Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTZ0TRW2AMAZ24E6GC9KJAS

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Duration:
1m 35s
Cost:
$0.011239
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Together

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The blade in Lucien Moreau's cane scraped against the doorjamb. I stopped unlatching the chain. My fingers found the crescent-shaped scar on my left wrist, an old childhood reflex that three years of legal training hadn't erased. "You're supposed to wait for an invitation." I kept my voice steady. Cool-headed. Intelligent. The way Eva described me when she convinced me to flee Cardiff. "Most people use the bell." "Most people don't live above a curry house with three deadbolts and a witch's threshold." Lucien leaned into the gap, his charcoal suit absorbing the dim hallway light. One amber eye caught the glow from the stairwell. The other remained black, empty, demonic. "The locks are new, Rory. Since when do you fear the living?" "Since I learned the dead use knives." He smiled. It didn't reach either eye. His platinum blond hair was slicked back tonight, severe, exposing the sharp lines of his Marseille heritage. The cane tapped the floorboards. Tap-tock. A sound that used to mean safety. Now it meant complications. Ptolemy yowled from somewhere near the sofa, a warning or a welcome. The tabby wound between my ankles, his fur bristling against my skin. The flat smelled of old books and turmeric from the restaurant below. Every surface held Eva's research, scrolls stacked like archaeological strata, occult texts threatening to spill from shelves. Lucien's gaze swept across the clutter, cataloguing threats, cataloguing me. "You've lost weight." He stated it as fact, not concern. "The abusive ex found new ways to shrink you, or is it the demon you're hiding from?" "Evan is in Cardiff. Where you should be." I didn't move from the doorway. "Where you were. Three months ago. Before you disappeared into whatever hellhole fixers use for voicemail." "Ah." The cane lifted. The ivory handle gleamed. "The ledger of grievances. Shall we record them properly, or will you keep me in the corridor like a delivery?" My grip tightened on the door. He noticed. He always noticed. That was the problem with information brokers. They collected details the way Ptolemy collected rubber bands. Secretive, predatory, impossible to deter. "Say what you came to say." "I came to say you're standing in a kill zone." Lucien's French accent thickened, the way it did when he was suppressing something ancient and hungry. The demon in his bloodline, from Avaros. He'd told me about the realm once, drunk on absinthe in a Soho basement, his hand on my knee, his breath in my ear. Before the morning came. Before he left. "The flat above Silas', your real address, was ransacked forty minutes ago. Your landlady is currently unconscious. I suspect she's dying. Unless you'd prefer to discuss our past while she bleeds alone?" The scar on my wrist burned. I stepped back. Lucien entered without permission, his movements precise and elegant. He closed the door behind him, engaging all three locks with a fluid twist of his wrist. The flat suddenly felt smaller. The books pressed closer. He smelled of bergamot and cold stone, the scent of churchyards and old bargains. "You're lying." My voice cracked. I hated that. "Check your phone." I did. Seven missed calls. All from Silas. The last one three minutes ago. Lucien moved past me into the cramped kitchen, avoiding Ptolemy's winding path. He opened the window above the sink. Brick Lane traffic roared below, rickshaws and night buses, the endless London churn. He didn't look at the view. He looked at the shadows between buildings. "They're looking for something specific." His gloved hand rested on the windowsill. Leather. Grey. Tailored to his long fingers. "Something you took from Evan before you ran. A photograph. An envelope. A small silver key?" My stomach dropped. I hadn't told anyone about the key. Not Eva. Not the police. Not even in the drunken confession I'd almost made to him six months ago, pressed against this very wall, his mouth on my neck, his cane discarded on the floorboards. "I don't know what you're talking about." "Liar." He turned. The amber eye flashed. "You were always terrible at it. Brilliant at contract law, atrocious at deception. It's why I left, Rory. Watching you try to lie to me was excruciating. Almost as excruciating as watching you pretend you weren't relieved when I disappeared." The words struck like the blade in his cane. Sharp. Thin. Buried deep. "You left because you're half-demon and I'm inconveniently human." I stepped toward him. Ptolemy hissed and fled into the bedroom. "You left because I asked questions about Avaros. Because I wanted to know what you were, really, beneath the bespoke suits and the antiquated weaponry." He moved faster than human physiology allowed. One moment by the window, the next against me, his body trapping mine against the refrigerator. The cold metal pressed through my thin cotton shirt. His breath warmed my ear. His cane dug into my hip, hard and unyielding. "I left because I was falling in love with a barrister's daughter who thinks courage means standing still when the world burns." His voice dropped to a whisper, intimate, devastating. "And because the last human who loved me ended up in pieces across the Marais. I was trying to save your life, you impossible, stubborn, gorgeous idiot." My hands flattened against his chest. Wool. Muscle. Something thrumming beneath, ancient and malevolent. The demon blood. I should push him away. I should run. Instead, my fingers curled into his lapels. "Too late," I whispered. "For what?" "For saving it." The window shattered. Not outward. Inward. Glass sprayed across the linoleum. A hand followed, grey-skinned, taloned, grasping at the air where Lucien's head had been a moment before. He'd already moved, twisting, his cane splitting open with a snick-snick sound. The blade inside caught the kitchen light, silver and hungry. He shoved me behind him, his body a wall of tailored charcoal and fury. "Get the bedroom door," he snapped, all Marseille accent vanished, replaced by something older. Something from Avaros. "The deadbolts. Now." The creature pulled itself through the window frame, joints bending wrong, a smell of copper and rotting lilies preceding it. It wore a mask. My mother's face. Distorted. Smiling. "Rory," it said in my father's voice. "Your mother and I are so disappointed."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.438
leniency0.875
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.71% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1050
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"very"
2"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
76.19% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1050
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"churn"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count1
4
word"shattered"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"churn"
2"stomach"
3"whisper"
4"shattered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences103
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences121
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1044
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount706
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.99
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien7
Moreau1
Cool-headed1
Eva3
Cardiff1
One2
Marseille2
Ptolemy4
French1
Avaros2
Soho1
Silas1
Lane1
London1
Leather1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"One"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Silas"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Marseille"
2"Avaros"
3"Soho"
4"Lane"
5"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1044
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences121
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean29.83
std20.71
cv0.694
sampleLengths
037
131
255
37
441
563
627
730
828
932
106
1196
129
1349
148
153
1614
1745
1835
1945
207
2147
2213
2345
2446
2557
2632
274
282
293
3028
3136
3220
3329
3414
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences103
matches
0"was slicked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs112
matches
0"was suppressing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences121
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount711
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.01969057665260197
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0014064697609001407
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences121
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences121
mean8.63
std7.68
cv0.89
sampleLengths
010
15
222
312
41
51
612
75
828
99
106
1112
127
132
145
1517
165
171
187
194
2012
2112
2212
2317
2410
2510
2617
2714
2816
294
304
3120
326
332
343
357
369
375
386
3926
407
4124
424
433
4432
456
463
479
4817
495
59.23% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.4297520661157025
totalSentences121
uniqueOpeners52
40.16% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences83
matches
0"Instead, my fingers curled into"
ratio0.012
46.51% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences83
matches
0"I stopped unlatching the chain."
1"My fingers found the crescent-shaped"
2"I kept my voice steady"
3"It didn't reach either eye."
4"His platinum blond hair was"
5"He stated it as fact,"
6"I didn't move from the"
7"My grip tightened on the"
8"He always noticed."
9"They collected details the way"
10"He'd told me about the"
11"I stepped back."
12"He closed the door behind"
13"He smelled of bergamot and"
14"My voice cracked"
15"I hated that."
16"He opened the window above"
17"He didn't look at the"
18"He looked at the shadows"
19"His gloved hand rested on"
ratio0.434
32.29% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences83
matches
0"The blade in Lucien Moreau's"
1"I stopped unlatching the chain."
2"My fingers found the crescent-shaped"
3"I kept my voice steady"
4"The way Eva described me"
5"Lucien leaned into the gap,"
6"The other remained black, empty,"
7"It didn't reach either eye."
8"His platinum blond hair was"
9"The cane tapped the floorboards."
10"A sound that used to"
11"Ptolemy yowled from somewhere near"
12"The tabby wound between my"
13"The flat smelled of old"
14"Every surface held Eva's research,"
15"Lucien's gaze swept across the"
16"He stated it as fact,"
17"I didn't move from the"
18"The cane lifted"
19"The ivory handle gleamed."
ratio0.855
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences83
matches
0"Now it meant complications."
1"Before the morning came."
2"Before he left."
ratio0.036
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He'd already moved, twisting, his cane splitting open with a snick-snick sound."
89.29% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Lucien leaned, his charcoal suit absorbing the dim hallway light"
56.25% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"He stated (state)"
1"I whispered (whisper)"
2"he snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.125
leniency0.25
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.188
89.5208%