Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYYM9VPWZYFJM7BZVJX4R4

Run Details

Duration:
27.2s
Cost:
$0.005693
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the pavement, turning the London streets into a slick mirror that fractured the neon glare of shop signs. Harlow Quinn sprinted, her boots slapping against wet concrete with military precision. Her breath came in sharp, controlled bursts, each inhale tasting of ozone and exhaust. Ahead, a figure darted around a corner, silhouette blurred by the downpour. The suspect moved with an unnatural grace, hips pivoting too smoothly for a human fleeing capture. Quinn checked her watch, the worn leather strap cold against her wrist. Three minutes since the tail began. Too long. She pushed harder, muscles burning, salt-and-pepper hair plastered to her skull. The chase led away from the main thoroughfares, winding through narrow alleys where dumpsters overflowed and shadows pooled thick enough to drown in. The suspect vanished down a rusted fire escape. Quinn didn't hesitate. She grabbed the cold metal ladder, rung by rung, descending into the darkness below. The air grew heavier here, thick with the scent of damp earth and something else—something metallic and old, like dried blood mixed with crushed herbs. At the bottom, a heavy steel door stood slightly ajar. Green light spilled from the crack, pulsing rhythmically. Quinn paused, hand hovering near her holster. The green glow matched the distinctive neon sign above The Raven's Nest, but this wasn't Silas' bar. This felt deeper, older. She pushed the door open. The space beyond defied logic. An abandoned Tube station stretched out before her, tracks long removed, platforms repurposed into stalls draped in velvet and burlap. Lanterns floated inches above the ground, casting no shadows. People—or things that looked like people—milled about, haggling over jars of glowing liquid and bundles of dried bones. A woman with skin like polished obsidian bartered with a man whose eyes rolled independently in their sockets. Quinn stepped onto the platform, rain dripping from her coat onto the pristine mosaic tiles. Heads turned. Whispers rippled through the crowd, words in languages that twisted her tongue just hearing them. She scanned the throng, searching for the suspect. There, near a stall selling what looked like bottled storms, the figure paused. A bone token hung from the suspect's neck, white and carved with intricate spirals. Entry requirement met. Quinn lacked such a charm. Every instinct screamed at her to turn back, call for backup, wait for daylight. But DS Morris's face flashed in her mind, unexplained circumstances, three years gone. She couldn't stop now. She moved through the crowd, shoulder-checking a creature made entirely of smoke. It hissed, reforming instantly. Quinn kept her gaze forward, jaw set. The suspect spotted her, eyes widening, and bolted toward a tunnel entrance marked with faded signs for Camden Town. Quinn gave chase again, weaving between stalls. A vendor grabbed her arm, fingers cold as ice. "No token, no entry," the vendor rasped, voice sounding like grinding stones. "Leave the surface world behind or pay the price." Quinn yanked her arm free. "Metropolitan Police. Step aside." The vendor laughed, a sound devoid of humor. "Law holds no sway in the Veil, Detective. Only blood and barter." Quinn didn't break stride. She reached the tunnel mouth. Darkness swallowed the path ahead, broken only by faint, bioluminescent fungi clinging to the curved ceiling. The air here tasted of sulfur and regret. She hesitated at the threshold. Beyond lay unfamiliar territory, potentially dangerous, certainly illegal. Her radio crackled with static, useless this deep underground. If she crossed this line, there was no going back to normal procedures. No backup would follow. She thought of Morris, of the files she'd kept hidden in her desk drawer, the ones marked 'Supernatural Origins.' This was the source. The root of everything she'd suspected about the clique. She stepped into the tunnel. The darkness pressed in, heavy and suffocating. Her footsteps echoed strangely, as if the sound traveled backward. Ahead, the suspect's form flickered, almost translucent. Quinn quickened her pace, hand resting on her service weapon. The tunnel widened into a cavernous chamber where stalactites hung like spear points overhead. In the center stood a circular altar, carved from black stone, surrounded by figures in hooded robes. The suspect joined them, bowing low. Quinn crouched behind a pile of discarded rails, watching. One of the robed figures raised a hand, and the air shimmered. Images formed in the mist above the altar—scenes of London burning, skies choked with ash, people running in terror. "The Veil thins," a voice boomed, resonating in Quinn's chest. "Soon the barrier falls. The old gods return to reclaim what is theirs." Quinn's finger tightened on the trigger. She counted the figures. Six robed cultists, plus the suspect. Seven against one. Bad odds. But she'd faced worse. She remembered the knife scar on Tomás Herrera's forearm, the story he'd told her once about losing his license for treating things that shouldn't exist. He'd warned her about this place, about the Market moving every full moon. Tonight was the full moon. If she acted now, she could disrupt the ritual. If she waited, she might gather more evidence, build a stronger case. But Morris hadn't waited. Morris had charged in, and now he was dead. Quinn checked her watch again. Time meant nothing down here, yet the hands seemed to spin faster. The images in the mist shifted, showing a specific street corner, a familiar block in Soho. The Raven's Nest. They weren't just planning some vague apocalypse; they targeted specific locations, specific people. The robed figure spoke again, words curling like smoke. "The detective watches. Let her see. Let her know fear before the end." Heads turned toward her hiding spot. Six pairs of eyes glowed in the dark, locking onto her position. The suspect pointed, face twisting into a sneer. Quinn stood, abandoning concealment. No point in hiding now. She drew her weapon, the metal cold and reassuring in her grip. "London Metropolitan Police," she announced, voice steady despite the adrenaline flooding her system. "You're all under arrest for conspiracy, unlawful assembly, and whatever the hell else I can tack on once I figure out what you're doing." The robed figures didn't scatter. They smiled, mouths stretching too wide, revealing rows of needle-sharp teeth. "Arrest?" the leader chuckled, stepping forward. robes billowing though no wind blew. "You carry tin and paper against eternity, Detective Quinn. Your badges burn here. Your laws crumble." Quinn kept her aim steady. "Try me." The leader raised both hands. The air crackled, static raising the hair on Quinn's arms. The floating lanterns dimmed, plunging the chamber into near-total darkness. Only the glow from the cultists' eyes remained, circling her like wolves closing in on prey. "Morris knew," the leader whispered, voice suddenly intimate, right beside her ear. "He asked questions too. Just like you." Quinn whipped around, firing a shot into the darkness. The bullet sparked off stone. No body fell. "Where is he?" she demanded, voice cracking slightly. "What did you do to him?" Laughter echoed from all directions, overlapping, disorienting. "He serves the old gods now. Part of the foundation. Part of the barrier." Quinn's heart hammered against her ribs. She refused to believe it. Morris was dead, yes, but not like this. Not part of some twisted ritual. She gritted her teeth, forcing calm back into her limbs. "Show me," she ordered. "Or I start shooting until there's nothing left of you to hide behind." The leader materialized from the shadows, ten feet away. "Violence solves nothing here, Detective. But curiosity... curiosity opens doors." He gestured to the altar. The mist cleared, revealing a new image. A man, bound in chains, hanging suspended over a pit of writhing darkness. His face was gaunt, eyes hollow, but unmistakably Morris. He mouthed a single word: *Run*. Quinn's finger trembled on the trigger. Every protocol screamed at her to retreat, to survive, to fight another day. But seeing him there, alive in some tortured half-state, shattered her resolve. "I'm coming, Morris," she whispered. She charged the altar, bullets flying. The cultists scattered, shrieking as lead tore through their robes. Smoke billowed, choking the air. Quinn vaulted over the black stone, landing hard on the other side. The pit yawned before her, heat radiating from its depths. The leader reappeared, blocking her path. "Foolish woman. You join him now." Quinn didn't slow. She tackled the figure, driving them both toward the edge. They grappled, rolling in the dust. The leader's skin burned her hands, hot as molten iron. She gritted her teeth, refusing to let go. "Not today," she growled. With a surge of strength born of desperation, she shoved the leader backward. The figure teetered, arms flailing, then plunged into the darkness below. A scream echoed upward, fading quickly. Quinn scrambled to her feet, breathing hard. The remaining cultists hesitated, uncertainty rippling through their ranks. She seized the moment, firing warning shots into the ceiling. Stalactites shattered, raining debris onto the platform. "Next one goes in your heads," she warned. They fled, melting into the shadows like wax in fire. Quinn stood alone in the sudden silence, chest heaving. She approached the edge of the pit, peering down. The chains still hung there, swaying gently. Morris was gone, vanished along with the leader. She clenched her fists, nails digging into her palms. This wasn't over. Not by a long shot. She turned back toward the tunnel entrance, toward the surface, toward the rain and the city that thought itself safe. Time to gather reinforcements. Time to burn this place to the ground if necessary. But first, she needed answers. And she knew exactly where to start looking.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.44% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1607
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
3
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"suddenly"
2"quickly"
3"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
25.33% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1607
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"fractured"
count1
1
word"velvet"
count1
2
word"pristine"
count1
3
word"mosaic"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"intricate"
count1
6
word"charm"
count1
7
word"footsteps"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count3
9
word"flickered"
count1
10
word"quickened"
count1
11
word"shimmered"
count1
12
word"disrupt"
count1
13
word"charged"
count2
14
word"familiar"
count1
15
word"trembled"
count1
16
word"shattered"
count2
17
word"resolve"
count1
18
word"depths"
count1
19
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"fractured"
1"velvet"
2"pristine"
3"mosaic"
4"scanned"
5"intricate"
6"charm"
7"footsteps"
8"echoed"
9"flickered"
10"quickened"
11"shimmered"
12"disrupt"
13"charged"
14"familiar"
15"trembled"
16"shattered"
17"resolve"
18"depths"
19"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her fists"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences158
matches
0"g in terror"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences158
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences172
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1597
ratio0.001
matches
0"Run"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
60.71% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount1400
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.79
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
London2
Quinn25
Raven2
Nest2
Tube1
Morris7
Camden1
Town1
Tomás1
Herrera1
Market1
Soho1
Laughter1
Time3
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Raven"
2"Morris"
3"Tomás"
4"Herrera"
5"Market"
6"Laughter"
7"Time"
places
0"London"
1"Camden"
2"Town"
3"Soho"
globalScore0.607
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences112
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like people—milled about, haggling"
1"looked like bottled storms, the figure pa"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1597
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences172
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean31.94
std18.36
cv0.575
sampleLengths
074
154
250
346
45
570
653
753
842
916
1021
119
1220
1355
1449
155
1665
1746
1823
1968
2034
2149
2222
2326
2421
2537
2616
2728
287
2941
3019
3117
3214
3321
3435
3517
3619
3740
3831
395
4043
4112
4237
434
4430
4533
468
4743
4837
4927
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences158
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs296
matches(empty)
76.41% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences172
ratio0.023
matches
0"The air grew heavier here, thick with the scent of damp earth and something else—something metallic and old, like dried blood mixed with crushed herbs."
1"People—or things that looked like people—milled about, haggling over jars of glowing liquid and bundles of dried bones."
2"Images formed in the mist above the altar—scenes of London burning, skies choked with ash, people running in terror."
3"They weren't just planning some vague apocalypse; they targeted specific locations, specific people."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount352
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.036931818181818184
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.014204545454545454
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences172
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences172
mean9.28
std4.87
cv0.525
sampleLengths
020
112
214
312
416
512
66
72
811
923
108
113
1214
1325
1410
158
167
1717
184
195
205
2120
229
2318
2418
2515
262
2715
288
2913
3014
313
325
3314
3413
354
3612
374
387
3919
407
419
4212
439
445
454
468
4712
484
495
55.81% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.36627906976744184
totalSentences172
uniqueOpeners63
22.08% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences151
matches
0"Only the glow from the"
ratio0.007
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences151
matches
0"Her breath came in sharp,"
1"She pushed harder, muscles burning,"
2"She grabbed the cold metal"
3"She pushed the door open."
4"She scanned the throng, searching"
5"She couldn't stop now."
6"She moved through the crowd,"
7"It hissed, reforming instantly."
8"She reached the tunnel mouth."
9"She hesitated at the threshold."
10"Her radio crackled with static,"
11"She thought of Morris, of"
12"She stepped into the tunnel."
13"Her footsteps echoed strangely, as"
14"She counted the figures."
15"She remembered the knife scar"
16"He'd warned her about this"
17"They weren't just planning some"
18"She drew her weapon, the"
19"she announced, voice steady despite"
ratio0.238
59.34% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount121
totalSentences151
matches
0"Harlow Quinn sprinted, her boots"
1"Her breath came in sharp,"
2"The suspect moved with an"
3"Quinn checked her watch, the"
4"She pushed harder, muscles burning,"
5"The chase led away from"
6"The suspect vanished down a"
7"Quinn didn't hesitate."
8"She grabbed the cold metal"
9"The air grew heavier here,"
10"Quinn paused, hand hovering near"
11"The green glow matched the"
12"This felt deeper, older."
13"She pushed the door open."
14"The space beyond defied logic."
15"An abandoned Tube station stretched"
16"Lanterns floated inches above the"
17"People—or things that looked like"
18"A woman with skin like"
19"Quinn stepped onto the platform,"
ratio0.801
99.34% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences151
matches
0"If she crossed this line,"
1"If she acted now, she"
2"If she waited, she might"
ratio0.02
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"People—or things that looked like people—milled about, haggling over jars of glowing liquid and bundles of dried bones."
1"Whispers rippled through the crowd, words in languages that twisted her tongue just hearing them."
2"She remembered the knife scar on Tomás Herrera's forearm, the story he'd told her once about losing his license for treating things that shouldn't exist."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"the vendor rasped, voice sounding like grinding stones"
1"she announced, voice steady despite the adrenaline flooding her system"
2"the leader whispered, voice suddenly intimate, right beside her ear"
3"she demanded, voice cracking slightly"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"she announced (announce)"
1"the leader chuckled (chuckle)"
2"the leader whispered (whisper)"
3"she demanded (demand)"
4"she ordered (order)"
5"she whispered (whisper)"
6"she growled (growl)"
7"she warned (warn)"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.667
82.7820%