Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTZ1QFVBHJ9WT2Q860CN72W

Run Details

Duration:
57.5s
Cost:
$0.018025
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above the door buzzed with a low, insectile hum that vibrated in the teeth. Inside The Raven's Nest, the air held the scent of polished wood and stale lager. Maps from forgotten campaigns covered the walls, their edges curling in the damp London heat. Black-and-white photographs watched from the shadows, faces frozen in mid-laugh or mid-shout. Aurora sat at the far end of the bar. She traced the rim of her glass with a thumb. The crescent scar on her left wrist caught the dim light. She wore a black hoodie despite the warmth, the sleeves pulled down over her knuckles. Her straight black hair fell to her shoulders, hiding the line of her jaw. Silas moved behind the bar. His left leg dragged slightly with each step. He polished a tumbler with a rag that looked cleaner than the cloth warranted. The silver signet ring on his right hand clicked against the glass. He set a bottle of tonic in front of Aurora. She nodded. He turned away to wipe the counter. The door opened. A gust of wind from Soho street rattled the bottles on the shelf. A man stepped inside. He shook a wet umbrella. Water spotted the floorboards. He scanned the room, eyes adjusting to the gloom. His gaze landed on the figure in the hoodie. He stopped. The umbrella slipped from his fingers and clattered to the wood. Aurora stiffened. Her hand froze on the glass. Julian walked forward. His shoes squeaked on the varnish. He stopped two feet from her stool. He leaned in, squinting against the shadow of her hood. Rory? She did not turn. She looked at the reflection in the mirror behind the bottles. His face had filled out. Lines bracketed his mouth. He wore a suit that cost more than her monthly rent. You're staring. I thought you were dead. Julian reached out. His hand hovered near her shoulder. She flinched. The movement was sharp, involuntary. He pulled his hand back as if burned. He took the stool next to her. Silas appeared with a glass and poured whisky without being asked. Julian wrapped his fingers around the amber liquid. Cardiff University sent out a missing person alert three years ago. Your father hired a private investigator. My father hires people to fix problems. I was the problem. You vanished during finals. Evan told us you had a breakdown. Aurora took a sip of the tonic. The bubbles stung her throat. She set the glass down. The ice clinked. Evan lies. He sounded convinced. He said you were unstable. Dangerous. She turned on the stool. The hood fell back. Her bright blue eyes locked onto his. The colour was stark against the pale skin. Did he tell you about the bruise on his ribs? The one that matched the heel of my boot? Julian blinked. He took a swallow of the whisky. The liquid burned going down. He set the glass down hard. He said you hit him. In self-defence. I left everything. The degree. The flat. The life you all thought I wanted. You could have called. And said what? That I was sleeping on a friend's floor in London? That I was delivering noodles to pay for a lock on my door? Julian looked around the bar. He noticed the maps. The shadows. The man with the limp watching them from the end of the counter. Silas polished a spot on the wood. His hazel eyes remained fixed on the grain. You look different. People change. You look tired. Time does that. Julian spun the ring on his little finger. Gold flashed in the low light. Your mother cried at the graduation. She held your gown. She wouldn't let go of it. Aurora looked at her wrist. The scar white against the skin. She remembered the accident. A bicycle chain. A summer before the law school letters arrived. Before the fear started. She didn't need the gown. I need you to come home. Just for a weekend. See them. They think I'm a disappointment. They think you're alive. That's enough. Silas moved closer. He refilled Julian's glass. The bottle clinked against the rim. He did not speak. His presence was a wall between the past and the present. He leaned on the bar. The limp settled into his stance. The city is big, Julian. London isn't that big. I found you in twenty minutes. Luck. I went to the Golden Empress. The woman behind the counter said you live upstairs. She said you work for Yu-Fei. Aurora stood up. The stool legs scraped against the floor. The sound echoed in the quiet room. She pulled the hoodie up again. The shadows reclaimed her face. You shouldn't have come here. Why? Because you bring Cardiff with you. You smell of rain and old lectures. You smell of him. Julian stood. He towered over her. Six feet of expectation and history. Evan isn't here. He's everywhere. In the way you look at me. Like I'm broken glass. I look at you like you're my friend. Friends don't disappear for three years without a reason. I gave you a reason. You gave us silence. Aurora walked toward the back of the bar. The floorboards creaked under her boots. She stopped near the bookshelf that lined the rear wall. Her hand rested on a spine of a leather-bound book. She did not pull it. She just let her fingers rest there. Silas watched from the counter. He wiped the same spot on the wood. The rag moved in circles. Julian followed her. He stopped a pace behind. He reached into his jacket. He pulled out an envelope. White. Thick stock. He held it out. Your father sent this. Bank details. A ticket. Aurora looked at the envelope. She did not take it. Keep it. He set it on the shelf next to her hand. The paper whispered against the wood. He's sick, Rory. Liver. She closed her eyes. The blue vanished behind the lids. Her breath hitched. A small sound. Almost imperceptible. That's convenient. It's true. Convenient for him. Guilt is a good lever. He wants to say sorry. He wants to say he was right. Julian dropped his hand. The envelope stayed on the shelf. Dust motes danced in the light from the exit sign. You used to love the law. You talked about justice until my ears bled. I still do. Then fight for yourself. I am. By hiding in a bar in Soho? By surviving. Silas cleared his throat. The sound was dry. He tapped the bar with a finger. Last orders in ten. Julian looked at the bar owner. He nodded. He looked back at Aurora. The space between them felt vast. Miles of road and years of silence stretched across the gap. I'll leave the envelope. Don't. I already did. Julian turned. He walked to the door. He picked up the umbrella. He did not open it. He stepped out into the night. The green neon sign flickered. The door swung shut. The latch clicked. Aurora stood by the bookshelf. She stared at the white envelope. Silas walked over. He picked it up. He tossed it into the bin behind the counter. The paper landed on top of used napkins. He poured two fingers of whisky. He slid it toward her. She looked at the glass. She looked at the bin. You didn't have to do that. He paid for the drink. The rest was noise. He mentioned my mother. People use what they have. She picked up the glass. The liquid swirled. She drank it in one go. The heat spread through her chest. She set the glass down. Empty. Silas wiped the counter. He moved toward the secret room door hidden behind the maps. He paused. Lock up when you go upstairs. I'm not going up yet. Sit then. But don't think too hard. I can't help it. Then don't think. Just sit. Silas disappeared into the back room. The door clicked shut. Aurora remained at the bar. The green light hummed. The maps on the wall showed countries that no longer existed. She traced the scar on her wrist again. The skin felt rough under her thumb. She stared at the door where Julian had left. The wood was solid. Unmoving. She reached for the bottle of tonic. She poured more into the glass. The ice had melted. Water diluted the drink. She drank it anyway.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.49% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1423
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
61.35% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1423
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"vibrated"
count1
1
word"traced"
count2
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"gloom"
count1
5
word"stark"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"silence"
count2
8
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"vibrated"
1"traced"
2"warmth"
3"scanned"
4"gloom"
5"stark"
6"echoed"
7"silence"
8"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences257
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount6
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences257
filterMatches
0"look"
1"think"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences257
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen18
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1416
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions64
wordCount1416
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.99
worstName"Julian"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Julian"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
London3
Aurora11
Soho2
University1
Julian14
Golden1
Empress1
Yu-Fei1
Cardiff2
Rory2
Silas9
You12
Evan3
persons
0"Aurora"
1"University"
2"Julian"
3"Rory"
4"Silas"
5"You"
6"Evan"
places
0"Raven"
1"London"
2"Soho"
3"Golden"
4"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences105
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1416
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences257
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs96
mean14.75
std15.72
cv1.066
sampleLengths
060
159
249
39
460
58
626
71
835
92
105
1150
1217
1311
1411
1520
162
179
1824
1919
2020
217
2214
234
2426
2539
263
272
283
293
3014
3116
3230
335
3412
355
366
3739
385
3910
401
4121
4228
435
441
4517
4612
473
4813
498
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences257
matches
0"being asked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs274
matches
0"was sleeping"
1"was delivering"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences257
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1423
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.016865776528460996
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0014054813773717498
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences257
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences257
mean5.51
std3.03
cv0.549
sampleLengths
018
115
215
312
49
510
611
715
814
95
108
1114
1212
1310
142
157
163
1713
184
195
204
219
229
232
2411
252
266
273
286
297
3010
311
324
3311
345
354
3611
372
385
393
406
412
425
438
447
4511
468
4711
486
497
36.77% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats34
diversityRatio0.23346303501945526
totalSentences257
uniqueOpeners60
45.87% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences218
matches
0"Just for a weekend."
1"Then fight for yourself."
2"Then don't think."
ratio0.014
14.50% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount112
totalSentences218
matches
0"She traced the rim of"
1"She wore a black hoodie"
2"Her straight black hair fell"
3"His left leg dragged slightly"
4"He polished a tumbler with"
5"He set a bottle of"
6"He turned away to wipe"
7"He shook a wet umbrella."
8"He scanned the room, eyes"
9"His gaze landed on the"
10"Her hand froze on the"
11"His shoes squeaked on the"
12"He stopped two feet from"
13"He leaned in, squinting against"
14"She did not turn."
15"She looked at the reflection"
16"His face had filled out."
17"He wore a suit that"
18"I thought you were dead."
19"His hand hovered near her"
ratio0.514
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount201
totalSentences218
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"Maps from forgotten campaigns covered"
2"Aurora sat at the far"
3"She traced the rim of"
4"The crescent scar on her"
5"She wore a black hoodie"
6"Her straight black hair fell"
7"Silas moved behind the bar."
8"His left leg dragged slightly"
9"He polished a tumbler with"
10"The silver signet ring on"
11"He set a bottle of"
12"He turned away to wipe"
13"The door opened."
14"A gust of wind from"
15"A man stepped inside."
16"He shook a wet umbrella."
17"Water spotted the floorboards."
18"He scanned the room, eyes"
19"His gaze landed on the"
ratio0.922
45.87% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences218
matches
0"Before the fear started."
1"Because you bring Cardiff with"
ratio0.009
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The green neon sign above the door buzzed with a low, insectile hum that vibrated in the teeth."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.6948%