing to stare directly into the gloom. The shadows detached themselves. They were elongated, distorted, stretching toward her. They weren't cast by moonlight; they moved under their own momentum, dragging the grass with them. They were shapes of no distinct form, pulsating and dripping with a viscous silence. "Where are you?" She took a slow step backward, keeping her eyes on the dark gap between the trees. The air grew colder, smelling of ozone and old blood. A twig snapped. *Snap.* It was loud, visceral. She flinched, her head snapping toward the sound. The darkness shifted. A shape emerged from the undergrowth. It was humanoid, tall, but it moved with a jerky, insectoid motion. It had no face, just a smooth, featureless visage of pale, wet bark. Aurora raised her free hand. "Back off." The thing stopped. It tilted its head. A sound like grinding stones issued from its throat. Then came the scuttling. Dozens of tiny legs dragging on soil. She looked down. The low-hanging branches of a gnarled tree swayed. Something dropped from the foliage and landed on her shoulder. She screamed and flung her arm out, shaking it violently. It was small, the size of a rat, but hairless, with skin the color of raw liver and too many eyes clustered on one side of its face. It didn't bite. It didn't scurry away. It just hung there, its too-large mouth opening in a silent scream. The air pressure dropped, heavy as a lead blanket. The Heartstone stopped pulsing. The warmth vanished, replaced by a freezing ice that seemed to seep into her marrow. She looked up at the standing stones behind her. They looked different now. They were pulsating in time with the thing on her shoulder. The stone faces were visible, warped and screaming. *What have you done?* The thought entered her head clearly, without a speaker. It sounded like a lawyer, cold and precise. Aurora forced herself to breathe. She had to use her hands. She grabbed the creature by the waist and heaved it backward. It landed with a wet slap, twisting in the air. It tried to scurry back toward her, its multiple legs clicking frantically. She kicked it away. She turned, looking for a weapon. A rock. A branch. Anything. She saw a fallen tree limb, thick and heavy. She ran toward it, her boots sinking into the sodden earth. The creature scuttled after her, faster than it had any right to be. It was right on her heels, a dry rattle filling the space between her shoulder blades. She lunged for the branch. Her fingers closed around the wood just as the creature leaped. It hit her back, knocking the wind out of her. She hit the ground hard, rolling away, the pendant bouncing against her chest. The creature landed on its feet, hissing, its wet skin hissing like steam. Aurora scrambled back, turning to face it. She raised the heavy branch. The creature didn't retreat. It simply watched her. *You are not leaving.* The voice was in her head again. This time, the mental image was a cage of thorns closing tight. She looked at the pendant. The stone was dark, absorbing the little light from her phone. She gripped the branch, sweat dripping from her nose. She was unarmed, trapped in a place where time didn't move and the rules of physics were mere suggestions. The creature took a step forward. Its movement was smooth, predatory. Aurora swallowed, forcing the shaking out of her legs. She wasn't going to die here. She wasn't going to let Evan’s ghost haunt her in this twisted Hell. She looked at the standing stones. The gap between them was growing. "Watch this," she muttered, her voice shaking but steady. She slammed the branch down. The creature shrieked, a sound that tore at the reality of the grove, and lunged. Aurora dropped the branch. She grabbed the pendant. She didn't run; she stepped into the gap between the stones, not toward the light of London, but into the deeper black of the wood, letting the creature crash into the granite where she had stood a moment before. She ran blindly, the cold seeping into her lungs, the Heartstone burning a trail through the dark. Behind her, the stone circle began to ring.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.32% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1497
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.24% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1497
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"footfall"
count1
1
word"silence"
count3
2
word"rhythmic"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"fractured"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"tracing"
count1
7
word"dance"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"scanned"
count1
10
word"gloom"
count1
11
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"footfall"
1"silence"
2"rhythmic"
3"weight"
4"fractured"
5"pulsed"
6"tracing"
7"dance"
8"whisper"
9"scanned"
10"gloom"
11"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her fist"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences168
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences168
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences174
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords9
totalWords1488
ratio0.006
matches
0"Snap."
1"What have you done?"
2"You are not leaving."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount1459
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.48
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Chiswick1
Evan2
Heartstone4
London2
Hell1
Aurora7
persons
0"Chiswick"
1"Evan"
2"Heartstone"
3"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
53.85% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences104
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"air that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once"
1"sounded like dry parchment sliding against"
2"ice that seemed to seep into her marrow"
3"sounded like a lawyer, cold and precise"
65.59% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.344
wordCount1488
matches
0"not as a voice, but as the rustle of leaves"
1"not toward the light of London, but into the deeper black of the wood, letting the creature cras"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences174
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean27.56
std21.61
cv0.784
sampleLengths
0107
134
28
375
487
557
69
750
816
945
1049
1135
1213
1311
148
1513
1643
1737
181
1916
2011
2110
222
2339
2441
253
2626
274
2846
297
3016
3132
3238
3319
3428
3532
364
3717
3844
3924
4040
4116
4236
4320
444
4519
4644
4711
4840
499
99.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences168
matches
0"was flattened"
1"was gone"
2"were elongated"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs256
matches
0"were casting"
1"was burning"
2"were pulsating"
60.76% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences174
ratio0.029
matches
0"The ambiguity always stuck in her craw, but the pendant provided the one thing she needed—a lifeline out of the rut of her life, out of the lingering panic of Evan’s hands."
1"Her fingers brushed the rough stubble of a bramble; thorns pricked her skin, but the reaction was delayed."
2"It wasn't just jewelry; it was a compass."
3"They weren't cast by moonlight; they moved under their own momentum, dragging the grass with them."
4"She didn't run; she stepped into the gap between the stones, not toward the light of London, but into the deeper black of the wood, letting the creature crash into the granite where she had stood a moment before."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1468
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount50
adverbRatio0.0340599455040872
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.010899182561307902
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences174
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences174
mean8.55
std5.88
cv0.688
sampleLengths
06
113
222
315
416
53
632
72
812
910
1010
118
1210
1310
1416
158
1611
174
1816
1913
207
219
2220
2318
2416
254
2612
2712
289
2916
308
315
324
336
343
3515
3612
3714
388
398
4013
418
4210
4314
443
4514
4610
473
4819
493
33.82% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats28
diversityRatio0.23121387283236994
totalSentences173
uniqueOpeners40
64.52% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences155
matches
0"Immediately, the silence fractured."
1"Just this place."
2"Then came the scuttling."
ratio0.019
3.23% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount84
totalSentences155
matches
0"She tapped the screen to"
1"She pressed her back against"
2"Her heart hammered a slow,"
3"She exhaled, forcing the air"
4"She pushed off the tree,"
5"She followed the line of"
6"It wasn’t natural night."
7"It felt stagnant, as if"
8"She found the trail after"
9"It led toward the old"
10"Her fingers brushed the rough"
11"She pulled her hand away"
12"It hadn't hurt instantly."
13"They formed a rough circle,"
14"It wasn't just jewelry; it"
15"It was the sound of"
16"She spun in a circle,"
17"she said, her voice tight"
18"It sounded like dry parchment"
19"She took a step toward"
ratio0.542
8.39% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount140
totalSentences155
matches
0"The gravel crunched under her"
1"Each footfall sounded deafening in"
2"The streetlights of Chiswick receded,"
3"She tapped the screen to"
4"This was the third vague"
5"The ambiguity always stuck in"
6"She pressed her back against"
7"Her heart hammered a slow,"
8"She exhaled, forcing the air"
9"She pushed off the tree,"
10"The GPS beeped again, a"
11"She followed the line of"
12"The trees here were taller,"
13"Darkness hung low, a physical"
14"It wasn’t natural night."
15"It felt stagnant, as if"
16"She found the trail after"
17"It led toward the old"
18"The scent of diesel and"
19"Her fingers brushed the rough"
ratio0.903
32.26% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences155
matches
0"To her left."
ratio0.006
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences64
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The ground beneath her felt spongy, yielding in a way that felt unsettlingly liquid."
1"The trees were casting shadows that were too long, sweeping across the ground in slow, graceful curves that mimicked a slow-motion dance."
2"The creature landed on its feet, hissing, its wet skin hissing like steam."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she said, her voice tight"
1"she muttered, her voice shaking but steady"
25.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.25
76.4317%