Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYZ4E9D1FX8TKG1R2J70KD

Run Details

Duration:
29.1s
Cost:
$0.004949
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above the entrance buzzed with a dying insect's rhythm, casting a sickly pallor over the wet pavement of Soho. Rain slicked the cobblestones, reflecting the distorted glow of shop windows and passing taxi headlights. Rory pushed through the heavy oak door of The Raven's Nest, shaking water from her black hair before it could drip onto the worn floorboards. The air inside smelled of stale beer, lemon polish, and the distinct, earthy scent of old paper that clung to the maps lining the walls. She navigated the sparse crowd, her eyes scanning the room for the usual Tuesday night lull. Her shifts at the Golden Empress had run late, and the promise of a quiet pint before climbing the stairs to her flat above the bar pulled her forward. She spotted Silas behind the counter, his grey-streaked auburn hair catching the low light as he polished a glass with methodical precision. His limp disappeared behind the bar's waist-high counter, leaving only the quiet authority of his posture. A figure sat at the far end of the bar, hunched over a tumbler of amber liquid. The man turned as Rory approached, and the motion froze her mid-stride. The sharp jawline she remembered had softened into jowls. The confident set of the shoulders had collapsed inward. But the eyes remained the same—dark, intelligent, now clouded with a fatigue that went deeper than lack of sleep. "Evan," she said. The name felt like a stone dropped into a deep well. He flinched, the glass halting halfway to his lips. He turned fully on the stool, the leather creaking under his weight. "Rory. Christ. I didn't think... I wasn't sure you'd still be in London." "I live upstairs." She kept her voice flat, refusing to let the tremor in her hands show. She gripped the edge of the bar, her thumb brushing the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. "What are you doing here?" "Passing through." Evan looked down at his drink, swirling the ice. "Business. Thought I'd grab a drink before catching the train back to Cardiff." "You haven't set foot in Cardiff since we were eighteen." "People change plans." He looked up, attempting a smile that didn't reach his eyes. It stretched the skin too tight, revealing the yellowing of his teeth. "You look good. Different, but good. The hair." "It's been black for seven years." "Right. Seven years." He took a long pull of his whiskey, the Adam's apple bobbing in his throat. "Time flies when you're running away from things, I suppose." Silas moved down the bar, his presence a silent intervention. He placed a fresh napkin in front of Evan without being asked. "Another, Mr. Thorne? Or shall I fetch the bill?" Evan glanced at the older man, recognizing the subtle dismissal wrapped in hospitality. "Another. Please." Silas turned his hazel gaze to Rory. "The usual, love?" "Just water tonight, Si." Silas nodded, pouring a glass from the tap. He slid it toward her, his silver signet ring clicking against the wood. He lingered for a heartbeat, reading the tension in the set of Rory's shoulders, before retreating to the other end of the bar to wipe down surfaces that already gleamed. "You're working for him now?" Evan gestured vaguely toward Silas. "I live above him. I deliver food for Yu-Fei down the street. It pays the rent." "Delivery girl." Evan laughed, a dry, rattling sound. "The great Aurora Carter, pre-law star of Cardiff University, delivering takeout in Soho. Your father would have a fit." "My father stopped speaking to me the day I left Evan." She corrected herself, the slip of the name hanging in the air between them like smoke. "The day I left you." "I never meant for it to get that bad, Rory. You know that. The stress, the pressure at the firm..." "You broke my wrist." She held up her left hand, turning it so the dim light caught the pale arc of the scar. "You said it was an accident. We both knew it wasn't." Evan shifted on the stool, his knee bouncing nervously. "I was drunk. I apologized a thousand times. You just wouldn't listen." "I listened to every apology while you made the promises you never kept. Then I stopped listening." She took a sip of water, the cool liquid doing little to soothe the burn in her chest. "Why are you really here, Evan? You don't do 'passing through'. You plan everything down to the minute." He stared into the bottom of his glass. The bravado drained out of him, leaving a hollowed-out shell. "Jenny died." The name of his mother hit her with the force of a physical blow. Jennifer Ellis, her own mother's oldest friend, the woman who had bandaged Rory's wrist and whispered secrets about Evan's temper that Rory had refused to hear. "When?" Rory asked. "Three months ago. Pancreatic. Fast." Evan's voice cracked. "She asked for you. Right at the end. Kept saying your name. 'Where's Rory? Why won't Rory come home?'" "I wasn't welcome there. You made sure of that." "I tried to tell her you were busy. Building a life." He looked at her, his eyes glassy. "She didn't believe me. She said I drove you away. She said I destroyed the best thing that ever happened to me." Silence stretched between them, filled only by the murmur of other patrons and the clink of glass from Silas's end of the bar. The black-and-white photographs on the wall seemed to watch them, frozen moments of lives lived fully, contrasting sharply with the stagnation in Evan's posture. "I'm sorry, Rory." The words came out rushed, desperate. "I'm so sorry. I lost my job six months ago. The firm let me go. Drinking too much, missing deadlines. Just like..." He trailed off, unable to finish the comparison. "I have nothing left. No job, no mother, no..." "No wife?" "She left last week. Took the kids." He buried his face in his hands. "I don't know how to fix it. I thought if I came to London, if I saw you, maybe... maybe you could tell me how to start over. You always knew what to do. You were the smart one." Rory looked at the man who had once terrified her, the man whose shadow she had fled across the country to escape. She saw the fear now, raw and exposed. It didn't make her forgive him. It didn't erase the nights she spent checking locks or the way she still flinched at raised voices. But it stripped him of the monster she had built in her mind, leaving just a broken, pathetic human being. "There is no starting over, Evan." Her voice remained steady, cool-headed despite the storm churning in her gut. "There is only moving forward. And you have to do it alone." "You can't just say that." He reached out, his fingers grazing the sleeve of her jacket. She pulled back before his touch could land, the movement sharp and decisive. "Don't." "I need help." "I am not your savior. I am not the person you come to when your life falls apart because you refuse to take responsibility for it." She stood up, pushing the stool back with a screech of wood on wood. "Finish your drink. Pay Silas. Get on your train." "Rory, please." She turned her back on him, walking toward the staircase that led to her flat. Each step felt heavier than the last, the weight of years pressing down on her shoulders. She didn't look back. She couldn't. If she saw the pleading in his eyes, the ghost of the boy she once loved beneath the ruin of the man he became, she might falter. At the foot of the stairs, she paused. Silas stood nearby, pretending to sort bottles, but his eyes held hers. He gave a nearly imperceptible nod, a silent affirmation of her choice. "Keep the change, Si," she called out, her voice echoing slightly in the quiet bar. She climbed the stairs, the wood groaning under her feet. Above, the hallway waited, dark and familiar. She reached her door, fumbled with her keys, and stepped inside, closing the world and the man she used to know firmly behind her. The lock clicked into place, a final, solid sound that severed the tie. She leaned her forehead against the cool wood of the door, breathing in the dust and silence of her own space, safe and alone.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Evan gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.05
effectiveRatio0.04
85.98% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1427
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"nervously"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"sharply"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"nervously"
1"really"
2"sharply"
3"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.95% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1427
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"navigated"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"methodical"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"tension"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"churning"
count1
7
word"echoing"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count1
9
word"firmly"
count1
highlights
0"navigated"
1"scanning"
2"methodical"
3"weight"
4"tension"
5"silence"
6"churning"
7"echoing"
8"familiar"
9"firmly"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences71
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"try to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences101
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1417
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount963
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.93
worstName"Evan"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Tuesday1
Golden1
Empress1
Silas7
Rory8
Adam1
Evan9
Ellis1
Silence1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Empress"
3"Silas"
4"Rory"
5"Adam"
6"Evan"
7"Ellis"
8"Silence"
places
0"Soho"
1"Golden"
globalScore1
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a stone dropped into a deep w"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1417
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean31.49
std22.71
cv0.721
sampleLengths
088
183
266
314
434
540
624
710
834
96
1028
1131
1215
1310
144
1551
1610
1716
1827
1932
2020
2134
2221
2353
2420
2540
263
2727
289
2940
3047
3148
322
3353
3474
3530
3616
3714
383
3949
402
4164
4232
4315
4478
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"being asked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs159
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences101
ratio0.01
matches
0"But the eyes remained the same—dark, intelligent, now clouded with a fatigue that went deeper than lack of sleep."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount972
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.023662551440329218
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.01131687242798354
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences101
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences101
mean14.03
std8.22
cv0.586
sampleLengths
023
115
225
325
416
529
622
716
817
912
109
119
1219
133
1411
159
1612
1713
1817
1918
205
2111
2213
2310
2414
2512
268
276
2818
2910
3010
3112
329
3313
342
357
363
374
388
3913
4030
4110
4216
438
4419
4527
465
4720
4823
4911
51.49% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.38613861386138615
totalSentences101
uniqueOpeners39
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
ratio0
14.12% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences68
matches
0"She navigated the sparse crowd,"
1"Her shifts at the Golden"
2"She spotted Silas behind the"
3"His limp disappeared behind the"
4"He flinched, the glass halting"
5"He turned fully on the"
6"She kept her voice flat,"
7"She gripped the edge of"
8"He looked up, attempting a"
9"It stretched the skin too"
10"He took a long pull"
11"He placed a fresh napkin"
12"He slid it toward her,"
13"He lingered for a heartbeat,"
14"She corrected herself, the slip"
15"She held up her left"
16"She took a sip of"
17"He stared into the bottom"
18"He looked at her, his"
19"He trailed off, unable to"
ratio0.515
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences68
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"Rain slicked the cobblestones, reflecting"
2"Rory pushed through the heavy"
3"The air inside smelled of"
4"She navigated the sparse crowd,"
5"Her shifts at the Golden"
6"She spotted Silas behind the"
7"His limp disappeared behind the"
8"A figure sat at the"
9"The man turned as Rory"
10"The sharp jawline she remembered"
11"The confident set of the"
12"The name felt like a"
13"He flinched, the glass halting"
14"He turned fully on the"
15"She kept her voice flat,"
16"She gripped the edge of"
17"Evan looked down at his"
18"He looked up, attempting a"
19"It stretched the skin too"
ratio0.926
73.53% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences68
matches
0"If she saw the pleading"
ratio0.015
67.67% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The air inside smelled of stale beer, lemon polish, and the distinct, earthy scent of old paper that clung to the maps lining the walls."
1"But the eyes remained the same—dark, intelligent, now clouded with a fatigue that went deeper than lack of sleep."
2"Jennifer Ellis, her own mother's oldest friend, the woman who had bandaged Rory's wrist and whispered secrets about Evan's temper that Rory had refused to hear."
3"But it stripped him of the monster she had built in her mind, leaving just a broken, pathetic human being."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"She kept, refusing to let the tremor in her hands show"
1"He took, the Adam's apple bobbing in his throat"
2"He looked, his eyes glassy"
3"The words came out, desperate"
4"He trailed, unable to finish the comparison"
5"He reached out, his fingers grazing the sleeve of her jacket"
6"she called out, her voice echoing slightly in the quiet bar"
90.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Evan laughed (laugh)"
1"She corrected (correct)"
2"she called out (call out)"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.1
leniency0.2
rawRatio0.6
effectiveRatio0.12
80.0469%