Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTZ3HZB8HFGVS4XV22BTNHR

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GPT-5
Duration:
2m 43s
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$0.066944
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OpenAI

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Literary Fiction genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

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"Laila." The gin kissed my knuckles as the bottle knocked the lip of the glass. I steadied it, set the drink under the skiff of lime, and looked up. She had shaved her hair to a buzz that caught the light like wet slate. A fitted charcoal suit, lean lines where there had been denim and badges, a throat unmarked by the thrift-store pendants she used to hoard. Same eyes though, green with that fleck of amber in the left one, as if a match had once struck there and gone out badly. "That is not my name," I said. "It used to be." The corner of her mouth moved, not a smile. "Aurora then. Rory. Will you serve me or do we stage an opera for the tourists?" Silas slid two coasters down the bar with the easy flick of someone who had once flicked knives. His signet ring caught the low light. He did not say hello. He looked at me as if I already knew my part. "She pays, she drinks," he said. "I always do." She put down a card I recognised. Not the bank, the tiny chip in the lower left where she used to pry open hard drives. She had traded the chipped purple varnish for neat clear nails. "What will it be," I said. "Blackthorn gin if you stock it. Neat. And water. Ungassed." "Not cider," I said. "Not you." "People change." "Sometimes they do not." Her throat worked once when the gin hit it. That part had not changed. Eva, who could drink men twice her size under a rickety pub table and still walk a straight line out the door. Eva, whose texts stopped one afternoon three Augusts ago, mid-sentence. "Booth," Silas said. He already had the clean glasses in his hand, a cloth thrown over his shoulder like a flag of truce. "You two want time, do it without leaning on my bar." "Still owning the place with that velvet growl," she said to him. "Still owing someone with that taste in gin," he said. He moved with that slight hitch in his left knee, an old rhythm that made furniture do the work for him. The Raven's Nest breathed behind him, a low steady hum of talk, ice settling in buckets, old maps seamed to the walls like veins. Black and white photographs watched us from their frames, people who had danced or bled in these rooms long before we rubbed our lives against the varnished wood. We took the back booth where the seat had a split in the vinyl. You could feel the tear against the back of your thigh if you slumped. I did not. She put the tumbler down and traced a circle in a bead of water, one fingertip slow. She had a tiny scar in the web of that hand. New. "You look the same from far away," she said. "Up close, no." "I cook rice and exile," I said. "Does that add years or take them away, I forget." "Delivery girl on a scooter," she said. "That is a downgrade from your father's baritone about chambers and their noble rats." "My father can afford to haunt old courtrooms because my mother haunts classrooms. He is a rat who thinks he is a hawk." "Same poetry, then. Good." "What happened to Eva." She took the water then, a long swallow as if it stripped the words before they came out. "I used to love this room," she said. "Do you remember that first time we sneaked in. You nicked your mother's bronze cardigan, thought the colour made you look old enough to order an ale." "You borrowed your brother's cap," I said. "Thought it gave you a jaw. You looked like a mushroom in an Irish film." "And we wrote our names on a napkin. Stupid. 'Eva and Rory escape to London, two tickets, no return' underlined twice. Drama queens." She breathed out. "I came. I called. You did not pick up." "That is not how I recall it." "My phone filled with your maps of bus routes and safe hostels. Then it emptied. Your messages turned into a screenshot of a police form with a black line over your address." "You told me to leave, so I did." "I told you to let me meet you at the station." "I stood at the station for an hour and a half," I said. "I made watchtowers out of suitcase trolleys. I counted men whose shoes could crush my foot by accident. You did not come." Her mouth went flat. "A man put his hands around my throat at half past four that day," she said without heat. "So I did not come, no." The table between us seemed to tilt. The green neon from the sign out front left a faint wash on the wood, a bruise-colour you could miss if you glanced. "What man," I said, though I knew which man. Names sit behind your teeth a long time. "The one you left," she said. "The one who said you would be so much harder to hit if you learned to run. He did not hit me. He wanted to. He shook me like a bell. Made sure I heard the sound." "Why did you never tell me." "I tried. My messages found a void. Someone clever turned your numbers into dead birds. I was not that clever then." "You look it now." She put her chin in her hand. The buzzcut made her look like someone who had set fire to a past and watched it with her arms folded. "I took a job," she said. "Then another job. Swapped notes with men who despise being watched and make a career of it. Learned to move cash without a trail. Learned to borrow someone else's face for an afternoon. I woke up one day and people had begun to look through me because I trained them to." "That sounds like theatre to the posh. What connection are you selling." "You always flatten what you do not like into a joke," she said, but her eyes softened. "It kept me breathing. I would have used that when we were twenty if I had known." "You always liked the idea that you could toss a match into a dry field and get a sky to write with," I said. "Now you talk like a grant application." "Clean words when dirty work sits under them. Cardiff taught me that, same as you did." Silas set a small plate between us. Two slices of apple, a curl of Manchego. Something to put your fingers to when your tongue did not know where to lay. "Do not dissect my cheese," he said. "It cost a favour in Madrid thirty years ago and a postman who never got his left shoe back." Eva's laugh came out and startled both of us. It knocked against the photographs, and for a second we could have been nineteen. She wiped the corner of her eye with her thumb, left a dot of mascara like a beauty spot. Then she saw the crescent scar on my wrist, the one you can pretend is a moon if you are drunk enough. "He tried to drown you till you learned to breathe water," she said. "I should not have left you to learn that alone." "You told me to leave," I said again because otherwise the heat in my chest would have nowhere to go. "And you took it as a command," she said. "Not a plan. You always did listen too hard when someone used your name in a sentence." "Do not," I said. The word tasted like tin. She tilted her head. "I kept a photograph of us on my kitchen wall. The one from the pier. Your hair long and my fringe in my eyes. We look like we are about to run. I could not take it down. It made me brush my teeth at night with my back to the wall." "So you married your work," I said. "Congratulations on your tasteful ceremony." "I did marry," she said quietly. That silenced the corner. I felt it ripple. "Not to it. To him. Briefly. He had opinions about my voice, my skirts, my friends. I left one morning with a carrier bag and a cracked tooth. I should have phoned you. I was too proud to let you be the one person who had not abandoned me, and then teach you how it feels to watch me repeat it anyway." "People change," I said. "Do they. Or do they sharpen." "Either way, you did not say goodbye," I said. "You did not either." She reached into her bag. Leather, black, perfect creases from a manufacturer who understands that women like pockets. She pulled out something a child would recognise, because children are the last ones who try to keep pictures from losing what they mean. A strip of photo booth shots, the kind that makes you look more like yourself because there is no time to pose. In the first frame, we had jammed shoulders together, too wide a grin. In the second, my cheek had a smear of blue where I had tried to draw a star for a gig and missed. In the third, she reached up to fix it and caught my chin in her fingers. In the fourth, we were both looking to the side at something out of frame, eyes slanted into the same suspicion. That last one hurt. "You carried that," I said. "Folded under a passport till the corners are thin as thoughts. I am not here to pull you into some scheme, before you say it." "I was about to." "I came to see if you were a rumour," she said. "If you had turned into a photograph. Also, someone looked for you with my voice last month. I want to know if you noticed." "A call," I said. "Three. 'Laila, meet me at Chalk Farm Wednesday, wear the red scarf, bring the papers' without saying what papers. I do not waste a good alias on small men, so that stuck. I told Silas last night. He told me to come today if I wanted to live long enough to regret it." I looked past her. Silas stood by the bookshelf with the Kelloggs Corn Flakes tin where he hides small notes. His ring tapped once, a dull sound under the clink of the till. He pretended to polish a glass. "You still know the way," he said without looking over. "You can use it." "You built a door into a story," she said, almost fond. "Cute." "History is a room," he said. "Now, take your nostalgia somewhere it will not choke the regulars." He was right. The neon buzz made my teeth hum. The booth pushed our knees together and made every word feel like a coin passing hands. We slid out. The seat gripped that fraction of fabric where the vinyl split. The shelf had a row of Navy handbooks and a Greek atlas with the spine repaired by someone who liked tape as an idea. Silas pressed a finger to the atlas and it released my old breath, stale and smoked-in. The back room did not open with a drama; it clicked and made space for us the way a hand opens and expects another hand to fit there. Inside smelt like paper and polish, old wood that has learned what secrets taste like. A low table, two chairs that had been sat in by men who carried a different kind of weight. A photograph of three women in crisp coats outside the Embassy that had changed names five times. "Sit," Silas said. "I do not obey men in rooms anymore," Eva said, then she sat anyway and smiled. "Force of habit. I will kick that one next." "You will break your foot," he said. "Now speak." "Someone fished for her last month using my tone as bait," she said. "Someone with enough of a budget to mask the trail in charity emails and a chess club's group chat. That is not a drunk ex. That is a grown-up." I watched the way she arranged her hands, the right one over the left, thumb resting on the scar. You can tell who taught someone to hide their nerves by how they fail at it. "Why not tell me last night," I said. "Because I needed to see your face before I decided whether to be cruel," she said. "You have the same mouth as the girl who would let me steal her dinner. She would forgive too much. I needed to see if you would walk into a train station because I told you to. You did not. You told me not to." "We both have learned stupid tricks," I said. Silas poured something from nowhere into three tiny glasses. The liquid had that plum-gloss look of East European grandmothers. He kept one, nodded to the other two. "You still bleed for strangers," he said to me. "You still make money out of stories," he said to her. "I know who did the calls." "You did not lead with that," Eva said. "I do not lead with dessert," he said. "Who," I said. He pushed a scrap of paper over to me. Not a name, a small stamped image of a bird with clipped wings. Old symbol. My stomach remembered the angle of that beak before my head did. "No," I said softly. "You know it," Eva said. "It sat in the corner of a flyer someone slid under my door when I moved in," I said. "Blues for the Unseen, a night class that did not have a teacher. A message board from uni days when boys with rings said they made art out of secrets. Evan had a tattoo of it," I added, and my voice wanted to close. "You never told me that," Eva said. "You did not come on the train," I said back. "The symbol moved after you left," Silas said. "It moved money. It bought men. Now it buys names. Yours has value because you made a mess the last time you said no." "Are we workshopping my biography," I said. "Or are we running." Eva leaned in, and the new scent she wore, clean and medicinal, slid under the room's polish. "He is not asking you to run," she said. "He is asking you to choose where you stand." "I am tired of floors that open," I said. "You do not have to fall through," she said. "You can build a rail." "You hired poetry," Silas said to her. "Be careful, it costs more than you think." He nodded at the door. "Five minutes. Then the bar will come apart if you do not do something clever with your faces." It did not take five. The green light outside stuttered once. A man's voice at the front called a name that made my skin tighten. Not mine. "Eva O'Dwyer." We went still. "You said 'someone looked for you with my voice last month'," I said. "I left a trail this morning," she said under her breath. "Stupid. I have been clean for so long I wanted to see if they could still smell me." "You and your tests," I said. Silas moved to the crack of the door and looked without looking. He shifted his weight and the knee made that soft skit sound it made on rainy days. He did not swear. "Do not go out," he said. "I will not hide," she said. "You will if I say so," he said in that old agent cadence, a strand of steel under the velvet. "He brought four. Not bouncers. Bless your old pier photographs, both of you. This will be ugly." I stood. My hands shook, which amused some part of my spine. "Who," I said. "Your old lover's drinking buddy," Silas said. "And the bird on his throat. He has a new beak. He is a messenger with a knife." "Tell me you locked the front when you closed your mouth," Eva said, voice smooth as that first gin. "I own a bar in Soho," Silas said. "Every lock is a suggestion. Get ready." The bookshelf door opened wider with a sigh as something heavy under the bottle-racks gave. Voices folded in, metal on wood, the scrape of stools. A glass fell and rang. Someone laughed that thin laugh some men use as foreplay to pain. "Come on then," a voice called, lazy-sly. "Laila. Make this quick. You owe a conversation." I stepped forward. Eva's hand found my wrist above the little crescent and held just there hard enough to make the scar not mine for a second. "We do not run," she said. "We are not nineteen and drunk on the pier," I said. "No," she said. "We are sober in a room full of old photographs. We make our own." Silas lifted his glass and smashed it into the edge of the table with a precise flick. The bottom fell clean, a sharp mouth. "Be polite," he said. "And be quick."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags76
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"I said again [again]"
1"she said quietly [quietly]"
2"I said softly [softly]"
3"I said back [back]"
dialogueSentences141
tagDensity0.539
leniency1
rawRatio0.053
effectiveRatio0.053
98.27% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2882
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
84.39% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2882
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"velvet"
count2
2
word"could feel"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"perfect"
count1
5
word"weight"
count2
6
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"velvet"
2"could feel"
3"traced"
4"perfect"
5"weight"
6"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences172
matches(empty)
76.41% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences172
filterMatches
0"look"
1"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"try to"
2"tried to"
3"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences237
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen62
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2874
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions91
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount1427
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.91
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Silas13
Augusts1
Raven1
Nest1
Names1
Manchego1
Eva10
Kelloggs1
Corn1
Flakes1
Navy1
Greek1
Embassy1
East1
European1
persons
0"Silas"
1"Raven"
2"Nest"
3"Names"
4"Eva"
places
0"Embassy"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences82
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2874
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences237
matches
0"understands that women"
1"gripped that fraction"
2"had that plum"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs131
mean21.94
std18.05
cv0.823
sampleLengths
01
128
264
37
429
541
66
739
86
910
106
112
124
1346
1434
1512
1610
1773
1831
1929
2012
2117
2221
2323
244
254
2618
2735
2822
2935
307
3132
328
3311
3435
354
3624
3730
3817
3943
406
4121
424
4328
4457
4512
4634
4731
4816
4930
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences172
matches
0"been nineteen"
1"been sat"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs286
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences237
ratio0.004
matches
0"The back room did not open with a drama; it clicked and made space for us the way a hand opens and expects another hand to fit there."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1434
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.021617852161785217
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.002789400278940028
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences237
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences237
mean12.13
std9.38
cv0.773
sampleLengths
01
114
214
315
424
525
67
713
816
918
107
115
1211
136
1410
1518
1611
176
1810
194
202
212
224
239
245
2522
2610
273
2820
2911
3012
3110
3221
3324
3428
3514
3614
373
3817
3911
401
419
423
437
4410
457
4614
4723
484
494
39.03% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats26
diversityRatio0.2869198312236287
totalSentences237
uniqueOpeners68
29.24% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences114
matches
0"Then she saw the crescent"
ratio0.009
20.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount57
totalSentences114
matches
0"I steadied it, set the"
1"She had shaved her hair"
2"His signet ring caught the"
3"He did not say hello."
4"He looked at me as"
5"She put down a card"
6"She had traded the chipped"
7"Her throat worked once when"
8"He already had the clean"
9"she said to him"
10"He moved with that slight"
11"We took the back booth"
12"You could feel the tear"
13"I did not."
14"She put the tumbler down"
15"She had a tiny scar"
16"She took the water then,"
17"She breathed out"
18"Her mouth went flat."
19"she said without heat"
ratio0.5
8.25% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount103
totalSentences114
matches
0"The gin kissed my knuckles"
1"I steadied it, set the"
2"She had shaved her hair"
3"A fitted charcoal suit, lean"
4"The corner of her mouth"
5"Silas slid two coasters down"
6"His signet ring caught the"
7"He did not say hello."
8"He looked at me as"
9"She put down a card"
10"She had traded the chipped"
11"Her throat worked once when"
12"That part had not changed."
13"Eva, who could drink men"
14"Eva, whose texts stopped one"
15"He already had the clean"
16"she said to him"
17"He moved with that slight"
18"The Raven's Nest breathed behind"
19"We took the back booth"
ratio0.904
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences114
matches(empty)
ratio0
68.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences58
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"He looked at me as if I already knew my part."
1"Black and white photographs watched us from their frames, people who had danced or bled in these rooms long before we rubbed our lives against the varnished woo…"
2"The buzzcut made her look like someone who had set fire to a past and watched it with her arms folded."
3"Leather, black, perfect creases from a manufacturer who understands that women like pockets."
4"She pulled out something a child would recognise, because children are the last ones who try to keep pictures from losing what they mean."
5"A man's voice at the front called a name that made my skin tighten."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags76
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she said, but her eyes softened"
1"he said, a strand of steel under the velvet"
2"Eva said, voice smooth as that first gin"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags74
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"She breathed (breathe)"
1"I added (add)"
dialogueSentences141
tagDensity0.525
leniency1
rawRatio0.027
effectiveRatio0.027
83.5959%