Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYYVF89QWAHPXB55ZHJN2S

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Duration:
1m 48s
Cost:
$0.010695
Provider:
Nebius

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient oak standing stones loomed before them, weathered by centuries and humming with a power that made the air vibrate. Aurora Carter traced the carved symbols with her fingers, feeling a tingle travel up her arm as the Heartstone Pendant beneath her shirt began to pulse with warmth. "Are you certain this is the place?" Nyx whispered, their form wavering at the edge of the grove. The living shadow seemed to struggle against an invisible barrier, their violet eyes glowing brighter with frustration. Isolde Varga stepped forward, her silver hair catching the sunlight despite the dense canopy above. "The boundary recognizes its own." She placed her palm against the center stone, and the air rippled like water. "Come. The Grove awaits." Aurora followed Isolde through the distortion, feeling a strange sensation wash over her skin—like being submerged in water without getting wet. For a moment, the world tilted, colors bleeding into one another before snapping back into focus with impossible clarity. The air inside tasted different—sweeter, somehow, with hints of honey and ancient things. Wildflowers bloomed in impossible clusters, their petals shimmering with iridescent colors that shifted as she moved. A stream meandered through the clearing, its water so clear it appeared to float rather than flow. Nyx solidified beside her, their shadowy form gaining substance in this place between realms. "The Veil is thinner here," they murmured. "I can feel the spaces." Aurora's hand went to the Fae-Forged Blade tucked into her belt. The moonsilver dagger felt colder than usual, almost painfully so against her skin. She drew it slightly, watching as the blade began to glow with a soft luminescence. "It recognizes this place," Isolde said, noticing Aurora's reaction. "The Fae Courts have touched this soil for millennia. The blade remembers." As they ventured deeper, Aurora noticed the light had changed. The sun filtered through the leaves in patterns that didn't match those outside the grove. Shadows stretched and contracted with their own rhythm, independent of the light source above. "Time moves differently here," Isolde explained, as if reading Aurora's thoughts. "An hour in the Grove could be minutes or days in your world." Aurora checked her watch. The second hand had stopped moving entirely. She tapped it, but the mechanism remained frozen. "The mortal trinkings have no power here," Nyx observed, their voice sounding clearer in this space, less like a whisper and more like defined speech. The path led them to a small clearing where mushrooms formed perfect circles, their caps glowing with soft blue light. Aurora knelt to examine them, noticing tiny runes carved into the stems that seemed to shift when she looked directly at them. "Fairy rings," Isolde said. "Do not step inside unless you wish to dance until your feet bleed and your mind forgets its name." Aurora stood quickly, taking an involuntary step back. "Are they dangerous?" "Only to those who don't respect the old laws," Isolde replied, her pale lavender eyes gleaming with amusement. The sound of music reached them then—a haunting melody that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once. It resonated in Aurora's bones, making the Heartstone Pendant beat against her chest like a second heart. "What is that?" Aurora asked, her hand instinctively going to the pendant. "The Grove remembers," Isolde whispered. "It remembers the Great Courts, the wars, the pacts made and broken." As they continued, the trees began to change. Their bark swirled with colors that shouldn't exist in nature—deep purples, shimmering golds, blues that seemed to capture the very essence of twilight. Aurora reached out to touch one trunk, and her fingers sank into the wood as if it were liquid. She gasped, pulling back. The bark reformed instantly, leaving no evidence of her intrusion. "The Fae-touched wood lives and breathes," Nyx explained, their form growing more distinct in the increasingly magical environment. "It exists in more than one place at once." Ahead, the forest opened into a larger meadow where crystal formations jutted from the ground like teeth. They caught the light in fractured rainbows that danced across the grass. Aurora approached cautiously, noting how the crystals seemed to pulse with an inner light. "Singstones," Isolde said. "They record memories. Touch one, and you might see fragments of the past." Aurora hesitated only a moment before placing her palm against the largest crystal. Images flooded her mind—ancient rituals, beings of impossible beauty and terrible power, pacts sealed with blood and starlight. She saw the Veil tear and mend, saw realms bleed into one another. When she pulled away, her hand trembled. "The Grove remembers much," Isolde said softly, "but it does not always share willingly." Nyx had wandered to the edge of the meadow, their shadowy form now almost completely solid. "There is a path here," they called. "It wasn't visible before." Aurora and Isolde joined them to find a narrow trail winding between the crystals, marked by stones that glowed with a soft green light. As they followed it, the air grew thick with the scent of night-blooming jasmine, despite the absence of night. "Magic has its own seasons here," Isolde explained. "Time bends, and so do the rules of nature." The path led them to a small pool of water so still it seemed like glass. At its center floated a single lotus flower, its petals shifting through all the colors of the rainbow. Aurora knelt at the edge, captivated. "The Pool of Reflections," Isolde said. "It shows not your face, but your true nature." Aurora leaned forward, expecting to see her own reflection. Instead, the water showed a woman she barely recognized—taller, with ancient eyes and a crown of starlight. The image shifted, showing her wielding the Fae-Forged Blade against a shadowy figure, then standing at the threshold between worlds. "What does this mean?" she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. "The Grove sees potential," Isolde replied. "What you were, what you are, what you might become." Nyx moved closer to the pool, their reflection showing not a shadow, but the faint outline of a human man with features that seemed familiar yet distant. "Aldric," they breathed, the name tasting foreign after centuries of disuse. A sound like wind chimes echoed through the grove, and the water's surface rippled, the images disappearing. When it stilled, only their normal reflections remained. "The Grove is done showing," Isolde said, turning away from the pool. "We should respect its privacy." As they retraced their steps, Aurora noticed changes in the landscape. New flowers had bloomed along their path, and trees had shifted their positions. The fairy rings now pulsed with a more intense blue light. "It doesn't stay the same," she realized. "Nothing in the Fae Realms remains fixed for long," Isolde replied. "To be static is to die, and the Fae are nothing if not survivors." When they reached the boundary stones, the air shimmered differently than before. Aurora's watch began ticking again, the hands spinning rapidly before settling on the correct time. "How long were we in there?" she asked. "Time enough," Isolde answered cryptically. Nyx had already passed through the boundary, their form becoming insubstantial once more. They waited on the other side, their violet eyes dimmed in the mundane light of the normal world. Aurora took one last look at the Grove, memorizing its impossible beauty. The Heartstone Pendant had stopped pulsing, but it still felt warm against her skin—a reminder of the thinness of the Veil and the worlds that lay just beyond human perception. "The Fae Courts know you now," Isolde said, as if reading her thoughts. "They see you as a player in their ancient games. Be careful, Aurora Carter. The Fae do not make gifts without expecting something in return." With those words hanging in the air, Aurora stepped back through the standing stones, leaving the wonders of the Grove behind but carrying its magic within her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Isolde said softly [softly]"
1"Isolde answered cryptically [cryptically]"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.61
leniency1
rawRatio0.08
effectiveRatio0.08
73.60% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1326
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"cautiously"
count1
4
adverb"softly"
count1
5
adverb"completely"
count1
6
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"quickly"
2"very"
3"cautiously"
4"softly"
5"completely"
6"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
17.04% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1326
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"traced"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count2
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"wavering"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count2
6
word"perfect"
count1
7
word"dance"
count1
8
word"gleaming"
count1
9
word"resonated"
count1
10
word"crystal"
count2
11
word"fractured"
count1
12
word"trembled"
count1
13
word"potential"
count1
14
word"familiar"
count1
15
word"echoed"
count1
16
word"pulsed"
count1
17
word"shimmered"
count1
18
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"traced"
2"pulse"
3"warmth"
4"wavering"
5"whisper"
6"perfect"
7"dance"
8"gleaming"
9"resonated"
10"crystal"
11"fractured"
12"trembled"
13"potential"
14"familiar"
15"echoed"
16"pulsed"
17"shimmered"
18"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences83
matches
0"e with warmth"
1"r with frustration"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount9
narrationSentences83
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
2"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1316
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions62
wordCount1026
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.05
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Heartstone3
Pendant3
Varga1
Aurora21
Isolde17
Fae-Forged2
Blade2
Ahead1
Veil2
Nyx7
Grove2
persons
0"Carter"
1"Varga"
2"Aurora"
3"Isolde"
4"Blade"
5"Nyx"
places
0"Fae-Forged"
1"Grove"
globalScore0.477
windowScore0.333
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"as if reading Aurora's thoughts"
1"stems that seemed to shift when she looked directly at them"
2"melody that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once"
3"blues that seemed to capture the very essence of twilight"
4"seemed familiar yet distant"
5"as if reading her thoughts"
48.02% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.52
wordCount1316
matches
0"not your face, but your true nature"
1"not a shadow, but the faint outline of a human man with features"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
87.19% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean28
std12.74
cv0.455
sampleLengths
049
135
238
340
446
526
639
721
839
924
1019
1125
1242
1323
1411
1518
1636
1712
1817
1950
2014
2127
2243
2316
2451
2514
2627
2743
2817
2940
3015
3146
3212
3316
3438
3525
3617
3735
387
3925
4027
418
425
4331
4442
4538
4627
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences83
matches
0"being submerged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs193
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences99
ratio0.071
matches
0"Aurora followed Isolde through the distortion, feeling a strange sensation wash over her skin—like being submerged in water without getting wet."
1"The air inside tasted different—sweeter, somehow, with hints of honey and ancient things."
2"The sound of music reached them then—a haunting melody that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once."
3"Their bark swirled with colors that shouldn't exist in nature—deep purples, shimmering golds, blues that seemed to capture the very essence of twilight."
4"Images flooded her mind—ancient rituals, beings of impossible beauty and terrible power, pacts sealed with blood and starlight."
5"Instead, the water showed a woman she barely recognized—taller, with ancient eyes and a crown of starlight."
6"The Heartstone Pendant had stopped pulsing, but it still felt warm against her skin—a reminder of the thinness of the Veil and the worlds that lay just beyond human perception."
92.73% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1035
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount50
adverbRatio0.04830917874396135
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.017391304347826087
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean13.29
std6.11
cv0.46
sampleLengths
021
128
218
317
415
519
64
721
819
913
1016
1117
1214
137
145
1511
1613
1715
189
1912
2010
2115
2214
2311
2413
254
267
278
2825
2920
3022
314
3219
338
343
3518
3619
3717
3812
395
4012
418
4223
4319
444
4510
4618
479
4817
4912
59.26% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.37373737373737376
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners37
46.30% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences72
matches
0"Instead, the water showed a"
ratio0.014
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences72
matches
0"She placed her palm against"
1"She drew it slightly, watching"
2"She tapped it, but the"
3"It resonated in Aurora's bones,"
4"Their bark swirled with colors"
5"She gasped, pulling back."
6"They caught the light in"
7"She saw the Veil tear"
8"she asked, her voice barely"
9"they breathed, the name tasting"
10"They waited on the other"
ratio0.153
50.28% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences72
matches
0"The ancient oak standing stones"
1"Aurora Carter traced the carved"
2"Nyx whispered, their form wavering"
3"The living shadow seemed to"
4"Isolde Varga stepped forward, her"
5"She placed her palm against"
6"Aurora followed Isolde through the"
7"The air inside tasted different—sweeter,"
8"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible clusters,"
9"A stream meandered through the"
10"Nyx solidified beside her, their"
11"Aurora's hand went to the"
12"The moonsilver dagger felt colder"
13"She drew it slightly, watching"
14"Isolde said, noticing Aurora's reaction"
15"The sun filtered through the"
16"Shadows stretched and contracted with"
17"Isolde explained, as if reading"
18"Aurora checked her watch."
19"The second hand had stopped"
ratio0.819
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
ratio0
98.21% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The ancient oak standing stones loomed before them, weathered by centuries and humming with a power that made the air vibrate."
1"Their bark swirled with colors that shouldn't exist in nature—deep purples, shimmering golds, blues that seemed to capture the very essence of twilight."
2"Nyx moved closer to the pool, their reflection showing not a shadow, but the faint outline of a human man with features that seemed familiar yet distant."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount9
matches
0"Nyx whispered, their form wavering at the edge of the grove"
1"She placed, and the air rippled like water"
2"Isolde explained, as if reading Aurora's thoughts"
3"Isolde replied, her pale lavender eyes gleaming with amusement"
4"Aurora asked, her hand instinctively going to the pendant"
5"Nyx explained, their form growing more distinct in the increasingly magical environment"
6"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
7"they breathed, the name tasting foreign after centuries of disuse"
8"Isolde said, as if reading her thoughts"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags23
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
1"they murmured (murmur)"
2"Isolde explained (explain)"
3"Nyx observed (observe)"
4"Isolde whispered (whisper)"
5"Nyx explained (explain)"
6"Isolde explained (explain)"
7"they breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.561
leniency1
rawRatio0.348
effectiveRatio0.348
66.8658%