| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.97% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1360 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 30.15% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1360 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "echo" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "racing" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "comforting" | | 6 | "searing" | | 7 | "dance" | | 8 | "perfect" | | 9 | "lilt" | | 10 | "churning" | | 11 | "electric" | | 12 | "silk" | | 13 | "rhythmic" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 126 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.51% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 126 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 136 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 8 | | totalWords | 1339 | | ratio | 0.006 | | matches | | 0 | "The Grove. Midnight. Don't be late, Ror. Please." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 90.19% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 44 | | wordCount | 1254 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.2 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 6 | | Rory | 15 | | Grove | 5 | | Golden | 2 | | Empress | 2 | | Ror | 1 | | Eva | 5 | | London | 3 | | Tangling | 1 | | Welsh | 1 | | November | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Eva" |
| | places | | 0 | "Grove" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "November" | | 3 | "Richmond" | | 4 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.902 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 87 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like a mallet hitting a wet rug" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.747 | | wordCount | 1339 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the sharp crack of dry wood, but the wet, sickening pop of a breaking joint" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 136 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 52 | | mean | 25.75 | | std | 19.54 | | cv | 0.759 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 37 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 66 | | 4 | 68 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 52 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 54 | | 9 | 68 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 68 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 40 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 27 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 47 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 52 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 34 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 26 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 32 | | 33 | 40 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 47 | | 37 | 33 | | 38 | 41 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 48 | | 43 | 48 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 25 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 38 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 88.55% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | 0 | "been green" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "was sewn" | | 3 | "was gone" | | 4 | "was gone" | | 5 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 217 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.81% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 136 | | ratio | 0.044 | | matches | | 0 | "It didn't echo; it simply vanished, absorbed by the heavy, sweet-smelling air that tasted of crushed violets and stagnant water." | | 1 | "It sounded exactly like Eva—the slight Welsh lilt, the breathless way she spoke when she’d been running." | | 2 | "The Heartstone beneath her shirt didn't just pulse; it screamed." | | 3 | "The electric-blue paint wasn't polish; it was a fungal growth, fuzzy and shimmering in the unnatural light." | | 4 | "The Grove wasn't a clearing; it was a larder." | | 5 | "The silence here was different—normal." |
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| 92.40% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 116 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 5 | | adverbRatio | 0.04310344827586207 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.02586206896551724 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 136 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 136 | | mean | 9.85 | | std | 6.4 | | cv | 0.65 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 29 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 23 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 31.62% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 25 | | diversityRatio | 0.2647058823529412 | | totalSentences | 136 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 28.25% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 91.19% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 38 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "It didn't echo; it simply" | | 1 | "It was empty, a useless" | | 2 | "She stepped over a cluster" | | 3 | "They shouldn't have been blooming" | | 4 | "She reached for the pocket" | | 5 | "She moved deeper into the" | | 6 | "She checked her watch." | | 7 | "She scrambled over a mossy" | | 8 | "It was Eva’s jacket, discarded" | | 9 | "It wasn't a pebble." | | 10 | "It was a molar, clean" | | 11 | "It wasn't Eva’s." | | 12 | "It was a pale, elongated" | | 13 | "It didn't speak." | | 14 | "It lacked the breath, the" | | 15 | "It was a recording played" | | 16 | "It was skeletal, its skin" | | 17 | "It moved with a sickening," | | 18 | "She turned and bolted toward" | | 19 | "She stumbled, the delivery bag" |
| | ratio | 0.322 | |
| 27.80% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 102 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "The silver chain of the" | | 1 | "The bark felt less like" | | 2 | "The silence of the Grove" | | 3 | "It didn't echo; it simply" | | 4 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 5 | "It was empty, a useless" | | 6 | "She stepped over a cluster" | | 7 | "They shouldn't have been blooming" | | 8 | "A twig snapped." | | 9 | "She reached for the pocket" | | 10 | "A nervous habit." | | 11 | "The Heartstone began to pulse." | | 12 | "Something shifted in the periphery" | | 13 | "A tall, thin shadow stretched" | | 14 | "She moved deeper into the" | | 15 | "The geography of the park" | | 16 | "The distant hum of the" | | 17 | "Time felt thick, like wading" | | 18 | "She checked her watch." | | 19 | "The second hand twitched back" |
| | ratio | 0.864 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 42.61% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "It didn't echo; it simply vanished, absorbed by the heavy, sweet-smelling air that tasted of crushed violets and stagnant water." | | 1 | "She stepped over a cluster of wildflowers that glowed with a faint, bioluminescent pallor." | | 2 | "Inside, the air hummed with a thumb-on-a-string vibration that made her molars ache." | | 3 | "Against her collarbone, the deep crimson gem thrummed like a caged bird’s heart, radiating a heat that quickly turned from comforting to searing." | | 4 | "A tall, thin shadow stretched between two oaks, moving with a jerky, stop-motion gait that defied the fluid grace of the wind." | | 5 | "She scrambled over a mossy rise, her boots slipping on grass that felt oily." | | 6 | "It was skeletal, its skin the greyish-blue of a drowned man, draped in rags that might have once been a summer dress." | | 7 | "It moved with a sickening, zig-zagging motion, its limbs clicking in their sockets." |
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| 41.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "the thing replied, its neck elongating as it stepped out of the brush" |
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| 16.67% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "the creature whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "the tree laughed (laugh)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.267 | |