Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTZ36C19FRVB58AG2DVBFBV

Run Details

Duration:
1m 3s
Cost:
$0.003025
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The brass handle turned with a stubborn screech that Ptolemy had long since stopped reacting to. Three deadbolts. Eva's paranoia, or perhaps her brilliance—Rory had never decided which. She thumbed the final lock open and pulled the door toward her, already rehearsing the sharp remark she'd prepared for the delivery driver who insisted on ringing twice even after she'd asked him not to. The words died somewhere between her throat and her tongue. Lucien Moreau stood in the narrow hallway, one hand raised as if to knock again, the other gripping the head of his cane like a gentleman about to tip his hat. The fluorescent light above him caught the silver threads in his charcoal suit, threw shadows across the sharp angles of his face. His heterochromatic eyes found hers—the amber one warm, the black one fathomless—and something flickered there. Surprise, maybe. Or relief dressed up as surprise. "Rory." The name fell from his lips in that low register she'd spent eight months trying to forget. She hadn't succeeded. She'd simply gotten better at not thinking about it, about the way he'd said it that night in the back room of Silas' bar when the shadows had been longer and the silence between them had felt like a held breath. "Luc." She heard her own voice, flat and foreign. "This is a surprise." His gaze moved past her, cataloging the apartment behind in a single sweeping glance—the towers of books crowding the tiny sitting area, the scrolls stacked beside the radiator, the yellow legal pad on the kitchen counter still open to whatever rabbit hole Eva had dragged her into this week. Ptolemy wound between her ankles, oblivious to the tension coiling in the doorway. "I tried your phone," he said. "Several times." "I changed the number." "I know." A pause. "I had it traced." Of course he did. He was Lucien Moreau, information broker, fixer, the man who could find a needle in a haystack and sell the haystack for a profit. Asking how he'd found her would be a waste of breath. She knew better than to ask questions she already knew the answers to. "I'm not interested in whatever job you've got." She moved to close the door, but his cane caught in the gap—a practiced move, she realized, the blade inside likely keeping the wood from splintering. "Go through Silas if you need a runner. I'm off the circuit." "It's not about a job." "Then what?" He didn't answer immediately. His eyes returned to her face, and she watched something shift behind them—the careful mask slipping, just for a moment. She remembered that look. It had been there the night he'd told her he was leaving, that the information he'd gathered about her ex—the ex she'd fled Cardiff to escape—had turned sour. That someone had leaked her location, that staying near her meant putting her in danger, that he was leaving and she couldn't come with him and please, Rory, please don't make this harder than it already is. She'd made it harder anyway. She'd screamed at him, called him a coward in four different languages because he spoke four and she'd wanted to prove she could match him. He'd walked away without looking back. She'd spent three weeks drunk on cheap gin and convinced she hated him. Now she stood here, two feet away from him in a doorway that felt like a battlefield, and she didn't hate him at all. "I needed to see you," he said quietly. "That's all. I needed—" He stopped, jaw tightening. "I shouldn't have come." "No," she agreed. "You shouldn't have." But neither of them moved. Ptolemy meowed, aggrieved at being ignored, and padded toward the kitchen bowl that was now empty. The moment stretched, fragile as spun glass. "Alright." Rory stepped back, gesturing sharply toward the apartment. "You're here. You've seen me. I look the same as I did eight months ago, same flat, same mess, same—" She stopped, glancing at the legal pad. "Same research. You can leave now." "Liar." He stepped inside without invitation, and she let him because stopping him would have meant touching him and touching him would have meant— "You look exhausted, Rory. You haven't been sleeping." "Don't." "You never sleep when you're deep in research. It's why you take those ridiculous delivery shifts, to force yourself into a routine." He set his cane against the wall,顺手. "You're working on something. What?" "It's not your concern." "It is." His voice hardened. "It became my concern the moment you started running. Did you think I'd just—what? Forget you exist?" "I hoped." She crossed her arms, defensive. "I hoped you'd take the easy way out like you did last time. Walk away, let me sort my own mess, stop pretending you ever actually—" "Pretending?" He closed the distance between them in two strides, and suddenly he was too close, close enough that she could smell his cologne—something dark and expensive, a scent that had haunted her for months. "You think I was pretending?" "You left." The words came out ragged. "You told me it was too dangerous, told me you'd only bring trouble, and then you just—you left. Like I was something you were done with." "Like you were something worth protecting." His voice cracked on the last word, and she saw it—the crack in the facade, the exhaustion beneath the polished exterior. "Evan found you, Rory. He found you because of me, because I got sloppy, because I thought—" He laughed, bitter and short. "I thought I could keep you safe. I was wrong." "Evan's in prison." She hadn't meant to say it like that, like she was reassuring him. "He won't—" "You don't know that. You don't know what he had, who he knew—" "I know I'm still here." She reached out, impulse or madness, and touched the lapel of his suit. His breath caught. "I'm still here, Luc. I've been here the whole time." "You shouldn't have been." But his hand came up, covered hers where it rested against his chest. "You should have run further, changed your name, done everythingEva tried to teach you—" "Eva's dramatic. You've met her." "Evacuation plans are not dramatic when someone's life is at stake." "My life is my life." She pressed her palm flat against his heart, feeling it beat—too fast, too warm, something not quite human running through his veins. "It's my choice who I let into it." He looked down at her hand, then back at her face. The amber eye was bright, almost glowing. "You've made that choice before. You chose badly." "I chose you." The silence that followed was absolute. Ptolemy, returning from the kitchen with his whiskers still wet, wound between their ankles and looked up as if wondering why they'd stopped talking. "You're going to regret that," Lucien said finally. "Probably." She stepped closer, close enough to feel the heat radiating off him. "I've regretted worse." He kissed her like a man drowning—the edge of desperation, the taste of something long denied. She kissed him back with all the anger she'd been carrying, eight months of it, and when his arms came around her she let herself be held. Let herself stop thinking about the danger, the risk, the thousand reasons this was a terrible idea. When they finally broke apart, breathless and trembling, she pressed her forehead to his. "You're staying," she said. "I—" "You're staying. We can talk about the rest tomorrow. Right now you're staying, and you're going to help me feed Ptolemy because he's looking at us like we've personally offended him." A laugh escaped him, low and wondering. "You've lost your mind." "I lost it eight months ago." She pulled back, meeting his eyes. "You could help me find it." He was quiet for a long moment. Then his hand came up, touched her cheek with a tenderness that made her chest ache. "I never stopped looking," he said. "For you. For reasons to come back." "I know." She took his hand, led him toward the kitchen where Ptolemy's bowl sat empty and the kettle was already cooling on the counter. "I know, Luc." Later, there would be explanations. There would be talk of Evan, of the information he'd gathered, of the debts he still owed and the people who still wanted him dead. There would be conversations that would hurt and confessions that would sting. But that was later. Right now, there was only the cramped flat on Brick Lane, the cat demanding his dinner, and two people who had finally stopped running from each other.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:48:13.702Z" 2/19/2026, 12:48:13 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
38.71% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"She'd simply [simply]"
1"he said quietly [quietly]"
2"Rory stepped back [back]"
3"Lucien said finally [finally]"
4"She pulled back [back]"
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.419
leniency0.839
rawRatio0.192
effectiveRatio0.161
93.09% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1447
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
75.81% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1447
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"tension"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"facade"
count1
5
word"tenderness"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"silence"
2"tension"
3"traced"
4"facade"
5"tenderness"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences76
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
97.24% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences111
gibberishSentences1
adjustedGibberishSentences1
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0.009
matches
0"\"You never sleep when you're deep in research. It's why you take those ridiculous delivery shifts, to force yourself into a routine.\" He set his cane against the wall,顺手."
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1434
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount1001
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.5
worstName"Ptolemy"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Ptolemy"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy5
Rory3
Moreau2
Eva2
Lucien3
Cardiff1
Later1
Evan1
Brick1
Lane1
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Rory"
2"Moreau"
3"Eva"
4"Lucien"
5"Evan"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
8.49% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like a battlefield, and she didn't"
1"not quite human running through his veins"
2"as if wondering why they'd stopped talking"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1434
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences111
matches
0"remembered that look"
1"leaving, that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean26.56
std21.15
cv0.797
sampleLengths
063
110
276
31
461
513
662
78
84
98
1052
1146
125
132
1493
1549
1624
1720
186
1928
2042
2132
221
2334
244
2522
2633
2740
2833
2959
3018
3113
3231
3331
345
3511
3635
3726
383
3930
408
4116
4260
4314
444
451
4631
4711
4818
4923
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"being ignored"
93.05% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs187
matches
0"was leaving"
1"was leaving"
2"was reassuring"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences111
ratio0.09
matches
0"Eva's paranoia, or perhaps her brilliance—Rory had never decided which."
1"His heterochromatic eyes found hers—the amber one warm, the black one fathomless—and something flickered there."
2"His gaze moved past her, cataloging the apartment behind in a single sweeping glance—the towers of books crowding the tiny sitting area, the scrolls stacked beside the radiator, the yellow legal pad on the kitchen counter still open to whatever rabbit hole Eva had dragged her into this week."
3"\"I'm not interested in whatever job you've got.\" She moved to close the door, but his cane caught in the gap—a practiced move, she realized, the blade inside likely keeping the wood from splintering."
4"His eyes returned to her face, and she watched something shift behind them—the careful mask slipping, just for a moment."
5"It had been there the night he'd told her he was leaving, that the information he'd gathered about her ex—the ex she'd fled Cardiff to escape—had turned sour."
6"\"Pretending?\" He closed the distance between them in two strides, and suddenly he was too close, close enough that she could smell his cologne—something dark and expensive, a scent that had haunted her for months."
7"\"Like you were something worth protecting.\" His voice cracked on the last word, and she saw it—the crack in the facade, the exhaustion beneath the polished exterior."
8"\"My life is my life.\" She pressed her palm flat against his heart, feeling it beat—too fast, too warm, something not quite human running through his veins."
9"He kissed her like a man drowning—the edge of desperation, the taste of something long denied."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount493
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.036511156186612576
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.006085192697768763
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences111
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences111
mean12.92
std10.42
cv0.806
sampleLengths
016
12
210
335
410
531
622
715
82
96
101
1117
123
1341
149
154
1649
1713
186
192
204
214
224
234
2424
2511
2613
2734
2812
295
302
314
3220
334
3428
3537
365
3725
386
3913
4024
418
428
434
443
453
465
4716
487
499
51.35% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.3783783783783784
totalSentences111
uniqueOpeners42
96.62% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences69
matches
0"Of course he did."
1"Then his hand came up,"
ratio0.029
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences69
matches
0"She thumbed the final lock"
1"His heterochromatic eyes found hers—the"
2"She hadn't succeeded."
3"She'd simply gotten better at"
4"She heard her own voice,"
5"His gaze moved past her,"
6"He was Lucien Moreau, information"
7"She knew better than to"
8"She moved to close the"
9"He didn't answer immediately."
10"His eyes returned to her"
11"She remembered that look."
12"It had been there the"
13"She'd made it harder anyway."
14"She'd screamed at him, called"
15"He'd walked away without looking"
16"She'd spent three weeks drunk"
17"he said quietly"
18"He stopped, jaw tightening"
19"She stopped, glancing at the"
ratio0.551
46.96% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences69
matches
0"The brass handle turned with"
1"Eva's paranoia, or perhaps her"
2"She thumbed the final lock"
3"The words died somewhere between"
4"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
5"The fluorescent light above him"
6"His heterochromatic eyes found hers—the"
7"The name fell from his"
8"She hadn't succeeded."
9"She'd simply gotten better at"
10"She heard her own voice,"
11"His gaze moved past her,"
12"Ptolemy wound between her ankles,"
13"He was Lucien Moreau, information"
14"She knew better than to"
15"She moved to close the"
16"He didn't answer immediately."
17"His eyes returned to her"
18"She remembered that look."
19"It had been there the"
ratio0.826
72.46% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences69
matches
0"Now she stood here, two"
ratio0.014
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"She thumbed the final lock open and pulled the door toward her, already rehearsing the sharp remark she'd prepared for the delivery driver who insisted on ringi…"
1"He was Lucien Moreau, information broker, fixer, the man who could find a needle in a haystack and sell the haystack for a profit."
2"That someone had leaked her location, that staying near her meant putting her in danger, that he was leaving and she couldn't come with him and please, Rory, pl…"
3"Ptolemy, returning from the kitchen with his whiskers still wet, wound between their ankles and looked up as if wondering why they'd stopped talking."
4"Then his hand came up, touched her cheek with a tenderness that made her chest ache."
5"Right now, there was only the cramped flat on Brick Lane, the cat demanding his dinner, and two people who had finally stopped running from each other."
67.31% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"She moved, but his cane caught in the gap—a practiced move, she realized, the blade inside likely keeping the wood from splintering"
1"He stopped, jaw tightening"
2"She crossed, defensive"
85.48% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she agreed (agree)"
1"He laughed (laugh)"
2"She hadn't (have)"
3"She pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.145
leniency0.29
rawRatio0.444
effectiveRatio0.129
77.5522%