| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her whisper sounded too [too]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.409 | | leniency | 0.818 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.091 | |
| 78.95% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1663 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "utterly" | | 3 | "perfectly" | | 4 | "precisely" | | 5 | "very" |
| |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 18.82% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1663 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "could feel" | | 3 | "gloom" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "charged" | | 6 | "anticipation" | | 7 | "resolved" | | 8 | "rhythmic" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "anticipating" | | 11 | "footsteps" | | 12 | "pulse" | | 13 | "beacon" | | 14 | "resolving" | | 15 | "echo" | | 16 | "pulsed" | | 17 | "flickered" | | 18 | "encounter" |
| |
| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 144 | | matches | | |
| 93.25% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 144 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 158 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1647 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 24 | | wordCount | 1429 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.77 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | November | 2 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Silence | 1 | | Norman | 1 | | Rory | 11 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Norman" | | 4 | "Rory" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 99.49% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 99 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "stone that seemed to hold light even in complete darkness" | | 1 | "felt like minutes, the entire encounter" |
| |
| 78.57% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.214 | | wordCount | 1647 | | matches | | 0 | "Neither male nor" | | 1 | "Neither young nor" |
| |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 158 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 67 | | mean | 24.58 | | std | 17.42 | | cv | 0.709 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 54 | | 1 | 38 | | 2 | 59 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 51 | | 5 | 29 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 30 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 32 | | 10 | 43 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 48 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 62 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 66 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 36 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 34 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 34 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 39 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 35 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 49 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 66 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 42 | | 39 | 28 | | 40 | 29 | | 41 | 28 | | 42 | 28 | | 43 | 35 | | 44 | 34 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 25 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 47 |
| |
| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 144 | | matches | | 0 | "been locked" | | 1 | "been carved" |
| |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 226 | | matches | | 0 | "were adjusting" | | 1 | "was exerting" |
| |
| 16.27% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 158 | | ratio | 0.044 | | matches | | 0 | "But the dreams—" | | 1 | "Her phone's torch cut a pale wedge through the gloom—she'd turned it on without consciously deciding to, the light a small rebellion against the pressing dark." | | 2 | "The previous visits had felt different—charged, yes, but with anticipation rather than dread." | | 3 | "They shouldn't exist—the park service had no record of them, no historical documentation, no explanation for how ancient trees had been carved into monoliths that predated the Norman conquest." | | 4 | "Through her shirt, she could feel the Heartstone pulsing with rhythmic warmth, matching—no, anticipating—her heartbeat." | | 5 | "The warmth flared brighter, and for a moment—just a moment—she caught a glimpse of the thing's face." | | 6 | "Three hours—but it had felt like minutes, the entire encounter compressed into a handful of heartbeats." |
| |
| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 346 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 5 | | adverbRatio | 0.014450867052023121 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 158 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 158 | | mean | 10.42 | | std | 7.49 | | cv | 0.718 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 22 | | 39 | 26 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 18 |
| |
| 51.27% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.36075949367088606 | | totalSentences | 158 | | uniqueOpeners | 57 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 10 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the silver chain and" | | 1 | "Just more trees, more undergrowth," | | 2 | "Somewhere behind her, something exhaled." | | 3 | "Just a shape." | | 4 | "Vaguely human-sized, vaguely human-shaped, but" | | 5 | "Too many angles." | | 6 | "Too few dimensions." | | 7 | "Simply present, the way gravity" | | 8 | "Too many mouths." | | 9 | "Just certainty, absolute and cold." |
| | ratio | 0.078 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 30 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | | 0 | "She pulled her jacket tighter" | | 1 | "She touched it through the" | | 2 | "She'd made this journey four" | | 3 | "She froze mid-step, breath clouding" | | 4 | "Her voice came out steadier" | | 5 | "She repeated this to herself" | | 6 | "Her phone's torch cut a" | | 7 | "Her whisper sounded too loud" | | 8 | "She should turn back." | | 9 | "They shouldn't exist—the park service" | | 10 | "She'd spent hours in the" | | 11 | "She stepped between two of" | | 12 | "Her phone's torch cut out" | | 13 | "She thumbed the button frantically," | | 14 | "She couldn't see." | | 15 | "It watched her from a" | | 16 | "Her voice cracked on the" | | 17 | "She couldn't make out details." | | 18 | "It tilted what might have" | | 19 | "She pressed harder against the" |
| | ratio | 0.233 | |
| 84.03% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 97 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | | 0 | "The last rays of twilight" | | 1 | "The gate had been locked" | | 2 | "Back when the dreams had" | | 3 | "She pulled her jacket tighter" | | 4 | "There never was, this deep" | | 5 | "The Heartstone pendant lay cool" | | 6 | "She touched it through the" | | 7 | "Tonight, it held nothing." | | 8 | "Rory moved deeper into the" | | 9 | "The standing stones would be" | | 10 | "She'd made this journey four" | | 11 | "Eva would kill her if" | | 12 | "Silas would have words." | | 13 | "The dreams showed her the" | | 14 | "Someone who needed her help." | | 15 | "A branch snapped somewhere to" | | 16 | "She froze mid-step, breath clouding" | | 17 | "The sound had been sharp." | | 18 | "Her voice came out steadier" | | 19 | "The absence of sound pressed" |
| | ratio | 0.752 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 59.52% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones emerged from the darkness gradually, gray shapes that resolved into towering oak pillars arranged in a rough circle." | | 1 | "Sweeter, somehow, carrying the impossible scent of wildflowers that shouldn't bloom in November." | | 2 | "Rory's eyes were adjusting now, the grove's darkness resolving into shades of gray and deeper black." | | 3 | "She pressed harder against the standing stone, as if she could push herself through the ancient wood and out the other side." | | 4 | "She looked away immediately, her eyes watering, her mind skittering back from what it had seen." | | 5 | "It pronounced each syllable perfectly, precisely, as if it had practiced, as if it had been waiting to speak her name for a very long time." | | 6 | "She watched them curl inward, their luminescence fading to gray, life leaching from their petals as the shape at the edge of the grove drew something from the a…" |
| |
| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.045 | | leniency | 0.091 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.091 | |