Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYYZZBX3YQ6510NFSHC9QN

Run Details

Duration:
2m 44s
Cost:
$0.002718
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain hammered down in relentless sheets, turning the slick cobblestones of Soho into a treacherous maze. Detective Harlow Quinn sprinted after the shadowy figure darting ahead, her boots splashing through puddles that reflected the flickering neon signs overhead. Her sharp jaw clenched as she pushed harder, her military-precise strides closing the gap. “Stop! Metropolitan Police!” Her voice cut through the storm, but the figure didn’t hesitate, rounding a corner into an alley shrouded in darkness. Quinn yanked her flashlight from her belt, the beam slicing through the rain. The alley narrowed, walls closing in, until it dead-ended at a rusted iron gate. The figure crouched at the base, fumbling with something. Quinn’s flashlight caught the glint of a bone token in their hand. The gate creaked open, revealing a steep staircase descending into blackness. “You’re not getting away!” Quinn barked, lunging forward. The figure vanished down the stairs without a word. She skidded to a halt at the top, her breath ragged, rain dripping from her closely cropped hair. The air from below carried a faint, acrid smell—something metallic and ancient. Her worn leather watch ticked louder in the silence as she hesitated. The beam of her flashlight traced the steps. The concrete was cracked, stained with substances she couldn’t identify. At the bottom, a faint green glow pulsed, casting eerie shadows on the walls. She glanced back at the alley, the streetlights obscured by the downpour. Her instincts screamed caution, but the adrenaline wouldn’t let her stop. She descended the stairs, her hand hovering near her sidearm. The air grew colder with each step, the sound of the rain fading into a muffled echo. The staircase opened into a vast, cavernous space. The walls of the abandoned Tube station were covered in graffiti, some of it glowing faintly in the dark. Stalls lined the platform, their owners cloaked in shadows, hawking wares that made her skin crawl. Jars of odd liquids, carved bones, and strange instruments filled the tables. The murmur of conversations in languages she couldn’t place hummed in the air. Her flashlight flickered, and she slapped it against her palm. The beam steadied, but the green glow ahead drew her attention. The figure she’d been chasing moved confidently through the market, blending into the crowd. She tightened her grip on her flashlight and stepped forward. The vendors’ eyes followed her, some narrowing in suspicion, others glinting with amusement. She spotted a stall piled high with vials of shimmering liquid and approached cautiously. “What’s this?” she demanded, gesturing to the vials. The vendor, a hunched figure with skin like cracked leather, grinned toothlessly. “Enchanted remedies, dearie. For ailments your kind can’t comprehend.” “My *kind*?” Her voice sharpened, but the vendor waved her off, turning to another customer. She moved on, her gaze darting from stall to stall. The figure she’d been chasing was nowhere to be seen. Her pulse quickened as she realized the market was larger than she’d thought, winding deeper into the station. A hand grasped her arm, and she wheeled around, her free hand reaching for her weapon. “Easy, detective. You’re out of your depth here.” The man who spoke was tall, olive-skinned with warm brown eyes and a Saint Christopher medallion glinting at his neck. His curly dark brown hair clung to his forehead in the damp air. He released her arm and held up his hands, revealing a scar running along his left forearm. “Who are you?” Quinn demanded, her voice low. “Tomás Herrera. Former paramedic. Unofficial guide to the Veil Market.” His gaze flicked to her badge. “You shouldn’t be here.” “Neither should whoever I was chasing.” Tomás’s expression darkened. “You followed someone in here?” “Yes. Now tell me what this place is.” His lips pressed into a thin line. “It’s a market for the supernatural. Things that shouldn’t exist, but do. People come here for remedies, relics, information. The kind of things your department wouldn’t understand.” Her eyes narrowed. “You’re saying this is a black market.” “More than that. And dangerous for someone like you.” “Then why’re you talking to me?” He hesitated, glancing over her shoulder. “Because you’re not the first detective to come down here chasing shadows. And the others didn’t make it out.” Her spine stiffened. “What happened to them?” “They asked the wrong questions. Poked the wrong noses.” He leaned in closer, his voice dropping. “If you value your life, leave now.” Quinn squared her shoulders, her sharp jaw set. “I don’t back down from a case.” Tomás sighed, running a hand through his hair. “Stubborn. Just like him.” “Who?” “Never mind. Just—” He glanced around, his expression tense. “If you’re going to stay, stay close. And don’t touch anything.” She studied him for a moment, weighing his words. “Why’re you helping me?” He met her gaze, his brown eyes steady. “Because someone has to.” She nodded curtly. “Lead the way.” Tomás turned, moving deeper into the market. Quinn fell into step beside him, her flashlight casting long shadows as they passed stalls selling things that made her stomach twist. The air grew thicker, the voices around them more urgent. “What’re we looking for?” she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. “Your suspect. And answers.” He glanced at her. “You’re not ready for what you’ll find.” Her hand brushed against her sidearm, the reassuring weight grounding her. “Try me.” Ahead, the crowd parted, revealing a stall shrouded in mist. The figure she’d been chasing stood at the counter, talking to a vendor cloaked in shadows. Quinn’s pulse quickened. “That’s him.” She started forward, but Tomás grabbed her arm again. “Wait.” She yanked her arm free. “I’ve got him.” “You don’t understand—” Before he could finish, the figure turned, their face obscured by a hood. The vendor whispered something, and the figure nodded, slipping something into their pocket. Quinn stepped forward, her voice cutting through the murmur. “Metropolitan Police! Hands where I can see them!” The market fell silent. Every eye turned to her. The figure froze, then bolted into the crowd. Quinn cursed and gave chase, shoving past stalls and patrons. Tomás’s voice rang out behind her. “Quinn, stop!” She ignored him, her focus narrowing on the figure ahead. The market twisted into a labyrinth, the stalls forming a maze that seemed to shift around her. The figure vanished around a corner, and she followed, only to find herself facing a dead end. Her chest heaved as she scanned the dark walls. “Come out!” A low chuckle echoed behind her. She spun, her flashlight illuminating a cloaked figure stepping from the shadows. Their face was hidden, but their voice sent a chill down her spine. “You shouldn’t have come here, detective.” Her hand went to her sidearm, but before she could draw it, the figure lunged. She sidestepped, but they moved faster than should’ve been possible, their hand slamming her wrist against the wall. The flashlight clattered to the ground, its beam flickering. She twisted, driving her knee into their gut, but they didn’t budge. Their grip tightened, and she gasped as pain shot up her arm. “You’re persistent,” the figure hissed. “But persistence won’t save you.” Her free hand fumbled for her flashlight. Her fingers closed around it, and she swung it with all her strength. The beam flashed as it connected with the figure’s head, and they staggered back with a curse. She seized the moment, drawing her sidearm and aiming it at them. “Hands up!” The figure straightened slowly, their hood falling back to reveal eyes that glowed unnaturally in the dark. “You’re out of your league, detective.” Her finger tightened on the trigger, but a voice behind her stopped her. “Don’t.” She glanced back to see Tomás, his face pale, his hand outstretched. “Don’t shoot. It won’t end well.” The figure grinned, revealing teeth that were too sharp. “Smart advice.” Quinn’s grip on her weapon faltered for a split second, but it was enough. The figure lunged again, knocking her to the ground. Her sidearm skidded out of reach, and she scrambled after it, but a hand clamped around her ankle, dragging her back. Tomás yelled something, but she couldn’t make it out over the roar in her ears. Her fingers clawed at the ground as the figure loomed over her, their eyes burning into hers. “This is your last warning, detective.” She braced herself for the blow, but it never came. Instead, the figure froze, their gaze snapping to something behind her. She twisted her head to see Tomás holding a small, glowing vial in his hand. “Let her go,” he said, his voice steady. The figure hissed, releasing her ankle and backing away. “This isn’t over.” “It is for tonight.” Tomás stepped forward, shielding Quinn as the figure melted into the shadows. She climbed to her feet, brushing herself off. Her wrist throbbed, but she ignored it. “What the hell was that?” Tomás pocketed the vial, his expression grim. “A warning. You’re lucky I found you.” Her eyes narrowed. “Lucky? That thing—it wasn’t human.” “No. And neither are most of the things in this market.” She glanced around, the stalls now eerily quiet, the vendors watching them with hooded eyes. “What is this place?” “The Veil Market. A crossroads between worlds. And you just stepped into the heart of it.” Her mind raced, pieces of the puzzle clicking into place. The bone token, the unnatural eyes, the speed—it all fit a picture she wasn’t ready to accept. “You’re saying… this is real? All of it?” Tomás nodded. “And now you’re in it. Whether you’re ready or not.” She took a deep breath, the weight of his words settling on her shoulders. “Then I need to know more.” He sighed, running a hand through his hair. “You’re not going to let this go, are you?” Her jaw tightened. “No.” He studied her for a moment, then nodded. “Then let’s get out of here before someone else decides to make an example out of you.” She picked up her flashlight and sidearm, holstering them both. “Lead the way.” As they moved through the market, the whispers followed, a cacophony of voices that sent shivers down her spine. The staircase leading back to the surface loomed ahead, its steps slick with rain. Tomás stopped at the base, turning to her. “When you leave here, you’ll have to decide what to do with what you’ve seen. Walk away, or dive deeper.” She met his gaze, her brown eyes steely. “I don’t walk away.” He nodded, his expression unreadable. “Then be ready. The shadows don’t like being exposed.” She started up the stairs, the rain washing over her as she emerged into the stormy night. The neon lights of Soho flickered above, but the city felt different now—darker, more dangerous. Tomás appeared beside her, his medallion glinting in the light. “Where to?” She glanced at him, her sharp jaw set. “To the Nest. We’ve got work to do.” He nodded, falling into step beside her as they disappeared into the rain-soaked streets. The shadows watched them go, the Veil Market settling back into its uneasy rhythm. But somewhere in the depths of the city, something stirred, awakened by the presence of a detective who refused to let the darkness win.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:45:56.082Z" 2/19/2026, 12:45:56 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He glanced around [around]"
dialogueSentences69
tagDensity0.203
leniency0.406
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.029
92.04% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1884
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"cautiously"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"cautiously"
1"barely above a whisper"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
12.42% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1884
totalAiIsms33
found
0
word"treacherous"
count1
1
word"jaw clenched"
count1
2
word"glint"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"echo"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count2
8
word"glinting"
count3
9
word"pulse"
count2
10
word"quickened"
count2
11
word"flicked"
count1
12
word"stomach"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count1
14
word"weight"
count2
15
word"scanned"
count1
16
word"echoed"
count1
17
word"chill"
count1
18
word"down her spine"
count1
19
word"loomed"
count2
20
word"throbbed"
count1
21
word"raced"
count1
22
word"cacophony"
count1
23
word"sent shivers down"
count1
24
word"unreadable"
count1
25
word"depths"
count1
highlights
0"treacherous"
1"jaw clenched"
2"glint"
3"silence"
4"traced"
5"pulsed"
6"echo"
7"flickered"
8"glinting"
9"pulse"
10"quickened"
11"flicked"
12"stomach"
13"whisper"
14"weight"
15"scanned"
16"echoed"
17"chill"
18"down her spine"
19"loomed"
20"throbbed"
21"raced"
22"cacophony"
23"sent shivers down"
24"unreadable"
25"depths"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches5
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
2
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
3
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"jaw clenched"
2"the weight of his words"
3"sent a chill down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences132
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences132
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences187
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1876
ratio0.001
matches
0"kind"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount1446
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.9
worstName"Tomás"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho2
Harlow1
Quinn12
Tube1
Saint1
Christopher1
Tomás13
Veil1
Market1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Saint"
3"Christopher"
4"Tomás"
5"Market"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences114
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"maze that seemed to shift around her"
1"appeared beside her, his medallion glinting in the light"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1876
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences187
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs93
mean20.17
std14.42
cv0.715
sampleLengths
053
123
259
38
451
544
638
768
835
937
108
1121
1215
1338
1416
158
1650
178
1820
196
208
218
2234
2310
249
256
2625
277
2823
2915
3012
311
3220
3313
3412
356
3639
3712
3815
3913
4029
4111
421
438
443
4526
4617
4727
488
4944
99.95% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences132
matches
0"were covered"
1"was hidden"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs286
matches(empty)
97.02% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences187
ratio0.016
matches
0"The air from below carried a faint, acrid smell—something metallic and ancient."
1"The bone token, the unnatural eyes, the speed—it all fit a picture she wasn’t ready to accept."
2"The neon lights of Soho flickered above, but the city felt different now—darker, more dangerous."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount668
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount6
adverbRatio0.008982035928143712
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.004491017964071856
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences187
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences187
mean10.03
std5.24
cv0.522
sampleLengths
017
122
214
323
413
514
69
712
811
98
109
1118
1212
1312
148
1510
1614
1712
1811
1910
2017
218
2219
2316
2412
2513
2610
2711
2814
2910
3013
3114
328
3312
349
3515
3610
3710
3818
3916
408
4120
4213
4317
448
4516
464
476
483
495
46.26% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.2994652406417112
totalSentences187
uniqueOpeners56
25.64% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences130
matches
0"Instead, the figure froze, their"
ratio0.008
23.08% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount64
totalSentences130
matches
0"Her sharp jaw clenched as"
1"Her voice cut through the"
2"She skidded to a halt"
3"Her worn leather watch ticked"
4"She glanced back at the"
5"Her instincts screamed caution, but"
6"She descended the stairs, her"
7"Her flashlight flickered, and she"
8"She tightened her grip on"
9"She spotted a stall piled"
10"she demanded, gesturing to the"
11"Her voice sharpened, but the"
12"She moved on, her gaze"
13"Her pulse quickened as she"
14"His curly dark brown hair"
15"He released her arm and"
16"His gaze flicked to her"
17"His lips pressed into a"
18"Her eyes narrowed."
19"He hesitated, glancing over her"
ratio0.492
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount124
totalSentences130
matches
0"The rain hammered down in"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn sprinted after"
2"Her sharp jaw clenched as"
3"Her voice cut through the"
4"Quinn yanked her flashlight from"
5"The alley narrowed, walls closing"
6"The figure crouched at the"
7"Quinn’s flashlight caught the glint"
8"The gate creaked open, revealing"
9"Quinn barked, lunging forward"
10"The figure vanished down the"
11"She skidded to a halt"
12"The air from below carried"
13"Her worn leather watch ticked"
14"The beam of her flashlight"
15"The concrete was cracked, stained"
16"She glanced back at the"
17"Her instincts screamed caution, but"
18"She descended the stairs, her"
19"The air grew colder with"
ratio0.954
38.46% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences130
matches
0"Before he could finish, the"
ratio0.008
86.47% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences76
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn sprinted after the shadowy figure darting ahead, her boots splashing through puddles that reflected the flickering neon signs overhead."
1"Stalls lined the platform, their owners cloaked in shadows, hawking wares that made her skin crawl."
2"The man who spoke was tall, olive-skinned with warm brown eyes and a Saint Christopher medallion glinting at his neck."
3"Quinn fell into step beside him, her flashlight casting long shadows as they passed stalls selling things that made her stomach twist."
4"She spun, her flashlight illuminating a cloaked figure stepping from the shadows."
5"But somewhere in the depths of the city, something stirred, awakened by the presence of a detective who refused to let the darkness win."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Her voice sharpened, but the vendor waved her off, turning to another customer"
1"Quinn demanded, her voice low"
2"He leaned, his voice dropping"
3"He glanced around, his expression tense"
4"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
5"he said, his voice steady"
92.03% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Quinn barked (bark)"
1"she demanded (demand)"
2"Quinn demanded (demand)"
3"the figure hissed (hiss)"
dialogueSentences69
tagDensity0.087
leniency0.174
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.116
77.6675%