Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTZ3T9RTMXG783CKG4BSQ3Z

Run Details

Duration:
18.0s
Cost:
$0.002554
Provider:
WandB

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain fell in cold, persistent sheets, turning the neon signs of Soho into bleeding watercolors. Detective Harlow Quinn’s leather-soled shoes slipped on the wet pavement as she pushed past a group of startled tourists huddled under an awning. Her heart hammered a military cadence against her ribs, a stark contrast to the frantic, stumbling rhythm of the man fleeing thirty yards ahead. Tomás Herrera was fast, a dark shape darting through the shimmering streets, his movements sharp with panic. “Met Police! Stop!” Her command was swallowed by the roar of a passing bus, its wheels throwing up a curtain of filthy water. He didn’t even glance back. He just vaulted over a low iron railing and disappeared down a set of crumbling stone steps she hadn’t even noticed. A service entrance, likely for one of the old pubs. Adrenaline narrowed her world to the slick steps and the fading sound of his footsteps echoing from the darkness below. She followed, her hand automatically going to the service weapon holstered under her soaked trench coat. The air changed as she descended, the clean, cold smell of the rain replaced by the damp, fungal scent of old stone and decay. The steps ended not in a cellar, but in a brick archway that opened onto the elevated platform of an abandoned Tube station. Graffiti-scarred tiles lined the walls, and the tracks below were a stagnant river of shadows and murky water. This wasn’t on any map. A flicker of movement at the far end of the platform. Tomás, catching his breath, his hand pressed against the grimy wall. He looked back at her, his face pale in the gloom, then turned and sprinted toward a makeshift bridge of planks spanning the tracks. Quinn’s training screamed at her. Unsecured location. No backup. No idea what was on the other side. The memory of Morris, of the way he’d vanished into a similarly unaccounted-for space three years ago, was a cold weight in her gut. The official report called it a derelict building collapse. She knew it was a lie. She’d seen the scorch marks that didn’t come from any fire she understood. She crossed the creaking planks, her worn leather watch feeling heavy on her wrist. On the opposite platform, a single, rusted door stood ajar. A low, rhythmic thrum of music and the murmur of a crowd leaked out from the crack. Pushing it open, she was hit by a wave of warm, thick air, heavy with the smell of spiced meat, ozone, and something coppery, like old blood. The Veil Market sprawled before her in the cavernous space of the abandoned station. It was a bazaar of the bizarre, lit by flickering lanterns and glowing crystals set into makeshift stalls. The crowd was a mosaic of the impossible—figures in hooded cloaks that seemed to drink the light, a woman with iridescent scales dusting her temples haggling over a jar of writhing worms, a man with fingers too long and jointed examining a dagger that hummed with a faint, malevolent energy. Her suspect was already melting into the throng, a familiar face in a sea of the uncanny. This was it. The lead she’d been chasing for months. The whispered network that operated outside the law, the one she was sure was connected to Morris’s disappearance. A tall figure stepped into her path, blocking her view of Tomás. The creature—it couldn’t be called a man—was swathed in rough-spun robes, its face hidden in shadow beneath a deep hood. It held up a gnarled hand, palm out. In its center, a single, milky eye blinked slowly. “The toll, walker,” it rasped, its voice like grinding stones. Her service pistol felt insignificant. “Metropolitan Police. I’m in pursuit of a suspect. Step aside.” The milky eye regarded her without recognition. “No authority here. Only the toll. A bone for passage. Or a memory. A recent joy, perhaps? The taste of your last meal?” The absurdity of it was almost enough to make her laugh. This was the territory her department refused to acknowledge, the darkness they pretended didn’t seep through the cracks of the city. To follow Tomás was to step fully into that darkness, to accept that the rules she had built her career on were nothing but tissue paper against the reality of this place. Morris had stepped into this world. He never came back. She looked past the creature. Tomás was at a stall, talking fast to a vendor with bark-like skin, gesturing toward the entrance where she stood. He was getting away. He had answers. He knew things. Her hand, still resting on her gun, fell away. She reached into her coat pocket, her fingers brushing past her badge and closing around something else—a small, smooth object. A river stone, grey and flat, that her daughter had pressed into her hand that morning. “For luck, Mum,” she’d said. She held it out. “This is all I have.” The hooded figure tilted its head. A long, thin finger emerged from a sleeve and tapped the stone. A faint chill passed through her hand. “A small luck. But passed freely. It will suffice.” It moved aside. The decision was made. She was crossing the line. Harlow Quinn took a deep breath of the strange, charged air and plunged into the market, following the flash of Tomás’s Saint Christopher medallion as he ducked into a side tunnel. The world of paperwork and procedure was behind her. Now, there were only the shadows ahead, and the truth she was willing to pay any price to find.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.68% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount940
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
36.17% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount940
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"stark"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"echoing"
count1
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"gloom"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"rhythmic"
count1
7
word"mosaic"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count1
9
word"uncanny"
count1
10
word"chill"
count1
11
word"charged"
count1
highlights
0"stark"
1"footsteps"
2"echoing"
3"flicker"
4"gloom"
5"weight"
6"rhythmic"
7"mosaic"
8"familiar"
9"uncanny"
10"chill"
11"charged"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences67
matches
0"p with panic"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences67
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences71
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen51
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords932
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount876
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.68
worstName"Tomás"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Tomás"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow2
Quinn3
Herrera1
Tube1
Morris3
Veil1
Market1
Tomás6
Saint1
Christopher1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Herrera"
3"Morris"
4"Market"
5"Tomás"
6"Saint"
7"Christopher"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"cloaks that seemed to drink the light, a woman with iridescent scales dusting her temples haggling over a jar of writhing worms, a man with fingers too long and jointed examining a dagger that hummed with a faint, malevolent energy"
92.70% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.073
wordCount932
matches
0"not in a cellar, but in a brick archway"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"accept that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean42.36
std25.2
cv0.595
sampleLengths
063
117
223
356
481
55
646
769
868
982
1045
1149
1210
1315
1430
1574
1635
1750
189
1934
203
2168
89.55% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences67
matches
0"was swallowed"
1"was connected"
2"was made"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs143
matches
0"was crossing"
1"was willing"
22.13% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences71
ratio0.042
matches
0"The crowd was a mosaic of the impossible—figures in hooded cloaks that seemed to drink the light, a woman with iridescent scales dusting her temples haggling over a jar of writhing worms, a man with fingers too long and jointed examining a dagger that hummed with a faint, malevolent energy."
1"The creature—it couldn’t be called a man—was swathed in rough-spun robes, its face hidden in shadow beneath a deep hood."
2"She reached into her coat pocket, her fingers brushing past her badge and closing around something else—a small, smooth object."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount884
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.01809954751131222
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.006787330316742082
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences71
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences71
mean13.13
std8.85
cv0.674
sampleLengths
016
123
224
317
423
55
621
710
820
916
1024
1123
1218
135
1411
1511
1624
175
182
192
208
2124
229
236
2413
2514
2610
2717
2827
2914
3018
3150
3217
333
347
3518
3612
3720
388
399
4010
415
4210
437
4423
4511
4621
4732
486
494
40.85% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3380281690140845
totalSentences71
uniqueOpeners24
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
70.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences64
matches
0"Her heart hammered a military"
1"Her command was swallowed by"
2"He didn’t even glance back."
3"He just vaulted over a"
4"She followed, her hand automatically"
5"He looked back at her,"
6"She knew it was a"
7"She’d seen the scorch marks"
8"She crossed the creaking planks,"
9"It was a bazaar of"
10"Her suspect was already melting"
11"It held up a gnarled"
12"it rasped, its voice like"
13"Her service pistol felt insignificant."
14"He never came back."
15"She looked past the creature."
16"He was getting away."
17"He had answers."
18"He knew things."
19"Her hand, still resting on"
ratio0.375
14.69% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences64
matches
0"The rain fell in cold,"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn’s leather-soled shoes"
2"Her heart hammered a military"
3"Tomás Herrera was fast, a"
4"Her command was swallowed by"
5"He didn’t even glance back."
6"He just vaulted over a"
7"A service entrance, likely for"
8"Adrenaline narrowed her world to"
9"She followed, her hand automatically"
10"The air changed as she"
11"The steps ended not in"
12"This wasn’t on any map."
13"A flicker of movement at"
14"Tomás, catching his breath, his"
15"He looked back at her,"
16"Quinn’s training screamed at her."
17"The memory of Morris, of"
18"The official report called it"
19"She knew it was a"
ratio0.891
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences64
matches
0"To follow Tomás was to"
1"Now, there were only the"
ratio0.031
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The crowd was a mosaic of the impossible—figures in hooded cloaks that seemed to drink the light, a woman with iridescent scales dusting her temples haggling ov…"
1"The whispered network that operated outside the law, the one she was sure was connected to Morris’s disappearance."
2"She reached into her coat pocket, her fingers brushing past her badge and closing around something else—a small, smooth object."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.8035%