| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.71% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1329 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "perfectly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 36.04% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1329 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "quickened" | | 3 | "scanning" | | 4 | "flicker" | | 5 | "shimmered" | | 6 | "rhythmic" | | 7 | "vibrated" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "echoed" | | 11 | "flickered" | | 12 | "gloom" | | 13 | "pounding" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 178 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 178 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 180 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 13 | | markdownWords | 54 | | totalWords | 1323 | | ratio | 0.041 | | matches | | 0 | "An hour, Eva said. In and out. Just check the stones." | | 1 | "Just a rabbit. A fox." | | 2 | "thump-thump-thump" | | 3 | "shape" | | 4 | "…late…" | | 5 | "…little one is late…" | | 6 | "more there" | | 7 | "…key…" | | 8 | "…she carries the key…" | | 9 | "Thump-thump-THUMP." | | 10 | "Now." | | 11 | "The Grove exists between. Time here is a suggestion. An hour can be a minute. A minute can be a day." | | 12 | "rule" |
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| 75.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 21 | | wordCount | 1312 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.46 | | worstName | "Heartstone" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 5 | | Heartstone | 6 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Rory | 4 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Fae" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Richmond" | | 4 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 97.92% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 96 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like stepping onto a sleeping anim" | | 1 | "smelled like a forgotten funeral wreath" |
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| 48.83% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.512 | | wordCount | 1323 | | matches | | 0 | "Not words, but the *shape* of words, hissed from multiple directions at onc" | | 1 | "not to grab, but to herd" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 180 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 65 | | mean | 20.35 | | std | 16.13 | | cv | 0.793 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 60 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 49 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 50 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 45 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 29 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 54 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 50 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 28 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 41 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 35 | | 31 | 45 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 33 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 39 | | 41 | 47 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 39 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 29 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 27 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 178 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 211 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 180 | | ratio | 0.011 | | matches | | 0 | "The thing in the haze raised a hand—a cluster of twig-like fingers—and pointed directly at her chest." | | 1 | "For a fraction of a second, every single head—the thin one’s, the watchers’—snapped to follow the moving light." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1318 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "massive, moss-covered root," |
| | adverbCount | 43 | | adverbRatio | 0.032625189681335355 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00834597875569044 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 180 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 180 | | mean | 7.35 | | std | 5.4 | | cv | 0.735 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 25 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 45.93% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 19 | | diversityRatio | 0.3388888888888889 | | totalSentences | 180 | | uniqueOpeners | 61 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 146 | | matches | | 0 | "Just check the stones.*" | | 1 | "Just confirm the portal site." | | 2 | "Just shifting shadows beneath a" | | 3 | "*Just a rabbit." | | 4 | "Then, a new sound." | | 5 | "Just a smooth, dark hollow" | | 6 | "Just her own ragged breathing" |
| | ratio | 0.048 | |
| 77.53% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 52 | | totalSentences | 146 | | matches | | 0 | "She didn’t need the map" | | 1 | "It wasn’t colder, but thicker," | | 2 | "It smelled like a forgotten" | | 3 | "She pushed forward, her trainers" | | 4 | "She stood at the edge" | | 5 | "She froze, head turning slowly." | | 6 | "She took a careful step" | | 7 | "Her hand went to her" | | 8 | "It felt absurdly small." | | 9 | "she whispered, the name swallowed" | | 10 | "It wasn’t Eva." | | 11 | "She moved toward the central" | | 12 | "They didn’t stand perfectly still" | | 13 | "She reached the stones." | | 14 | "They formed a rough circle," | | 15 | "It vibrated up through the" | | 16 | "It came from everywhere and" | | 17 | "It was the sound of" | | 18 | "It echoed inside her skull," | | 19 | "Her breath hitched." |
| | ratio | 0.356 | |
| 66.16% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 115 | | totalSentences | 146 | | matches | | 0 | "The dirt path gave way" | | 1 | "Rory’s bike leaned against the" | | 2 | "She didn’t need the map" | | 3 | "The air itself had shifted." | | 4 | "It wasn’t colder, but thicker," | | 5 | "It smelled like a forgotten" | | 6 | "She pushed forward, her trainers" | | 7 | "*An hour, Eva said." | | 8 | "The standing stones appeared between" | | 9 | "The Heartstone pendant against her" | | 10 | "A compass pointing to trouble." | | 11 | "She stood at the edge" | | 12 | "The Fae Grove." | | 13 | "Wildflowers she couldn’t name bloomed" | | 14 | "The stars here were closer," | | 15 | "The light seemed to come" | | 16 | "A twig snapped to her" | | 17 | "She froze, head turning slowly." | | 18 | "She took a careful step" | | 19 | "The floral scent intensified, now" |
| | ratio | 0.788 | |
| 34.25% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 146 | | matches | | 0 | "To corral her back toward" |
| | ratio | 0.007 | |
| 88.95% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn’t colder, but thicker, clinging to her skin with a faint, floral sweetness that carried no joy." | | 1 | "The Heartstone pendant against her chest radiated a dull, steady warmth that had nothing to do with her own blood." | | 2 | "Wildflowers she couldn’t name bloomed in impossible, riotous color under a sky that didn’t match the one she’d left behind in Richmond Park." | | 3 | "They formed a rough circle, the space inside filled with a single, massive patch of bluebells that glowed with their own internal light." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, the name swallowed by the dense air" | | 1 | "she said, her own voice tight and human in the unnatural quiet" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |