Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTZ0DRG8MP1BENCM7ZJB0AX

Run Details

Duration:
39.7s
Cost:
$0.001834
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in the Fae Grove clung thick with the scent of damp earth and something sweet—honeysuckle, maybe, though Rory couldn’t see any. Moonlight filtered through the dense canopy above, casting jagged shadows across the standing stones that marked the grove’s boundary. She shouldn’t have come here at night. Silas had warned her. Eva had begged her not to. But the Heartstone pendant around her neck had pulsed with warmth all evening, a persistent, rhythmic heat that matched the frantic beat of her own pulse. She stepped carefully over gnarled roots, her boots crunching on fallen leaves. The grove was never silent, not really—there was always the whisper of wind through branches, the occasional rustle of unseen creatures—but tonight, the sounds were off. The wind didn’t move the leaves right. The rustling wasn’t just behind her; it was *around* her, circling. Rory’s fingers brushed the pendant. The crimson stone throbbed against her skin, warm as living flesh. A twig snapped to her left. She froze. Nothing. Then—another sound, too deliberate to be an animal. A slow, dragging scrape, like something being pulled across the ground. “Hello?” Her voice sounded too loud in the unnatural quiet. The grove swallowed the word whole. No answer. She exhaled through her nose and kept moving, deeper into the clearing. The wildflowers here bloomed unnaturally bright under the moonlight, their petals too vivid, their stems too straight. The air grew heavier, pressing against her skin like damp hands. Something flickered at the edge of her vision. Rory turned. Nothing. But the space between the standing stones—hadn’t it been wider a second ago? The pendant pulsed again, sharper this time. A warning. She swallowed. “If someone’s there, you should know I’m not in the mood for games.” A low, breathy laugh rippled through the trees. Not from one direction. From *everywhere*. Her stomach dropped. The flowers nearest her trembled, though there was no wind. Their petals curled inward, as if recoiling. Another sound—a wet, clicking noise, like tongues against teeth. Rory’s breath hitched. She took a step back. The standing stones loomed closer than they should have. The laugh came again, closer now. A voice, if it could be called that—something that mimicked speech but didn’t quite get it right. “Little thing,” it crooned. “Lost thing.” She spun, searching the shadows. “Show yourself.” A shape detached from the darkness between two oaks. Tall. Too tall. Its limbs bent at angles that made her eyes ache. It stepped forward, and the moonlight slid off it like oil, revealing nothing but a silhouette that wavered at the edges, as if it wasn’t entirely there. The pendant burned against her chest. “You don’t belong here,” the thing said. Its voice was wrong—too many tones layered over each other, a chorus of whispers and sighs. Rory’s fingers twitched toward the pocket where she kept her phone. Useless. No signal here. No help. The thing tilted its head. “Running won’t help.” She forced her voice steady. “I’m not running.” It took another step. The ground beneath it darkened, the grass withering where it passed. “Liar.” The air thickened, pressing against her lungs. The flowers around her shriveled, their colors leaching away. Rory backed up, her heel catching on a root. She caught herself before she fell, but the thing laughed again, a sound like dry leaves skittering across stone. “You feel it, don’t you?” It stretched a hand toward her, fingers too long, too many. “The grove knows you. It *tastes* you.” The pendant flared, sudden and searing. She gasped, clutching at it— —and the thing recoiled, hissing. For a heartbeat, the pressure in the air eased. Rory didn’t wait. She turned and ran. The trees blurred around her. The path twisted, branches snatching at her clothes, roots rising to trip her. The thing’s laughter chased her, a sound that wormed into her skull, vibrating behind her eyes. She skidded to a stop at the edge of the standing stones. The exit. But the space between them was gone. The stones had closed ranks, forming an unbroken wall. The dragging sound came again, right behind her. Rory whirled. The thing loomed, its form shifting, stretching. “No way out,” it murmured. “Not for you.” The pendant burned hotter, the chain digging into her neck. She gripped it tight, the stone’s edges biting into her palm. “Let me pass.” It leaned in, close enough that she could smell it—rot and honey, cloying and thick. “Or what?” She didn’t have an answer. The thing smiled, a jagged split in the dark. “Exactly.” Then it reached for her.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:46:42.967Z" 2/19/2026, 12:46:42 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
75.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Her voice sounded too [too]"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.313
leniency0.625
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.125
87.05% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount772
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
9.33% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount772
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"rhythmic"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count1
5
word"throbbed"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"stomach"
count1
8
word"trembled"
count1
9
word"loomed"
count2
10
word"wavered"
count1
11
word"searing"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"rhythmic"
3"pulse"
4"whisper"
5"throbbed"
6"flickered"
7"stomach"
8"trembled"
9"loomed"
10"wavered"
11"searing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences88
matches
0"d with warmth"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences88
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords3
totalWords763
ratio0.004
matches
0"around"
1"everywhere"
2"tastes"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
93.50% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions11
wordCount708
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity1.13
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Fae1
Grove1
Rory8
Heartstone1
persons
0"Rory"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore0.935
windowScore1
55.66% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if recoiling"
1"quite get it right"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount763
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences99
matches
0"called that—something"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean15.57
std15.35
cv0.986
sampleLengths
085
156
216
36
42
51
619
716
82
940
108
112
121
1313
149
1515
1614
173
1817
199
208
219
2229
237
2449
256
2623
2717
288
298
3016
3116
3228
3323
3411
355
369
377
3834
3914
4016
418
422
4315
4424
4517
465
4710
485
97.29% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences88
matches
0"being pulled"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs124
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences99
ratio0.111
matches
0"The air in the Fae Grove clung thick with the scent of damp earth and something sweet—honeysuckle, maybe, though Rory couldn’t see any."
1"The grove was never silent, not really—there was always the whisper of wind through branches, the occasional rustle of unseen creatures—but tonight, the sounds were off."
2"The rustling wasn’t just behind her; it was *around* her, circling."
3"Then—another sound, too deliberate to be an animal."
4"But the space between the standing stones—hadn’t it been wider a second ago?"
5"Another sound—a wet, clicking noise, like tongues against teeth."
6"A voice, if it could be called that—something that mimicked speech but didn’t quite get it right."
7"Its voice was wrong—too many tones layered over each other, a chorus of whispers and sighs."
8"She gasped, clutching at it—"
9"—and the thing recoiled, hissing."
10"It leaned in, close enough that she could smell it—rot and honey, cloying and thick."
93.61% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount717
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"heavier, pressing against her"
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.040446304044630406
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.005578800557880056
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean7.71
std5.73
cv0.744
sampleLengths
023
119
27
34
46
526
612
726
87
911
105
1111
126
132
141
158
1611
1710
186
192
2012
2117
2211
238
242
251
2613
277
282
292
3013
318
324
332
343
3510
367
379
383
395
409
416
4217
434
442
455
462
479
481
492
50.51% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.36363636363636365
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners36
92.59% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences72
matches
0"Then—another sound, too deliberate to"
1"Then it reached for her."
ratio0.028
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences72
matches
0"She shouldn’t have come here"
1"She stepped carefully over gnarled"
2"Her voice sounded too loud"
3"She exhaled through her nose"
4"Her stomach dropped."
5"Their petals curled inward, as"
6"She took a step back."
7"She spun, searching the shadows."
8"Its limbs bent at angles"
9"It stepped forward, and the"
10"Its voice was wrong—too many"
11"She forced her voice steady."
12"It took another step."
13"She caught herself before she"
14"It stretched a hand toward"
15"She gasped, clutching at it—"
16"She turned and ran."
17"She skidded to a stop"
18"She gripped it tight, the"
19"It leaned in, close enough"
ratio0.292
22.50% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences72
matches
0"The air in the Fae"
1"Moonlight filtered through the dense"
2"She shouldn’t have come here"
3"Silas had warned her."
4"Eva had begged her not"
5"She stepped carefully over gnarled"
6"The grove was never silent,"
7"The wind didn’t move the"
8"The rustling wasn’t just behind"
9"Rory’s fingers brushed the pendant."
10"The crimson stone throbbed against"
11"A twig snapped to her"
12"A slow, dragging scrape, like"
13"Her voice sounded too loud"
14"The grove swallowed the word"
15"She exhaled through her nose"
16"The wildflowers here bloomed unnaturally"
17"The air grew heavier, pressing"
18"Something flickered at the edge"
19"The pendant pulsed again, sharper"
ratio0.875
69.44% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences72
matches
0"—and the thing recoiled, hissing."
ratio0.014
10.58% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Moonlight filtered through the dense canopy above, casting jagged shadows across the standing stones that marked the grove’s boundary."
1"But the Heartstone pendant around her neck had pulsed with warmth all evening, a persistent, rhythmic heat that matched the frantic beat of her own pulse."
2"Its limbs bent at angles that made her eyes ache."
3"It stepped forward, and the moonlight slid off it like oil, revealing nothing but a silhouette that wavered at the edges, as if it wasn’t entirely there."
4"The thing’s laughter chased her, a sound that wormed into her skull, vibrating behind her eyes."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"It stretched, fingers too long, too many"
87.50% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"it murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.125
leniency0.25
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.125
78.9853%