Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTZ12ZN4TKZKQFF7XQG16HP

Run Details

Duration:
1m 17s
Cost:
$0.003828
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The abandoned Tube station beneath Camden breathed with the damp sigh of old trains and the ache of a city that never slept in peace. Water threaded along the brick walls, carving thin rivers that reflected the flicker of stray neon in the grime. The Veil Market slunk through shadows, its stalls half-hidden behind rusted scaffolds and collapsed poster boards. A bone token lay on the platform like a pale coin catching a ghost’s eye, cool at the edge of a muddy bootprint. The crime scene hadn’t been planted so much as braided into the space. A trader named Aeron Latch sprawled near a stall that once sold signal-glow inks—now the ink dried in a ragged arc around him, as if someone had drawn a question in the air and never finished it. Latch wore a stare that wouldn’t quit; his left hand curled around something small and smooth, the Pad to the Veil, a pocket-size thing no one carried openly. The body wasn’t torn by blunt force; his breath hissed through a chest that looked unbroken enough to rise again, yet the skin along his ribs carried a faint, charred bloom like a dull bruise that refused to fade. Lighting came in on a slope of noise and silence. Metal shelves glittered with dust and moth-eaten banners; a stall selling “antiques of the old rites” had a sign that leaned crooked, its letters rearranged by moisture into a joke no one wanted to hear. The air tasted of iron and rain, and a clock somewhere clicked once per minute with stubborn precision, as if to remind the world that time still existed even in a market that moved with the moon. Detective Harlow Quinn moved in with the careful tread of a person who measured each step the way a marksman tests a shot. Boots met the platform with a soft click, and her eyes swept the space with the economy of someone who’d learned to read a city’s pulse. Her left wrist wore a worn leather watch, the kind that didn’t care for fashion, only for minutes that mattered. The hair around her temples showed a thread of salt and pepper, cut close, and the sharp line of her jaw looked forged from the same iron as the doors at the entrance. The brown of her eyes remained steady, like a clock’s second hand never drifted. “Block the exits,” she told the officer who’d followed, a junior with enough nerves to spill coffee on his uniform. She didn’t turn to look at him; the demand sat on the air between them and sank, quiet as a stone. Another figure drifted into the scene along the damp air—the colleague she’d asked to meet here, the person who brought a counter-reading to the room, the voice that could supply a different map of the space as easily as a different breath. Detective Mara Hale moved with a different rhythm, a slower, more deliberate cadence that suggested years spent mid-swing between rationality and wonder. She wore a jacket that was both practical and slightly too warm, a badge that rested at the belt where a blade might have hung if this were a different case. Her eyes were blue-gray, patient, and she studied the scene with a calm that reminded Quinn of a lighthouse keeper’s stubborn glow. “Clockwork scene, Quinn,” Mara said, not with sarcasm, but with the tone people used when they’d studied a room long enough to know every seam. “A man dies here, but the room isn’t an instrument built to kill. It’s something else. A trap.” Quinn crouched, fingers brushing the faint damp along Aeron Latch’s collar. The body bore no obvious wounds. The rib cage rose and fell with a stubborn rhythm; no hint of struggle suggested by the limbs. But something in the air gave it away—the sense that the space itself had altered the kind of crime you could commit here, if you could commit a crime that did not end with blood alone. “The token,” Quinn said, her voice low, almost careful as if she were speaking to a dog that could betray a secret. She angled a gloved finger toward the bone token lying near Latch’s grip, visible in the thin beam of a maintenance lamp. “This wasn’t an entry token for Latch. It’s a lure for someone else.” She paused, listening to her own words like a trap anchor catching a wave. “Or a lure for the Market.” Mara moved closer, stepping around the body with the ease of someone who’d learned to walk among danger without panic. She knelt to inspect the token, then glanced at the doorway, where a narrow passage opened into a sequence of service tunnels that drained into the city’s labyrinth. A breeze sifted through, carrying the faint iron taste of distant rain and something else—something faint and sweet, like old brass and rainwater mingling in an alley behind a clock shop. “That token isn’t entry only,” Mara said, lifting it with a gloved hand and turning it between thumb and forefinger. “There’s a sigil set into the bone that matches nothing police issue. It’s a ward, not a key.” Quinn didn’t blink. “Ward or invitation, the token still brought someone here and left the door shut behind them.” “And yet the Market lives,” Mara replied, lips curling in a half-smile that never reached her eyes. “You have to wonder who still believes the Market will stay still long enough for a body to rot in one corner and a deal to happen in another.” Quinn rose, the motion short, efficient. Her breath steamed in the cool air; the world beyond the platform flickered with the odd, unreal gold of the Market’s glow, a light the human eye didn’t quite trust. She had a memory of something she’d studied in a file drawer long ago—the old language of wards and auras that suggested the Market did not exist to make money so much as to bend time, or at least bend perception of time. She scoped the scene again, this time with the vigilance that had kept her partner alive for eighteen years of service, though the partner was lost three years ago to a case that still smelled of rain and smoke and something else—something the textbooks didn’t cover. The thought pulled a line tight across her face, then released. “The Veil Compass,” Quinn said, almost to herself. She reached for the glinting brass object in Aeron Latch’s limp palm—the artifact of a woman who’d likely sold a larger lie to that corner of the Market than any stall’s boast. The compass lay in Latch’s hand, its needle crookedly pointing toward the market’s darker throat, toward a direction that didn’t seem to exist on any map. Mara followed the line of sight. “That compass isn’t decoration. It’s energy-aligned, and it doesn’t point to safety. It points to a rift—if a rift is what you want to call it.” “Rift is what it is,” Quinn said. “I’ve seen the language before. The Market doesn’t just hold goods; it holds doors.” The claim hung in the air, heavy as damp wool. A stall behind them rattled with a breath of air, as if something had shifted, a curtain drawn aside gently to reveal a corridor that wasn’t supposed to exist to routine eyes. The Market’s sounds—low murmurs, bargaining whispers, the clack of metal on stone—seemed to recede, then reassert, as if the entire place paused to listen. Quinn scanned the shelves lining the station’s walls. Not all were stalls; some were shelves that hadn’t traded a single item in years. A moth-worn banner fluttered in a draft, the words obscured by grit and age. The Market, Mara’s words echoed in Quinn’s mind, doesn’t stay still. “Tell me what you see,” Quinn said, not impatiently but with the sort of insistence that made a dull conversation snap into focus. Mara crouched again, this time at the far end of Aeron Latch’s stall, where a cloth-wrapped bundle had been laid out in a predictable display fashion—until the cloth betrayed a different shape beneath it. She probed the bundle with a gloved finger, lifted a corner, and revealed a small, exquisitely carved box, its lid wrapped in sigils that glowed faintly under the Market’s light. “Ritual items,” Mara said, turning the box slowly so the sigils caught the light. “Not Latch’s style. This isn’t a theft; this is a ritual delivery. Someone wanted him dead but not found, or wanted us to think it was a simple accident.” Quinn stepped closer, eyes narrow. “Who would have had access to the Market to perform a ritual here, and who would benefit from Latch’s death?” Mara’s mouth pressed into a line. “Your clique theory isn’t just a hunch, Quinn. It’s a method. People who believe the Market belongs to them—people who think they own the night here. They’d have to work through a door you can’t see until it opens.” The idea of a “clique” sat uncomfortably on Quinn’s tongue—and yet something clicked behind her teeth, a recognition that Mara’s interpretation didn’t negate her own. It intersected at a point where the Market’s magic—if any magic existed—would align with human greed. The two detectives moved as a single continued motion around the crime scene, letting the space reveal its secrets with patient, incremental steps. “Look,” Quinn said, kneeling again, this time next to the body. She nodded toward a line of small, delicate marks on Aeron Latch’s wrist, marks that did not form a natural bruise but rather a careful, almost ceremonial marking, as if someone had traced a symbol onto his skin and then dismissed the need to keep tracing. The marks did not quite resemble a signature; they resembled a map. “Symbols,” Mara said, leaning in a fraction. “A map of the Market, drawn on skin. If this was a binding, the binding would be the way to pull a person through a gate—the gate you can’t see.” “The gate the token is warding,” Quinn said, then her eyes traced the token again. A glint caught in the recorder’s edge—the small camera built into the token, perhaps, or a surveillance fragment left by a Market watcher. It wasn’t clear, but the notion of a camera in a token wasn’t impossible here. The Market lived on the edge of belief and reality; it borrowed from both without apology. A soft click sounded from the tunnel behind them, as if the Market itself had breathed and moved a wall a fraction to allow someone through. Quinn and Mara shifted as one, their bodies trained to anticipate danger even in places that should have been safe to approach. From the tunnel step by step came the quiet seriousness of a new arrival—two people in coats and gloves who did not belong to the Market’s daily bustle. They wore the authority of plainclothes officers, but their postures bore the weight of something else: fear, perhaps, or knowledge. They halted a few paces away, exchanging a glance with the two detectives as if to say, We know what you’ve found, but we won’t tell you what you should do next. Quinn spoke first to the newcomers, keeping her voice steady. “Seen something you want to share or do you prefer to watch the scene breathe?” One of the newcomers—taller, with a scar along the temple—stepped forward, but paused when he saw Mara’s eyes. He glanced at Quinn, conceding a measure of respect to the partner in her, a partner who did not fear the odd coincidences that plagued this place. “Sorry,” the taller one said, his voice clipped. “We’re here because a bone token was found at a door that should have been sealed. The token’s not just a thing; it’s a kind of signature. It marks a boundary.” Quinn’s lips pressed into a line. “A boundary you’ve learned not to cross without an invitation.” “Or a debt,” Mara added, not turning away from the stall with the ritual bundle, her fingers still brushing the box’s sigils as though she could read a language by touch. The two newcomers stepped closer, and one of them produced a portable ATR device, scanning the body, the token, the box. The device pinged softly and sang a short chime that felt like a misdirection. Yet nothing about the chime sounded false—the Market’s bias toward the supernatural made technology behave in odd, unpredictable ways here. Quinn turned toward the doorway that led to the tunnels, toward the place where the Market pulsed its other life. A shiver-like sensation ran through her—the sense that a doorway existed beyond the visible, and someone, somewhere, was listening through it. “Eva Kowalski,” Mara murmured, almost to herself, as if the very name could summon an echo from a past life, or a future one. “Her work at the restricted archives of the British Museum might give us a theory about tokens, wards, and doors that aren’t doors at all.” Quinn’s eyes narrowed on Mara, then softened, the way a patrol officer might when the danger was not immediate but inevitable. “We’ll bring Eva in for a consultation,” she said, though she knew the idea would meet resistance. The Veil Market wasn’t a place for ordinary exchanges of information. The Market itself breathed again, the stagnant air rippling with a soft, otherworldly warmth that crept along the walls and sank into the boots. The tokens, the ward, the ritual box, the compass—each of them was a line in a verse written by hands that did not rest easily in the human world. “Something’s not adding up,” Quinn said, speaking to no one in particular but meaning the entire room. She straightened, hands still in their gloves, fingers stiff from cold and habit. “If this is a boundary, then the person who crossed it left a marker. If it’s a ritual, then the person who performed it left a map of a route through the Market.” Mara didn’t answer with words at first. She simply moved closer to the ritual box, caressed the sigils with a gloved finger, then looked at Quinn with a glance that spoke volumes—questions, possibilities, the quiet certainty that they stood at a hinge between two truths, one too human to fully grasp. “Let’s test the compass,” Quinn finally said, keeping her tone even. She slid the Veil Compass from Aeron Latch’s limp grip with the same care she would have used for a weapon. The brass casing wore a patina that caught the light and turned it into a soft, verdigris glow. The face etched with protective sigils glinted as she turned the needle. The needle did not point to a simple direction. It wavered between the air and the stone, as if a wind blew from a place that did not exist. Then, with a tremor like a pulse, the needle tilted toward a narrow seam in the wall—an edge where the old tunnel’s bricks looked as if they might crumble if you pressed your palm too hard against them. “Toward a rift,” Mara said, almost to the wall, as if the wall might answer back. “Or toward the story someone wants us to chase,” Quinn replied, her voice still even but carrying a sharper edge. The Market’s glow softened, and the room's shadow stretched a fraction longer. Her mind ticked through the possibilities—the token’s ward, the bone’s map, the ritual box, the compass’s needle—all moving pieces, each pointing to an intentional design rather than mere misfortune. The door to the tunnel widened, not with a mechanical hiss but with a breath of air that smelled faintly of ozone and rain. When the pair of officers stepped into that breath, the Market seemed to tilt, the distance between the stalls elongating into a corridor of possibilities. The world had suddenly grown taller. Quinn and Mara moved as a disciplined unit, stepping toward the seam the compass had indicated, a seam that looked little more than a crack in old stone, but when you pressed your palm to it and pressed hard enough to make the air shift, the seam widened in a way that suggested a hidden mouth rather than a door. “Don’t forget,” Mara reminded, a touch more softly now, “the Market’s moves align with the full moon. It shifts location. The evidence might vanish if you blink.” Quinn nodded, not a gesture of surrender but an acknowledgment of the field they walked in. “We don’t blink.” She spoke as much to herself as to the others. Then she turned to the others in the room, gesturing toward the seam with a tilt of her head. “Let’s keep the path in mind. If Aeron Latch carried a map, we’ll follow it, not pretend it isn’t there.” The seam revealed a narrow, limestone-lined corridor, humid and cooler than the platform, a tunnel that smelled of metal and damp earth rather than the Market’s brass-and-bone scent. The tunnel’s walls bore marks—scratches that resembled directories of the Market in versions only a few had learned to read. The marks suggested coordinates of a trade that crossed not only between stalls but between realities. As they moved in, the light from Quinn’s torch caught on something tucked in the corner—an old, dusty ledger bound with string. It wasn’t Aeron Latch’s; it looked older, heavier, and it carried the sort of handwriting that came from rooms where certain secrets had to be recorded in margins because the center could not hold them. The handwriting was in a language that pulled at memory, something between a ritual scrawl and a police note, something that felt like a map drawn with the mind rather than a hand. Quinn paused, her breath curling in the cold air as she read the ledger’s opening line. It wasn’t Latch’s name at all. It was a title she recognized from years ago, a name that had belonged to a circle she had once thought she’d outgrown. The Market’s players didn’t write their histories; they filed them away until the time came to use them again. “Who kept this?” Mara asked, her voice low, a thread of disbelief lacing into her words. Quinn snapped the ledger shut. The motion was swift, the effort to hide the page’s contents clear in the quick, practiced movement. “Someone who wants me to see what’s here, and wants me to pretend I don’t see it.” The two detectives moved on, their feet quiet on the damp stone. The corridor opened into a larger chamber, a space that had the feel of a theater stage—curtains pressed back, lights even and directed, a sense that the Market’s audience was waiting to see how this story would play out. In the center stood a pedestal, and on it lay a second token—the bone token from Aeron Latch’s pocket, but this one bore a different sigil, not warding, but inviting. A second compass, smaller and more ornate than the Veil Compass, rested atop a velvet pad, its needle signaling a precise, almost ceremonial direction. Beside the pedestal, a thin line of chalk traced a circle on the floor, inside which lay a circle of runes that Quinn recognized from old texts she’d studied as a student, long before the Market’s breath fell upon her life. Mara stepped closer to the pedestal and whispered, almost to herself, a line that sounded like a prayer and a warning in the same breath: “If the Market is not a market but a map, what is the toll to follow it to the last door?” Quinn’s answer came in the form of a precise, practical line: “The toll is belief. Belief that the door exists. Belief that someone will walk through it with you. Belief that your partner, or your friend, or your own life isn’t the price.” She didn’t say the words aloud, but she thought them—the memory of DS Morris, the partner who’d disappeared three years ago under circumstances that felt supernatural even to a detective who’d learned to trust the weight of the unseen. “Let me test the theory,” Quinn said, her tone a blend of command and curiosity. She stepped onto the circle, the chalk line cool beneath her shoe, careful not to disturb the sigils etched along the circle’s edge. She reached out, not with her hand but with her focus, letting the Market’s energy wash over her like a tide that’s wary of a shore it has seen before. The air shifted with a soft crackle, the same kind of quiet disruption you heard when a radio found a signal that did not belong to the frequency. The room transformed in a way that wasn’t visible so much as felt—a slight tilt in gravity, a taste of copper in the back of the mouth, a distant murmur like a crowd that had learned to whisper at the same moment. The Veil Compass in Quinn’s hand trembled once, then steadied, its needle steadier than before, pointing toward a seam in the pedestal’s base. She crouched again, inspecting the seam with a careful eye. The seam looked ordinary enough, but the way the light fell across it suggested something more—an opening or a hinge that wasn’t obvious until you knew where to look. “Quinn,” Mara began, but the words dissolved into the air as if someone had turned down a corner of the room to listen in. The two newcomers watched, uncertainty warring with the instinct to follow. Quinn spoke without turning her head. “The Market isn’t your standard crime scene. It’s an ecosystem of doors and debts. If Aeron Latch brought a map to a wall that isn’t there, someone else used it to travel.” She stood, letting the chalky circle hum with a quiet energy that suggested a portal’s memory was waking up. Mara stepped back, her eyes lingering on the new token—bone, with a sigil that echoed the warding on the first token. “Two tokens and two compasses,” she said, almost as a hypothesis rather than a conclusion. “Two people who wanted to take a path through the Market’s heart. Two debts owed by different people to the same ledger.” Quinn’s face did not relax, but a hint of curiosity softened the line of her mouth. “Or two debts owed to the same wound.” The new idea settled in the room like a stone in a pond, sending ripples through the air that tasted of rain and burnt brass. The Market’s power—whatever it truly was—seemed to respond to the truth the two detectives were beginning to uncover: the Market was not merely a place to bargain; it was a way to move through something more than space, something that could whisper to the living and break the living’s sense of time. “We’ll need a quiet approach,” Quinn said, her voice dropping to a conspiratorial thread. “If this is a gateway, it’s likely guarded by those who maintain the Market’s balance. We can’t rush to the exit and pretend the exit won’t move again.” Mara nodded, a small, deliberate motion that suggested she’d already decided what to do next. “I’ll contact the archives. Eva Kowalski’s work on ancient rites will help, and the archive’s locked doors will give us an entry into the Market’s history we can trust—if the Market agrees to be honest with us for a moment.” Quinn turned toward the tunnel’s mouth, toward the path she’d already begun to imagine, the path that might lead them to a doorway between two worlds or to the truth about Aeron Latch and the token that had doomed him to a ritual’s embrace. The Veil Compass pressed against her palm, its verdigris patina slick with moisture that clung to the skin as if the compass itself sought contact. “Let’s move,” she said, stepping away from the pedestal but not away from the Market’s breath. The corridor’s mouth seemed to widen as they approached, the air filling with a sound not quite a sound—a hush, a guarded breath held by thousands of tiny, invisible watchers. The two newcomers kept pace, their faces set into lines of careful focus, as if they could anticipate a trap that hadn’t sprung yet. The Market’s glow followed them, a pale, strange light that made the walls look as though they’d been carved from a cloud rather than stone. As they moved, Quinn’s thoughts wandered to the young colleague she’d seen earlier—a new detective who had only recently joined the squad and who’d admitted a belief in the extraordinary with the same ease as a faith in the ordinary. The boy—no, the man now—had spoken of “finding the truth by what remains when the obvious fails.” It wasn’t his exact phrasing that lingered in her mind but the idea that the Market’s truth could lie not only in what’s seen, but in what’s left behind when you’re done pretending there’s nothing more to see. The path curved, the air grew colder, and the Market’s glow sharpened into a focus, a bright line that seemed to draw a path across the floor. The Veil Compass in Quinn’s hand thrummed once, a warm, honest vibration that did not belong to a toy or to a superstition but to a tool trained by a mind that understood how to listen to the unseen without losing sight of the seen. “Careful,” Mara said, not shouting but clear enough to cut through the hush. “If we’re chasing a map drawn with a hand behind a mask, we’ll want to keep our bearings.” Quinn looked up, her brown eyes catching Mara’s. “We’ll trust the bearing that hasn’t steered us wrong yet—the truth, even when it’s ugly.” The night stretched, and with it the Market’s breath, a living, shifting thing that hummed with a language only a few could hear. They kept moving, keeping their eyes open for signs—signs that wore many faces: a token’s sigil that shifted, a sigil’s breath that moved, a compass that refused to point to safety, a ledger that whispered the market’s oldest debt. And when at last the four of them stood at a threshold neither city nor Market could claim, the compass’s needle stilled, the room grew quiet, and Aeron Latch’s tokens—two of them now—glowed faintly with a pale, otherworldly light. The scene had changed. The evidence hadn’t dissolved, but it had become a part of something larger, a thread that connected a crime scene in a mortal station to doors that lay beyond sight, to orders that spoke in runes and to a map etched on skin’s pale canvas. The mystery was no longer about who killed Aeron Latch or why; it was about what the Veil Market truly was and what price its doors demanded from those who dared follow them. Quinn stepped forward until the air between her and the threshold wavered, then she halted, listening to the Market’s quiet, listening to the city beyond. The compass in her hand gave a soft, almost grateful pulse, and for a moment she felt the old, familiar ache—the ache of a life spent chasing a truth that refused to be simple or safe. The moment stretched. Then the seam’s breath returned, the light deepened, and the Market’s heart beat once more in its hidden place, inviting, always inviting, with a rhythm the two detectives would recognize as warning, as trail, as doorway. They stood still, not surrendering, not rushing, waiting for the next breath to pass through the seam, waiting to see which door would open, and who would step through first.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags36
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Quinn finally said [finally]"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.6
leniency1
rawRatio0.028
effectiveRatio0.028
90.33% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount4652
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count2
4
adverb"very"
count1
5
adverb"suddenly"
count1
6
adverb"truly"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
1"gently"
2"slowly"
3"softly"
4"very"
5"suddenly"
6"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
55.93% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount4652
totalAiIsms41
found
0
word"flicker"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"measured"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count3
4
word"efficient"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"glinting"
count1
7
word"aligned"
count1
8
word"scanned"
count1
9
word"fluttered"
count1
10
word"echoed"
count2
11
word"predictable"
count1
12
word"traced"
count3
13
word"tracing"
count1
14
word"glint"
count1
15
word"weight"
count2
16
word"scanning"
count1
17
word"pulsed"
count1
18
word"echo"
count1
19
word"otherworldly"
count2
20
word"warmth"
count1
21
word"etched"
count3
22
word"wavered"
count2
23
word"mechanical"
count1
24
word"velvet"
count1
25
word"whisper"
count2
26
word"trembled"
count1
27
word"standard"
count1
28
word"sense of"
count1
29
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"silence"
2"measured"
3"pulse"
4"efficient"
5"flickered"
6"glinting"
7"aligned"
8"scanned"
9"fluttered"
10"echoed"
11"predictable"
12"traced"
13"tracing"
14"glint"
15"weight"
16"scanning"
17"pulsed"
18"echo"
19"otherworldly"
20"warmth"
21"etched"
22"wavered"
23"mechanical"
24"velvet"
25"whisper"
26"trembled"
27"standard"
28"sense of"
29"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences178
matches(empty)
70.63% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences178
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"know"
2"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seem to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences202
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen60
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords4591
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions51
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions151
wordCount3831
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.1
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Camden1
Veil9
Market35
Aeron11
Latch15
Pad1
Harlow1
Quinn42
Mara28
Hale1
Compass5
Morris1
persons
0"Camden"
1"Market"
2"Latch"
3"Harlow"
4"Quinn"
5"Mara"
6"Hale"
7"Compass"
8"Morris"
places
0"Veil"
1"Aeron"
globalScore0.952
windowScore0.833
47.66% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences171
glossingSentenceCount7
matches
0"quite trust"
1"not quite resemble a signature; they resembled a map"
2"felt like a misdirection"
3"something between a ritual scrawl and a police"
4"felt like a map drawn with the mind rat"
5"sounded like a prayer and a warning in the"
6"not quite a sound—a hush, a guarded breath held by thousands of tiny, invisible watchers"
7"line that seemed to draw a path across the floor"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches14
per1kWords3.049
wordCount4591
matches
0"not with sarcasm, but with the tone people used"
1"not impatiently but with the sort of insistence"
2"not immediate but inevitable"
3"not adding up,” Quinn said, speaking to no one in particular but meaning the entire room"
4"no one in particular but"
5"not with a mechanical hiss but with a breath of air"
6"not a gesture of surrender but an acknowledgment of the field they walked in"
7"not only between stalls but between realities"
8"not warding, but inviting"
9"not a market but a map, what is the toll to follow it to the last door"
10"not with her hand but with her focus, letting the Market’s energy wash over her li"
11"not only in what’s seen, but in what’s left behind"
12"not shouting but clear enough to cut through the hush"
13"neither city nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences202
matches(empty)
72.98% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs83
mean55.31
std22.43
cv0.405
sampleLengths
083
1117
282
3116
441
5117
643
771
877
979
1038
1119
1246
1379
1457
1566
1632
1721
1866
1948
2023
2164
2243
2325
2445
2564
2669
2737
2869
2948
3080
3125
3245
3339
3416
3531
3655
3741
3849
3949
4053
4163
4251
4362
4467
4516
4661
4755
4860
4927
95.41% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences178
matches
0"been planted"
1"been laid"
2"was—seemed"
3"been carved"
4"seen"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs616
matches
0"were speaking"
1"was listening"
2"was waiting"
3"was waking"
4"were beginning"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount42
semicolonCount16
flaggedSentences50
totalSentences202
ratio0.248
matches
0"A trader named Aeron Latch sprawled near a stall that once sold signal-glow inks—now the ink dried in a ragged arc around him, as if someone had drawn a question in the air and never finished it."
1"Latch wore a stare that wouldn’t quit; his left hand curled around something small and smooth, the Pad to the Veil, a pocket-size thing no one carried openly."
2"The body wasn’t torn by blunt force; his breath hissed through a chest that looked unbroken enough to rise again, yet the skin along his ribs carried a faint, charred bloom like a dull bruise that refused to fade."
3"Metal shelves glittered with dust and moth-eaten banners; a stall selling “antiques of the old rites” had a sign that leaned crooked, its letters rearranged by moisture into a joke no one wanted to hear."
4"She didn’t turn to look at him; the demand sat on the air between them and sank, quiet as a stone."
5"Another figure drifted into the scene along the damp air—the colleague she’d asked to meet here, the person who brought a counter-reading to the room, the voice that could supply a different map of the space as easily as a different breath."
6"The rib cage rose and fell with a stubborn rhythm; no hint of struggle suggested by the limbs."
7"But something in the air gave it away—the sense that the space itself had altered the kind of crime you could commit here, if you could commit a crime that did not end with blood alone."
8"A breeze sifted through, carrying the faint iron taste of distant rain and something else—something faint and sweet, like old brass and rainwater mingling in an alley behind a clock shop."
9"Her breath steamed in the cool air; the world beyond the platform flickered with the odd, unreal gold of the Market’s glow, a light the human eye didn’t quite trust."
10"She had a memory of something she’d studied in a file drawer long ago—the old language of wards and auras that suggested the Market did not exist to make money so much as to bend time, or at least bend perception of time."
11"She scoped the scene again, this time with the vigilance that had kept her partner alive for eighteen years of service, though the partner was lost three years ago to a case that still smelled of rain and smoke and something else—something the textbooks didn’t cover."
12"She reached for the glinting brass object in Aeron Latch’s limp palm—the artifact of a woman who’d likely sold a larger lie to that corner of the Market than any stall’s boast."
13"“I’ve seen the language before. The Market doesn’t just hold goods; it holds doors.”"
14"The Market’s sounds—low murmurs, bargaining whispers, the clack of metal on stone—seemed to recede, then reassert, as if the entire place paused to listen."
15"Not all were stalls; some were shelves that hadn’t traded a single item in years."
16"Mara crouched again, this time at the far end of Aeron Latch’s stall, where a cloth-wrapped bundle had been laid out in a predictable display fashion—until the cloth betrayed a different shape beneath it."
17"“Not Latch’s style. This isn’t a theft; this is a ritual delivery. Someone wanted him dead but not found, or wanted us to think it was a simple accident.”"
18"The idea of a “clique” sat uncomfortably on Quinn’s tongue—and yet something clicked behind her teeth, a recognition that Mara’s interpretation didn’t negate her own."
19"It intersected at a point where the Market’s magic—if any magic existed—would align with human greed."
20"The marks did not quite resemble a signature; they resembled a map."
21"A glint caught in the recorder’s edge—the small camera built into the token, perhaps, or a surveillance fragment left by a Market watcher."
22"The Market lived on the edge of belief and reality; it borrowed from both without apology."
23"From the tunnel step by step came the quiet seriousness of a new arrival—two people in coats and gloves who did not belong to the Market’s daily bustle."
24"One of the newcomers—taller, with a scar along the temple—stepped forward, but paused when he saw Mara’s eyes."
25"“We’re here because a bone token was found at a door that should have been sealed. The token’s not just a thing; it’s a kind of signature. It marks a boundary.”"
26"Yet nothing about the chime sounded false—the Market’s bias toward the supernatural made technology behave in odd, unpredictable ways here."
27"A shiver-like sensation ran through her—the sense that a doorway existed beyond the visible, and someone, somewhere, was listening through it."
28"The tokens, the ward, the ritual box, the compass—each of them was a line in a verse written by hands that did not rest easily in the human world."
29"She simply moved closer to the ritual box, caressed the sigils with a gloved finger, then looked at Quinn with a glance that spoke volumes—questions, possibilities, the quiet certainty that they stood at a hinge between two truths, one too human to fully grasp."
30"Then, with a tremor like a pulse, the needle tilted toward a narrow seam in the wall—an edge where the old tunnel’s bricks looked as if they might crumble if you pressed your palm too hard against them."
31"Her mind ticked through the possibilities—the token’s ward, the bone’s map, the ritual box, the compass’s needle—all moving pieces, each pointing to an intentional design rather than mere misfortune."
32"The tunnel’s walls bore marks—scratches that resembled directories of the Market in versions only a few had learned to read."
33"As they moved in, the light from Quinn’s torch caught on something tucked in the corner—an old, dusty ledger bound with string."
34"It wasn’t Aeron Latch’s; it looked older, heavier, and it carried the sort of handwriting that came from rooms where certain secrets had to be recorded in margins because the center could not hold them."
35"The Market’s players didn’t write their histories; they filed them away until the time came to use them again."
36"The corridor opened into a larger chamber, a space that had the feel of a theater stage—curtains pressed back, lights even and directed, a sense that the Market’s audience was waiting to see how this story would play out."
37"In the center stood a pedestal, and on it lay a second token—the bone token from Aeron Latch’s pocket, but this one bore a different sigil, not warding, but inviting."
38"She didn’t say the words aloud, but she thought them—the memory of DS Morris, the partner who’d disappeared three years ago under circumstances that felt supernatural even to a detective who’d learned to trust the weight of the unseen."
39"The room transformed in a way that wasn’t visible so much as felt—a slight tilt in gravity, a taste of copper in the back of the mouth, a distant murmur like a crowd that had learned to whisper at the same moment."
40"The seam looked ordinary enough, but the way the light fell across it suggested something more—an opening or a hinge that wasn’t obvious until you knew where to look."
41"Mara stepped back, her eyes lingering on the new token—bone, with a sigil that echoed the warding on the first token."
42"The Market’s power—whatever it truly was—seemed to respond to the truth the two detectives were beginning to uncover: the Market was not merely a place to bargain; it was a way to move through something more than space, something that could whisper to the living and break the living’s sense of time."
43"The corridor’s mouth seemed to widen as they approached, the air filling with a sound not quite a sound—a hush, a guarded breath held by thousands of tiny, invisible watchers."
44"As they moved, Quinn’s thoughts wandered to the young colleague she’d seen earlier—a new detective who had only recently joined the squad and who’d admitted a belief in the extraordinary with the same ease as a faith in the ordinary."
45"The boy—no, the man now—had spoken of “finding the truth by what remains when the obvious fails.” It wasn’t his exact phrasing that lingered in her mind but the idea that the Market’s truth could lie not only in what’s seen, but in what’s left behind when you’re done pretending there’s nothing more to see."
46"They kept moving, keeping their eyes open for signs—signs that wore many faces: a token’s sigil that shifted, a sigil’s breath that moved, a compass that refused to point to safety, a ledger that whispered the market’s oldest debt."
47"And when at last the four of them stood at a threshold neither city nor Market could claim, the compass’s needle stilled, the room grew quiet, and Aeron Latch’s tokens—two of them now—glowed faintly with a pale, otherworldly light."
48"The mystery was no longer about who killed Aeron Latch or why; it was about what the Veil Market truly was and what price its doors demanded from those who dared follow them."
49"The compass in her hand gave a soft, almost grateful pulse, and for a moment she felt the old, familiar ache—the ache of a life spent chasing a truth that refused to be simple or safe."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount3886
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"narrow, limestone-lined corridor,"
adverbCount136
adverbRatio0.034997426659804425
lyAdverbCount34
lyAdverbRatio0.008749356664951106
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences202
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences202
mean22.73
std11.33
cv0.499
sampleLengths
025
119
216
323
413
537
628
739
810
935
1037
1123
1226
1320
1433
1514
1620
1721
1842
1922
2031
2122
2225
2318
2411
256
2618
2736
2822
2922
3027
316
3220
3328
3431
3520
3618
373
3816
3917
4029
416
4230
4343
4446
4511
468
4732
4826
496
37.13% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats26
diversityRatio0.2722772277227723
totalSentences202
uniqueOpeners55
56.50% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences177
matches
0"Then, with a tremor like"
1"Then she turned to the"
2"Then the seam’s breath returned,"
ratio0.017
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences177
matches
0"Her left wrist wore a"
1"she told the officer who’d"
2"She didn’t turn to look"
3"She wore a jacket that"
4"Her eyes were blue-gray, patient,"
5"She angled a gloved finger"
6"She paused, listening to her"
7"She knelt to inspect the"
8"Her breath steamed in the"
9"She had a memory of"
10"She scoped the scene again,"
11"She reached for the glinting"
12"She probed the bundle with"
13"It intersected at a point"
14"She nodded toward a line"
15"It wasn’t clear, but the"
16"They wore the authority of"
17"They halted a few paces"
18"He glanced at Quinn, conceding"
19"she said, though she knew"
ratio0.215
2.37% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount162
totalSentences177
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station beneath"
1"Water threaded along the brick"
2"The Veil Market slunk through"
3"A bone token lay on"
4"The crime scene hadn’t been"
5"A trader named Aeron Latch"
6"Latch wore a stare that"
7"The body wasn’t torn by"
8"Metal shelves glittered with dust"
9"The air tasted of iron"
10"Detective Harlow Quinn moved in"
11"Boots met the platform with"
12"Her left wrist wore a"
13"The hair around her temples"
14"The brown of her eyes"
15"she told the officer who’d"
16"She didn’t turn to look"
17"Another figure drifted into the"
18"Detective Mara Hale moved with"
19"She wore a jacket that"
ratio0.915
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences177
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences125
technicalSentenceCount35
matches
0"Water threaded along the brick walls, carving thin rivers that reflected the flicker of stray neon in the grime."
1"A trader named Aeron Latch sprawled near a stall that once sold signal-glow inks—now the ink dried in a ragged arc around him, as if someone had drawn a questio…"
2"Latch wore a stare that wouldn’t quit; his left hand curled around something small and smooth, the Pad to the Veil, a pocket-size thing no one carried openly."
3"The body wasn’t torn by blunt force; his breath hissed through a chest that looked unbroken enough to rise again, yet the skin along his ribs carried a faint, c…"
4"Another figure drifted into the scene along the damp air—the colleague she’d asked to meet here, the person who brought a counter-reading to the room, the voice…"
5"She wore a jacket that was both practical and slightly too warm, a badge that rested at the belt where a blade might have hung if this were a different case."
6"Her eyes were blue-gray, patient, and she studied the scene with a calm that reminded Quinn of a lighthouse keeper’s stubborn glow."
7"She had a memory of something she’d studied in a file drawer long ago—the old language of wards and auras that suggested the Market did not exist to make money …"
8"She scoped the scene again, this time with the vigilance that had kept her partner alive for eighteen years of service, though the partner was lost three years …"
9"She reached for the glinting brass object in Aeron Latch’s limp palm—the artifact of a woman who’d likely sold a larger lie to that corner of the Market than an…"
10"The Market’s sounds—low murmurs, bargaining whispers, the clack of metal on stone—seemed to recede, then reassert, as if the entire place paused to listen."
11"She probed the bundle with a gloved finger, lifted a corner, and revealed a small, exquisitely carved box, its lid wrapped in sigils that glowed faintly under t…"
12"She nodded toward a line of small, delicate marks on Aeron Latch’s wrist, marks that did not form a natural bruise but rather a careful, almost ceremonial marki…"
13"From the tunnel step by step came the quiet seriousness of a new arrival—two people in coats and gloves who did not belong to the Market’s daily bustle."
14"They halted a few paces away, exchanging a glance with the two detectives as if to say, We know what you’ve found, but we won’t tell you what you should do next…"
15"He glanced at Quinn, conceding a measure of respect to the partner in her, a partner who did not fear the odd coincidences that plagued this place."
16"The Market itself breathed again, the stagnant air rippling with a soft, otherworldly warmth that crept along the walls and sank into the boots."
17"She simply moved closer to the ritual box, caressed the sigils with a gloved finger, then looked at Quinn with a glance that spoke volumes—questions, possibilit…"
18"Then, with a tremor like a pulse, the needle tilted toward a narrow seam in the wall—an edge where the old tunnel’s bricks looked as if they might crumble if yo…"
19"Quinn and Mara moved as a disciplined unit, stepping toward the seam the compass had indicated, a seam that looked little more than a crack in old stone, but wh…"
20"The seam revealed a narrow, limestone-lined corridor, humid and cooler than the platform, a tunnel that smelled of metal and damp earth rather than the Market’s…"
21"The marks suggested coordinates of a trade that crossed not only between stalls but between realities."
22"She didn’t say the words aloud, but she thought them—the memory of DS Morris, the partner who’d disappeared three years ago under circumstances that felt supern…"
23"The air shifted with a soft crackle, the same kind of quiet disruption you heard when a radio found a signal that did not belong to the frequency."
24"The room transformed in a way that wasn’t visible so much as felt—a slight tilt in gravity, a taste of copper in the back of the mouth, a distant murmur like a …"
25"The seam looked ordinary enough, but the way the light fell across it suggested something more—an opening or a hinge that wasn’t obvious until you knew where to…"
26"Mara stepped back, her eyes lingering on the new token—bone, with a sigil that echoed the warding on the first token."
27"The Market’s power—whatever it truly was—seemed to respond to the truth the two detectives were beginning to uncover: the Market was not merely a place to barga…"
28"Mara nodded, a small, deliberate motion that suggested she’d already decided what to do next."
29"The Veil Compass pressed against her palm, its verdigris patina slick with moisture that clung to the skin as if the compass itself sought contact."
30"As they moved, Quinn’s thoughts wandered to the young colleague she’d seen earlier—a new detective who had only recently joined the squad and who’d admitted a b…"
31"The Veil Compass in Quinn’s hand thrummed once, a warm, honest vibration that did not belong to a toy or to a superstition but to a tool trained by a mind that …"
32"They kept moving, keeping their eyes open for signs—signs that wore many faces: a token’s sigil that shifted, a sigil’s breath that moved, a compass that refuse…"
33"The evidence hadn’t dissolved, but it had become a part of something larger, a thread that connected a crime scene in a mortal station to doors that lay beyond …"
34"The compass in her hand gave a soft, almost grateful pulse, and for a moment she felt the old, familiar ache—the ache of a life spent chasing a truth that refus…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags36
uselessAdditionCount9
matches
0"Quinn said, almost to herself"
1"something clicked, a recognition that Mara’s interpretation didn’t negate her own"
2"the taller one said, his voice clipped"
3"Quinn replied, her voice still even but carrying a sharper edge"
4"Mara reminded, a touch more softly now,"
5"Quinn said, her tone a blend of command and curiosity"
6"Mara began, but the words dissolved into the air as if someone had turned down a corner of the room to listen in"
7"Quinn said, her voice dropping to a conspiratorial thread"
8"Mara said, not shouting but clear enough to cut through the hush"
83.33% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags28
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Mara added (add)"
1"Mara murmured (murmur)"
2"She spoke (speak)"
3"Mara stepped (step)"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.467
leniency0.933
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.133
69.6534%