| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 57 | | tagDensity | 0.088 | | leniency | 0.175 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 94.55% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1835 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 59.13% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1835 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "vibrated" | | 1 | "otherworldly" | | 2 | "shimmered" | | 3 | "traced" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "predator" | | 6 | "could feel" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "scanning" | | 9 | "calculated" | | 10 | "beacon" | | 11 | "echoed" | | 12 | "resonance" | | 13 | "sanctuary" | | 14 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 100 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 100 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 152 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 44 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1820 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Under the sofa, Ptolemy hissed." |
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| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 42 | | wordCount | 1093 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.28 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Moreau | 1 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Rory | 13 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Marseille | 1 | | Lucien | 14 | | Eva | 2 | | Earth | 1 | | London | 2 | | Ptolemy | 3 | | France | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Moreau" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Lucien" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Ptolemy" |
| | places | | 0 | "Brick" | | 1 | "Lane" | | 2 | "Golden" | | 3 | "Marseille" | | 4 | "London" | | 5 | "France" |
| | globalScore | 0.86 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 78 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like it was throbbing, a phantom i" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1820 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 152 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 90 | | mean | 20.22 | | std | 16.49 | | cv | 0.815 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 31 | | 1 | 71 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 31 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 48 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 56 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 63 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 37 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 68 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 34 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 22 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 36 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 44 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 30 | | 41 | 29 | | 42 | 23 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 26 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 36 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 98.25% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "been spoken" | | 1 | "was gone" |
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| 6.20% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 172 | | matches | | 0 | "was throbbing" | | 1 | "was lying" | | 2 | "was scorching" | | 3 | "was watching" | | 4 | "was waiting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 152 | | ratio | 0.053 | | matches | | 0 | "He looked exactly as he had six months ago—wrapped in a charcoal suit that cost more than Rory earned in a year at the Golden Empress." | | 1 | "The scent of him—expensive sandalwood, old parchment, and the metallic tang of something otherworldly—flooded the narrow entryway." | | 2 | "Lucien took in the chaos of the room—the scattered scrolls, the half-eaten takeaway containers, the scent of stale tea." | | 3 | "The electricity of his touch sparked a memory of a rainy night in Marseille—the taste of wine, the sound of a blade unsheathing, and the way his mouth had felt against hers before the world tore them apart." | | 4 | "He grabbed her wrist—the left one." | | 5 | "The darkness hadn't just knocked on her door; it had walked in and told her the truth." | | 6 | "Her fingers brushed against a small, silver dagger she’d kept hidden under the mattress—a gift from Lucien during their time in France." | | 7 | "It smelled of him—that same intoxicating mix of old world and underworld." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1105 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.024434389140271493 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005429864253393665 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 152 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 152 | | mean | 11.97 | | std | 7.98 | | cv | 0.666 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 26 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 28 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 26 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 44.74% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.2894736842105263 | | totalSentences | 152 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 37.02% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 43 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath hitched, snagging in" | | 1 | "He looked exactly as he" | | 2 | "She moved to slam the" | | 3 | "He didn't exert force, yet" | | 4 | "His amber eye shimmered with" | | 5 | "He stepped over the threshold" | | 6 | "He traced the spine of" | | 7 | "His fingers were long and" | | 8 | "She crossed her arms, tucking" | | 9 | "He knew her tells." | | 10 | "He knew the way her" | | 11 | "He moved closer." | | 12 | "He stopped just inches from" | | 13 | "Her bright blue eyes clashed" | | 14 | "It was a slow, deliberate" | | 15 | "His thumb brushed the underside" | | 16 | "His skin was scorching." | | 17 | "He leaned down, his lips" | | 18 | "It was like shoving a" | | 19 | "He grabbed her wrist—the left" |
| | ratio | 0.457 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 87 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "The third deadbolt clicked, a" | | 1 | "Aurora pulled the handle." | | 2 | "Her breath hitched, snagging in" | | 3 | "Lucien Moreau leaned against the" | | 4 | "The hallway’s flickering fluorescent bulb" | | 5 | "He looked exactly as he" | | 6 | "The other adjusted the fit" | | 7 | "Rory gripped the edge of" | | 8 | "The scent of him—expensive sandalwood," | | 9 | "She moved to slam the" | | 10 | "The tip of his cane" | | 11 | "He didn't exert force, yet" | | 12 | "His amber eye shimmered with" | | 13 | "He stepped over the threshold" | | 14 | "Rory retreated, her heels skidding" | | 15 | "Ptolemy, the tabby cat, bolted" | | 16 | "Lucien took in the chaos" | | 17 | "He traced the spine of" | | 18 | "His fingers were long and" | | 19 | "Lucien turned, the corner of" |
| | ratio | 0.926 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, her voice cracking" | | 1 | "he noted, his voice smooth" | | 2 | "Lucien commanded, his voice losing its playful edge" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "he noted (note)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 57 | | tagDensity | 0.07 | | leniency | 0.14 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.07 | |