Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYXXD2QYZ83ZSAV7EH59TD

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Model:
GPT-5
Duration:
3m 57s
Cost:
$0.065106
Provider:
OpenAI

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Mystery genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

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Do not step on that. Quinn caught Rowe by the elbow before his boot smudged the chalk. He froze mid stride, eyes on the looping white sigil that ringed the body like a carelessly drawn halo. The draught carried the tang of copper and a sweet, acrid note that did not belong in any Underground station. Tidy little trap, Rowe said, leaning back. He wore the nerves of a man who had downed quick coffee and skipped breakfast. Kids with candles. Urban explorers. We cuff them every few months. Walk me through what you have, Quinn said. Rowe gestured with the tip of his pen, careful to keep clear. Female, mid twenties by the look. No ID. Blonde, but the roots are dark. Fingernails clean, palms calloused. No defensive wounds. Strangulation, he said, making a grim circle at his own throat. Could be a ligature, could be hands. We will know once SOCO finishes. Quinn stepped closer, boots crisp on grit. She kept her hands tucked in blue nitrile, her watch, the worn leather strap soft against her skin, ticking a steady metronome. The face stared up at them, lips parted, teeth showing faintly, eyes open, latticed with burst vessels. Bruising lay like a collar, but too even. The chalk had smeared where someone had dragged the line back into place. She crouched, joints creaking, and sniffed the air above the face. Copper stung her nostrils. Blood. Recent. And no pooling, she said. Rowe blinked. Dry rails. Clean ballast under the head. No seep. It was true. Blood had pooled nowhere, but copper lingered. Night watch heard nothing from topside, Rowe went on. Grades on the door are scuffed to hell. Vandals. He raised his voice for the white suited SOCO kneeling near the feet. Patel, can you get the marks on the door for Quinn? Already done, Patel said, brisk and thin behind the mask. Old, new, a mix. Different directions and heights. No single straight scrape like a pry bar. Foot traffic through the service access is recent. Five, six sets, maybe more. Quinn scanned the old platform, now a staging ground of tripods, evidence tents, and the low hum of generators. There had been posters once, their ghosts patterning the walls in torn rectangles, dull under dust. Far down the line, the tunnel swallowed light and swallowed sound, a mouth of black. A lonely pigeon clucked from the ribbed ironwork above, feathers clinging to cobwebs that had gathered like dirty lace. It was not the Market night, not by her own count, but the place held a throb in the brick, a low hum under the soles that matched the watch tick-tock with an old memory. She looked back at the chalk. The pattern was wrong, not a halo at all. The loops broke at the top. A square at the corner mocked any circle’s perfection. A child’s idea of a circle will always part when the chalk is short. Rowe bent and squinted. You are going to say occult. I can feel it in my kneecaps. You will wait until you feel it in your eyes, Quinn said. Where are the candles? He grinned. Kids nick the candles when the party ends. Or the Es ran out. The chalk runs interrupted, Quinn said. The pressure changes in the slate where the line thickens. They were not crouching, not for long. She brushed a gloved finger over a loop and lifted white dust that smelled faintly of bone. They were standing. They drew from a height close to mine, left handed. Patel stood and padded over. Left handed, yes, he said, noticing how the tail flared. And bone chalk, not standard shop chalk. Why waste bone chalk on a laugh? You tell me, Quinn said. Rowe flicked the pen from one hand to the other. Look, Harlow, we are under Camden in a dead station. I have a dead girl and daft scribbles. The marks on her neck look even because whoever did it wrapped something soft and pulled steady. A scarf, an elasticated belt. She meets someone, they go at it, it goes too far. Panics, draws something he saw on Reddit, legs it. It fits. What did he wrap, then? Quinn asked. No fibres on the skin, no pilling. The abrasions are smooth, too smooth for a ribbed scarf. An elastic belt would leave laddering and lash backs. Her hyoid sits intact, so the pressure was distributed. The bruising sits oddly deep, but spare at the front of the throat. Someone avoided the larynx. Controlled, neat. You think killer’s trained, Rowe said. Quinn looked at the girl’s hands. Nails chewed down, but clean. Under one nail, a smear of green-black. Not grime. Polished verdigris flaked against the soft crescent of nail bed. She slid a stick from her pocket and teased it free into a bag. And I think she held something that stained. Patel turned, interest catching in the crisp angle of his head. There is more, he said. By the left hip. We bagged a small brass object. Inscribed. Verdigris present. It felt old. Show me. Patel signalled a partner, and a flat tray came across, evidence bag sealed, a label half scrawled. Inside, a small brass compass, the casing a dull greenish brown, the face etched with tight, even sigils that coiled like vines across bright metal. A curious little old brass compass, the kind you might trust on a fogged moor, if you did not care where it led. The needle did not point north. It sat steady at an angle that faced the brick wall that had once framed a track into something else. This ring any bells for your witch clubs? Rowe said. He leaned close but did not touch. Quinn studied the sigils. Her skin prickled. The designs were not inked, they were carved in clean cuts with a control you did not find in market tat. Her thumb moved over the bag’s plastic and the needle twitched, a hair, as if the object felt the study and did not like it. She knew a thing like this. She had held one once, longer ago than she liked to count. It points to current, Patel said. Not magnetic, no. We passed a magnet across during the bagging and saw no response. The needle drifted to here when we moved it away. Back to the same brick. Quinn looked at the wall it indicated. The arch there had been bricked in during the war. The bricks were newer than the soot-caked flank of the tunnel, red upon black, but damp had softened them to a bruise. At the bottom edge, mortar crumbled in a dot-dash of insect burrows. An old white paint letter peeked from under later grey, a ghost of words: VEI, cut short. She could fill the rest in. Rowe followed her gaze. Secret door, he said with mock awe. We push a brick, find Narnia. You logged this as an Underground property, Quinn said to Patel. Transport gave permission to open the service access, nothing more, Patel said. We cut the lock. Inside to the platform only. The bricked arch is out of scope. Not anymore. Rowe folded arms. You are not seriously telling me we are about to punch through a wall in a condemned station because your spooky compass fancies it. We are going to press the brickwork with a probe, Quinn said. The mortar falls away under finger to dust. If the other side is a service staircase, we call it in. If it is a cave full of teenagers, you can write your memo. Patel already held a metal probe. He stepped to the base and pressed the point to a seam. Powder slid in a quiet trickle. He pressed higher, and the powder fell faster. He glanced at Quinn. Hollow. Rowe sighed. Fine. But if a rat bites me, I am suing. Quinn crouched again by the girl. The brass compass had been placed near the left hand, not dropped. The line of chalk had curved around it, a respect granted mid draw. Her watch ticked steady. DS Morris’s watch had ticked like this when he had raised his hand toward a line of chalk long ago, and then his hand had not come back. She closed her eyes to that room and opened them to this. Patel pressed along the mortar. Some sections rang true, others gave in damp crumble. He inserted a flexible scope through a widened seam and slid it left to right. He frowned. Open space, he said. More than a stairwell. Tall. Lined brick. I see, it is odd. Cloth, hanging. Stitching across. Numbers painted. He adjusted the cord. Stalls, he said. Empty stalls. Rowe snorted. Flea market for moles. A hidden market, Quinn said. Rowe cocked his head. You have tales for everything. She nodded to the compass. That is not a prop from Carnaby Street. The girl had not found it in a costume trunk. The bone chalk is not Lidl. The bruising on her throat speaks of even pressure and calm hands. Where there is calm, there is intent. And where there is intent, there is planning. She had been somewhere before this. That brick does not hide teenagers. It hides a place that moves when it wants. Patel looked at her. What do you want us to do? Quinn stood. She ran the knuckle of her thumb along the tendons in her right hand until they eased. Open the arch, she said. Rowe threw up his hands. For the record. We will record plenty, Quinn said. Start at the base, ease the bricks. We control the collapse. And get extra lights. I do not walk into a fair in the dark. They set to work with small chisels and care, a patient tap-tap that matched the tick-tock and the low hum underfoot. Each brick gave with a reluctant sigh. Dust coughed into their masks. As the gap grew, the smell changed. Not dust and rot of old London, not oil and train, but a sappy scent like cut ivy and a breath of stale spices. Rowe wrinkled his nose. Smells like Christmas wrapped in wet dog, he said. Quinn stepped back to the corpse as the men worked. She watched the skin at the girl’s lips. Dried. No slippage. The eyes had clouded but had not filmed fully. She checked the sclera and ran a light along the lids. The lids did not rise easily. The blood spatter on the cardigan’s sleeve lay in a fine mist at the elbow, not at the cuff. She angled the arm. The mist sat on the upper side. She turned to Rowe. She died upright, Quinn said. The pooling on the back is absent because there is not enough. She was drained. Drained, Rowe said, incredulous loud. Now we are chasing vampires. No, Quinn said. It is neater than that. Drained by gravity without incision. Why bind a throat? She considered the arch, the compass, the brick that breathed a warmer air. Patel half laughed, half choked as a brick jerked free, dislodging a cascade of mortar that hit his shoulder. He brushed dust aside. Nearly there. Rowe peered in through the widening gap, then pulled back. I see bunting, he said, voice odd. Fabric. Handletters. Foreign script? And bones. Hanged. Decorative bones. Quinn moved to the opening. She put the compass tray in Patel’s free hand. Hold that. The needle lifted a degree, eager as a hound. The tray trembled in Patel’s grip. He steadied it and his eyes widened as he watched the needle’s hunger angle deeper. Rowe’s torch beam cut across. The light found cloth, stitched with careful symbols, sewn into a low roof of pennants that thickened air. Beyond, rows of tables stood draped in once-bright fabrics now greyed. Hooks hung empty. Chalk tags dangled from strings that swayed though no one brushed them. Heard the stories, Rowe murmured despite himself. Camden within Camden. You think this is it? Quinn did not answer. Her gaze tripped across the threshold. The floor inside did not carry the same dust. A skin of grime lay, yes, but prints disturbed it. Some small, some heavy. The pattern was wrong for police. The tread depth changed in arcs, as if weight shifted in hip-borne baskets. At the threshold, a smear of dark green had touched a brick and dried. She pointed. Bag that, she said. She looked to the chalk on their side of the wall again. The line broke closest to the arch. Whoever drew had shifted focus, cut short, curved away. Not because the chalk ran out. Because the wall did something. Tap-tap changed to crack-crack. The remaining bricks toppled into a slanted slope that led into the space like the lip of a mouth. Lights swung as extension cords paid out. The room beyond, longer than a platform and twice as wide, took the light and drank it down. The bunting and cloths took a weak glow, revealing colours in their bellies, purple and old red like bruises, gold thread tarnished to swamp. Patel kept the compass steady. The needle did not point random. It fixed on a line to the back left corner, where a stall had been makeshifted from packing crates. A sign in neat hand read in English and something older: CONDUITS, MINOR AND MAJOR. Then, a price line in chalk that had been wiped away. Quinn stepped through the arch. The air pressed in, thick with dust and a sickly sweetness not of rot, but of too many exotic things sealed together too long. Her torch found small bones sewn neatly into a curtain that framed the first stall. Bird bones. Finger bones, small as a child’s. They clicked against each other in a soft clack-clack as the draught tugged. Patel followed. Rowe came after, muttering. We do not have jurisdiction for a bazaar from hell, Harlow. We have a murder, Quinn said. They moved between tables. Threads and scraps had fused to surfaces. A spilled bottle had etched a sticky circle on wood. She saw a pile of small vials in a basket. They were empty, stoppered, labelled in a tidy hand with words that turned wrong in the mouth. Fever-foil. Dream ash. Shade salt. She looked toward the back left. The stall marked CONDUITS had empty racks lined with grooves where brass had sat. She pictured the compass pressed there, needle quivering each time the wall pulsed. She crouched and ran light along the baseboard. Scratches scored the wood in parallel, thin lines like comb teeth. Something was dragged along and removed quick, many times. A trade spot. Her beam found a coin under the lip, ivory white and carved on one side with a row of notches, on the other a crude eye. She lifted it with tweezers, held to the light. A bone token. Once chewed smooth at the edge. A vendor’s pass. Rowe whistled low. Well then. Quinn opened her mouth, then shut it as a prickle rolled up her arms and lifted the hair on the back of her neck. The watch on her wrist ticked and, for half a breath, stumbled. The air pressed harder. The bunting rustled. Chalk labels swung. Patel’s voice had an edge. The needle moved. Quinn turned. In Patel’s hands, the compass spun a degree, then another, faster, then stilled with its point now aimed not at the stall, but at the bricked arch behind them, the side that still held the platform at its back. The bricks they had not yet loosened bulged. Mortar oozed in a wet line and split. A sound like slow breath came through stone. Rowe stepped back hard, hip catching a table and sending a cascade of vials to the floor. Glass cracked, a thin high note that made the pigeons above flare and settle. His torch shook. You seeing that, he said, voice flat with fear he would never own. Quinn lifted a hand, palm forward. Hold. The bulge became a ripple. One brick slid forward like a shuddering tooth and dropped out, then another. Cold, wrong air poured through, smelling of night gardens and coin. Through the new dark slit, something moved, slow and deliberate, as if deciding where to put its foot. The torch beams met the gap as a pale hand, too slender and too long, reached through and patted the air like a blind thing searching for the table’s edge. It touched the bone curtain and set it clicking. Hello, said a voice behind the bricks, smooth, amused and nowhere, and the compass needle slammed hard against the glass and held pointing at Quinn.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2800
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Patel"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
82.14% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2800
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"throb"
count1
2
word"standard"
count1
3
word"flicked"
count1
4
word"etched"
count2
5
word"magnetic"
count1
6
word"trembled"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"throb"
2"standard"
3"flicked"
4"etched"
5"magnetic"
6"trembled"
7"weight"
8"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences340
matches
0"t with fear"
96.64% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount11
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences340
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"feel"
2"look"
3"think"
4"see"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences340
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2788
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions31
unquotedAttributions30
matches
0"Tidy little trap, Rowe said, leaning back."
1"Walk me through what you have, Quinn said."
2"Strangulation, he said, making a grim circle at his own throat."
3"And no pooling, she said."
4"Already done, Patel said, brisk and thin behind the mask."
5"You will wait until you feel it in your eyes, Quinn said."
6"The chalk runs interrupted, Quinn said."
7"Left handed, yes, he said, noticing how the tail flared."
8"You tell me, Quinn said."
9"There is more, he said."
10"It points to current, Patel said."
11"Secret door, he said with mock awe."
12"You logged this as an Underground property, Quinn said to Patel."
13"Transport gave permission to open the service access, nothing more, Patel said."
14"We are going to press the brickwork with a probe, Quinn said."
15"If the other side is a service staircase, we call it in."
16"Open space, he said."
17"Stalls, he said."
18"A hidden market, Quinn said."
19"Open the arch, she said."
20"We will record plenty, Quinn said."
21"Smells like Christmas wrapped in wet dog, he said."
22"She died upright, Quinn said."
23"Drained, Rowe said, incredulous loud."
24"No, Quinn said."
25"I see bunting, he said, voice odd."
26"Heard the stories, Rowe murmured despite himself."
27"Bag that, she said."
28"We have a murder, Quinn said."
29"You seeing that, he said, voice flat with fear he would never own."
96.20% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions99
wordCount2788
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.08
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rowe"
discoveredNames
Rowe24
Underground2
Quinn30
Patel18
Market1
Es1
Harlow2
Camden3
Reddit1
Narnia1
Morris1
Carnaby1
Street1
Lidl1
London1
Christmas1
English1
You9
persons
0"Rowe"
1"Quinn"
2"Patel"
3"Es"
4"Reddit"
5"Morris"
6"Christmas"
7"You"
places
0"Market"
1"Camden"
2"Carnaby"
3"Street"
4"London"
5"English"
globalScore0.962
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences202
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if deciding where to put its foot"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches6
per1kWords2.152
wordCount2788
matches
0"not the Market night, not by her own count, but the place held a throb in the brick, a low hum under the sol"
1"not by her own count, but the place held a throb in the brick, a low hum under the sol"
2"Not dust and rot of old London, not oil and train, but a sappy scent like cut ivy"
3"not oil and train, but a sappy scent like cut ivy"
4"not of rot, but of too many exotic things sealed together too long"
5"not at the stall, but at the bricked arch behind them, the side"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences340
matches
0"seeing that, he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs77
mean36.21
std26.47
cv0.731
sampleLengths
05
151
233
38
457
584
65
721
842
939
10104
1144
1217
1316
1415
1553
1629
175
1872
1961
206
2152
2232
232
2491
2517
2671
2736
2874
2917
3011
3128
322
3327
3445
3537
3612
3775
3862
396
405
419
4277
4311
4424
458
4631
4768
489
4981
97.01% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount8
totalSentences340
matches
0"are scuffed"
1"was distributed"
2"were carved"
3"been bricked"
4"been placed"
5"been makeshifted"
6"been wiped"
7"was dragged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs524
matches
0"were not crouching"
1"were standing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences340
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2800
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"removed quick, many times."
adverbCount66
adverbRatio0.023571428571428573
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.004285714285714286
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences340
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences340
mean8.2
std6.14
cv0.749
sampleLengths
05
112
219
320
47
515
63
72
86
98
1012
116
122
136
144
153
1611
177
186
197
2022
2117
228
2313
2411
254
261
271
285
292
302
315
322
333
347
359
368
371
3813
3911
4010
414
424
438
448
455
4619
4716
4815
4919
56.57% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats21
diversityRatio0.3764705882352941
totalSentences340
uniqueOpeners128
45.82% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences291
matches
0"Already done, Patel said, brisk"
1"More than a stairwell."
2"Then, a price line in"
3"Once chewed smooth at the"
ratio0.014
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount87
totalSentences291
matches
0"He froze mid stride, eyes"
1"He wore the nerves of"
2"We cuff them every few"
3"We will know once SOCO"
4"She kept her hands tucked"
5"She crouched, joints creaking, and"
6"It was true."
7"He raised his voice for"
8"It was not the Market"
9"She looked back at the"
10"You are going to say"
11"I can feel it in"
12"You will wait until you"
13"They were not crouching, not"
14"She brushed a gloved finger"
15"They were standing."
16"They drew from a height"
17"You tell me, Quinn said."
18"I have a dead girl"
19"She meets someone, they go"
ratio0.299
83.71% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount219
totalSentences291
matches
0"Quinn caught Rowe by the"
1"He froze mid stride, eyes"
2"The draught carried the tang"
3"He wore the nerves of"
4"We cuff them every few"
5"Rowe gestured with the tip"
6"Blonde, but the roots are"
7"Fingernails clean, palms calloused."
8"Strangulation, he said, making a"
9"We will know once SOCO"
10"Quinn stepped closer, boots crisp"
11"She kept her hands tucked"
12"The face stared up at"
13"The chalk had smeared where"
14"She crouched, joints creaking, and"
15"Copper stung her nostrils."
16"It was true."
17"Blood had pooled nowhere, but"
18"Night watch heard nothing from"
19"Grades on the door are"
ratio0.753
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount6
totalSentences291
matches
0"If the other side is"
1"If it is a cave"
2"Where there is calm, there"
3"Now we are chasing vampires."
4"Whoever drew had shifted focus,"
5"Because the wall did something."
ratio0.021
89.45% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences107
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"He froze mid stride, eyes on the looping white sigil that ringed the body like a carelessly drawn halo."
1"A lonely pigeon clucked from the ribbed ironwork above, feathers clinging to cobwebs that had gathered like dirty lace."
2"It was not the Market night, not by her own count, but the place held a throb in the brick, a low hum under the soles that matched the watch tick-tock with an o…"
3"Inside, a small brass compass, the casing a dull greenish brown, the face etched with tight, even sigils that coiled like vines across bright metal."
4"They set to work with small chisels and care, a patient tap-tap that matched the tick-tock and the low hum underfoot."
5"Patel half laughed, half choked as a brick jerked free, dislodging a cascade of mortar that hit his shoulder."
6"The tread depth changed in arcs, as if weight shifted in hip-borne baskets."
7"Through the new dark slit, something moved, slow and deliberate, as if deciding where to put its foot."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
87.3846%