| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 25 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde said softly [softly]" | | 1 | "Isolde answered cryptically [cryptically]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 41 | | tagDensity | 0.61 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.08 | | effectiveRatio | 0.08 | |
| 73.60% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1326 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "quickly" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "cautiously" | | 4 | "softly" | | 5 | "completely" | | 6 | "barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 17.04% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1326 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "traced" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "wavering" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "perfect" | | 7 | "dance" | | 8 | "gleaming" | | 9 | "resonated" | | 10 | "crystal" | | 11 | "fractured" | | 12 | "trembled" | | 13 | "potential" | | 14 | "familiar" | | 15 | "echoed" | | 16 | "pulsed" | | 17 | "shimmered" | | 18 | "reminder" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "e with warmth" | | 1 | "r with frustration" |
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| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 9 | | narrationSentences | 83 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "began to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "appeared to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 99 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1316 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 62 | | wordCount | 1026 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 2.05 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 3 | | Varga | 1 | | Aurora | 21 | | Isolde | 17 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Ahead | 1 | | Veil | 2 | | Nyx | 7 | | Grove | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Varga" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Blade" | | 5 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.477 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "as if reading Aurora's thoughts" | | 1 | "stems that seemed to shift when she looked directly at them" | | 2 | "melody that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once" | | 3 | "blues that seemed to capture the very essence of twilight" | | 4 | "seemed familiar yet distant" | | 5 | "as if reading her thoughts" |
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| 48.02% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.52 | | wordCount | 1316 | | matches | | 0 | "not your face, but your true nature" | | 1 | "not a shadow, but the faint outline of a human man with features" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.19% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 47 | | mean | 28 | | std | 12.74 | | cv | 0.455 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 49 | | 1 | 35 | | 2 | 38 | | 3 | 40 | | 4 | 46 | | 5 | 26 | | 6 | 39 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 39 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 25 | | 12 | 42 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 36 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 50 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 27 | | 22 | 43 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 51 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 27 | | 27 | 43 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 40 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 46 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 38 | | 35 | 25 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 35 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 25 | | 40 | 27 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 31 | | 44 | 42 | | 45 | 38 | | 46 | 27 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 193 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 99 | | ratio | 0.071 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora followed Isolde through the distortion, feeling a strange sensation wash over her skin—like being submerged in water without getting wet." | | 1 | "The air inside tasted different—sweeter, somehow, with hints of honey and ancient things." | | 2 | "The sound of music reached them then—a haunting melody that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once." | | 3 | "Their bark swirled with colors that shouldn't exist in nature—deep purples, shimmering golds, blues that seemed to capture the very essence of twilight." | | 4 | "Images flooded her mind—ancient rituals, beings of impossible beauty and terrible power, pacts sealed with blood and starlight." | | 5 | "Instead, the water showed a woman she barely recognized—taller, with ancient eyes and a crown of starlight." | | 6 | "The Heartstone Pendant had stopped pulsing, but it still felt warm against her skin—a reminder of the thinness of the Veil and the worlds that lay just beyond human perception." |
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| 92.73% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1035 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 50 | | adverbRatio | 0.04830917874396135 | | lyAdverbCount | 18 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017391304347826087 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 99 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 99 | | mean | 13.29 | | std | 6.11 | | cv | 0.46 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 25 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 23 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 59.26% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.37373737373737376 | | totalSentences | 99 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 46.30% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, the water showed a" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "She placed her palm against" | | 1 | "She drew it slightly, watching" | | 2 | "She tapped it, but the" | | 3 | "It resonated in Aurora's bones," | | 4 | "Their bark swirled with colors" | | 5 | "She gasped, pulling back." | | 6 | "They caught the light in" | | 7 | "She saw the Veil tear" | | 8 | "she asked, her voice barely" | | 9 | "they breathed, the name tasting" | | 10 | "They waited on the other" |
| | ratio | 0.153 | |
| 50.28% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 59 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter traced the carved" | | 2 | "Nyx whispered, their form wavering" | | 3 | "The living shadow seemed to" | | 4 | "Isolde Varga stepped forward, her" | | 5 | "She placed her palm against" | | 6 | "Aurora followed Isolde through the" | | 7 | "The air inside tasted different—sweeter," | | 8 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible clusters," | | 9 | "A stream meandered through the" | | 10 | "Nyx solidified beside her, their" | | 11 | "Aurora's hand went to the" | | 12 | "The moonsilver dagger felt colder" | | 13 | "She drew it slightly, watching" | | 14 | "Isolde said, noticing Aurora's reaction" | | 15 | "The sun filtered through the" | | 16 | "Shadows stretched and contracted with" | | 17 | "Isolde explained, as if reading" | | 18 | "Aurora checked her watch." | | 19 | "The second hand had stopped" |
| | ratio | 0.819 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 98.21% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak standing stones loomed before them, weathered by centuries and humming with a power that made the air vibrate." | | 1 | "Their bark swirled with colors that shouldn't exist in nature—deep purples, shimmering golds, blues that seemed to capture the very essence of twilight." | | 2 | "Nyx moved closer to the pool, their reflection showing not a shadow, but the faint outline of a human man with features that seemed familiar yet distant." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 25 | | uselessAdditionCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx whispered, their form wavering at the edge of the grove" | | 1 | "She placed, and the air rippled like water" | | 2 | "Isolde explained, as if reading Aurora's thoughts" | | 3 | "Isolde replied, her pale lavender eyes gleaming with amusement" | | 4 | "Aurora asked, her hand instinctively going to the pendant" | | 5 | "Nyx explained, their form growing more distinct in the increasingly magical environment" | | 6 | "she asked, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 7 | "they breathed, the name tasting foreign after centuries of disuse" | | 8 | "Isolde said, as if reading her thoughts" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 23 | | fancyCount | 8 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Isolde explained (explain)" | | 3 | "Nyx observed (observe)" | | 4 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" | | 5 | "Nyx explained (explain)" | | 6 | "Isolde explained (explain)" | | 7 | "they breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 41 | | tagDensity | 0.561 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.348 | | effectiveRatio | 0.348 | |