Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTZ1BRV3GHS4EXBZ32HF6EE

Run Details

Duration:
6.1s
Cost:
$0.000236
Provider:
Clarifai

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The night air in Richmond Park tasted like damp earth and ozone, thick and heavy as she pushed through the ancient oaks. Aurora Carter, or Rory, as her friends called her, checked her watch. 2:17 AM. The neon glow of the Golden Empress’s delivery van’s headlights had faded into the blackness hours ago. She’d taken the shortcut through the park, a shortcut she’d used a hundred times before, but tonight the familiar path felt like a trap. The trees seemed to lean in, their gnarled branches scratching the sky like skeletal fingers. A low, rhythmic thrum vibrated in her chest, not the wind, not the distant traffic, something deeper, more primal. She shivered, pulling her jacket tighter, the fabric rough against her skin. The standing stones marked the boundary, ancient oaks with bark like cracked leather, their roots twisting like serpents beneath the moss. She’d seen them before, but tonight they seemed to watch her, their silhouettes sharp against the ink-black sky. A faint, sickly sweet scent, like rotting flowers, drifted on the breeze, making her nose wrinkle. She’d smelled it once before, near the old abandoned greenhouse on the outskirts of town, but that had been years ago. Now it clung to the air like a shroud. Her phone screen was a blank, dead void. No signal. Just the cold, reassuring weight of the Heartstone Pendant against her chest, hidden beneath her shirt. It had pulsed faintly when she’d first stepped into the park, a warm, insistent throb against her skin. Now it hummed, a low, constant vibration that matched the thrum in her chest. She’d taken it from the unknown benefactor, a small, crimson gem on a silver chain, given to her in a sealed envelope with no return address. It felt like a key, or a warning. She’d come here for a reason, a delivery address scribbled on a crumpled receipt: "Golden Empress, Delivery to the Grove, Midnight." But the Grove wasn’t on any map, just a whispered name among the drivers. Now, standing beneath the ancient oaks, the air thick with the scent of decay and the thrumming in her ears, she felt a cold certainty settle in her gut. She wasn’t alone. A movement, just at the edge of her vision, made her spin. Nothing. Just shadows, deeper shadows, shifting. The trees seemed to breathe, their leaves rustling in a wind that wasn’t there. She took a step back, her boot catching on a root. She stumbled, catching herself on a rough-barked oak. Her breath came in short, sharp gasps. The thrumming intensified, a drumbeat in her temples. She pressed a hand to her temple, trying to steady herself. The pendant’s glow flared, a sudden, intense crimson light that made the surrounding darkness seem even deeper. It pulsed, a heartbeat in the night, and she felt a wave of dizziness wash over her. The world tilted, the trees swaying like drunken giants. She clung to the oak, her knuckles white, the scent of decay overwhelming her senses. She was here for a delivery, a simple job. But the Grove wasn’t simple. It was ancient, hungry. And she was its prey. The thrumming in her chest wasn’t just the wind. It was the pulse of something else, something old and hungry, watching her from the shadows. The darkness wasn’t just dark. It was alive. And it was closing in.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount565
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
29.20% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount565
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"vibrated"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count2
5
word"throb"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"rhythmic"
2"vibrated"
3"weight"
4"pulsed"
5"throb"
6"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences45
matches(empty)
15.87% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences45
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences45
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords563
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions10
wordCount556
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.36
worstName"Grove"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Carter1
Rory1
Golden1
Empress1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Grove2
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Empress"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences34
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"tasted like damp earth and ozone, thick a"
1"felt like a trap"
2"felt like a key, or a warning"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount563
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs4
mean0
std0
cv0
sampleLengths
0123
185
2159
3196
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs81
matches
0"was closing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences45
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount558
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"faint, sickly sweet scent,"
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.026881720430107527
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0035842293906810036
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences45
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences45
mean12.51
std7.6
cv0.607
sampleLengths
022
112
22
317
424
515
619
712
821
918
1016
1121
129
138
142
1516
1618
1714
1826
198
2035
2129
223
2312
241
255
2614
2711
288
297
308
3111
3217
3317
349
3515
369
375
384
395
409
4116
425
433
445
45.56% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.28888888888888886
totalSentences45
uniqueOpeners13
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences42
matches
0"Just the cold, reassuring weight"
1"Just shadows, deeper shadows, shifting."
ratio0.048
29.52% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences42
matches
0"She’d taken the shortcut through"
1"She shivered, pulling her jacket"
2"She’d seen them before, but"
3"She’d smelled it once before,"
4"Her phone screen was a"
5"It had pulsed faintly when"
6"She’d taken it from the"
7"It felt like a key,"
8"She’d come here for a"
9"She wasn’t alone."
10"She took a step back,"
11"She stumbled, catching herself on"
12"Her breath came in short,"
13"She pressed a hand to"
14"It pulsed, a heartbeat in"
15"She clung to the oak,"
16"She was here for a"
17"It was ancient, hungry."
18"It was the pulse of"
19"It was alive."
ratio0.476
55.24% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount34
totalSentences42
matches
0"The night air in Richmond"
1"Aurora Carter, or Rory, as"
2"The neon glow of the"
3"She’d taken the shortcut through"
4"The trees seemed to lean"
5"A low, rhythmic thrum vibrated"
6"She shivered, pulling her jacket"
7"The standing stones marked the"
8"She’d seen them before, but"
9"A faint, sickly sweet scent,"
10"She’d smelled it once before,"
11"Her phone screen was a"
12"It had pulsed faintly when"
13"She’d taken it from the"
14"It felt like a key,"
15"She’d come here for a"
16"She wasn’t alone."
17"A movement, just at the"
18"The trees seemed to breathe,"
19"She took a step back,"
ratio0.81
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences42
matches
0"Now it clung to the"
1"Now it hummed, a low,"
2"Now, standing beneath the ancient"
ratio0.071
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The pendant’s glow flared, a sudden, intense crimson light that made the surrounding darkness seem even deeper."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.6465%