Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTZ0S45VNRM1NC3JEMBTWTV

Run Details

Duration:
1m 7s
Cost:
$0.068705
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain came down in sheets, turning Soho into a smear of reflected neon and black water. Quinn's boots struck the pavement in a rhythm she hadn't broken since Camden High Street, each impact sending a jolt through her knees that reminded her she wasn't twenty-five anymore. Ahead, Tomás Herrera ducked left off Parkway, his olive jacket a dark blur against the glow of a kebab shop window. She keyed her radio. Static answered. Had been answering for the last four blocks. Herrera moved fast for someone who wasn't supposed to be running from anything. She'd only wanted to talk—had positioned herself at the mouth of the alley behind The Raven's Nest, warrant card in hand, questions about the unlicensed medical supplies stacked in that hidden back room she wasn't supposed to know about. He'd taken one look at her face and bolted before she could open her mouth. Innocent people don't run. She rounded the corner and nearly lost her footing on a slick of takeaway grease. Caught herself on a bollard. Her fingers stung from the cold metal. Herrera was already fifty metres ahead, weaving between two drunk women stumbling out of a pub, his curly hair plastered flat against his skull. The Saint Christopher medallion caught a streetlight as it bounced against his chest. "Herrera! Metropolitan Police!" He didn't slow. Didn't even flinch. Quinn pushed harder, her lungs raw with the taste of rain and exhaust. She was gaining—she could see the scar on his left forearm as his sleeve rode up, the pale line of tissue unmistakable even from distance. He cut across the road. A black cab leaned on its horn. Quinn followed, the cab's headlights washing her vision white for half a second. Then he vanished. Not gradually, not around a corner. One moment he was there, running toward the boarded-up entrance of an old Tube station, and the next the darkness at the bottom of the steps swallowed him whole. Quinn stopped at the top of the stairs. Rain streamed down the bridge of her nose and dripped off her chin. The entrance was supposed to be sealed—she could see the plywood boards that should have covered it, pulled aside and leaning against the tiled wall like someone had opened a door. Beyond them, nothing. Just a throat of blackness leading down. She wiped water from her eyes with the back of her hand and checked her watch. The worn leather band was soaked through. Twenty-three minutes since she'd started the pursuit. Twenty-three minutes with no radio contact, no backup, in a part of Camden she hadn't planned to be in tonight. Procedure said stop. Call it in. Wait. She looked down the stairs again. Thought about DS Morris. Three years gone. An investigation that had led him into a basement in Whitechapel, into something the coroner's report couldn't explain and the department wouldn't discuss. She still had the crime scene photographs in her desk drawer, the ones that showed Morris's expression—not fear, but bewilderment, as though he'd walked into a room and found the walls breathing. She'd spent three years collecting threads. The Raven's Nest. The people who passed through its back room. The deliveries at odd hours, the substances that didn't match anything in the Met's drug database. Herrera was one of those threads. If she let him disappear underground, she might never pick it up again. Quinn drew her torch from her belt and started down. The stairs were original Victorian tile, cracked and scummed with something that wasn't quite moss. Her torch beam cut a white corridor through the dark, picking out a ticket hall that hadn't seen a commuter in decades. Puddles on the floor reflected her light back in wobbling coins. The air smelled wrong—not the stale, mineral smell of an abandoned tunnel but something richer, like woodsmoke and copper and crushed herbs. A sound reached her from deeper in. Not footsteps. Voices. Dozens of them, layered and echoing, the murmur of a crowd. She moved through the ticket hall, past turnstiles rusted into permanent open positions, and found herself at the top of a motionless escalator. The steps descended into amber light. Warm light, flickering, as though someone had lit a hundred candles at the bottom. Quinn killed her torch and let her eyes adjust. The sound clarified. Bartering. The clink of glass. Someone laughing. Someone arguing in a language she couldn't place. It was the sound of a market—a living, functioning marketplace operating beneath a dead Tube station in the middle of the night. She pressed her back against the wall and edged down the escalator sideways, keeping her right hand free near her hip. The light grew stronger. The smell intensified—incense now, and something acrid, and underneath it all, the unmistakable iron note of blood. The escalator deposited her onto a platform that had been transformed beyond recognition. Stalls lined both sides of what had once been the tracks, constructed from salvaged wood and draped fabric and, in some cases, what appeared to be bone. Actual bone—pale, curved, lashed together with wire into frames that held up canopies of dark cloth. Lanterns hung from the tunnel ceiling on chains, their light amber and unsteady, and in that light moved a crowd unlike anything Quinn had encountered in eighteen years of policing London. Most of them looked human. Most. A woman at the nearest stall had skin the colour of birch bark, and it wasn't makeup—the texture was wrong, fissured and layered, with something dark and wet gleaming in the cracks. A man browsing jars of iridescent powder turned his head as Quinn passed and she counted too many teeth in his smile. Far too many. She kept walking. Her hand found the familiar weight of her warrant card in her jacket pocket and she left it there. Whatever authority it carried on the streets above, she sensed it would be meaningless down here. Possibly dangerous. The stalls sold things she couldn't name. Bottles of liquid that moved against gravity, swirling upward inside their containers. Bundles of dried plants that whispered when she got close. Blades that seemed to drink the light rather than reflect it. A rack of small tokens—bone tokens, she realized, each one carved with a symbol she didn't recognize—hung beside a sign that read ENTRY PASSES: 3 MOONS VALID. Bone tokens. Entry requirement. This was the place she'd been hearing whispers about for months—fragments from informants who wouldn't elaborate, references in case files that went nowhere. The underground market. The Veil Market. It moved every full moon, and she'd stumbled into its current location by chasing a man who knew exactly where it was. She scanned the crowd for Herrera. The tunnel stretched in both directions, branching where the tracks once split, and the market filled every available space. She caught a glimpse of an olive jacket turning into a side passage between two stalls selling what looked like preserved eyes floating in green fluid. Quinn followed. The side passage narrowed into a maintenance corridor, the market sounds muffling behind her. Cables snaked along the floor. A single lantern hung at the far end, and beneath it, Herrera stood with his back against the wall, breathing hard, one hand pressed to his ribs. He'd stopped running. "You shouldn't be here." His accent was heavier than it sounded on the surveillance recordings—the Seville roots showing through the London overlay. He watched her approach with the expression of a man calculating odds. "Funny. I was about to say the same to you." Quinn kept her distance. Five metres. Close enough to read the fear in his warm brown eyes, far enough to react. "You ran from a police officer, Herrera. That's not a great look for someone who claims he's just a barman." "I'm not a barman." "No. You're a paramedic who lost his license. Which makes the medical supplies in the back room of The Raven's Nest a more interesting conversation, doesn't it?" His hand went to the medallion at his throat. Squeezed it. "You don't understand what you've walked into." "Then explain it." "I can't. Not here." His eyes flicked past her, back toward the market. "You came in without a token. People will have noticed. They always notice." "People. Right." Quinn glanced back. The corridor behind her was empty, but the shadows at its edges seemed to lean inward, attentive. "The people out there with the wrong number of teeth." Herrera's mouth tightened. "You saw." "I'm a detective. It's the seeing part I'm good at." "Then see this." He pulled his sleeve up. Not the scarred arm—the other one. On his right forearm, a mark she initially took for a tattoo resolved into something else under the lantern light. The skin was raised, branded rather than inked, and the symbol matched the ones carved into the bone tokens at the stall. "I have passage. You don't. The people who run this market—they don't call the police when they find trespassers. They don't need to." Quinn studied the brand. The skin around it had a faint luminescence that no ink she'd ever seen could produce. Her jaw tightened, the muscles in her face pulling her expression into something she'd practiced across hundreds of interrogation rooms: controlled neutrality, the refusal to show surprise. "What happened to DS Morris?" The question landed like a slap. Herrera's grip on the medallion went white-knuckled. "I don't know that name." "Yes you do. You were working out of a clinic in Whitechapel three years ago. Off the books, same as now. He went into a basement on your street and never came out the same way he went in. The official report says cardiac arrest. The unofficial photographs say something else entirely." Herrera closed his eyes. Rain from his hair ran down his temples. "We can't do this here." "We're doing it here." "Detective." His eyes opened. Something shifted in them—not hostility, but urgency, a desperate need for her to understand something she didn't have the framework for. "There are things in this market that can hear a lie from fifty metres. There are things that can smell police on your skin. I ran because I was trying to keep you away from this place, not because I had something to hide from you." Quinn held his gaze. Rain still dripped from both of them, pooling on the concrete floor between their feet. From the market behind her came the sound of a bell—a single, clear note that rang through the tunnels and silenced the crowd for one long, held breath. Then the murmuring started again, different now. Sharper. Directed. Herrera's face went pale beneath his olive skin. "They know you're here." He pushed off the wall and grabbed her arm. "We need to move. Now."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Quinn glanced back [back]"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.24
leniency0.48
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.08
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1822
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
67.07% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1822
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"database"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"echoing"
count1
3
word"constructed"
count1
4
word"gleaming"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"scanned"
count1
8
word"calculating"
count1
9
word"flicked"
count1
10
word"resolved"
count1
11
word"framework"
count1
highlights
0"database"
1"footsteps"
2"echoing"
3"constructed"
4"gleaming"
5"familiar"
6"weight"
7"scanned"
8"calculating"
9"flicked"
10"resolved"
11"framework"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences134
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences134
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"appeared to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences153
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen52
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1800
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions52
wordCount1528
uniqueNames23
maxNameDensity0.85
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Camden2
High1
Street1
Tomás1
Herrera10
Parkway1
Raven2
Nest2
Saint1
Christopher1
Tube2
Morris2
Whitechapel1
Met1
Victorian1
Quinn13
London2
Veil1
Market1
Seville1
Five1
Rain3
persons
0"Tomás"
1"Herrera"
2"Raven"
3"Nest"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Morris"
7"Quinn"
8"Rain"
places
0"Soho"
1"Camden"
2"High"
3"Street"
4"Whitechapel"
5"Met"
6"London"
7"Market"
8"Seville"
globalScore1
windowScore1
64.77% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences88
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"quite moss"
1"Blades that seemed to drink the light rather than reflect it"
2"looked like preserved eyes floating in gr"
33.33% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.667
wordCount1800
matches
0"not fear, but bewilderment, as though he'd walked into a room"
1"not the stale, mineral smell of an abandoned tunnel but something richer, like woodsmoke"
2"not hostility, but urgency, a desperate need for her to understand something sh"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences153
matches
0"frames that held"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean32.14
std24.89
cv0.774
sampleLengths
068
114
267
34
464
53
66
763
83
935
1062
1150
127
1368
1452
1510
1670
1721
1843
199
2040
2142
2213
2374
2463
2540
2667
2755
2851
292
3049
314
3230
3351
344
3527
3618
373
3826
3932
405
4110
4279
4347
445
4513
465
4752
4812
495
97.41% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences134
matches
0"was supposed"
1"been transformed"
2"was raised"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs259
matches
0"was gaining"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount16
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences15
totalSentences153
ratio0.098
matches
0"She'd only wanted to talk—had positioned herself at the mouth of the alley behind The Raven's Nest, warrant card in hand, questions about the unlicensed medical supplies stacked in that hidden back room she wasn't supposed to know about."
1"She was gaining—she could see the scar on his left forearm as his sleeve rode up, the pale line of tissue unmistakable even from distance."
2"The entrance was supposed to be sealed—she could see the plywood boards that should have covered it, pulled aside and leaning against the tiled wall like someone had opened a door."
3"She still had the crime scene photographs in her desk drawer, the ones that showed Morris's expression—not fear, but bewilderment, as though he'd walked into a room and found the walls breathing."
4"The air smelled wrong—not the stale, mineral smell of an abandoned tunnel but something richer, like woodsmoke and copper and crushed herbs."
5"It was the sound of a market—a living, functioning marketplace operating beneath a dead Tube station in the middle of the night."
6"The smell intensified—incense now, and something acrid, and underneath it all, the unmistakable iron note of blood."
7"Actual bone—pale, curved, lashed together with wire into frames that held up canopies of dark cloth."
8"A woman at the nearest stall had skin the colour of birch bark, and it wasn't makeup—the texture was wrong, fissured and layered, with something dark and wet gleaming in the cracks."
9"A rack of small tokens—bone tokens, she realized, each one carved with a symbol she didn't recognize—hung beside a sign that read ENTRY PASSES: 3 MOONS VALID."
10"This was the place she'd been hearing whispers about for months—fragments from informants who wouldn't elaborate, references in case files that went nowhere."
11"His accent was heavier than it sounded on the surveillance recordings—the Seville roots showing through the London overlay."
12"Not the scarred arm—the other one."
13"Something shifted in them—not hostility, but urgency, a desperate need for her to understand something she didn't have the framework for."
14"From the market behind her came the sound of a bell—a single, clear note that rang through the tunnels and silenced the crowd for one long, held breath."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1549
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.023886378308586184
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.004519044544867657
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences153
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences153
mean11.76
std9.69
cv0.824
sampleLengths
017
130
221
34
42
58
613
739
815
94
1015
115
127
1324
1413
153
163
173
1813
1925
205
217
2213
233
246
2529
268
2713
2831
293
307
3116
327
337
3420
353
363
371
386
394
403
4123
4232
436
443
458
4616
476
4813
4910
66.23% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.4444444444444444
totalSentences153
uniqueOpeners68
84.03% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences119
matches
0"Then he vanished."
1"Just a throat of blackness"
2"Then the murmuring started again,"
ratio0.025
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences119
matches
0"She keyed her radio."
1"She'd only wanted to talk—had"
2"He'd taken one look at"
3"She rounded the corner and"
4"Her fingers stung from the"
5"He didn't slow."
6"She was gaining—she could see"
7"He cut across the road."
8"She wiped water from her"
9"She looked down the stairs"
10"She still had the crime"
11"She'd spent three years collecting"
12"Her torch beam cut a"
13"She moved through the ticket"
14"It was the sound of"
15"She pressed her back against"
16"She kept walking."
17"Her hand found the familiar"
18"It moved every full moon,"
19"She scanned the crowd for"
ratio0.252
73.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount92
totalSentences119
matches
0"The rain came down in"
1"Quinn's boots struck the pavement"
2"She keyed her radio."
3"Herrera moved fast for someone"
4"She'd only wanted to talk—had"
5"He'd taken one look at"
6"Innocent people don't run."
7"She rounded the corner and"
8"Her fingers stung from the"
9"Herrera was already fifty metres"
10"The Saint Christopher medallion caught"
11"He didn't slow."
12"Quinn pushed harder, her lungs"
13"She was gaining—she could see"
14"He cut across the road."
15"A black cab leaned on"
16"Quinn followed, the cab's headlights"
17"Quinn stopped at the top"
18"Rain streamed down the bridge"
19"The entrance was supposed to"
ratio0.773
42.02% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences119
matches
0"If she let him disappear"
ratio0.008
49.18% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences61
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Quinn's boots struck the pavement in a rhythm she hadn't broken since Camden High Street, each impact sending a jolt through her knees that reminded her she was…"
1"An investigation that had led him into a basement in Whitechapel, into something the coroner's report couldn't explain and the department wouldn't discuss."
2"She still had the crime scene photographs in her desk drawer, the ones that showed Morris's expression—not fear, but bewilderment, as though he'd walked into a …"
3"The deliveries at odd hours, the substances that didn't match anything in the Met's drug database."
4"The escalator deposited her onto a platform that had been transformed beyond recognition."
5"Bottles of liquid that moved against gravity, swirling upward inside their containers."
6"This was the place she'd been hearing whispers about for months—fragments from informants who wouldn't elaborate, references in case files that went nowhere."
7"From the market behind her came the sound of a bell—a single, clear note that rang through the tunnels and silenced the crowd for one long, held breath."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.9163%