Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTZ2D2QQKNRR07BMXEMVTAK

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Duration:
20.7s
Cost:
$0.002877
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter's footsteps echoed too loudly in the empty street. The sound bounced off the darkened shopfronts, coming back to her ears as if someone followed just out of sight. She pulled her jacket tighter around her shoulders, the night air carrying an unusual chill for late spring. At this hour, even London's ever-present traffic had dwindled to the occasional distant hum. The entrance to Richmond Park loomed ahead, its ornate gates locked for the night as always. Rory paused, checking her phone. No signal. Not surprising this deep in the residential area bordering the park. She slipped through the gap between the gate and the stone pillar, a shortcut she'd discovered months ago. The path ahead wound into darkness, tree branches creating a skeletal canopy against the moonlight. Aurora touched the Heartstone pendant beneath her shirt, its familiar warmth a small comfort against her skin. The reason for her nighttime visit felt foolish now. A dream – vivid and insistent – had showed her standing stones in a grove, flames dancing in a circle. The pendant had burned against her chest that morning, pulsing with unusual intensity. When Eva had mentioned the strange clearing she'd once stumbled upon in Richmond Park, something had clicked into place. A twig snapped somewhere to her left. Aurora froze, straining her ears. Nothing but the rustle of leaves in a breeze that had sprung up from nowhere. She resumed walking, her pace quickening. The park felt different tonight. The usual sounds of nocturnal wildlife were absent. No owls called, no foxes moved through the undergrowth. Even the wind seemed to whisper in patterns that almost formed words, then dissipated before she could grasp them. The pendant grew warmer against her skin. Aurora pulled it out, watching the deep crimson stone catch the moonlight. Its faint inner glow brightened, pulsing in a steady rhythm that seemed to match her heartbeat. Another sound – this time behind her. The distinct crunch of gravel underfoot. Aurora spun around, her hand automatically going to the pepper spray in her pocket. Empty path. Shadows stretched and twisted between the trees, forming shapes that disappeared when she focused on them. "Hello?" Her voice sounded thin in the darkness. No response. She turned back toward the path, her breath coming faster now. The standing stones were supposed to be just beyond this next cluster of trees. Eva's directions had been vague – "follow the main path until you see the old oak, then head left into the woods for about five minutes." The oak tree loomed ahead, its branches gnarled with age. Aurora left the path, pushing through low-hanging branches and thick undergrowth. The air grew heavier, fragrant with wildflowers that shouldn't be blooming at this time of year. Then she saw it. The clearing opened up suddenly, bathed in moonlight. Ancient standing stones – ocks transformed by time into something resembling stone figures – marked a perfect circle. At their center grew wildflowers of every color, their petals shimmering with an unnatural light. The Heartstone Pendant burned against Aurora's palm now, its crimson glow lighting up her fingers. She stepped into the clearing, a sense of rightness warring with the fear that had been building since she entered the park. This was the place from her dream. Exactly as she'd seen it. Aurora approached the nearest standing stone, her fingers tracing weathered grooves that seemed almost like runes. The air hummed with energy, raising the hairs on her arms. Something moved at the edge of her vision. Aurora whirled around, her heart pounding. Nothing. Just the shadows between the trees playing tricks on her mind. The temperature dropped abruptly. Aurora's breath fogged in front of her. The wildflowers at her feet trembled though no wind blew. A voice whispered directly into her ear, cold as grave dust. "You shouldn't have come." Aurora stumbled backward, her hand flying to her mouth. The pendant blazed hot against her skin. She spun around, searching the empty clearing. "Who's there?" Her voice trembled despite her efforts to steady it. The shadows between the standing stones deepened, coalescing into a figure tall and thin, its features obscured by darkness. Aurora's blood ran cold as she realized it hadn't been there a moment ago. The figure took a step forward, its movement impossibly fluid. Aurora's instinct screamed at her to run, but her feet remained rooted to the spot. The Heartstone Pendant pulsed urgently, its crimson light casting a small circle of illumination around her. "We've been waiting for you," the figure whispered, its voice seeming to come from everywhere and nowhere at once. "The blood of the traveler flows in your veins." Aurora finally found her voice. "What do you want?" The figure tilted its head, a gesture that seemed almost curious. "To cross over. The veil grows thin here, and you carry the key." Its gaze fixed on the pendant glowing against Aurora's chest. The standing stones began to emit a low hum, vibrating in time with the pendant's pulses. The wildflowers bent toward the figure, their colors deepening to impossible hues. Aurora's mind raced, connecting fragments of information she'd gathered over the past months – the strange dreams, the pendant's behavior, Eva's stories about the grove. This wasn't just a clearing. It was a place between worlds, and she had walked right into it. "I don't understand," she said, taking a cautious step backward. The figure extended a shadowy hand. "You will. The blood remembers what the mind forgets." As the figure moved forward, the moonlight caught its features for the first time. Aurora's breath caught in her throat. The face was unnervingly familiar – a distorted version of her own, with eyes that held no pupils, only endless darkness. The standing stones hummed louder, the air crackling with energy. Aurora clutched the pendant, its heat searing her palm. The grove wasn't just a place between worlds – it was a gateway. And she had just opened it.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.6
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.94% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount989
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount989
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"footsteps"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count1
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"loomed"
count2
4
word"familiar"
count2
5
word"warmth"
count1
6
word"dancing"
count1
7
word"intensity"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"perfect"
count1
10
word"sense of"
count1
11
word"tracing"
count1
12
word"pounding"
count1
13
word"trembled"
count2
14
word"grave"
count1
15
word"pulsed"
count1
16
word"raced"
count1
17
word"searing"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"echoed"
2"chill"
3"loomed"
4"familiar"
5"warmth"
6"dancing"
7"intensity"
8"whisper"
9"perfect"
10"sense of"
11"tracing"
12"pounding"
13"trembled"
14"grave"
15"pulsed"
16"raced"
17"searing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences84
matches(empty)
91.84% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences84
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences88
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords996
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount926
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.94
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
London1
Richmond2
Park2
Heartstone3
Eva3
Pendant2
Aurora18
persons
0"Carter"
1"Eva"
2"Pendant"
3"Aurora"
places
0"London"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
globalScore0.528
windowScore0.5
80.56% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"rhythm that seemed to match her heartbeat"
1"seemed almost curious"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount996
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean30.18
std15.54
cv0.515
sampleLengths
062
134
250
361
433
541
635
745
810
951
1037
114
1241
1337
1412
1527
1626
1721
1811
194
2023
2111
2233
2341
2428
259
2634
2728
2843
2910
3015
3141
3238
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"were supposed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs151
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences88
ratio0.08
matches
0"A dream – vivid and insistent – had showed her standing stones in a grove, flames dancing in a circle."
1"Another sound – this time behind her."
2"Eva's directions had been vague – \"follow the main path until you see the old oak, then head left into the woods for about five minutes.\""
3"Ancient standing stones – ocks transformed by time into something resembling stone figures – marked a perfect circle."
4"Aurora's mind raced, connecting fragments of information she'd gathered over the past months – the strange dreams, the pendant's behavior, Eva's stories about the grove."
5"The face was unnervingly familiar – a distorted version of her own, with eyes that held no pupils, only endless darkness."
6"The grove wasn't just a place between worlds – it was a gateway."
97.87% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount919
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.042437431991294884
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.011969532100108813
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences88
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences88
mean11.32
std5.62
cv0.496
sampleLengths
010
120
218
314
416
55
62
711
818
915
1017
119
1220
1313
1419
157
165
1715
186
195
208
219
2219
237
2412
2516
267
276
2814
292
3016
318
322
3311
3414
3526
3610
3711
3816
394
408
4118
4215
4315
4422
457
465
4716
4811
498
57.20% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.36363636363636365
totalSentences88
uniqueOpeners32
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences80
matches
0"Even the wind seemed to"
1"Then she saw it."
2"Exactly as she'd seen it."
3"Just the shadows between the"
ratio0.05
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences80
matches
0"She pulled her jacket tighter"
1"She slipped through the gap"
2"She resumed walking, her pace"
3"Its faint inner glow brightened,"
4"Her voice sounded thin in"
5"She turned back toward the"
6"She stepped into the clearing,"
7"She spun around, searching the"
8"Her voice trembled despite her"
9"Its gaze fixed on the"
10"It was a place between"
11"she said, taking a cautious"
ratio0.15
35.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences80
matches
0"Aurora Carter's footsteps echoed too"
1"The sound bounced off the"
2"She pulled her jacket tighter"
3"The entrance to Richmond Park"
4"Rory paused, checking her phone."
5"She slipped through the gap"
6"The path ahead wound into"
7"Aurora touched the Heartstone pendant"
8"The reason for her nighttime"
9"A dream – vivid and"
10"The pendant had burned against"
11"A twig snapped somewhere to"
12"Aurora froze, straining her ears."
13"Nothing but the rustle of"
14"She resumed walking, her pace"
15"The park felt different tonight."
16"The usual sounds of nocturnal"
17"The pendant grew warmer against"
18"Aurora pulled it out, watching"
19"Its faint inner glow brightened,"
ratio0.85
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
ratio0
80.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Its faint inner glow brightened, pulsing in a steady rhythm that seemed to match her heartbeat."
1"The air grew heavier, fragrant with wildflowers that shouldn't be blooming at this time of year."
2"Aurora approached the nearest standing stone, her fingers tracing weathered grooves that seemed almost like runes."
3"The face was unnervingly familiar – a distorted version of her own, with eyes that held no pupils, only endless darkness."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
50.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"the figure whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.2
81.2715%