| 75.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her voice sounded too [too]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.313 | | leniency | 0.625 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.125 | |
| 87.05% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 772 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 9.33% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 772 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "throbbed" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "stomach" | | 8 | "trembled" | | 9 | "loomed" | | 10 | "wavered" | | 11 | "searing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 99 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 3 | | totalWords | 763 | | ratio | 0.004 | | matches | | 0 | "around" | | 1 | "everywhere" | | 2 | "tastes" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 93.50% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 11 | | wordCount | 708 | | uniqueNames | 4 | | maxNameDensity | 1.13 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Rory | 8 | | Heartstone | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.935 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 55.66% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if recoiling" | | 1 | "quite get it right" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 763 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 49 | | mean | 15.57 | | std | 15.35 | | cv | 0.986 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 85 | | 1 | 56 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 40 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 29 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 49 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 28 | | 33 | 23 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 34 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 24 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 5 |
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| 97.29% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "being pulled" | | 1 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 124 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 99 | | ratio | 0.111 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the Fae Grove clung thick with the scent of damp earth and something sweet—honeysuckle, maybe, though Rory couldn’t see any." | | 1 | "The grove was never silent, not really—there was always the whisper of wind through branches, the occasional rustle of unseen creatures—but tonight, the sounds were off." | | 2 | "The rustling wasn’t just behind her; it was *around* her, circling." | | 3 | "Then—another sound, too deliberate to be an animal." | | 4 | "But the space between the standing stones—hadn’t it been wider a second ago?" | | 5 | "Another sound—a wet, clicking noise, like tongues against teeth." | | 6 | "A voice, if it could be called that—something that mimicked speech but didn’t quite get it right." | | 7 | "Its voice was wrong—too many tones layered over each other, a chorus of whispers and sighs." | | 8 | "She gasped, clutching at it—" | | 9 | "—and the thing recoiled, hissing." | | 10 | "It leaned in, close enough that she could smell it—rot and honey, cloying and thick." |
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| 93.61% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 717 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "heavier, pressing against her" |
| | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.040446304044630406 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005578800557880056 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 99 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 99 | | mean | 7.71 | | std | 5.73 | | cv | 0.744 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 26 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 50.51% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.36363636363636365 | | totalSentences | 99 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 92.59% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Then—another sound, too deliberate to" | | 1 | "Then it reached for her." |
| | ratio | 0.028 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "She shouldn’t have come here" | | 1 | "She stepped carefully over gnarled" | | 2 | "Her voice sounded too loud" | | 3 | "She exhaled through her nose" | | 4 | "Her stomach dropped." | | 5 | "Their petals curled inward, as" | | 6 | "She took a step back." | | 7 | "She spun, searching the shadows." | | 8 | "Its limbs bent at angles" | | 9 | "It stepped forward, and the" | | 10 | "Its voice was wrong—too many" | | 11 | "She forced her voice steady." | | 12 | "It took another step." | | 13 | "She caught herself before she" | | 14 | "It stretched a hand toward" | | 15 | "She gasped, clutching at it—" | | 16 | "She turned and ran." | | 17 | "She skidded to a stop" | | 18 | "She gripped it tight, the" | | 19 | "It leaned in, close enough" |
| | ratio | 0.292 | |
| 22.50% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 63 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the Fae" | | 1 | "Moonlight filtered through the dense" | | 2 | "She shouldn’t have come here" | | 3 | "Silas had warned her." | | 4 | "Eva had begged her not" | | 5 | "She stepped carefully over gnarled" | | 6 | "The grove was never silent," | | 7 | "The wind didn’t move the" | | 8 | "The rustling wasn’t just behind" | | 9 | "Rory’s fingers brushed the pendant." | | 10 | "The crimson stone throbbed against" | | 11 | "A twig snapped to her" | | 12 | "A slow, dragging scrape, like" | | 13 | "Her voice sounded too loud" | | 14 | "The grove swallowed the word" | | 15 | "She exhaled through her nose" | | 16 | "The wildflowers here bloomed unnaturally" | | 17 | "The air grew heavier, pressing" | | 18 | "Something flickered at the edge" | | 19 | "The pendant pulsed again, sharper" |
| | ratio | 0.875 | |
| 69.44% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "—and the thing recoiled, hissing." |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 10.58% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 27 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Moonlight filtered through the dense canopy above, casting jagged shadows across the standing stones that marked the grove’s boundary." | | 1 | "But the Heartstone pendant around her neck had pulsed with warmth all evening, a persistent, rhythmic heat that matched the frantic beat of her own pulse." | | 2 | "Its limbs bent at angles that made her eyes ache." | | 3 | "It stepped forward, and the moonlight slid off it like oil, revealing nothing but a silhouette that wavered at the edges, as if it wasn’t entirely there." | | 4 | "The thing’s laughter chased her, a sound that wormed into her skull, vibrating behind her eyes." |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "It stretched, fingers too long, too many" |
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| 87.50% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.125 | | leniency | 0.25 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.125 | |