Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTZ2V7K0BXB10CWHP8AD9RD

Run Details

Duration:
22.5s
Cost:
$0.004637
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the pavement, turning the London streets into a slick black mirror that shattered under every frantic footstep. Harlow Quinn pressed her shoulder against the damp brickwork of a shuttered newsagent, chest heaving as she forced air into lungs burned by the cold. Her salt-and-pepper hair clung to her skull, plastered down by the deluge. She wiped a gloved hand across her eyes, blinking away the sting of runoff water. Ahead, a figure darted across the intersection, sneakers skidding on the wet asphalt before finding purchase. The suspect vanished into the mouth of an alleyway off Camden High Street, a gap so narrow it seemed designed to swallow light whole. Quinn pushed off the wall. Her worn leather watch dug into her wrist as she checked the time. Three minutes since the tail began. Too long. She sprinted, boots splashing through puddles that reflected the erratic glow of streetlamps. The alley smelled of rotting garbage and stale urine, a thick miasma that coats the back of the throat. She didn't slow down. She cornered hard, left shoulder clipping the rough brick. The suspect stood ten yards away, back pressed against a rusted fire escape ladder. No way out. Unless they planned to climb. "End of the line," Quinn shouted, voice cutting through the drumming rain. She drew her service weapon, the metal cold and familiar in her grip. "Hands where I can see them." The figure didn't raise their hands. Instead, they reached into a sodden jacket and pulled out a small, white object. Bone. Carved into the shape of a token. Quinn narrowed her eyes. "Drop it. Now." The suspect smiled, a jagged expression that didn't reach their eyes. Then they dropped to their knees and shoved the bone token into a crack between two paving stones near a storm drain. The ground didn't just shake; it groaned. A low-frequency vibration rattled Quinn's teeth. The rusted grate of the storm drain lifted, not by wind or water pressure, but as if an invisible hand had grabbed the iron bars. Blue light spilled up from the darkness below, illuminating the falling rain in sharp, unnatural streaks. The air pressure dropped, popping Quinn's ears. The smell of garbage vanished, replaced by the scent of ozone, dried herbs, and something coppery, like old blood. The suspect leaped. They didn't climb down; they jumped straight into the glowing abyss. Quinn rushed forward, peering over the edge. A spiral staircase carved from what looked like obsidian wound down into the depths. Voices drifted up, a cacophony of languages she didn't recognize mixed with the haggling tones of street vendors. This wasn't a sewer. She hesitated. Her training screamed at her to call for backup, to secure the perimeter, to wait for daylight and a tactical team. DS Morris would have told her to hold position. Morris wasn't here. Morris had vanished three years ago chasing whispers of things that didn't exist, leaving only a file full of redacted reports and a hole in her life that never filled. The blue light flickered, casting long, dancing shadows against the wet alley walls. If she lost the suspect now, the trail went cold. Forever. Quinn holstered her weapon. She adjusted the strap of her vest, took a breath that tasted of static electricity, and stepped onto the first rung of the hidden stairs. The descent took her deeper than any Tube station should go. The air grew warmer, drier. The sound of rain faded, replaced by the hum of conversation and the clinking of glass. At the bottom, the staircase opened into a vast cavernous space that defied the geography of London above. Stalls lined the walls of the abandoned station, draped in silks that shimmered with their own inner light. People—or things that looked like people—milled about. A woman with skin like polished oak bark haggled over a jar containing a swirling storm. A man whose shadow moved independently of his body examined a rack of knives that hummed with a low whine. Quinn kept her hand near her hip, moving with military precision through the crowd. Her brown eyes scanned the exits, the threats, the anomalies. She needed to find the suspect before they disappeared into this madness. A vendor to her left, a creature with too many joints in its fingers, blocked her path. "No metals," it rasped, pointing a clawed digit at her badge. "Iron burns. Steel sings. Leave the loud toys at the gate." Quinn stopped. She stared at the creature, then at the badge pinned to her chest. The metal seemed to vibrate against her jacket. She unclipped it and shoved it into her pocket. "Just passing through," she said, her voice steady despite the surreal tableau surrounding her. "Everyone passes through," the vendor replied, turning back to a cage of birds made entirely of fire. "Few leave whole." She pushed past, weaving through the throng. The market felt alive, watching her. Eyes from a dozen different species tracked her movement. She caught glimpses of items that made her stomach turn: bottled memories, vials of liquid shadow, cages holding creatures that looked like oversized insects but wept human tears. Then she saw him. The suspect stood at a stall near the far platform, exchanging the bone token for a small pouch wrapped in red leather. He turned, scanning the crowd. His gaze locked onto hers. Panic flashed across his face. He bolted, shoving a tall figure in a hooded cloak out of his way. The cloaked figure stumbled, revealing a face that was mostly beak and feather. Quinn gave chase again, sprinting down the length of the platform. Her boots echoed on the tiles, a sharp contrast to the soft shuffles and slithers of the market patrons. "Stop!" she yelled. The suspect ducked under a hanging tapestry depicting a battle between stars and snakes. Quinn followed, tearing the fabric aside. She emerged into a narrower corridor lined with doors that had no handles, only keyholes shaped like eyes. The suspect fumbled with a pouch at his belt, pulling out another token. He slammed it against a door with a pupil that dilated as he approached. The door swung inward. Quinn closed the distance, lunging forward. Her fingers grazed the back of his jacket just as he threw himself inside. She stumbled, catching herself on the doorframe. The room beyond wasn't a room. It was a tunnel, dark and rushing with wind that smelled of salt and decay. The suspect was already running, his form shrinking into the gloom. Quinn stepped across the threshold. The air here tasted different again, heavier, laden with the promise of violence. She looked back toward the market. The crowd had stopped moving. Dozens of unnatural eyes stared at her, the silence sudden and absolute. The vendor with the too-many-joints pointed a long finger at her, then at the exit behind her. "You broke the rule," the vendor called out, voice echoing strangely in the sudden quiet. "Iron stays out." Quinn looked down. Her pocket bulged where she'd shoved her badge. The metal was hot against her thigh, burning through her trousers. She gritted her teeth, ignoring the pain. She had crossed the line. There was no going back to call for units that wouldn't believe her, to a world that pretended this darkness didn't exist. She turned back to the tunnel. The suspect was gone, swallowed by the shadows, but the trail remained. Fresh footprints marked the dusty floor, leading deeper into the earth. Quinn pulled her flashlight from her belt. The beam cut through the gloom, revealing walls lined with pipes that pulsed like veins. She clicked the safety off her gun this time. The weight of the weapon grounded her, a tangible piece of reality in a place that rejected it. "Come on then," she whispered to the empty tunnel. She moved forward, step by deliberate step, leaving the safety of the known world behind. The wind howled, carrying sounds that might have been screams or might have been laughter. She didn't flinch. She adjusted her grip on the pistol, checked the time on her leather watch, and walked into the dark.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.583
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1367
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
26.85% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1367
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"shattered"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"depths"
count1
3
word"cacophony"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"dancing"
count1
6
word"shimmered"
count1
7
word"scanned"
count1
8
word"surreal"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"scanning"
count1
11
word"echoed"
count1
12
word"tapestry"
count1
13
word"gloom"
count2
14
word"silence"
count1
15
word"echoing"
count1
16
word"pulsed"
count1
17
word"weight"
count1
18
word"tangible"
count1
highlights
0"shattered"
1"familiar"
2"depths"
3"cacophony"
4"flickered"
5"dancing"
6"shimmered"
7"scanned"
8"surreal"
9"stomach"
10"scanning"
11"echoed"
12"tapestry"
13"gloom"
14"silence"
15"echoing"
16"pulsed"
17"weight"
18"tangible"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences118
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences123
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1360
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount1314
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.22
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
London2
Quinn16
Camden1
High1
Street1
Morris3
Tube1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Morris"
places
0"London"
1"Camden"
2"High"
3"Street"
globalScore0.891
windowScore0.833
41.30% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences92
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"seemed designed to swallow light whole"
1"looked like obsidian wound down into the"
2"looked like people—milled about"
3"looked like oversized insects but wept hu"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.735
wordCount1360
matches
0"not by wind or water pressure, but as if an invisible hand had grabbed the iron bars"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences123
matches(empty)
93.53% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean36.76
std17.55
cv0.477
sampleLengths
071
140
262
331
431
528
67
771
842
914
1043
1165
1224
1329
1468
1543
1636
1739
1832
1914
2020
2150
2236
2332
2430
253
2638
2731
2827
2932
3058
3118
3256
3329
3449
359
3652
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences118
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs243
matches(empty)
73.17% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences123
ratio0.024
matches
0"The ground didn't just shake; it groaned."
1"They didn't climb down; they jumped straight into the glowing abyss."
2"People—or things that looked like people—milled about."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1321
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.023467070401211203
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.004542013626040878
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences123
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences123
mean11.06
std6.38
cv0.577
sampleLengths
019
125
212
315
416
524
65
713
86
92
1013
1119
124
139
1414
153
165
1712
1813
196
206
2114
221
237
244
253
2611
2722
287
296
3025
3116
327
3319
343
3511
367
3714
3818
394
402
4121
429
433
4430
4513
4610
471
484
4925
53.66% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.36585365853658536
totalSentences123
uniqueOpeners45
89.29% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences112
matches
0"Instead, they reached into a"
1"Then they dropped to their"
2"Then she saw him."
ratio0.027
87.86% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences112
matches
0"Her salt-and-pepper hair clung to"
1"She wiped a gloved hand"
2"Her worn leather watch dug"
3"She sprinted, boots splashing through"
4"She didn't slow down."
5"She cornered hard, left shoulder"
6"She drew her service weapon,"
7"They didn't climb down; they"
8"Her training screamed at her"
9"She adjusted the strap of"
10"Her brown eyes scanned the"
11"She needed to find the"
12"it rasped, pointing a clawed"
13"She stared at the creature,"
14"She unclipped it and shoved"
15"she said, her voice steady"
16"She pushed past, weaving through"
17"She caught glimpses of items"
18"He turned, scanning the crowd."
19"His gaze locked onto hers."
ratio0.33
22.50% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount98
totalSentences112
matches
0"Harlow Quinn pressed her shoulder"
1"Her salt-and-pepper hair clung to"
2"She wiped a gloved hand"
3"The suspect vanished into the"
4"Quinn pushed off the wall."
5"Her worn leather watch dug"
6"She sprinted, boots splashing through"
7"The alley smelled of rotting"
8"She didn't slow down."
9"She cornered hard, left shoulder"
10"The suspect stood ten yards"
11"Quinn shouted, voice cutting through"
12"She drew her service weapon,"
13"The figure didn't raise their"
14"Quinn narrowed her eyes."
15"The suspect smiled, a jagged"
16"The ground didn't just shake;"
17"A low-frequency vibration rattled Quinn's"
18"The rusted grate of the"
19"The air pressure dropped, popping"
ratio0.875
44.64% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences112
matches
0"If she lost the suspect"
ratio0.009
72.60% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences61
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Rain hammered the pavement, turning the London streets into a slick black mirror that shattered under every frantic footstep."
1"She sprinted, boots splashing through puddles that reflected the erratic glow of streetlamps."
2"At the bottom, the staircase opened into a vast cavernous space that defied the geography of London above."
3"Stalls lined the walls of the abandoned station, draped in silks that shimmered with their own inner light."
4"She caught glimpses of items that made her stomach turn: bottled memories, vials of liquid shadow, cages holding creatures that looked like oversized insects bu…"
5"The suspect was already running, his form shrinking into the gloom."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Quinn shouted, voice cutting through the drumming rain"
1"she said, her voice steady despite the surreal tableau surrounding her"
2"the vendor called out, voice echoing strangely in the sudden quiet"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Quinn shouted (shout)"
1"she yelled (yell)"
2"the vendor called out (call out)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.667
79.6243%