"The landscape stretched before them—endless vineyards rolling over gentle hills, their leaves a deep emerald that seemed to drink in the amber light."
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"The air grew warmer, carrying new scents—roasting meat, baking bread, and something sweet that made Rory's mouth water despite herself."
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"Spread before them was a city of impossible beauty—towers of white stone veined with gold, domes that caught the amber light and threw it back in rainbow arcs, streets lined with flowering trees that bloomed in every color imaginable."
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"But what struck Rory most was the movement—people everywhere, laughing, eating, dancing, their joy almost palpable in the air."
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"A group of musicians passed them, playing instruments Rory had never seen—strings that glowed when touched, drums that seemed to pulse with the city's heartbeat, pipes that produced notes that made her bones vibrate pleasantly."
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"His clothes were simple—a white tunic and trousers—but they moved around him like living things, constantly shifting patterns of light and color."
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"Before Rory could protest, he produced a tray from nowhere—or so it seemed."
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"The grand avenues gave way to narrower streets, and the buildings took on a different character—still beautiful, but with an edge of something darker."
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"The sweet scents of the market faded, replaced by richer, headier aromas—incense that made Rory's thoughts slow, spices that tingled on the back of her tongue even though she hadn't eaten them."
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"He—or it—stood at least seven feet tall, with skin the color of cooled lava and eyes that burned like twin suns."
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"The golden walls of the palace were not solid gold at all, but thousands—millions—of tiny, moving things."
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"The landscape stretched before them—endless vineyards rolling over gentle hills, their leaves a deep emerald that seemed to drink in the amber light."
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"The path ahead was made of crushed white stones that crunched beneath their feet."
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"As they walked, Rory noticed the details she'd missed at first glance: tiny butterflies with wings of stained glass flitting between flowers, mushrooms growing …"
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"Rory pulled her hand back, remembering the stories of mortals who'd eaten Fae food and never returned to Earth."
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"Spread before them was a city of impossible beauty—towers of white stone veined with gold, domes that caught the amber light and threw it back in rainbow arcs, …"
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"A group of musicians passed them, playing instruments Rory had never seen—strings that glowed when touched, drums that seemed to pulse with the city's heartbeat…"
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"Another sold pastries that floated above his cart, spinning slowly as if dancing to music only they could hear."
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"She could almost taste it on her tongue, feel it sliding down her throat, spreading through her body like liquid joy."
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"With a bow that was too graceful to be human, he vanished, leaving behind only the scent of exotic spices and the memory of temptation."
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"Horns curved from his forehead, and his mouth split in a grin that revealed far too many teeth."
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"There was something about Malacath that radiated power, an ancient and terrible majesty that made her want to both kneel and run away screaming."
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"As they followed the herald through the gates, Rory caught a glimpse of something that made her stumble."