Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTZ1Z04KCPJGTSGC57XTSD3

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Three deadbolts. She'd counted them every night for six months, the metallic clicks a ritual that kept the panic at bay. Aurora Carter pressed her eye to the peephole and her stomach dropped. Lucien Moreau stood in the corridor, one hand resting on his ivory-handled cane, the other holding a manila folder. He looked like he'd stepped out of a magazine spread, all tailored charcoal and polished leather, while she stood there in an oversized t-shirt with her hair in a tangled mess. "Go away." "I can see your shadow under the door, Rory." Her hand froze on the chain lock. No one called her Rory anymore. Not since Eva had started introducing her as "Laila" to anyone who asked, a small kindness that let her pretend the last three years hadn't happened. "What do you want, Lucien?" "A conversation. Five minutes." "We had our conversation. Three months ago. In Paris." She leaned her forehead against the cool wood of the door. "It ended with you walking out." "It ended with you lying to me." The accusation stung more than it should have. She'd had plenty of time to rationalise that decision, to convince herself that keeping Evan's existence hidden had been protection, not betrayal. Lucien didn't do well with either of those things when they came wrapped in deception. "Five minutes," she repeated, more to herself than to him. Her fingers worked the chain free, then the second lock, then the third. The door swung open. He was taller than she remembered. Or maybe she'd just forgotten the way he seemed to fill a room without trying. His heterochromatic eyes, one amber and one black, swept over her in a single assessing glance that made her feel far too exposed. "May I?" She stepped aside, acutely aware of the dishes in the sink, the research scattered across every surface, the tabby cat winding between her ankles with an inquisitive chirp. Ptolemy had never met Lucien, but the traitorous feline immediately switched allegiance, trotting over to sniff at the intruder's polished shoes. "Cats like you." "Most things do." He crouched, offering his hand for Ptolemy to inspect. The cat butted his palm enthusiastically. "I have that effect." "Demons usually do, I've heard." His gaze flicked up to her face. "Half-demon. Let's be precise." The word hung between them. She hadn't said it before Paris. Hadn't needed to. He'd told her on their third meeting, over coffee in a café in Camden, the admission careful and measured like everything else about him. She'd taken it in stride, or thought she had. Now it felt like another wall she hadn't known how to climb. "You're letting the cold in." She shut the door behind him, the locks sliding back into place out of habit. When she turned, he was examining the clutter on her coffee table, the mess of newspapers and annotated maps and half-empty mugs. His expression revealed nothing. "You've been busy." "I work for a Chinese restaurateur who thinks I need constant supervision and a friend who researches the occult for fun. Busy is one word for it." "Productive might be another." He picked up a sheaf of papers, his brow furrowing. "These are Yu-Fei's shipping manifests." "He doesn't know I took them." "Of course he doesn't." The papers returned to the pile with a soft rustle. "You always were too clever for your own good." "Coming from you, that's rich." His mouth curved, but the smile didn't reach his eyes. "Touché." The silence stretched. Aurora folded her arms over her chest, hyperaware of the space between them, the worn carpet beneath her bare feet, the lingering smell of curry wafting up through the floorboards from the restaurant below. She'd spent weeks memorising the exact shade of his suits, the precise angle at which he held his cane, the way his voice dropped when he said her name. Now she couldn't decide whether to scream at him or throw herself into his arms. "Five minutes, Lucien. Clock's ticking." He set the manila folder on the edge of her cluttered desk, his movements deliberate and unhurried. "Evan's been released." The world narrowed to a single point. "What?" "Early parole. Good behaviour, apparently. Someone on the board owed someone a favour, and suddenly your charming ex-boyfriend is a free man." His jaw tightened. "I thought you should know." "How long?" "Three days." Three days. Evan had been in prison for eighteen months, thanks to evidence Lucien had helped her gather. Eighteen months of court dates and victim statements and lawyers explaining that justice moved slowly but it moved. She'd thought she'd have more time. She'd thought she'd have years. "Rory." "Don't." She pressed her palms against her eyes, forcing breath through constricted lungs. "Don't do that thing where you say my name like you're trying to calm a spooked horse." "I was going to suggest you sit down." "I don't want to sit down." "Then perhaps you'd like to explain why your friend Eva is currently meeting with a known associate of Evan's family in a café in Whitechapel." Her hands dropped. "What?" "The man's name is Marcus Webb. He's been on Evan's father's payroll for a decade, ever since he finished a stretch for aggravated assault." Lucien's voice had gone flat, professional, the tone he used when delivering information he knew would hurt. "I thought Eva was helping you stay hidden." "She is. She has been." Aurora grabbed her phone from the counter, her fingers shaking as she scrolled to Eva's contact. No answer. She tried again. Nothing. "Eva wouldn't—she knows what he did. She knows everything." "Does she?" The question landed like a punch. She met his gaze, searching for mockery, for the satisfaction of being proven right about her poor judgment. She found neither. "Eva's the one who got me out. She's the one who found me a doctor, a therapist, a flat. She introduced me to Yu-Fei, helped me get the job." The words tumbled out too fast, defensive. "She's been nothing but—" "Loyal. Devoted. Protective." He smoothed a wrinkle from his sleeve. "I'm not accusing her of betrayal, Rory. I'm suggesting that someone with Evan's resources might find leverage against even the most loyal of friends." The cat jumped onto the sofa and settled into the warm spot where Aurora had been sitting before the knock. Lucky creature. No complicated history, no dangerous exes, just sunbeams and someone else's problems. "What do you want, Lucien? Really." "I want to help." "Why?" He studied her face, his mismatched eyes unreadable. "Does there need to be a reason?" "There always is with you. You're an information broker. You don't give away anything for free." "Perhaps I've changed." "People like you don't change." "People like me." A pause. "You mean half-demons." She flinched. "I meant fixers. Brokers. People who traffic in secrets." "Ah." Something shifted behind his expression, a flicker of pain quickly suppressed. "My mistake." "Lucien—" "Three months ago, you looked me in the eye and told me you had no one else. No family, no connections, no secrets you hadn't already shared. Then I find out your ex-boyfriend's father is a prominent Belfast solicitor with connections to half the criminal organisations in the UK. I find out you've been hiding a real identity, a history, a whole life I knew nothing about." His voice remained steady, but his knuckles had gone white around the head of his cane. "So I apologise if I seem reluctant to accept your assessment of people like me." "I didn't have a choice." "There's always a choice." "Not when staying meant he would have killed me." The words escaped before she could stop them, raw and honest in a way she hadn't allowed herself to be since Paris. "Not when leaving meant disappearing so completely that even the people who loved me couldn't find me. I didn't lie to you, Lucien. I just... didn't tell you everything." "An interesting distinction." "I know." Her voice cracked. "I'm sorry." He exhaled slowly, some of the tension draining from his shoulders. "I know you are. That's rather the problem." A knock at the door shattered the moment. Three sharp raps, the specific pattern Eva always used. Aurora's hand flew to the locks before she caught herself, glancing at Lucien. He shook his head once, a silent warning, and shifted his weight onto his good leg. The cane's tip caught the light, and she remembered too late that it concealed a thin blade designed for exactly this kind of situation. The knock came again, more insistent this time. "Aurora? It's Eva. Open up, love. We need to talk."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences72
tagDensity0.222
leniency0.444
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.28% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1448
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"quickly"
count1
4
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"slowly"
2"really"
3"quickly"
4"completely"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
65.47% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1448
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"measured"
count1
3
word"furrowing"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"unreadable"
count1
6
word"flicker"
count1
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"shattered"
count1
9
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"flicked"
2"measured"
3"furrowing"
4"silence"
5"unreadable"
6"flicker"
7"tension"
8"shattered"
9"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences76
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences131
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen83
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1441
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount884
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.68
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Moreau1
Rory1
Eva3
Evan2
Lucien6
Ptolemy2
Paris2
Camden1
Three3
Aurora5
persons
0"Carter"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
4"Evan"
5"Lucien"
6"Ptolemy"
7"Aurora"
places
0"Paris"
1"Camden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
63.79% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like he'd stepped out of a magazin"
1"felt like another wall she hadn't known"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1441
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences131
matches
0"rationalise that decision"
1"explaining that justice"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs71
mean20.3
std20.17
cv0.994
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439
55
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726
87
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1027
1144
122
1349
143
1522
165
1711
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2041
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2227
2319
246
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265
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388
396
4025
414
4249
4336
442
4527
4640
4734
4834
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"being proven"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs153
matches
0"was examining"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences131
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount886
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.03611738148984198
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.007900677200902935
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences131
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences131
mean11
std10.79
cv0.981
sampleLengths
02
119
212
319
431
52
69
77
86
926
105
114
1220
136
147
158
1622
1715
1810
1913
204
216
2215
2323
242
2528
2621
273
2812
296
304
315
327
334
345
356
363
3724
389
3912
405
4115
4222
434
443
4527
4614
475
486
4914
59.80% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.40458015267175573
totalSentences131
uniqueOpeners53
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
17.10% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences69
matches
0"She'd counted them every night"
1"He looked like he'd stepped"
2"Her hand froze on the"
3"She leaned her forehead against"
4"She'd had plenty of time"
5"she repeated, more to herself"
6"Her fingers worked the chain"
7"He was taller than she"
8"His heterochromatic eyes, one amber"
9"She stepped aside, acutely aware"
10"He crouched, offering his hand"
11"His gaze flicked up to"
12"She hadn't said it before"
13"He'd told her on their"
14"She'd taken it in stride,"
15"She shut the door behind"
16"His expression revealed nothing."
17"He picked up a sheaf"
18"His mouth curved, but the"
19"She'd spent weeks memorising the"
ratio0.507
32.46% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences69
matches
0"She'd counted them every night"
1"Aurora Carter pressed her eye"
2"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
3"He looked like he'd stepped"
4"Her hand froze on the"
5"She leaned her forehead against"
6"The accusation stung more than"
7"She'd had plenty of time"
8"Lucien didn't do well with"
9"she repeated, more to herself"
10"Her fingers worked the chain"
11"The door swung open."
12"He was taller than she"
13"His heterochromatic eyes, one amber"
14"She stepped aside, acutely aware"
15"Ptolemy had never met Lucien,"
16"He crouched, offering his hand"
17"The cat butted his palm"
18"His gaze flicked up to"
19"The word hung between them."
ratio0.855
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences69
matches
0"Now it felt like another"
1"Now she couldn't decide whether"
ratio0.029
93.60% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She'd counted them every night for six months, the metallic clicks a ritual that kept the panic at bay."
1"His heterochromatic eyes, one amber and one black, swept over her in a single assessing glance that made her feel far too exposed."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"she repeated, more to herself than to him"
1"He picked up, his brow furrowing"
2"Aurora grabbed, her fingers shaking as she scrolled to Eva's contact"
3"The words tumbled, defensive"
4"Something shifted, a flicker of pain quickly suppressed"
5"His voice remained, but his knuckles had gone white around the head of his cane"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Eva had (have)"
1"she repeated (repeat)"
2"She pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences72
tagDensity0.042
leniency0.083
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.083
83.0501%