Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYYPM268X11H3J5YR382EX

Run Details

Duration:
38.8s
Cost:
$0.001970
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came at three in the morning. Three sharp raps, deliberate, not frantic. Rory sat up in bed, the duvet pooling around her waist. The glow of streetlights filtered through the thin curtains, painting stripes across the floor. She hadn’t been asleep. Another knock. She swung her legs over the side of the bed, bare feet hitting the cold floorboards. The flat was silent except for the hum of the fridge in the kitchen. Ptolemy lifted his head from his spot on the armchair, ears twitching. Rory padded to the door, pressing her palm against the wood. “Who is it?” A pause. Then, “It’s me.” That voice. Low, smooth, unmistakable. Her stomach twisted. She undid the deadbolts one by one, the clicks loud in the quiet. The door swung open, and there he was—Lucien Moreau, leaning on his ivory-handled cane, his platinum hair catching the dim light from the hallway. He looked like he’d stepped straight out of a noir film, charcoal suit immaculate despite the hour, one amber eye and one black fixed on her. “You’re not supposed to be here,” she said. He exhaled, a wry tilt to his mouth. “I know.” The air between them crackled, thick with everything unspoken. The last time she’d seen him, it had been in the back room of Silas’ bar, his hands on her waist, her breath hitching before she’d pulled away. Before she’d walked out. Rory crossed her arms. “It’s the middle of the night.” “I had to see you.” “Why?” He didn’t answer immediately. His grip tightened on the cane, knuckles whitening. “Because I’ve been a fool.” She snorted. “That’s not exactly news.” “No,” he agreed. “But it’s taken me this long to admit it.” A gust of wind rattled the window behind her. Rory shivered, suddenly aware of how thin her sleep shirt was, how exposed she felt standing there in the doorway. Lucien’s gaze flickered down, then back up, something unreadable in his expression. “Are you going to let me in?” he asked. She should say no. Slam the door in his face. But the way he was looking at her—like she was the only thing left in the world—made her step aside. Lucien moved past her, the scent of sandalwood and something darker lingering in his wake. Rory shut the door behind him, locking it out of habit. When she turned, he was standing in the middle of the living room, taking in the mess of books and papers strewn across every surface. Ptolemy had abandoned the armchair and was now weaving between Lucien’s legs, purring. “Traitor,” Rory muttered. Lucien crouched, scratching behind the cat’s ears. “He remembers me.” “He remembers you fed him salmon last time.” He chuckled, straightening. “Still holding onto grudges, I see.” “Some of us have longer memories than cats.” The humor faded from his face. “I know.” Silence settled between them, heavy. Rory rubbed her arms, suddenly cold. Lucien took a step forward, then stopped, as if remembering he wasn’t allowed to touch her. “Why are you really here, Luc?” He hesitated. “I needed to know if you were all right.” “I’m fine.” “You left without a word.” “You didn’t stop me.” His jaw tightened. “You made it clear you wanted to go.” She had. That night, she’d been so sure—so terrified—of what she’d felt when his lips had brushed her neck, when his hands had slid under her shirt. It had been too much. Too real. Rory looked away. “It was for the best.” “Was it?” She didn’t answer. Lucien exhaled, running a hand through his hair. “I thought I could let you walk away. I told myself it was what you wanted. But every damn day since, I’ve regretted it.” Her pulse kicked. “You don’t get to do this.” “Do what?” “Show up in the middle of the night and say things like that.” He stepped closer, his cane tapping against the floor. “Then when should I say them? When it’s convenient? When it’s polite?” “Maybe never.” “Too late.” She could feel the heat of him now, the way he loomed just inches away. His eyes burned into hers, one amber, one black, both filled with something raw. Rory swallowed. “You’re not playing fair.” “I’m not playing at all.” And then his hand was on her cheek, rough and warm, tilting her face up. She could have pulled away. Should have. But she didn’t. His breath ghosted over her lips. “Tell me to leave.” She didn’t. Lucien kissed her, slow and deep, like he had all the time in the world. Like he’d been waiting for this moment longer than either of them cared to admit. Rory’s hands fisted in his jacket, holding on as if he might vanish if she let go. When they broke apart, he rested his forehead against hers. “Say something.” Her voice came out rough. “You’re an idiot.” He laughed, low and warm. “I know.” And then he kissed her again.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.128
leniency0.256
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.99% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount833
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count2
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
51.98% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount833
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"unspoken"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"unreadable"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"could feel"
count1
7
word"loomed"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"unspoken"
2"flickered"
3"unreadable"
4"silence"
5"pulse"
6"could feel"
7"loomed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences73
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences107
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords828
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount613
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity1.63
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien8
Moreau1
Rory10
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
places(empty)
globalScore0.684
windowScore0.667
25.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences40
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like he’d stepped straight out of"
1"as if remembering he wasn’t allowed to touch her"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount828
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean15.05
std15.45
cv1.026
sampleLengths
043
12
242
314
45
58
663
78
810
941
1010
115
121
1317
146
1512
1641
179
1830
1964
203
2110
228
239
248
258
2627
276
2811
292
305
314
3211
3334
348
352
363
3732
389
392
4013
4121
422
432
4429
456
465
4725
4810
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
87.96% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs119
matches
0"was looking"
1"was standing"
62.75% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences107
ratio0.028
matches
0"The door swung open, and there he was—Lucien Moreau, leaning on his ivory-handled cane, his platinum hair catching the dim light from the hallway."
1"But the way he was looking at her—like she was the only thing left in the world—made her step aside."
2"That night, she’d been so sure—so terrified—of what she’d felt when his lips had brushed her neck, when his hands had slid under her shirt."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount328
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount5
adverbRatio0.01524390243902439
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.006097560975609756
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences107
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences107
mean7.74
std6.25
cv0.807
sampleLengths
08
16
211
314
44
52
616
714
812
911
103
112
123
132
143
153
1613
1724
1826
198
208
212
229
2328
244
254
266
275
281
294
308
315
322
334
343
359
369
3720
3812
399
404
416
4220
4315
4411
4525
4613
473
487
493
57.63% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.37383177570093457
totalSentences107
uniqueOpeners40
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
75.17% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences58
matches
0"She hadn’t been asleep."
1"She swung her legs over"
2"Her stomach twisted."
3"She undid the deadbolts one"
4"He looked like he’d stepped"
5"He exhaled, a wry tilt"
6"He didn’t answer immediately."
7"His grip tightened on the"
8"She should say no."
9"He chuckled, straightening."
10"His jaw tightened."
11"It had been too much."
12"She didn’t answer."
13"Her pulse kicked."
14"He stepped closer, his cane"
15"She could feel the heat"
16"His eyes burned into hers,"
17"She could have pulled away."
18"His breath ghosted over her"
19"Her voice came out rough."
ratio0.362
63.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount46
totalSentences58
matches
0"The knock came at three"
1"Rory sat up in bed,"
2"The glow of streetlights filtered"
3"She hadn’t been asleep."
4"She swung her legs over"
5"The flat was silent except"
6"Ptolemy lifted his head from"
7"Rory padded to the door,"
8"Her stomach twisted."
9"She undid the deadbolts one"
10"The door swung open, and"
11"He looked like he’d stepped"
12"He exhaled, a wry tilt"
13"The air between them crackled,"
14"The last time she’d seen"
15"Rory crossed her arms."
16"He didn’t answer immediately."
17"His grip tightened on the"
18"A gust of wind rattled"
19"Rory shivered, suddenly aware of"
ratio0.793
86.21% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences58
matches
0"Before she’d walked out."
ratio0.017
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Ptolemy had abandoned the armchair and was now weaving between Lucien’s legs, purring."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
98.72% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he agreed (agree)"
1"Rory muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.103
leniency0.205
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.103
85.2508%