Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYY472NBCA6WY9WFM8PSX0

Run Details

Duration:
19.4s
Cost:
$0.007910
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked, a heavy metallic thud that vibrated through the wood of the door. Aurora pulled the handle. Her breath hitched, snagging in her throat like a ragged nail. Lucien Moreau leaned against the doorframe of the Brick Lane flat. The hallway’s flickering fluorescent bulb caught the platinum sheen of his hair, slicked back with surgical precision. He looked exactly as he had six months ago—wrapped in a charcoal suit that cost more than Rory earned in a year at the Golden Empress. One hand gripped the ivory handle of his cane. The other adjusted the fit of his cufflink. "You changed the locks, petite souris." Rory gripped the edge of the door until the wood bit into her palms. The scent of him—expensive sandalwood, old parchment, and the metallic tang of something otherworldly—flooded the narrow entryway. "Go away, Lucien." She moved to slam the door. The tip of his cane slid into the gap, an immovable bar of bone and silver. He didn't exert force, yet the door refused to budge. His amber eye shimmered with a predatory light, while the black eye remained a bottomless void. "A polite woman would offer a weary traveler a seat. London is particularly cruel this evening." He stepped over the threshold without waiting for an invitation. Rory retreated, her heels skidding on a loose floorboard. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, bolted from his perch on a stack of grimoires and vanished under the sofa. Lucien took in the chaos of the room—the scattered scrolls, the half-eaten takeaway containers, the scent of stale tea. "You look tired, Aurora." He traced the spine of a leather-bound book on the dining table. His fingers were long and elegant, betraying nothing of the demonic blood humming beneath his skin. "I look like a woman who doesn't want a fixer in her living room. How did you find this place? This was supposed to be off the grid." Lucien turned, the corner of his mouth twitching into a ghost of a smirk. "Information is my currency. You know this. Did you truly believe a few extra bolts and a change of postal code would hide you from me?" "I believed you’d have the decency to stay in the shadows where you belong." She crossed her arms, tucking her left wrist into her armpit. The crescent scar there felt like it was throbbing, a phantom itch of a life she’d tried to bury. Lucien’s gaze dropped to the movement. He knew her tells. He knew the way her pulse jumped in the hollow of her throat when she was lying, or scared, or something else entirely. "Decency is a human trait. I am only half-burdened by such things." He moved closer. Each step was silent, a predator’s grace disguised by a limp he didn't actually have. He stopped just inches from her, close enough that she could feel the unnatural heat radiating from his chest. "You left without your payment for the Avaros job." "I didn't want your money, Luc. I wanted out." "Out of the job, or out of my sight?" The question hung between them, heavy and suffocating. Rory looked up, defying the urge to shrink back. Her bright blue eyes clashed against his heterochromatic stare. "The two were tied together. I couldn't have one without the other." "And yet, here I am. And here you are, trembling." "I'm not trembling. I’m annoyed." Lucien reached out. It was a slow, deliberate movement. His thumb brushed the underside of her jaw. His skin was scorching. Rory’s breath hitched again, but she didn't pull away. The electricity of his touch sparked a memory of a rainy night in Marseille—the taste of wine, the sound of a blade unsheathing, and the way his mouth had felt against hers before the world tore them apart. "You are a terrible liar, Aurora Carter. Even after all the lessons I taught you." "I learned enough to know you only show up when you need something. What is it? A soul to broker? A ghost to haunt? Or did you just run out of people to manipulate?" Lucien’s expression hardened. The charcoal fabric of his suit seemed to darken, absorbing the dim light of the flat. "I require a courier. Someone who can move through the city unnoticed by the Council. Someone who isn't afraid of the dark." "Find someone else. I’m delivering noodles now. It’s safer." "Safer, perhaps. But beneath you." He leaned down, his lips hovering mere inches from her ear. "You were meant for more than grease-stained bags and minimum wage. You have a mind that carves through problems like a scalpel. You have fire, even if you try to dmother it under this drab existence." Rory pushed against his chest. It was like shoving a stone wall. "I like my drab existence. I like not waking up with blood on my hands. I like a life where I don't have to wonder if the man I'm with is going to sell me to a demon for a piece of ancient history." Lucien flinched. The movement was microscopic, a slight tightening of the eyes, but Rory saw it. "I never would have sold you." "You used me as bait, Lucien. Don't rewrite the past because you’re lonely." "I was securing our future." "There was no 'our'." He grabbed her wrist—the left one. His grip was firm but not painful, his thumb pressing directly over the crescent scar. The heat from his hand seeped into her bones. "There was everything. There was a moment in that cathedral when you looked at me and didn't see a monster. Don't tell me you’ve forgotten the weight of it." Rory tried to yark her arm back, but he held fast. Her heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic bird in a cage. "I saw what I wanted to see. I was wrong." "Look at me and say that." She looked. She searched the amber and the black, looking for the lie. She found only a devastating, hungry sincerity. It was worse than a threat. "You shouldn't have come here," she whispered, her voice cracking. "I had no choice. The shadows are growing long, rory. The entities I deal with... they are asking questions about the girl with the blue eyes who walked through the gates of Avaros and returned unscathed." "Let them ask." "I cannot protect you if you are hiding in a curry house on Brick Lane." "I don't need your protection. I escaped Evan. I escaped you. I can handle myself." Lucien let go of her wrist, his hand falling to the ivory head of his cane. He paced the small room, his eyes scanning the stacks of research Eva had left behind. He stopped at a scroll written in a dialect that hadn't been spoken on Earth for three centuries. "Eva is deep in it, isn't she? This isn't just curiosity. She’s hunting for the Seventh Key." Rory stiffened. "She’s just a researcher. A student." "She is a target. And because you are here, you are the bullseye." He turned back to her, his face a mask of calculated coldness. "I am not here to reclaim a romance that ended in fire. I am here because I am the only person in this city who can keep your head on your shoulders when the hunters arrive. You think you’re hidden? You’re a beacon." "And you just happened to be the first one to find me." "I am always the first." He stepped toward the door, tapping his cane twice on the floorboards. The sound echoed with an unnatural resonance. "Pack a bag. Not the entire flat. Just what you need to survive forty-eight hours." "I'm not going anywhere with you." "Then you’ll die here. And your friend Eva will follow shortly after. Is that the 'safe' life you charted for yourself?" Rory looked at the piles of books, then at the three deadbolts she’d thought would keep the world out. They looked like toys now. Fragile, useless things. "Where?" Lucien paused with his hand on the door handle. He looked back over his shoulder, the amber eye glowing with a faint, hellish light. "Back to the beginning. We’re going to find the man who put out the contract on your life." "And who is that?" "He goes by the name Malphas. But you’d know him as your father’s oldest friend." The air left the room. Rory felt the floor tilt. Every instinct she had screamed at her to run, to bolt out the window and lose herself in the crowds of London. But Lucien was watching her, his presence fillng the cramped space, offering a terrifying sort of sanctuary. "I need ten minutes," she said. "You have five. Use them to say goodbye to the cat." He stepped out into the hallway, leaving the door hanging open. Rory stood in the center of the room, her hand trembling as she reached for a discarded backpack. Under the sofa, Ptolemy hissed. She didn't blame him. The darkness hadn't just knocked on her door; it had walked in and told her the truth. She grabbed a jacket and stuffed a handful of Eva’s notes into the bag. Her fingers brushed against a small, silver dagger she’d kept hidden under the mattress—a gift from Lucien during their time in France. The metal was cold, a sharp contrast to the heat of his touch. She stepped out into the hallway. Lucien was waiting by the stairs, silhouetted against the grime-streaked window. "You kept the blade," he noted, his voice smooth. "It’s for you, if you lie to me again." "A fair bargain." They descended the stairs in silence. The smell of turmeric and cumin from the curry house below mingled with the damp London air. Outside, the street was a blur of neon signs and rain-slicked pavement. A black sedan with tinted windows waited at the curb, its engine idling with a low, predatory growl. Lucien opened the door for her. "After you, Rory." She hesitated, looking back up at the flat. For a moment, she saw a shadow move in the window. Not Ptolemy. Something taller, darker. "Get in," Lucien commanded, his voice losing its playful edge. She slid into the leather interior. It smelled of him—that same intoxicating mix of old world and underworld. He shut the door and walked around to the driver's side, his limp gone, replaced by the lethal fluidity of a soldier. As he pulled away from the curb, Rory stared at her reflection in the window. The girl who delivered noodles was gone. The woman with the crescent scar and the blue eyes was back. "Tell me everything," she said. "Everything is a very long story, petite souris. We should start with the night you left Cardiff." "I thought we were starting with the contract." "They are the same story. You just haven't read the ending yet."
created_at"2026-02-19T12:45:27.657Z" 2/19/2026, 12:45:27 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.088
leniency0.175
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.55% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1835
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"truly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"truly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
59.13% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1835
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"vibrated"
count1
1
word"otherworldly"
count1
2
word"shimmered"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"predator"
count1
6
word"could feel"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"scanning"
count1
9
word"calculated"
count1
10
word"beacon"
count1
11
word"echoed"
count1
12
word"resonance"
count1
13
word"sanctuary"
count1
14
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"vibrated"
1"otherworldly"
2"shimmered"
3"traced"
4"pulse"
5"predator"
6"could feel"
7"weight"
8"scanning"
9"calculated"
10"beacon"
11"echoed"
12"resonance"
13"sanctuary"
14"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences100
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences152
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1820
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Under the sofa, Ptolemy hissed."
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount1093
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.28
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Brick1
Lane1
Rory13
Golden1
Empress1
Marseille1
Lucien14
Eva2
Earth1
London2
Ptolemy3
France1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Rory"
2"Lucien"
3"Eva"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Golden"
3"Marseille"
4"London"
5"France"
globalScore0.86
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences78
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like it was throbbing, a phantom i"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1820
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences152
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs90
mean20.22
std16.49
cv0.815
sampleLengths
031
171
26
331
43
548
616
756
84
928
1028
1114
1226
1314
1463
1512
1637
179
189
199
2026
2112
2210
235
2468
2515
2634
2719
2822
299
305
3111
3236
3312
3444
3516
366
3713
385
394
4030
4129
4223
4310
446
4526
4610
4736
483
4915
98.25% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences100
matches
0"been spoken"
1"was gone"
6.20% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs172
matches
0"was throbbing"
1"was lying"
2"was scorching"
3"was watching"
4"was waiting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences152
ratio0.053
matches
0"He looked exactly as he had six months ago—wrapped in a charcoal suit that cost more than Rory earned in a year at the Golden Empress."
1"The scent of him—expensive sandalwood, old parchment, and the metallic tang of something otherworldly—flooded the narrow entryway."
2"Lucien took in the chaos of the room—the scattered scrolls, the half-eaten takeaway containers, the scent of stale tea."
3"The electricity of his touch sparked a memory of a rainy night in Marseille—the taste of wine, the sound of a blade unsheathing, and the way his mouth had felt against hers before the world tore them apart."
4"He grabbed her wrist—the left one."
5"The darkness hadn't just knocked on her door; it had walked in and told her the truth."
6"Her fingers brushed against a small, silver dagger she’d kept hidden under the mattress—a gift from Lucien during their time in France."
7"It smelled of him—that same intoxicating mix of old world and underworld."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1105
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.024434389140271493
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005429864253393665
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences152
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences152
mean11.97
std7.98
cv0.666
sampleLengths
016
14
211
311
417
526
69
78
86
914
1017
113
126
1316
1410
1516
1616
1710
189
1918
2019
214
2212
2316
2428
2514
2626
2714
2811
2919
306
314
3223
3312
343
3515
3619
379
389
399
408
419
429
4312
4410
455
463
476
488
494
44.74% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.2894736842105263
totalSentences152
uniqueOpeners44
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
ratio0
37.02% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences94
matches
0"Her breath hitched, snagging in"
1"He looked exactly as he"
2"She moved to slam the"
3"He didn't exert force, yet"
4"His amber eye shimmered with"
5"He stepped over the threshold"
6"He traced the spine of"
7"His fingers were long and"
8"She crossed her arms, tucking"
9"He knew her tells."
10"He knew the way her"
11"He moved closer."
12"He stopped just inches from"
13"Her bright blue eyes clashed"
14"It was a slow, deliberate"
15"His thumb brushed the underside"
16"His skin was scorching."
17"He leaned down, his lips"
18"It was like shoving a"
19"He grabbed her wrist—the left"
ratio0.457
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount87
totalSentences94
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked, a"
1"Aurora pulled the handle."
2"Her breath hitched, snagging in"
3"Lucien Moreau leaned against the"
4"The hallway’s flickering fluorescent bulb"
5"He looked exactly as he"
6"The other adjusted the fit"
7"Rory gripped the edge of"
8"The scent of him—expensive sandalwood,"
9"She moved to slam the"
10"The tip of his cane"
11"He didn't exert force, yet"
12"His amber eye shimmered with"
13"He stepped over the threshold"
14"Rory retreated, her heels skidding"
15"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, bolted"
16"Lucien took in the chaos"
17"He traced the spine of"
18"His fingers were long and"
19"Lucien turned, the corner of"
ratio0.926
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she whispered, her voice cracking"
1"he noted, his voice smooth"
2"Lucien commanded, his voice losing its playful edge"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"he noted (note)"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.07
leniency0.14
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.07
74.1072%