Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTZ0WJ597BY75GW238K1YBW

Run Details

Duration:
38.4s
Cost:
$0.003309
Provider:
AtlasCloud

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient oak standing stones loomed over the entrance, bark rough and blackened by centuries of rain. Aurora Carter stepped between them, the air shifting against her skin like a change in pressure before a storm. Richmond Park slept beyond the boundary, quiet and mundane, but the Grove held its breath. Night here possessed a weight, pressing down on her shoulders. She pulled her jacket tighter around her neck, the collar rubbing against her jaw. Wildflowers bloomed at her feet, petals open wide despite the lack of sun. Blues and violets glowed with a luminescence that defied the darkness. Rory scanned the clearing, her bright blue eyes adjusting to the low light. Straight black hair fell across her face, and she tucked a strand behind her ear, fingers brushing the silver chain around her neck. The Heartstone pendant rested against her collarbone, deep crimson gemstone catching the ambient glow of the flora. Warmth radiated from the stone, faint at first, then sharpening into a burn. She stopped. The heat pulsed in rhythm with her own heartbeat, or perhaps the pulse came from the stone itself. A Hel portal lay nearby. The codex entries she had studied warned of the energy signature, but reading about it differed from standing in its shadow. Silence filled the space between the trees. No crickets chirped. No owls called. The stillness felt manufactured, a vacuum waiting to be filled. Rory shifted her weight, boots crunching on dry leaves. The sound echoed too far, bouncing off trunks that stood too straight. She touched the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a habit from childhood when anxiety spiked. The skin felt cold compared to the pendant. A rustle came from the left. She turned, head snapping toward the movement. Shadows pooled beneath the oak trees, thick and unnatural. Nothing stood there. The wildflowers swayed without wind. Show yourself. Her voice sounded flat, absorbed by the dense air. The pendant grew hotter. She unclasped the top button of her jacket, needing space between the metal and her skin. The crimson glow intensified, casting faint red lines down her neck. Something moved at the edge of vision. A shift in the darkness near the standing stones behind her. She spun around, hands curling into fists. The stones remained stationary, roots gripping the earth like gnarled fingers. Time moves differently here. An hour inside could be minutes outside. Or days. The thought surfaced, unbidden. If she stayed too long, London would move on without her. The delivery shifts at Golden Empress would go uncovered. Silas would wonder why the flat above the bar stayed dark. Another rustle. Closer. Rory held her breath. The air smelled of ozone and wet earth, metallic and sharp. She took a step forward, boot settling on a patch of white clover. The flowers wilted under her sole, turning brown within seconds. Life drained away where she touched. She lifted her foot. The clover remained dead. This place consumes. A low hum vibrated through the soles of her boots. The ground trembled, subtle enough to miss if she stood still. She walked toward the center of the Grove, drawn by the heat in the pendant. The crimson light strengthened, illuminating the mist that curled around her ankles. It clung to her legs, cold and wet. Branches cracked overhead. Rory looked up. The canopy blocked the sky, leaves weaving together so tight no stars pierced through. Yet the light persisted, sourceless and grey. A shape detached itself from the trunk of a large oak. It stood tall, limbs elongated, blending with the bark. She stopped walking. The pendant burned now, a genuine pain against her sternum. I know you're there. The shape did not answer. It shifted, mimicking the sway of the branches above. Rory took a slow step back. The figure mirrored her movement, sliding across the tree trunk without friction. Her pulse hammered against her ribs. She forced her hands to unclench. Panic clouded judgment. She needed clarity. Cool heads solved problems. Panic got people killed. Evan had taught her that, though not in the way he intended. The figure stepped away from the tree. It had no face, only a smooth surface where features should rest. It wore the darkness like a cloak. The hum increased in pitch. The wildflowers around her began to close, petals snapping shut one by one. The light in the Grove dimmed, leaving only the red glow of the Heartstone and the grey mist. Rory reached for the pendant, fingers hovering over the gem. The heat seared her fingertips. She pulled back. Where is the portal? The figure tilted its head. A sound emerged, not from the shape, but from the air around it. It sounded like breathing, ragged and wet. She scanned the perimeter. The standing stones formed a circle, marking the boundary. To leave, she needed the exit point. The time distortion meant she could lose days in seconds. She checked her watch. The second hand ticked backward. She tapped the glass face. The hand spun counter-clockwise, faster and faster. Time unravels here. The figure took a step toward her. The ground did not crunch under its weight. It glided. Rory matched the movement, stepping sideways toward the eastern stone. The mist thickened, obscuring her boots. A branch snapped behind her. She whipped around. Another shape stood near the western boundary. Identical to the first. Faceless. Tall. They herded her. Rory backed toward the center. The pendant vibrated, shaking against her chest. The crimson light flared, casting long shadows that stretched toward the figures. The shadows moved independently of the light source, reaching for her ankles. She kicked at the shadow. Her boot passed through the darkness, but the cold intensified, numbing her leg up to the knee. Get back. The figures did not stop. They closed the distance. The breathing sound grew louder, surrounding her. It came from everywhere, inside her head and outside in the air. Rory gripped the chain of the pendant. The metal bit into her palm. She needed leverage. The stones held the boundary. If she could touch the oak while holding the stone, the reaction might open a path. She lunged for the nearest tree. The figure intercepted her, appearing instantly in her path. It stood inches away. The cold radiating from it froze the moisture in the air, creating a halo of frost around its form. The pendant screamed. A high-pitched whine pierced her ears. She dropped to one knee, hand clamping over her ear. The crimson light blinded her, filling her vision with red. Through the glare, she saw the surface of the figure ripple. A face formed in the smooth darkness. Eyes opened, hollow and empty. A mouth stretched wide, lacking teeth or tongue. It spoke without sound. The words formed in her mind, heavy and intrusive. You do not belong. Rory scrambled backward, heels digging into the dirt. The dead clover crumbled to dust under her boots. She pushed herself up, back hitting the rough bark of an oak. The tree vibrated against her spine. The pendant cooled instantly. The light died. Darkness swallowed the Grove. She stood alone in the black, breath coming in short gasps. The figures vanished. The breathing stopped. Only the sound of her own heartbeat remained, loud and erratic in the silence. She waited. Minutes passed. Or hours. The watch on her wrist remained still, the hands frozen. A twig snapped behind her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1245
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
31.73% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1245
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"weight"
count3
2
word"scanned"
count2
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count2
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"echoed"
count1
8
word"vibrated"
count3
9
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"weight"
2"scanned"
3"warmth"
4"pulsed"
5"pulse"
6"silence"
7"echoed"
8"vibrated"
9"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences160
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences160
filterMatches
0"know"
1"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences160
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1242
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount1242
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.81
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Park1
Grove4
Heartstone2
Hel1
London1
Golden1
Empress1
Rory10
persons
0"Carter"
1"Grove"
2"Empress"
3"Rory"
places
0"Park"
1"London"
2"Golden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences96
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like breathing, ragged and wet"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.805
wordCount1242
matches
0"not from the shape, but from the air around it"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences160
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean23.88
std18.55
cv0.777
sampleLengths
075
177
213
346
423
546
66
724
82
940
1036
1148
123
1344
148
153
1656
173
1844
1913
204
2132
2238
2326
2436
2518
264
2725
2839
2912
303
3133
325
3316
343
3536
3622
372
3828
3937
406
4132
4229
4331
4413
454
4635
477
484
4931
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences160
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs224
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences160
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1245
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.021686746987951807
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.005622489959839358
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences160
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences160
mean7.76
std4.58
cv0.589
sampleLengths
017
119
215
310
414
513
611
713
823
917
1013
112
1218
135
1421
157
163
173
1810
199
2012
2117
228
236
247
259
263
275
282
299
304
3116
3211
337
3411
357
3611
374
387
392
404
4111
429
4311
442
451
464
4711
4813
4910
43.13% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.29375
totalSentences160
uniqueOpeners47
22.52% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences148
matches
0"Only the sound of her"
ratio0.007
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences148
matches
0"She pulled her jacket tighter"
1"She touched the small crescent-shaped"
2"She turned, head snapping toward"
3"Her voice sounded flat, absorbed"
4"She unclasped the top button"
5"She spun around, hands curling"
6"She took a step forward,"
7"She lifted her foot."
8"She walked toward the center"
9"It clung to her legs,"
10"It stood tall, limbs elongated,"
11"She stopped walking."
12"I know you're there."
13"It shifted, mimicking the sway"
14"Her pulse hammered against her"
15"She forced her hands to"
16"She needed clarity."
17"It had no face, only"
18"It wore the darkness like"
19"She pulled back."
ratio0.257
7.30% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount134
totalSentences148
matches
0"The ancient oak standing stones"
1"Aurora Carter stepped between them,"
2"Richmond Park slept beyond the"
3"Night here possessed a weight,"
4"She pulled her jacket tighter"
5"Wildflowers bloomed at her feet,"
6"Blues and violets glowed with"
7"Rory scanned the clearing, her"
8"The Heartstone pendant rested against"
9"Warmth radiated from the stone,"
10"The heat pulsed in rhythm"
11"A Hel portal lay nearby."
12"The codex entries she had"
13"Silence filled the space between"
14"The stillness felt manufactured, a"
15"Rory shifted her weight, boots"
16"The sound echoed too far,"
17"She touched the small crescent-shaped"
18"The skin felt cold compared"
19"A rustle came from the"
ratio0.905
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences148
matches
0"If she stayed too long,"
1"To leave, she needed the"
2"If she could touch the"
ratio0.02
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
89.9557%