Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTZ0SNV389TR8T4NH6ET7D2

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came at half past eleven, three sharp raps that cut through the curry-scented air drifting up from the restaurant below. Rory set down her highlighter and stared at the door. Eva was in Prague chasing down a lead on Byzantine demon-binding texts. No one else knew about this flat. No one who'd use the front door, anyway. She reached for the iron poker by the fireplace, a gift from Eva after the incident with the changeling. The metal was cold and reassuring in her grip. Three more knocks. Patient. Precise. She peered through the peephole and her stomach dropped. Lucien Moreau stood in the narrow hallway, his platinum hair catching the flickering light from the dying bulb overhead. He wore charcoal as always, the cut of his suit sharp enough to draw blood. His ivory-handled cane rested against his shoulder like a rifle at ease. Rory's hand tightened on the poker. Six weeks. Six weeks since he'd walked out of Silas's bar without a backward glance, leaving her with a dead phone, a cursed artifact, and absolutely no explanation. She threw the deadbolts. All three of them. "No." "Aurora." His voice came muffled through the wood, that particular French lilt he used when he wanted something. "I need five minutes." "You needed five minutes six weeks ago. You took six hours of mine and vanished." "I can explain." "Through the door, then." A pause. She imagined him pinching the bridge of his nose, the way he did when she refused to cooperate with his carefully laid plans. "There's a contract on your life." The words hung there. Rory pressed her forehead against the door, felt the cool grain of cheap paint against her skin. "Still listening," she said. "I would prefer not to discuss the specifics where your neighbour can hear. The gentleman in 4B has been watching me through his peephole for the past three minutes." Damn it. Mr. Pemberton reported everything unusual to the building manager, and a well-dressed Frenchman loitering in the hallway at nearly midnight definitely qualified. She opened the door. Lucien stepped inside with the fluid grace she remembered too well. His mismatched eyes swept the flat, cataloguing the towers of books, the half-eaten takeaway container on Eva's desk, the iron poker still clutched in Rory's hand. His gaze lingered on that last detail. "You remembered." "Iron for fae. Silver for shifters. Lead for demons." She didn't lower the poker. "Which one are you again?" "Half of one." He closed the door behind him, and the flat suddenly felt much smaller. "The less pleasant half, depending on who you ask." Ptolemy emerged from behind a stack of grimoires, took one look at Lucien, and fled under the bed. "Smart cat," Rory said. "He always did have good instincts." Lucien's attention drifted to the window, checking sightlines. Old habits. "You've added wards since I was last here." "Eva's paranoid." "Eva's wise." He turned back to her, and something in his expression shifted. Softened, almost, though with Lucien it was impossible to tell what was genuine and what was calculated. "You look tired." "It's nearly midnight and someone just told me there's a contract on my life. What's your excuse?" His jaw tightened. "I deserve that." "You deserve considerably more than that." She finally lowered the poker, setting it against the wall within easy reach. "Talk. You've got four minutes left." "The Ashworth auction. The binding compass you helped me acquire." "The one you said was going to a private collector in Vienna." "I lied." "Shocking." He moved to Eva's cluttered desk, picking up a scroll and setting it down again. Restless. She'd never seen him restless before. "The compass was commissioned by a demon lord named Verath. Old bloodline, older grudges. He wanted it to track a particular soul, one that escaped his realm three centuries ago." "And you decided to, what, keep it for yourself?" "I destroyed it." He met her eyes. "The soul he was hunting belonged to a child. Seven years old, living in Manchester with no idea what her ancestors bargained away." The flat fell silent except for the muffled sounds of the curry house below, pots clanging, someone laughing. "You destroyed a demon lord's property," Rory said slowly. "For a child you've never met." "I destroyed evidence of a transaction that would have damned an innocent." His hand found his cane, fingers wrapping around the ivory handle. "Verath was... displeased. He's spent the past six weeks hunting everyone involved in the acquisition. The auction house burned three days ago. The courier who transported it was found in pieces in Marseille." "And me?" "You translated the binding inscriptions. Made the whole thing possible." He stepped closer, and she caught his scent, bergamot and something darker underneath. "He knows your face, Aurora. Your name. Where you work, where you sleep." "Then why come here? Why not just send a message through your usual channels?" "Because my usual channels are compromised." Another step. She held her ground. "And because I owed you an explanation. Six weeks ago, I left because staying would have painted a target on this flat. On you. I thought distance would keep you safe." "How's that working out?" "Poorly." His mouth twisted into something that might have been a smile on anyone else. "I underestimated his resources. And his spite." Rory's hand itched for the poker again. Not because she was afraid of Lucien, but because anger was easier than the other thing coiling in her chest. The relief at seeing him alive. The fury at being left without a word. "You could have told me." "And you would have insisted on helping. Researching countermeasures, reaching out to your contacts, making yourself visible." His voice dropped. "I know you, Aurora. You don't step back from a fight." "You don't get to make that choice for me." "No." He was close enough now that she could see the shadows under his eyes, the tension in his shoulders that his tailored jacket couldn't quite hide. "I don't. And I'm not here to do that again." "Then why are you here?" "To warn you. To offer what protection I can arrange." He paused. "And to apologise. Properly. Not through a door." Ptolemy hissed from under the bed. "Your cat is unconvinced," Lucien said. "My cat is Eva's, and he's an excellent judge of character." Rory crossed her arms. "You left me holding a cursed compass with no instructions. Do you know how long it took me to figure out the containment protocols? I had blisters for a week." "I know. I watched from across the street." "You what?" "Three nights. Until I was certain you'd neutralised it safely." His odd eyes held hers. "I couldn't risk contact, but I wasn't going to let you face that alone." "You're unbelievable." "I've been called worse." "By me. Repeatedly. In Welsh." "Your pronunciation is improving." She wanted to hit him. She wanted to grab the lapels of his expensive suit and shake him until something other than calculation showed in his face. She wanted to kiss him, which was the worst possible response and exactly why she'd spent six weeks pretending she didn't care that he'd vanished. "The contract," she said instead. "How serious?" "Verath doesn't make idle threats. He's hired three separate hunting parties. Fae, shifter, and human." Lucien's hand twitched toward her, then fell back to his side. "The human contingent concerns me most. They're local. They know London." "How long do I have?" "Hours. Perhaps less." He glanced at the window again. "I have a safehouse in Whitechapel. It's warded against demonic scrying and has enough iron in the walls to deter most fae." "And you expect me to just follow you there?" "I expect you to do whatever keeps you alive." His composure cracked, just a fraction, just enough for her to see something raw underneath. "I can't undo the past six weeks. I can't explain every choice I made or make you understand why I thought distance was protection. But I can stand between you and what's coming, if you'll let me." Rory looked at him, really looked. The perfect suit and slicked-back hair, the careful mask of control. And beneath it, the half-demon who'd destroyed a priceless artifact to save a child he'd never met. Who'd watched her struggle from the shadows because he couldn't bear to leave her entirely alone. "If I go with you," she said, "we do this my way. No more unilateral decisions. No more vanishing acts." "Agreed." "And you tell me everything. About Verath, about your contacts, about whatever game you're actually playing." "Some of it will put you in more danger." "I'm already in danger. At least let me be informed about it." He held her gaze for a long moment. Then, slowly, he inclined his head. "Everything," he said. "I swear it." Ptolemy chose that moment to dart from under the bed, racing toward the door with his fur standing on end. Lucien's cane twisted in his hand, and suddenly he was holding a blade, thin and wickedly sharp. "They're here," he said. The curry house below had gone quiet.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"He turned back [back]"
1"Rory said slowly [slowly]"
2"she said instead [instead]"
3"His composure cracked just [just]"
dialogueSentences83
tagDensity0.313
leniency0.627
rawRatio0.154
effectiveRatio0.096
77.21% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1536
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count2
2
adverb"slowly"
count2
3
adverb"really"
count1
4
adverb"wickedly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"suddenly"
2"slowly"
3"really"
4"wickedly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
77.21% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1536
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"absolutely"
count1
2
word"lilt"
count1
3
word"calculated"
count1
4
word"tension"
count1
5
word"perfect"
count1
6
word"racing"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"absolutely"
2"lilt"
3"calculated"
4"tension"
5"perfect"
6"racing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences83
matches
0"was afraid"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences83
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences139
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1529
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
93.68% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount799
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.13
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Prague1
Byzantine1
Eva4
Moreau1
Silas1
French1
Damn1
Frenchman1
Rory9
Ptolemy3
Lucien9
Old1
Softened1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Silas"
3"Frenchman"
4"Rory"
5"Ptolemy"
6"Lucien"
places
0"Prague"
globalScore0.937
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite hide"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1529
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences139
matches
0"care that he'd"
1"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
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mean17.78
std14.37
cv0.808
sampleLengths
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137
228
35
49
546
634
78
81
922
1015
113
124
1325
146
1521
164
1729
1824
194
2044
212
2219
2325
2418
254
2624
272
2833
2917
306
3125
3210
3312
342
351
3622
3730
389
3930
4018
4115
4256
432
4436
4514
4643
474
4822
4941
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs137
matches
0"was holding"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences139
ratio0
matches(empty)
95.92% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount806
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.04466501240694789
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.016129032258064516
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences139
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences139
mean11
std8.21
cv0.747
sampleLengths
022
110
212
37
48
519
69
73
81
91
109
1119
1215
1312
146
152
1626
174
184
191
2018
214
2215
233
244
252
2623
276
284
2917
304
3129
322
331
3421
354
3611
3726
387
392
4014
415
4216
439
4418
454
4614
472
488
492
56.35% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.381294964028777
totalSentences139
uniqueOpeners53
49.75% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"Then, slowly, he inclined his"
ratio0.015
28.96% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences67
matches
0"She reached for the iron"
1"She peered through the peephole"
2"He wore charcoal as always,"
3"His ivory-handled cane rested against"
4"She threw the deadbolts."
5"His voice came muffled through"
6"She imagined him pinching the"
7"She opened the door."
8"His mismatched eyes swept the"
9"His gaze lingered on that"
10"She didn't lower the poker"
11"He closed the door behind"
12"He turned back to her,"
13"His jaw tightened."
14"She finally lowered the poker,"
15"He moved to Eva's cluttered"
16"She'd never seen him restless"
17"He met her eyes"
18"His hand found his cane,"
19"He stepped closer, and she"
ratio0.478
34.63% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences67
matches
0"The knock came at half"
1"Rory set down her highlighter"
2"Eva was in Prague chasing"
3"She reached for the iron"
4"The metal was cold and"
5"She peered through the peephole"
6"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
7"He wore charcoal as always,"
8"His ivory-handled cane rested against"
9"Rory's hand tightened on the"
10"She threw the deadbolts."
11"His voice came muffled through"
12"She imagined him pinching the"
13"The words hung there."
14"Rory pressed her forehead against"
15"Pemberton reported everything unusual to"
16"She opened the door."
17"Lucien stepped inside with the"
18"His mismatched eyes swept the"
19"His gaze lingered on that"
ratio0.851
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
57.14% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The knock came at half past eleven, three sharp raps that cut through the curry-scented air drifting up from the restaurant below."
1"And beneath it, the half-demon who'd destroyed a priceless artifact to save a child he'd never met."
2"Ptolemy chose that moment to dart from under the bed, racing toward the door with his fur standing on end."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences83
tagDensity0.096
leniency0.193
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.6952%