Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTZ3SW6MJAJXN9T0HE8W3QQ

Run Details

Duration:
1m 14s
Cost:
$0.006020
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The gate to Richmond Park was locked, of course. It was long after dark. Rory scaled the wrought-iron fence, the cold metal biting into her palms, and dropped silently onto the grass on the other side. The pendant hung warm against her skin, a steady, reassuring pulse that had guided her here. For the last week, it had been a low-grade thrum, a background hum she’d almost gotten used to. Tonight, it was a frantic heartbeat against her sternum. She moved through the trees, her feet finding the path easily from memory. The Fae Grove wasn't on any map. You couldn't find it if you were looking. You had to be led, or you had to stumble. The pendant was leading. The air grew still as she approached the clearing, the usual night sounds of the park—rustling badgers, the distant hoot of an owl, the sigh of wind through leaves—fading into a profound and unnerving silence. It was an absolute quiet, the kind that pressed in on the eardrums. She stepped between the two ancient oaks that served as gateposts, and the world shifted. The grove opened up before her, a perfect circle of impossible life. Wildflowers, a riot of colour that shouldn't exist in the dying of the year, carpeted the ground. Blues so deep they were almost black, reds that shimmered like wet blood, whites that seemed to drink the meagre moonlight. But there was no scent. None at all. The air was dead, sterile. The flowers were beautiful, silent, and utterly wrong. The standing stones, twelve of them, formed a ring around the clearing. They were old, older than anything in London, their surfaces worn smooth by a thousand rains and a thousand hands. In the centre of the grove, the air thickened, shimmering like a heat haze on a summer road. The pendant against her chest was hot now, almost burning. This was why she was here. The pendant didn’t just get warm; it did this when it was near a… a tear. A portal. Eva had used a word for it, a word that sounded old and Germanic. *Helgate*. A door to somewhere else. Rory hadn’t believed her, not really. Not until the pendant had started pulling her, a physical tug in her gut that always led her to places like this. Places where the world was thin. She took a step into the circle of flowers. They didn't bend under her boots. They might as well have been painted on the ground. A chill that had nothing to do with the night air skittered up her spine. She rubbed the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a nervous habit she’d never broken. The silence remained. It was the wrongness that got to her first. The absolute lack of movement. Not a single petal stirred. Not a leaf on the surrounding oaks trembled. The moon hung in the sky, a perfect, unblinking eye, and its light fell on the scene without the gentle shimmer she was used to. It was flat, like a photograph. Then came the sound. A soft click. It came from her left. Rory’s head snapped around, her eyes scanning the line of standing stones. Nothing. Just grey rock and the deeper black of the woods beyond. Click. Again. From the right this time. She turned, her heart starting a heavy, deliberate rhythm against her ribs. It sounded like a stone tapping another. A single, clear, deliberate noise. It wasn't random. It had purpose. Click. Click. Click. It was a pattern now, a slow, steady rhythm moving around the perimeter of the grove. It circled her, keeping its distance, always just behind one of the monoliths. She stood frozen in the centre, the pendant a furnace against her skin, its faint crimson glow now visible through the thin fabric of her shirt. It wasn’t just a guide anymore. It was a beacon. The tapping stopped. The silence that rushed back in was worse, heavier than before. It was a listening silence. The air grew thick, cold, and she could see her breath plume in front of her face. The grove was holding its breath. A movement. At the very edge of her vision, a shadow detached itself from the base of one of the stones. It wasn't a shadow cast by anything; it was a patch of darkness that had gained substance and volition. It flowed along the ground, a liquid spill of night, and merged with the base of the next stone. It was gone. Or maybe it was just hiding again. Rory’s logical mind, the part of her that had aced Pre-Law, screamed for an explanation. A trick of the light. An animal. The strain of the night. But the cool-headed part of her, the part that had survived Evan and learned to trust her gut, knew better. This was not of her world. She took a slow step back, her boot heel sinking into the unnaturally soft earth. The movement felt like a provocation. The air in the centre of the grove, the shimmering heat-haze of the portal, began to swirl. It wasn't a violent vortex. It was a slow, graceful spiral, like milk being stirred into tea. Colours she had no name for bled into the air for a moment before vanishing. The pendant was searing now, a brand. She had to leave. Now. She turned, her muscles coiled to run, and froze. A figure stood between the two gatepost oaks, blocking the only way out. It was tall and slender, built from the same stark lines as the trees. It had the shape of a person, but the proportions were all wrong. Its limbs were too long, its neck too thin. In the place of a face, there was only a smooth, pale oval of skin that seemed to absorb the moonlight. It took a step. The movement was silent, fluid, utterly unnatural. It didn’t walk so much as glide, its long legs bending in ways a human spine shouldn't. Rory couldn't scream. Her throat was locked, her lungs full of ice. She stumbled back, away from it, deeper into the grove. The wrong direction. The only direction. Another figure emerged from behind a standing stone to her left. Identical. Faceless. Then another, and another, until they stood silent and still behind every monolith, a silent audience of impossible things. They were all watching her. She could feel their attention like a physical weight. The pendant’s glow flared, casting a bloody red light across the flowers, making their vibrant colours look bruised and diseased. The light illuminated the figures, and for the first time, she saw that their long, twig-like fingers ended not in nails, but in sharp, thorny points. One of them tilted its head, a gesture of such chilling, mimicry humanity that a strangled gasp finally escaped Rory’s lips. The sound seemed to break the spell of stillness. They all began to move, converging on the centre. Slowly. Methodically. Tapping their long, thorny fingers against the standing stones as they came. Click. Click. Click. The rhythmic sound returned, but now it was the sound of their approach, the beat to which they hunted her. Rory spun around, trapped, her mind a white wall of panic. The shimmer in the centre of the grove widened, the colours within it growing brighter, more violent. It was opening. A cold hand, smooth as polished stone and impossibly strong, closed around her arm.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
80.03% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1252
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count2
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"utterly"
1"really"
2"very"
3"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
24.12% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1252
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"profound"
count1
2
word"silence"
count4
3
word"perfect"
count2
4
word"shimmered"
count1
5
word"chill"
count1
6
word"trembled"
count1
7
word"scanning"
count1
8
word"beacon"
count1
9
word"searing"
count1
10
word"stark"
count1
11
word"could feel"
count1
12
word"weight"
count1
13
word"chilling"
count1
14
word"rhythmic"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"profound"
2"silence"
3"perfect"
4"shimmered"
5"chill"
6"trembled"
7"scanning"
8"beacon"
9"searing"
10"stark"
11"could feel"
12"weight"
13"chilling"
14"rhythmic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences131
matches(empty)
77.43% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences131
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences131
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1245
ratio0.001
matches
0"Helgate"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount1245
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.56
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Click"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Fae1
Grove1
London1
Germanic1
Pre-Law1
Evan1
Rory7
Click7
persons
0"Evan"
1"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
4"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
28.05% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences82
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"whites that seemed to drink the meagre moonlight"
1"sounded like a stone tapping another"
2"felt like a provocation"
3"skin that seemed to absorb the moonlight"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.803
wordCount1245
matches
0"not in nails, but in sharp, thorny points"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences131
matches
0"saw that their"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean36.62
std26.79
cv0.732
sampleLengths
079
190
215
371
460
578
656
761
84
93
1029
111
1236
133
1465
153
1639
172
1867
1953
2021
2156
225
239
2470
2528
2628
2746
2846
2930
3023
313
3251
3314
89.19% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences131
matches
0"was locked"
1"been painted"
2"was used"
3"was gone"
4"being stirred"
5"was locked"
62.54% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs194
matches
0"were looking"
1"was holding"
2"was searing"
3"was opening"
77.43% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences131
ratio0.023
matches
0"The air grew still as she approached the clearing, the usual night sounds of the park—rustling badgers, the distant hoot of an owl, the sigh of wind through leaves—fading into a profound and unnerving silence."
1"The pendant didn’t just get warm; it did this when it was near a…"
2"It wasn't a shadow cast by anything; it was a patch of darkness that had gained substance and volition."
87.39% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1253
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
1"single, clear, deliberate noise."
adverbCount51
adverbRatio0.040702314445331206
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.010375099760574621
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences131
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences131
mean9.5
std6.88
cv0.724
sampleLengths
09
15
222
316
418
59
613
77
88
910
104
1135
1213
1315
1412
1517
1621
175
183
195
208
2112
2220
2318
2410
256
2614
272
282
2914
301
315
326
3322
346
359
366
3710
3815
3916
403
419
425
435
448
4525
466
474
483
495
32.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats23
diversityRatio0.29770992366412213
totalSentences131
uniqueOpeners39
89.29% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences112
matches
0"Then came the sound."
1"Just grey rock and the"
2"Then another, and another, until"
ratio0.027
66.43% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences112
matches
0"It was long after dark."
1"She moved through the trees,"
2"You couldn't find it if"
3"You had to be led,"
4"It was an absolute quiet,"
5"She stepped between the two"
6"They were old, older than"
7"She took a step into"
8"They didn't bend under her"
9"They might as well have"
10"She rubbed the small, crescent-shaped"
11"It was the wrongness that"
12"It was flat, like a"
13"It came from her left."
14"She turned, her heart starting"
15"It sounded like a stone"
16"It wasn't random."
17"It had purpose."
18"It was a pattern now,"
19"It circled her, keeping its"
ratio0.384
31.43% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount96
totalSentences112
matches
0"The gate to Richmond Park"
1"It was long after dark."
2"Rory scaled the wrought-iron fence,"
3"The pendant hung warm against"
4"Tonight, it was a frantic"
5"She moved through the trees,"
6"The Fae Grove wasn't on"
7"You couldn't find it if"
8"You had to be led,"
9"The pendant was leading."
10"The air grew still as"
11"It was an absolute quiet,"
12"She stepped between the two"
13"The grove opened up before"
14"Wildflowers, a riot of colour"
15"Blues so deep they were"
16"None at all."
17"The air was dead, sterile."
18"The flowers were beautiful, silent,"
19"The standing stones, twelve of"
ratio0.857
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
ratio0
64.94% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The pendant hung warm against her skin, a steady, reassuring pulse that had guided her here."
1"Blues so deep they were almost black, reds that shimmered like wet blood, whites that seemed to drink the meagre moonlight."
2"Rory’s head snapped around, her eyes scanning the line of standing stones."
3"It wasn't a shadow cast by anything; it was a patch of darkness that had gained substance and volition."
4"Rory’s logical mind, the part of her that had aced Pre-Law, screamed for an explanation."
5"But the cool-headed part of her, the part that had survived Evan and learned to trust her gut, knew better."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
80.3565%