| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 84.58% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1297 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gently" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "completely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 34.46% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1297 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "footsteps" | | 3 | "gloom" | | 4 | "echo" | | 5 | "scanning" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "rhythmic" | | 10 | "perfect" | | 11 | "shimmered" | | 12 | "searing" | | 13 | "pulse" | | 14 | "vibrated" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 158 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 158 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 162 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 10 | | markdownWords | 39 | | totalWords | 1288 | | ratio | 0.03 | | matches | | 0 | "‘The Grove. Be there by midnight. Don’t be late.’" | | 1 | "You’re being jumpy. Eva’s late. She’s always late." | | 2 | "click" | | 3 | "‘It will guide you. Warn you.’" | | 4 | "Scrape… pause… scrape." | | 5 | "Out-of-box thinking, Rory. Apply it." | | 6 | "Blood. Recent." | | 7 | "Time moves differently." | | 8 | "unfolded" | | 9 | "were" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 12 | | wordCount | 1258 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.24 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Rory | 3 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Eva | 3 | | Heartstone | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Empress" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Heartstone" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Golden" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 91 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "It was as if the grove drank the sound" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.776 | | wordCount | 1288 | | matches | | 0 | "Not a full shape, but suggestions of one: the curve of a shoulder" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 162 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 46 | | mean | 28 | | std | 24.34 | | cv | 0.869 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 2 | | 2 | 84 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 65 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 51 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 74 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 57 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 69 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 40 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 46 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 31 | | 21 | 40 | | 22 | 32 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 32 | | 25 | 26 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 33 | | 28 | 55 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 61 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 23 | | 34 | 89 | | 35 | 48 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 62 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 36 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 13 |
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| 98.60% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 158 | | matches | | 0 | "being dragged" | | 1 | "been, stood" | | 2 | "was made" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 205 | | matches | | 0 | "was coming" | | 1 | "was forming" | | 2 | "was listening" |
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| 19.40% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 162 | | ratio | 0.043 | | matches | | 0 | "The silence wasn’t empty; it was thick, a blanket smothering every sound her footsteps should have made on the soft earth." | | 1 | "The air within the circle tasted different, cooler, with a faint sweetness underneath—like crushed wildflowers in winter." | | 2 | "Something flickered in her peripheral vision—a shift of shadow between two slender birches." | | 3 | "It wasn’t just warm now; it was hot." | | 4 | "A faint smell cut through the floral sweetness—ozone, like after a lightning strike, and underneath it, something coppery and old." | | 5 | "A sound escaped her—a sharp, involuntary gasp." | | 6 | "The thing with the slit-mouth took another unfolding step towards her, and the whispering started—a hundred dry, papery voices sliding from the surrounding stones, speaking in a language that was all sharp edges and broken glass." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 94 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 2 | | adverbRatio | 0.02127659574468085 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 162 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 162 | | mean | 7.95 | | std | 5.96 | | cv | 0.749 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 2 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 46.50% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 18 | | diversityRatio | 0.345679012345679 | | totalSentences | 162 | | uniqueOpeners | 56 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 138 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the strange, still trees." | | 1 | "Then, as her eyes strained," | | 2 | "Then it started again, closer." | | 3 | "Just grass and those impossible" | | 4 | "Slowly, every muscle protesting, she" |
| | ratio | 0.036 | |
| 89.57% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 45 | | totalSentences | 138 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, the takeaway bag" | | 1 | "It was her cover, her" | | 2 | "She saw them now, pale" | | 3 | "She checked her phone." | | 4 | "She stepped across the threshold." | | 5 | "She set the takeaway bag" | | 6 | "Her voice fell into the" | | 7 | "It was as if the" | | 8 | "She wrapped her arms around" | | 9 | "She rubbed at it absently," | | 10 | "She snapped her head towards" | | 11 | "*You’re being jumpy." | | 12 | "She’s always late.*" | | 13 | "It was the takeaway bag." | | 14 | "She let out a shaky" | | 15 | "It hadn’t been cold enough" | | 16 | "She fished it out from" | | 17 | "It pulsed gently against her" | | 18 | "Her breath caught." | | 19 | "It just stood, a column" |
| | ratio | 0.326 | |
| 90.43% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 102 | | totalSentences | 138 | | matches | | 0 | "The damp London chill clung" | | 1 | "The silence wasn’t empty; it" | | 2 | "She paused, the takeaway bag" | | 3 | "It was her cover, her" | | 4 | "A delivery to a vague" | | 5 | "The ancient standing stones formed" | | 6 | "Moss clung to their sides" | | 7 | "The air within the circle" | | 8 | "Year-round blooms, the codex had" | | 9 | "She saw them now, pale" | | 10 | "She checked her phone." | | 11 | "The time read 11:58 p.m." | | 12 | "She stepped across the threshold." | | 13 | "The change was instant." | | 14 | "The world outside the stone" | | 15 | "The grass underfoot was springy," | | 16 | "She set the takeaway bag" | | 17 | "Her voice fell into the" | | 18 | "It was as if the" | | 19 | "She wrapped her arms around" |
| | ratio | 0.739 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 138 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 79.37% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The world outside the stone circle seemed to warp, the trees beyond stretching and blurring as if seen through old glass." | | 1 | "It pulsed gently against her palm, a slow, steady rhythm that felt too much like a heartbeat." | | 2 | "Not a full shape, but suggestions of one: the curve of a shoulder that was too angular, the hint of a head tilted at an impossible angle." | | 3 | "The thing with the slit-mouth took another unfolding step towards her, and the whispering started—a hundred dry, papery voices sliding from the surrounding ston…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.667 | |