Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYY3DYBJZND8AR32CK5A13

Run Details

Duration:
2m 28s
Cost:
$0.009234
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign bled colour across the wet pavement outside, casting the narrow street in an otherworldly glow that never quite reached the corners. Inside The Raven's Nest, the rain tapped its fingers against the windows like a guest who'd forgotten the password. Rory wiped down the mahogany bar, though it needed no wiping. Silas had retreated to his hidden office an hour ago, leaving her to mind the thin Tuesday crowd. Three regulars nursed their pints in the far corner, their conversation a low hum beneath Miles Davis drifting from the ancient speakers behind the counter. The door swung open, bringing with it a gust of October wind and the smell of the Thames. Rory glanced up, ready with a smile for whatever lost soul sought shelter. The glass she'd been polishing slipped from her fingers. It didn't break—some small mercy—but it clattered against the wood with a sound that seemed too loud, seemed to announce something she couldn't name. "Imogen." The woman stood in the doorway, shaking rain from an umbrella that probably cost more than a month's rent. Her coat was camel-coloured wool, tailored at the waist. Under the bar's amber lights, her hair gleamed like polished chestnut, cut in a sharp bob that framed cheekbones sharper still. "Rory?" Imogen's voice cracked on the name. She took a step forward, then stopped, as though an invisible wall had risen between them. "My God. Rory Carter." "What are you doing in London?" "A conference. International litigation summit at the ExCeL." Imogen's laugh came out brittle, rehearsed. "I needed a drink after nine hours of networking. I didn't expect to find—" She didn't finish. She didn't need to. The silence filled in the blanks: you here, behind a bar, in a place like this, looking like that. Rory was acutely aware of her black t-shirt, the faded jeans, the absence of any jewellery save for a simple silver stud in each ear. She hadn't thought about how she looked in years. Suddenly, she was twenty-one again, standing in the law library at Cardiff with Imogen beside her, both of them in sensible blazers, both of them certain the future stretched out in neat, organised lines. "Sit down." Rory gestured to the nearest stool. "I'll get you something. What do you want?" "Whatever you recommend." "Whisky. Neat. It's what this place does best." Imogen settled onto the stool with the careful grace of someone who'd learned to occupy space efficiently. She removed her gloves finger by finger, revealing nails painted in a subtle nude shade. A diamond caught the light on her left hand—engagement ring, wedding band, the full architecture of success. Rory poured two fingers of Talisker and slid it across the bar. "You're not having one?" "I'm working." "Since when do you—" Imogen stopped herself, took a breath. "I'm sorry. That came out wrong." "Since when do I work in a bar?" Rory kept her voice level, curious even, as though they were discussing a stranger. "About three years now. Give or take." Imogen lifted the glass, inhaled, took a measured sip. Her eyes—still that startling green, still framed by the same delicate brows—assessed Rory over the rim. "You look good." "I look tired." "I meant it as a compliment. You seem... settled." "Settled." Rory tested the word. "I suppose that's one way to describe it." The Miles Davis track ended. Another began, something slower, trumpet notes hanging in the air like smoke. One of the regulars in the corner laughed too loudly at something his companion said. "Your father still asks about you." A coldness spread through Rory's chest. She reached for a clean glass, began polishing it with more force than necessary. "How is he?" "Same as always. Working too much. Worrying about you." Imogen swirled her whisky. "He came to my chambers last month. Wanted to know if I'd heard from you." "And what did you tell him?" "The truth. That I hadn't seen you since—" She stopped. The since hung there, pregnant with everything they weren't saying. Since the graduation party. Since Evan. Since Rory had walked out of her own life and into a different one. "That I should have called," Imogen finished quietly. "That I should have checked in." "You had your career to focus on." "Is that what you tell yourself? That I was too busy building my future to care about what happened to you?" Rory set down the glass. Her scar caught the light—the small crescent on her left wrist, normally hidden by her watch strap, now exposed as she'd rolled up her sleeves earlier that evening. Imogen's gaze dropped to it. Her expression changed, just barely, a flicker of something that might have been recognition or might have been horror. "How did you get that?" "Childhood accident. You know that." "No." Imogen leaned forward. "I don't mean the scar. I mean this." She gestured broadly, encompassing the bar, the clothes, the life Rory had constructed in the ruins of the old one. "How did you end up here, Rory? You were top of our class. You had your pick of training contracts. Your father had—that connection with the firm in Bristol, the one he pulled strings to get you an interview with." "Turns out I didn't want to be a lawyer." "Bullshit." The word landed like a slap. Imogen rarely swore—they'd used to joke about it, how she'd say "sugar" when she stubbed her toe, "fiddlesticks" when a case note went missing. Now she sat there in her thousand-pound coat, her accent still refined but her vocabulary hardened, and called Rory a liar to her face. "You wanted it more than any of us. You used to stay late at the library, remember? You'd ring me at midnight to argue about tort reform." "People change." "Do they? Or do they just run away until they forget who they were?" Rory gripped the edge of the bar. The wood bit into her palms. "What do you want me to say, Imogen? That I threw it all away because of a man? That I let someone break me down so thoroughly I couldn't remember why I'd wanted anything in the first place?" Her voice came out steady, which surprised her. "Would that make you feel better? Give you closure?" "I don't want closure. I want my friend back." The admission hung between them. Imogen's composure cracked, just for a moment—her lips pressed together, her jaw tightened, and in that flash of rawness, Rory saw the girl she'd known. The one who'd helped her sneak back into the dorms after curfew. The one who'd held her hair back during freshers' flu. The one who'd cried in Rory's room after her first rejection letter, convinced she'd never amount to anything. "That friend doesn't exist anymore." "Maybe not. But something of her might." Rory moved down the bar to serve one of the regulars, a pensioner named Frank who wanted another Guinness. She poured it slowly, letting the foam settle, using the time to breathe. When she returned, Imogen had finished her whisky. Her perfectly manicured fingers traced patterns in the condensation left on the bar. "Who hurt you, Rory?" "No one. Not anymore." "That's not an answer." "It's the only one I have." Imogen studied her face, searching for something—an admission, an accusation, some sign of the person she'd known. Rory let her look. She had nothing to hide anymore, nothing to prove. "I'm married now." "I can see that." "His name is David. He's a partner at Clifford Chance. We met at a recruitment event two years ago." Imogen's voice softened, took on the practiced quality of a story told many times. "He's kind. He listens. He doesn't mind that I work too much." "Do you love him?" The question seemed to catch Imogen off guard. She blinked, and for a moment, her carefully constructed expression slipped. "I think so. I think I must." She paused. "But sometimes I wonder if I even know what that means anymore. If I ever did." The honesty of it struck Rory. Imogen had everything—the career, the husband, the life they'd all been promised if they worked hard enough and followed the rules. And yet she sat here, in a bar she'd wandered into by accident, searching for something in the face of a friend she hadn't seen in years. "We make choices," Rory said. "And then the choices make us." "That sounds like something Silas would say." Rory smiled, despite everything. "It might be." "Is he the owner? This Silas?" "Something like that." Imogen glanced around the bar, really looking at it for the first time—the old maps on the walls, the photographs of places and people from decades past, the warm shadows that made the space feel timeless and separate from the London streets outside. "It suits you. This place." "Does it?" "You always did prefer corners to centres. You liked being on the edge of things, watching." Imogen stood, pulled a note from her wallet, and set it on the bar. Far too much for a single whisky. "I should go. The conference starts early tomorrow." "You don't have to—" "I want to." Imogen hesitated, then reached out and touched Rory's hand. Her fingers were warm, steady. "If you ever want to talk—to someone who knew you before—I'm in London until Friday. The King's Hotel, by the ExCeL." Rory turned her hand over, squeezed Imogen's fingers briefly, then let go. "Take care of yourself, Imogen." "You too. Rory." She paused at the door, the neon green light catching her silhouette. "Whatever happened to make you run—I hope it was worth it. I hope you found whatever you were looking for." Then she was gone, swallowed by the London night and the rain that still fell, relentless and indifferent.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:45:26.852Z" 2/19/2026, 12:45:26 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Imogen finished quietly [quietly]"
1"She gestured broadly [broadly]"
2"Imogen hesitated then [then]"
dialogueSentences74
tagDensity0.243
leniency0.486
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.081
84.89% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1655
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
3
adverb"carefully"
count1
4
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"slowly"
2"perfectly"
3"carefully"
4"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
78.85% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1655
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"otherworldly"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"measured"
count1
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"constructed"
count2
5
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"otherworldly"
1"silence"
2"measured"
3"flicker"
4"constructed"
5"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences84
matches(empty)
57.82% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences84
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"look"
2"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences140
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1637
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
41.41% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions64
wordCount1059
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity2.17
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Imogen"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Tuesday1
Miles2
Davis2
October1
Thames1
Cardiff1
Imogen21
Talisker1
Rory23
Evan1
Frank1
Guinness1
London2
Far1
Since3
persons
0"Davis"
1"Imogen"
2"Rory"
3"Evan"
4"Frank"
5"Since"
places
0"Raven"
1"Thames"
2"Cardiff"
3"London"
4"Far"
globalScore0.414
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1637
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences140
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs82
mean19.96
std18.23
cv0.913
sampleLengths
044
154
231
333
41
549
627
76
828
926
1068
1116
123
138
1449
1512
164
172
1816
1929
2025
213
223
239
2413
2532
266
2720
283
2928
306
318
3232
3314
347
3521
3633
3724
385
395
4072
419
421
4354
4427
452
4614
4713
4855
499
96.91% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences84
matches
0"been promised"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs188
matches
0"were discussing"
1"weren't saying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences140
ratio0.064
matches
0"It didn't break—some small mercy—but it clattered against the wood with a sound that seemed too loud, seemed to announce something she couldn't name."
1"A diamond caught the light on her left hand—engagement ring, wedding band, the full architecture of success."
2"Her eyes—still that startling green, still framed by the same delicate brows—assessed Rory over the rim."
3"Her scar caught the light—the small crescent on her left wrist, normally hidden by her watch strap, now exposed as she'd rolled up her sleeves earlier that evening."
4"Imogen rarely swore—they'd used to joke about it, how she'd say \"sugar\" when she stubbed her toe, \"fiddlesticks\" when a case note went missing."
5"Imogen's composure cracked, just for a moment—her lips pressed together, her jaw tightened, and in that flash of rawness, Rory saw the girl she'd known."
6"Imogen studied her face, searching for something—an admission, an accusation, some sign of the person she'd known."
7"Imogen had everything—the career, the husband, the life they'd all been promised if they worked hard enough and followed the rules."
8"Imogen glanced around the bar, really looking at it for the first time—the old maps on the walls, the photographs of places and people from decades past, the warm shadows that made the space feel timeless and separate from the London streets outside."
99.38% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount909
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.0407040704070407
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.014301430143014302
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences140
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences140
mean11.69
std8.84
cv0.756
sampleLengths
025
119
211
318
425
518
613
79
824
91
1019
119
1221
137
1416
154
166
1714
1814
193
204
2119
2225
239
2434
258
268
273
288
2917
3015
3117
3212
334
342
3510
366
3722
387
399
4016
413
423
439
445
458
465
4712
4815
496
55.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.36428571428571427
totalSentences140
uniqueOpeners51
83.33% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences80
matches
0"Suddenly, she was twenty-one again,"
1"Then she was gone, swallowed"
ratio0.025
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences80
matches
0"It didn't break—some small mercy—but"
1"Her coat was camel-coloured wool,"
2"She took a step forward,"
3"She didn't finish."
4"She didn't need to."
5"She hadn't thought about how"
6"She removed her gloves finger"
7"Her eyes—still that startling green,"
8"She reached for a clean"
9"Her scar caught the light—the"
10"Her expression changed, just barely,"
11"She gestured broadly, encompassing the"
12"Her voice came out steady,"
13"She poured it slowly, letting"
14"Her perfectly manicured fingers traced"
15"She had nothing to hide"
16"She blinked, and for a"
17"Her fingers were warm, steady."
18"She paused at the door,"
ratio0.238
35.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences80
matches
0"The green neon sign bled"
1"Rory wiped down the mahogany"
2"Silas had retreated to his"
3"The door swung open, bringing"
4"Rory glanced up, ready with"
5"The glass she'd been polishing"
6"It didn't break—some small mercy—but"
7"The woman stood in the"
8"Her coat was camel-coloured wool,"
9"Imogen's voice cracked on the"
10"She took a step forward,"
11"Imogen's laugh came out brittle,"
12"She didn't finish."
13"She didn't need to."
14"The silence filled in the"
15"Rory was acutely aware of"
16"She hadn't thought about how"
17"Rory gestured to the nearest"
18"Imogen settled onto the stool"
19"She removed her gloves finger"
ratio0.85
62.50% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"Now she sat there in"
ratio0.013
90.59% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Inside The Raven's Nest, the rain tapped its fingers against the windows like a guest who'd forgotten the password."
1"It didn't break—some small mercy—but it clattered against the wood with a sound that seemed too loud, seemed to announce something she couldn't name."
2"Imogen glanced around the bar, really looking at it for the first time—the old maps on the walls, the photographs of places and people from decades past, the wa…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"they'd (would)"
dialogueSentences74
tagDensity0.027
leniency0.054
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.027
86.1898%