| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 80.03% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1252 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "utterly" | | 1 | "really" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 24.12% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1252 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "profound" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "perfect" | | 4 | "shimmered" | | 5 | "chill" | | 6 | "trembled" | | 7 | "scanning" | | 8 | "beacon" | | 9 | "searing" | | 10 | "stark" | | 11 | "could feel" | | 12 | "weight" | | 13 | "chilling" | | 14 | "rhythmic" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 131 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 77.43% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 131 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 131 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1245 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 22 | | wordCount | 1245 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.56 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Click" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | London | 1 | | Germanic | 1 | | Pre-Law | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Rory | 7 | | Click | 7 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 28.05% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "whites that seemed to drink the meagre moonlight" | | 1 | "sounded like a stone tapping another" | | 2 | "felt like a provocation" | | 3 | "skin that seemed to absorb the moonlight" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.803 | | wordCount | 1245 | | matches | | 0 | "not in nails, but in sharp, thorny points" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 36.62 | | std | 26.79 | | cv | 0.732 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 79 | | 1 | 90 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 71 | | 4 | 60 | | 5 | 78 | | 6 | 56 | | 7 | 61 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 29 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 36 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 65 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 39 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 67 | | 19 | 53 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 56 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 70 | | 25 | 28 | | 26 | 28 | | 27 | 46 | | 28 | 46 | | 29 | 30 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 51 | | 33 | 14 |
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| 89.19% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | | 0 | "was locked" | | 1 | "been painted" | | 2 | "was used" | | 3 | "was gone" | | 4 | "being stirred" | | 5 | "was locked" |
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| 62.54% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 194 | | matches | | 0 | "were looking" | | 1 | "was holding" | | 2 | "was searing" | | 3 | "was opening" |
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| 77.43% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 131 | | ratio | 0.023 | | matches | | 0 | "The air grew still as she approached the clearing, the usual night sounds of the park—rustling badgers, the distant hoot of an owl, the sigh of wind through leaves—fading into a profound and unnerving silence." | | 1 | "The pendant didn’t just get warm; it did this when it was near a…" | | 2 | "It wasn't a shadow cast by anything; it was a patch of darkness that had gained substance and volition." |
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| 87.39% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1253 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "single, clear, deliberate noise." |
| | adverbCount | 51 | | adverbRatio | 0.040702314445331206 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010375099760574621 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 131 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 131 | | mean | 9.5 | | std | 6.88 | | cv | 0.724 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 35 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 25 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 32.44% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 23 | | diversityRatio | 0.29770992366412213 | | totalSentences | 131 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 89.29% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "Then came the sound." | | 1 | "Just grey rock and the" | | 2 | "Then another, and another, until" |
| | ratio | 0.027 | |
| 66.43% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 43 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "It was long after dark." | | 1 | "She moved through the trees," | | 2 | "You couldn't find it if" | | 3 | "You had to be led," | | 4 | "It was an absolute quiet," | | 5 | "She stepped between the two" | | 6 | "They were old, older than" | | 7 | "She took a step into" | | 8 | "They didn't bend under her" | | 9 | "They might as well have" | | 10 | "She rubbed the small, crescent-shaped" | | 11 | "It was the wrongness that" | | 12 | "It was flat, like a" | | 13 | "It came from her left." | | 14 | "She turned, her heart starting" | | 15 | "It sounded like a stone" | | 16 | "It wasn't random." | | 17 | "It had purpose." | | 18 | "It was a pattern now," | | 19 | "It circled her, keeping its" |
| | ratio | 0.384 | |
| 31.43% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 96 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "The gate to Richmond Park" | | 1 | "It was long after dark." | | 2 | "Rory scaled the wrought-iron fence," | | 3 | "The pendant hung warm against" | | 4 | "Tonight, it was a frantic" | | 5 | "She moved through the trees," | | 6 | "The Fae Grove wasn't on" | | 7 | "You couldn't find it if" | | 8 | "You had to be led," | | 9 | "The pendant was leading." | | 10 | "The air grew still as" | | 11 | "It was an absolute quiet," | | 12 | "She stepped between the two" | | 13 | "The grove opened up before" | | 14 | "Wildflowers, a riot of colour" | | 15 | "Blues so deep they were" | | 16 | "None at all." | | 17 | "The air was dead, sterile." | | 18 | "The flowers were beautiful, silent," | | 19 | "The standing stones, twelve of" |
| | ratio | 0.857 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 64.94% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant hung warm against her skin, a steady, reassuring pulse that had guided her here." | | 1 | "Blues so deep they were almost black, reds that shimmered like wet blood, whites that seemed to drink the meagre moonlight." | | 2 | "Rory’s head snapped around, her eyes scanning the line of standing stones." | | 3 | "It wasn't a shadow cast by anything; it was a patch of darkness that had gained substance and volition." | | 4 | "Rory’s logical mind, the part of her that had aced Pre-Law, screamed for an explanation." | | 5 | "But the cool-headed part of her, the part that had survived Evan and learned to trust her gut, knew better." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |