Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYYHBSYC59FBZSZ8MCTWXF

Run Details

Duration:
1m 11s
Cost:
$0.003660
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The stairwell exhaled damp air that clung to her skin, a sour reminder of all the places London bled into itself. The abandoned Tube corridor beneath Camden stretched into darkness, a rusted throat swallowing footsteps whole. A faint hum threaded through the iron, a bass line that didn’t belong to any station’s usual music. The Veil Market had taken up residence here again, or so the whispers had insisted—the market moved locations every full moon, a carnival of shadows that sold what the living shouldn’t dare barter for. Tonight, a heavy hush kept time with the flicker of the corridor’s emergency lights. The bone token lay on the threshold, slick with something not quite rain and not quite something else. It rested under the glow of a corroded sign that had never learned to spell properly, a relic glowed in half-remembered neon. Quinn crouched, gloved fingers brushing the object, the token carving a pale mistake in the grime. She had seen tokens like this, in the corners of restricted archives and the dark pockets of the city where the past wore its bones on the outside. The token was fresh in its wear, not a relic stained by decades, but something living that had learned to pretend it was old. “Quinn,” a voice called from the shadow’s edge, soft as a moth’s wing. Eva Kowalski stepped into the glow with her satchel riding against a hip, leather creaking, books pressed close as if they might bite the air to stay still. Her curly red hair escaped a loose tie, a halo around a freckled face that looked more surprised by the market’s stillness than by the blood in the bones. The Market’s scent washed over them—amber and iron, leather and something sharp, like pencils that never stopped drawing. The stalls were a morgue of glitter: enchanted baubles hung from torn awnings; jars glowed with things that breathed faintly when you looked away; a whisper of smoke curled from a vendor’s cart, the smoke an index of memories the world had forgotten to forget. Quinn stood, pocketing the token, then adjusted the leather watch on her left wrist—a thing she wore like a habit, a reminder that time kept its own score and never asked permission. She scanned the room, careful as a sniper, careful as a woman who had learned to trust nothing but the hammer of her own careful breathing. Eva joined her, eyes bright behind round glasses, a satchel weighty with the field notes and occult references she treated like a shield. “We’re the witnesses tonight, not the heroes,” Eva said, quiet but steady, as if the word hero might wake something not ready to wake. “Better to be awake than a long dream,” Quinn answered, not turning, teeth set to a plan that had learned to wear a hard edge around its outline. In the center of a deserted platform, the body lay sprawled, still and clean as if the space around him had kept its breath until the last moment. A vendor’s stall leaned over the corpse like a reluctant witness, jars of glimmering powders tipped toward the downfall of something that had happened here. The air hummed with a low electricity, something that felt like a memory pressed against the skin. No blood pooled, no ragged torn cloth, just a neat, almost ceremonial ending. Quinn crouched again, careful as a surgeon with a blade that knew where to go. The body’s eyes were closed, but the eyelids trembled as if the soul inside contested surrender. A line of sigils—etches on the floor, red dust gathered along the seams of the platform—formed a circle that never quite closed. The sigils didn’t belong to any one occult tradition she’d studied; they were a patchwork, a map woven from many hands, the kind of thing a city used when it wanted to pretend its sins were varied enough to pretend innocence. “Not killed here, not killed simply,” Eva murmured, bending to study the sigils up close, her breath fogging on the glass of a ruined lantern. “The circle’s a trap, yes, but not for a body. It’s a doorway laid down in chalk and ash.” Quinn nodded, eyes narrowing as she absorbed details: the absence of weapon marks, the peculiar temperature of the air around the body—cool on the skin, but not cold enough to be frost, colder than the rest of the tunnel’s damp. A soft hum ran beneath the platform’s bones, the kind of sound a tuning fork makes when strung between two unlikely notes. “The token,” Quinn said, lifting it again, turning it over in her palm. “The entrance requires this bone token. It’s as if someone lit a door with a bone, not a key.” The token’s bone was smooth, the surface etched with a symbol that resembled a coiled serpent biting its own tail—a loop that threaded through memory like a thread through a needle’s eye. Eva straightened, tapping the satchel’s clasp with a gloved finger. “Ancient bones, modern magic, Quinn. It’s the mix that makes this place dangerous. If the Market recognizes you, you enter; if it doesn’t, you’re stranded where time forgets you.” A switch flickered somewhere in Quinn’s mind and she stood taller, shoulders squared as if the world had once missed a shot and she’d be the one to correct it. “We’ve got a mismatch: the body’s too tidy for a random encounter. Someone staged this,” she said, voice flat with foundation-strength certainty. “The market doesn’t clean up after a murder without a reason.” The Veil Compass lay on a crate near the corpse, its brass casing catching a stray ray of light and throwing a tiny sun at the stone. The needle pointed steadily toward a seam in the wall—that one crack that looked like a breath in a wall, a pale seam running along the bricks where the station would have complained about a leak if the world cared to listen. The face markings on the compass glowed faintly, sigils tracing a path only the instrument could read. Verdigris clung to the casing as if the brass was slowly growing old in a protective embrace. Quinn reached for the Compass and the needle shivered against its own metal skin. “It’s telling us to move toward the back room,” she said, almost a whisper, as if the instrument’s whisper would compromise the case if spoken aloud. “If a doorway is here, it’s a doorway the Market made for itself.” Eva straightened, adjusting a paperweight of dust on a crate where an enamel pin lay half-embedded in the wood. “A doorway, yes, but not a random one. Full moon’s close enough to make this place breathe again. The Market shifts, but it doesn’t shift for nothing. It shifts for the right alignment of energy.” Quinn bent closer to the body, careful not to contaminate the scene, and listened with the sort of attention a hunter gives to the direction a prey flees. The body seemed almost staged by someone who had studied a ledger of the city’s sins rather than a man who had learned by trial and error. The hands lay flat, palms up, in a way that suggested surrender rather than struggle. There was a tiny smudge on the floor near the left hand, the mark of something burned or charred, though nothing visibly burned in the room’s air. “Who built your ending?” Quinn asked softly, almost to herself, but the question folded into Eva’s ear like a whispered dare. Eva stepped closer, eyes bright with that dangerous curiosity that made her a good guide through the Market’s murk. “You know the stone isn’t the least of it. The sigils on the floor aren’t just decorative—they’re a map for memory. The Market wants you to remember what it’s sold and what it’s stolen away.” Quinn’s jaw tightened. She had a memory of a partner’s collapse, of a case that had bent the city’s rules until the rules began to bend back, until something crumbled in the air and a shadow rose where no shadow should exist. DS Morris’s death had not been simple or explainable, and the part of her that kept score with strange things refused to let that memory rest. The Market had a way of appearing to answer questions with questions, to offer a trail that led the investigator into a labyrinth from which the truth could not return by daylight. “Look at this,” she said, stepping aside so Eva could see the wall’s corner where dust lay in a pattern that looked almost deliberate—a circle of soot around a darker notch in the brick. “The notch isn’t a dent. It’s an aperture—small, guarded, something that needs a specific energy to open.” Eva leaned in, her breath releasing a tiny cloud that formed for a moment into a map of routes and possibilities. “The notch could be a receptacle,” she said, pointing with a gloved finger. “The Market stores knowledge here as if it’s money. The notch could be where someone places something to activate the doorway.” Quinn pressed a gloved finger to the notch as if it might reveal a secret by the touch of skin. The notch yielded only a faint tremor, as if the stone simply remembered someone’s presence for a heartbeat and then forgot. The Market did not forget; it kept a ledger of who entered, what they took, and who they left behind in the shadows between doors. “Another interpretation,” Eva added, stepping back. “Someone wanted the body burned clean in a ritual that didn’t require heat, just a change in the air. If a door exists here, the killer could slip into it and vanish.” Quinn turned slowly, taking in the whole of the tunnel—the damp air, the scent of iron and old stories, the market’s half-lit tents of wonder barely visible through the back area’s doorway. The veil’s fog parted enough to show a corridor beyond, a narrow mouth of a passage that disappeared into nothingness with a soft, almost ashamed sigh. The Market’s heartbeat grew louder, a subtle tremor that traveled through the platform and into Quinn’s spine. She swept her eyes across the stalls, letting the creatures of this place reveal their meaning with their stillness. A vendor’s cart, stacked with jars that held glimmering motes of power, sat like a silent jury. A hooded figure in the shadow hummed a note to keep time with the Market’s breathing. A child’s doll, one of those cheap porcelain things that always looked about to break, dangled from a string as though suspended between two different eras. “The last thing I’d expect here is a clean murder,” Quinn finally said, voice low, answer already pressing at the back of her throat. “If someone staged this, they knew how to disguise a crime within a ritual.” Eva stepped closer to the corpse again, almost respectful. “Or to hide a truth,” she said, with a careful calm that acknowledged the danger but refused to pretend it could be tamed. “The Market doesn’t let go of its secrets easily. The energy here isn’t just power—it’s memory, it’s intent, it’s promises broken and kept.” Quinn’s breath formed a small cloud that did not vanish. “What was taken, and what was given? The token’s used to open doors, not to close them. If someone wants a door to stay open, they’ll leave room for the wrong thing to walk through.” A soft scuff sounded from the back of the tunnel. Quinn turned, her body tensing into a blade edge. Eva stiffened beside her, fingers curling around the leather satchel’s strap as if she meant to pull it into a shield. A figure stepped from the shadow—a silhouette that looked too deliberate to be mere spectator. The Market’s watchers emerged not with menace but with a patient, practiced calm that suggested they had learned to live between worlds rather than in one. Quinn’s eyes narrowed. “You’re not supposed to be here,” she said, voice even, but a fraction sharper than the air. “This isn’t a place for visitors without a token.” The newcomer lifted a gloved hand in a slow, almost casual gesture, and a soft click answered the sentence. The figure wore attire that would belong to a guard or a courier, something utilitarian and precise, like a soldier’s uniform adapted for a market that didn’t care for uniforms. The features were hidden by the shadow of a hood, but a voice slipped out—calm, even, and thoroughly untroubled by the tension around them. “A token, a circle, and a doorway,” the voice said, not gloating but patient as a librarian whispering in a room where secrets kept themselves. “The Veil Market accepts payment in memory and breath, in energy and intent. It does not reward panic.” Quinn stepped closer, her breath steady, her eyes fixed on the figure’s soft smile that suggested either confidence or cunning. “Who are you?” The figure lowered their hood just enough to reveal a hint of a face, and then drew back, as if the gesture mattered more than the face itself. They weren’t what people would expect in a scene of crime and ritual; their face showed competence, not menace, and a certain weary knowledge of the Market’s rules. “Names aren’t the currency here,” the figure said, and then something in their tone shifted, a note that suggested the person spoke from an edge of the Market’s own memory. “I’m someone who keeps doors from closing when they shouldn’t. I know you, Quinn. I know you’ve seen the edge where the ordinary ends and something else begins.” Quinn’s jaw tightened. “You know my name,” she said, and the words were a test, a measure of control rather than accusation. “You know about Morris.” The figure’s gaze flicked toward Eva, then back to Quinn. “You don’t need Morris to understand tonight. The Market is a mirror. Tonight it shows you what your city hides about itself.” Eva steadied the satchel against her hip and looked between the two with a scientist’s curiosity and a friend’s wary concern. “If you know something, say it plainly for a moment. The more words we have, the more the Market can twist the truth.” The figure’s mouth curved slightly, not a smile so much as a closing of a door. “Plainness is a luxury here. But there is something you should know: someone has learned to bend the Market’s rules. They don’t walk in, they don’t walk out. They blur the edges, use the tokens to open and to hold, and the body here is a warning.” Quinn stepped forward until the bone token pressed against her palm again, the token’s surface a cold reminder of the doorway it could conjure. “A warning about what?” The figure shrugged, almost apologetically. “About who belongs to the Market and who doesn’t. About the price of secrets kept too long.” They tilted their head, regarding the circle of sigils on the floor with professional paternalism. “If you wish to solve this with your city’s rules, you’ll fail here. The Market doesn’t follow rules. It follows a ledger—one you cannot read and one you did not sign.” Quinn studied the Ledger of the Market, a concept too fantastical to name, yet something she could feel in her bones as a ache. The Market wasn’t just a market; it was a memory bank, a repository of deals between people and things that did not belong to daylight. To walk through a doorway here was to become part of a different story—the one the Market kept for itself. “Show me the truth,” she said, voice taut. The figure’s eyes held hers with a quiet certainty. “The truth is a doorway that doesn’t want to be closed. Your killer didn’t break in; they invited the Market to open wide enough for them to pass through. They are still out there, and they will be back when the full moon stains the city’s glass with silver.” Quinn glanced at Eva, who watched the figure with an almost reverent concentration, a scholar at the edge of revelation. Then she looked at the body again, considered the circle, the tokens, the notch, the seam in the wall that might be a mouth to something else. “A doorway,” Quinn echoed, as if tasting the word, weighing it on her tongue the way a detective weighs a confession. “Not a weapon, not a clue, but a route.” The Market’s breath grew warmer, a subtle tide rising through the tunnel, as if it had waited for the city to notice its own longing. The Veil Compass hummed in Quinn’s hand, the face etched with sigils waking as if stirred by a memory that wanted to be found. The needle shifted, no longer pinned toward the wall; it glided, almost gently, toward a shadowed arch at the back of the room—the threshold that led into the Market’s innards, a corridor wrapped in cloth and fragrance and the shimmer of something not quite solid. “Move with me,” Quinn said, and the order came out crisp, a command she lived by when it mattered. She tucked the bone token into her coat, keeping it safe, keeping it ready. Eva slid her satchel more securely onto her shoulder, stepping into line, a shield of knowledge and caution. The figure followed at a measured distance, their silhouette a calm presence behind them, like a constant reminder that the Market watched and recorded everything, even the pursuer who thought they could outwit its memory. Quinn paused at the doorway’s mouth, looking back toward the corpse, toward the circle, toward the notch in the wall. She studied the lines the sigils drew, the way the air seemed to tilt at the threshold, as if the space itself were listening for permission to open. Then she looked again at the bone token in her pocket and the Veil Compass in her hand, both instruments of a world that existed when daylight did not care to notice. “Quinn,” Eva said softly, almost too softly, catching her attention with a quiet tilt of head toward the notch. “Say it,” Quinn answered, voice low but not unsteady. “Maybe the notches aren’t for calling a door,” Eva suggested, quick and precise. “Maybe they’re for closing one. If the killer used the notch to summon a doorway, someone else could use the notch to seal it.” Quinn touched the notch with the tip of a gloved finger, then withdrew. The air trembled a fraction and the hum grew louder, a note that was almost a chord, as if the whole tunnel had learned to sing. The Market’s ledger was open in the dark, and someone in the ledger—or rather, somewhere behind it—knew what it meant to be read. The door’s arch breathed once more, the air thick with the iron-sweet scent of new secrets. The Veil Compass settled, the needle pointing inexorably toward the shadowed doorway, as if inviting them in. The path lay ahead, a line drawn between two worlds, a line that would test Quinn’s military precision against a Power that had learned to smile with familiarity. Quinn stepped forward, feet sure on the market’s timbered floor, her shadow long and even behind her, cast by a light that did not pretend to be a lamp. She did not look back at Eva, did not glance toward the corpse or the sigils or the notch that kept insisting it was more than a notch. She looked forward, toward the corridor that did not exist in any map, toward the memory of a case that had never dared to show its true face. “I want a word with the Market,” she said aloud, as if bargaining with a creature who ran on breath and debt and the promise of an ending. “And I want it tonight. The city asks for answers, and it won’t wait for a moon to align.” Eva’s lips pressed into a thin line, a line that meant she could stand up to anything as long as the truth didn’t demand blood to prove itself. “Then we walk carefully,” she said, her voice a steady wind against the tunnel’s heavy air. “Careful enough to keep your partner’s memory from becoming a more elaborate lie.” Quinn’s eyes flicked toward the one place in the Market that glowed a shade too bright, a stall where the air tasted like citrus and electricity, a stall that hadn’t belonged to the Market the last time she saw it and might not belong forever. The Veil Compass’s needle trembled, then steadied, as if the instrument itself were listening to a conversation only it could hear, a conversation about doors and the weight of the past’s names. They stepped into the shadow, and the Market exhaled around them with a long, patient sigh. The tunnel’s walls—grease-black and slick with the damp of a city that forgot to breathe—closed behind them as if the Market had swallowed its own breath again. The notch in the wall slept, waiting. The last thing Quinn heard before the corridor swallowed them was Eva’s quiet, almost musical, in its certainty: a single, crisp line, designed to cut through the Market’s velvet fog. This time, she would walk the doorway with a clockwork certainty that could outlast a city’s secrets. And if someone waited beyond that door, Quinn intended to meet them with the same calm, unblinking gaze that had carried her through eighteen years of service and the shadow of a partner’s unspoken fate. The bone token rested, patient and cool, in her pocket. The Veil Compass hummed against her palm, a small, bright heartbeat guiding them toward whatever lay beyond.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:45:41.12Z" 2/19/2026, 12:45:41 PM
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tokens_completion6912
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native_tokens_completion9025
native_tokens_completion_images0
native_tokens_reasoning4480
native_tokens_cached0
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num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
51.85% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags27
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"Quinn asked softly [softly]"
1"Quinn finally said [finally]"
2"Eva said softly [softly]"
3"she said aloud [aloud]"
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.148
effectiveRatio0.148
87.65% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount3644
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"softly"
count3
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"gently"
count1
4
adverb"inexorably"
count1
5
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"softly"
2"slightly"
3"gently"
4"inexorably"
5"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.46% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount3644
totalAiIsms31
found
0
word"reminder"
count4
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"flicker"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count3
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"trembled"
count3
6
word"etched"
count2
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"encounter"
count1
9
word"tracing"
count1
10
word"porcelain"
count1
11
word"the last thing"
count2
12
word"tension"
count1
13
word"flicked"
count2
14
word"could feel"
count1
15
word"repository"
count1
16
word"echoed"
count1
17
word"measured"
count1
18
word"weight"
count1
19
word"velvet"
count1
20
word"unspoken"
count1
highlights
0"reminder"
1"footsteps"
2"flicker"
3"whisper"
4"scanned"
5"trembled"
6"etched"
7"flickered"
8"encounter"
9"tracing"
10"porcelain"
11"the last thing"
12"tension"
13"flicked"
14"could feel"
15"repository"
16"echoed"
17"measured"
18"weight"
19"velvet"
20"unspoken"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences137
matches(empty)
90.72% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences137
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
2"tend to"
3"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences164
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen52
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords3617
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions37
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions100
wordCount2863
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.22
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Market"
discoveredNames
London1
Tube1
Camden1
Veil7
Market22
Eva22
Kowalski1
Quinn35
Compass7
Morris1
Ledger1
Power1
persons
0"Camden"
1"Market"
2"Eva"
3"Kowalski"
4"Quinn"
5"Compass"
6"Morris"
7"Power"
places
0"London"
1"Ledger"
globalScore0.889
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences130
glossingSentenceCount10
matches
0"not quite rain and not quite something else"
1"not quite something else"
2"felt like a memory pressed against the"
3"looked like a breath in a wall, a pale se"
4"seemed almost staged by someone who had studied a ledger of the city’s sins rather than a man who had learned by trial and error"
5"though nothing visibly burned in the room’"
6"as if tasting the word, weighing it on her tongue the way a detective weighs a confession"
7"not quite solid"
8"as if inviting them in"
9"as if bargaining with a creature who ran on breath and debt and the promise of an ending"
10"tasted like citrus and electricity, a sta"
6.47% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches7
per1kWords1.935
wordCount3617
matches
0"not a relic stained by decades, but something living"
1"not the heroes,” Eva said, quiet but steady, as if the word hero might wake something not ready t"
2"not with menace but with a patient, practiced calm"
3"not supposed to be here,” she said, voice even, but a fraction sharper than the air"
4"not gloating but patient as a librarian whispering in a room"
5"Not a weapon, not a clue, but a route"
6"not a clue, but a route"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences164
matches
0"let that memory"
77.73% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs65
mean55.65
std23.49
cv0.422
sampleLengths
0102
1108
270
363
458
547
628
783
894
944
1062
1164
1239
1363
14103
1553
1654
1797
1821
1954
20100
2151
2255
2366
2438
2558
2695
2738
2855
2945
3040
3141
3229
3373
3443
3523
3656
3758
3826
3932
4044
4163
4228
4368
4469
458
4658
4747
4830
4994
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences137
matches
0"were hidden"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs454
matches
0"were listening"
1"were listening"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount19
semicolonCount9
flaggedSentences22
totalSentences164
ratio0.134
matches
0"The Veil Market had taken up residence here again, or so the whispers had insisted—the market moved locations every full moon, a carnival of shadows that sold what the living shouldn’t dare barter for."
1"The Market’s scent washed over them—amber and iron, leather and something sharp, like pencils that never stopped drawing."
2"The stalls were a morgue of glitter: enchanted baubles hung from torn awnings; jars glowed with things that breathed faintly when you looked away; a whisper of smoke curled from a vendor’s cart, the smoke an index of memories the world had forgotten to forget."
3"Quinn stood, pocketing the token, then adjusted the leather watch on her left wrist—a thing she wore like a habit, a reminder that time kept its own score and never asked permission."
4"A line of sigils—etches on the floor, red dust gathered along the seams of the platform—formed a circle that never quite closed."
5"The sigils didn’t belong to any one occult tradition she’d studied; they were a patchwork, a map woven from many hands, the kind of thing a city used when it wanted to pretend its sins were varied enough to pretend innocence."
6"Quinn nodded, eyes narrowing as she absorbed details: the absence of weapon marks, the peculiar temperature of the air around the body—cool on the skin, but not cold enough to be frost, colder than the rest of the tunnel’s damp."
7"“The entrance requires this bone token. It’s as if someone lit a door with a bone, not a key.” The token’s bone was smooth, the surface etched with a symbol that resembled a coiled serpent biting its own tail—a loop that threaded through memory like a thread through a needle’s eye."
8"“Ancient bones, modern magic, Quinn. It’s the mix that makes this place dangerous. If the Market recognizes you, you enter; if it doesn’t, you’re stranded where time forgets you.”"
9"The needle pointed steadily toward a seam in the wall—that one crack that looked like a breath in a wall, a pale seam running along the bricks where the station would have complained about a leak if the world cared to listen."
10"“Look at this,” she said, stepping aside so Eva could see the wall’s corner where dust lay in a pattern that looked almost deliberate—a circle of soot around a darker notch in the brick."
11"The Market did not forget; it kept a ledger of who entered, what they took, and who they left behind in the shadows between doors."
12"Quinn turned slowly, taking in the whole of the tunnel—the damp air, the scent of iron and old stories, the market’s half-lit tents of wonder barely visible through the back area’s doorway."
13"A figure stepped from the shadow—a silhouette that looked too deliberate to be mere spectator."
14"The features were hidden by the shadow of a hood, but a voice slipped out—calm, even, and thoroughly untroubled by the tension around them."
15"They weren’t what people would expect in a scene of crime and ritual; their face showed competence, not menace, and a certain weary knowledge of the Market’s rules."
16"The Market wasn’t just a market; it was a memory bank, a repository of deals between people and things that did not belong to daylight."
17"To walk through a doorway here was to become part of a different story—the one the Market kept for itself."
18"“The truth is a doorway that doesn’t want to be closed. Your killer didn’t break in; they invited the Market to open wide enough for them to pass through. They are still out there, and they will be back when the full moon stains the city’s glass with silver.”"
19"The needle shifted, no longer pinned toward the wall; it glided, almost gently, toward a shadowed arch at the back of the room—the threshold that led into the Market’s innards, a corridor wrapped in cloth and fragrance and the shimmer of something not quite solid."
20"The Market’s ledger was open in the dark, and someone in the ledger—or rather, somewhere behind it—knew what it meant to be read."
21"The tunnel’s walls—grease-black and slick with the damp of a city that forgot to breathe—closed behind them as if the Market had swallowed its own breath again."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2886
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount106
adverbRatio0.036729036729036726
lyAdverbCount24
lyAdverbRatio0.008316008316008316
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences164
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences164
mean22.05
std9.57
cv0.434
sampleLengths
021
115
218
334
414
518
622
716
828
924
1013
1128
1229
1318
1445
1532
1626
1723
1824
1928
2028
2125
2217
2313
2415
2516
2622
2741
2825
2919
3040
3122
3213
3351
3410
3529
3630
3722
3811
3927
4042
4117
4217
4314
4426
4513
4619
4735
4828
4927
33.54% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats27
diversityRatio0.23780487804878048
totalSentences164
uniqueOpeners39
48.66% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences137
matches
0"Then she looked at the"
1"Then she looked again at"
ratio0.015
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences137
matches
0"It rested under the glow"
1"She had seen tokens like"
2"Her curly red hair escaped"
3"She scanned the room, careful"
4"she said, voice flat with"
5"she said, almost a whisper,"
6"She had a memory of"
7"she said, stepping aside so"
8"she said, pointing with a"
9"She swept her eyes across"
10"she said, with a careful"
11"she said, voice even, but"
12"They weren’t what people would"
13"she said, and the words"
14"They tilted their head, regarding"
15"she said, voice taut"
16"She tucked the bone token"
17"She studied the lines the"
18"She did not look back"
19"She looked forward, toward the"
ratio0.168
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount130
totalSentences137
matches
0"The stairwell exhaled damp air"
1"The abandoned Tube corridor beneath"
2"A faint hum threaded through"
3"The Veil Market had taken"
4"Tonight, a heavy hush kept"
5"The bone token lay on"
6"It rested under the glow"
7"Quinn crouched, gloved fingers brushing"
8"She had seen tokens like"
9"The token was fresh in"
10"a voice called from the"
11"Eva Kowalski stepped into the"
12"Her curly red hair escaped"
13"The Market’s scent washed over"
14"The stalls were a morgue"
15"Quinn stood, pocketing the token,"
16"She scanned the room, careful"
17"Eva joined her, eyes bright"
18"Eva said, quiet but steady,"
19"Quinn answered, not turning, teeth"
ratio0.949
36.50% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences137
matches
0"To walk through a doorway"
ratio0.007
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences102
technicalSentenceCount31
matches
0"The stairwell exhaled damp air that clung to her skin, a sour reminder of all the places London bled into itself."
1"The Veil Market had taken up residence here again, or so the whispers had insisted—the market moved locations every full moon, a carnival of shadows that sold w…"
2"It rested under the glow of a corroded sign that had never learned to spell properly, a relic glowed in half-remembered neon."
3"Her curly red hair escaped a loose tie, a halo around a freckled face that looked more surprised by the market’s stillness than by the blood in the bones."
4"The stalls were a morgue of glitter: enchanted baubles hung from torn awnings; jars glowed with things that breathed faintly when you looked away; a whisper of …"
5"She scanned the room, careful as a sniper, careful as a woman who had learned to trust nothing but the hammer of her own careful breathing."
6"In the center of a deserted platform, the body lay sprawled, still and clean as if the space around him had kept its breath until the last moment."
7"A vendor’s stall leaned over the corpse like a reluctant witness, jars of glimmering powders tipped toward the downfall of something that had happened here."
8"The air hummed with a low electricity, something that felt like a memory pressed against the skin."
9"The body’s eyes were closed, but the eyelids trembled as if the soul inside contested surrender."
10"A switch flickered somewhere in Quinn’s mind and she stood taller, shoulders squared as if the world had once missed a shot and she’d be the one to correct it."
11"The Veil Compass lay on a crate near the corpse, its brass casing catching a stray ray of light and throwing a tiny sun at the stone."
12"Verdigris clung to the casing as if the brass was slowly growing old in a protective embrace."
13"Eva stepped closer, eyes bright with that dangerous curiosity that made her a good guide through the Market’s murk."
14"DS Morris’s death had not been simple or explainable, and the part of her that kept score with strange things refused to let that memory rest."
15"The Market had a way of appearing to answer questions with questions, to offer a trail that led the investigator into a labyrinth from which the truth could not…"
16"Eva leaned in, her breath releasing a tiny cloud that formed for a moment into a map of routes and possibilities."
17"The notch yielded only a faint tremor, as if the stone simply remembered someone’s presence for a heartbeat and then forgot."
18"The veil’s fog parted enough to show a corridor beyond, a narrow mouth of a passage that disappeared into nothingness with a soft, almost ashamed sigh."
19"A child’s doll, one of those cheap porcelain things that always looked about to break, dangled from a string as though suspended between two different eras."
20"Eva stiffened beside her, fingers curling around the leather satchel’s strap as if she meant to pull it into a shield."
21"A figure stepped from the shadow—a silhouette that looked too deliberate to be mere spectator."
22"The figure wore attire that would belong to a guard or a courier, something utilitarian and precise, like a soldier’s uniform adapted for a market that didn’t c…"
23"The Market’s breath grew warmer, a subtle tide rising through the tunnel, as if it had waited for the city to notice its own longing."
24"The needle shifted, no longer pinned toward the wall; it glided, almost gently, toward a shadowed arch at the back of the room—the threshold that led into the M…"
25"The figure followed at a measured distance, their silhouette a calm presence behind them, like a constant reminder that the Market watched and recorded everythi…"
26"She studied the lines the sigils drew, the way the air seemed to tilt at the threshold, as if the space itself were listening for permission to open."
27"The path lay ahead, a line drawn between two worlds, a line that would test Quinn’s military precision against a Power that had learned to smile with familiarit…"
28"The Veil Compass’s needle trembled, then steadied, as if the instrument itself were listening to a conversation only it could hear, a conversation about doors a…"
29"The tunnel’s walls—grease-black and slick with the damp of a city that forgot to breathe—closed behind them as if the Market had swallowed its own breath again."
30"And if someone waited beyond that door, Quinn intended to meet them with the same calm, unblinking gaze that had carried her through eighteen years of service a…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags27
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"she said, voice flat with foundation-strength certainty"
1"she said, and the words were a test, a measure of control rather than accusation"
2"Quinn echoed, as if tasting the word, weighing it on her tongue the way a detective weighs a confession"
3"Quinn said, and the order came out crisp, a command she lived by when it mattered"
4"Quinn answered, voice low but not unsteady"
5"she said aloud, as if bargaining with a creature who ran on breath and debt and the promise of an ending"
6"she said, her voice a steady wind against the tunnel’s heavy air"
94.44% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags24
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Eva murmured (murmur)"
1"Eva added (add)"
2"Eva suggested (suggest)"
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.111
68.9453%