Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTZ3TQWCAABMRFFXM9DMJK0

Run Details

Duration:
1m 4s
Cost:
$0.021678
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient oak standing stones marked the boundary like broken ribs protruting from the earth. Rory stepped past the threshold where Richmond Park ended and the Grove began. Darkness clung to the clearing, thick and heavy, yet the wildflowers bloomed in vibrant defiance of the November chill. Petals of violet and burnt orange opened wide, drinking in moonlight that shouldn't reach the forest floor. The air smelled of ozone and wet earth, mixed with the cloying sweetness of the blooming flowers. The scent made her stomach turn. She adjusted the collar of her jacket. The silver chain bit into the skin of her neck. The Heartstone pendant rested against her sternum, cold as ice despite the crimson gemstone's usual warmth. She pressed her thumb against the stone. Nothing. No pulse. No heat. "Come on," she whispered. Her breath plumed in the air, white and sharp. "You brought me here." The silence answered. No crickets chirped. No owls hooted. The stillness pressed against her eardrums, a physical weight. She walked toward the centre of the clearing. Her boots crushed dry leaves, though the ground beneath the flowers remained bare dirt. The sound echoed too loud, bouncing off trees that stood too close together. The trunks leaned inward, creating a canopy that blocked out the sky. Rory stopped. She turned in a slow circle. Bright blue eyes scanned the perimeter. The shadows between the trunks looked solid, darker than the night itself. She rubbed the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. The skin itched. A phantom pain shot up her arm. "I know you're watching." A branch snapped. The sound came from behind her left shoulder. She spun around. Nothing stood there but the gnarled root of an oak tree, twisted into the shape of a crouching man. The bark shifted. The knots in the wood resembled eyes. She pulled the pendant from under her jacket. The crimson gemstone caught the moonlight. A faint inner glow flickered within the depths of the crystal, then died. The silver chain felt heavy, dragging her head down. "Hel portal," she muttered. "Where is the door?" The wind picked up. It carried the scent of rotting sweet flowers. The smell intensified, coating the back of her throat. She tightened her grip on the stone. The silver chain dug into her fingers. Her knuckles turned white. Time felt slippery here. She checked her watch. The second hand ticked backward. She blinked. The hand moved forward again, then stalled. The face of the watch fogged over. "Right. Time moves differently." She forced her shoulders to relax. Panic clouded judgment. She needed clarity. She needed to find the source of the signal that drew the Heartstone here. She took a step forward. The flowers beneath her boot wilted instantly, turning to black sludge. She lifted her foot. The flowers remained dead. The sludge spread, creeping over the grass like oil. A whisper drifted through the clearing. It sounded like her name, but stretched out, distorted. "Rory..." She froze. The voice came from everywhere and nowhere. It vibrated in her teeth. "Show yourself." The shadows lengthened. They stretched toward her across the grass, defying the position of the moon. The darkness pooled around her ankles. Cold seeped through the soles of her boots. She looked down. The black sludge from the dead flowers crept toward her laces. It bubbled. She stepped back. The sludge followed. "This isn't right." The pendant vibrated against her chest. A low hum resonated through her ribs. The crimson glow intensified, casting bloody light onto the surrounding bark. The trees seemed to lean in. The bark shifted, resembling faces pressed against the wood from the inside. Mouths open. Eyes wide. Screaming silently. She backed away from the centre. Her heel caught on a root. She stumbled but caught her balance. The scar on her wrist burned. She looked down. The white line of the scar turned red, inflamed. Blood welled up beneath the skin. "Something's coming." The rustling started in the bushes surrounding the clearing. Not the wind. Something moved through the undergrowth. Heavy steps. Deliberate. They circled her. She turned to track the sound. Left. Right. Behind. The noise stopped when she faced it. The pendant grew hot. She hissed through her teeth but didn't let go. The glow pulsed now, rhythmic like a heartbeat. Thump. Thump. Thump. The heat seared her palm. Skin blistered. The shadows detached from the trees. They stood upright, human-shaped but featureless. They didn't walk. They glided over the grass. No feet touched the ground. "I didn't agree to this." The figures stopped ten feet away. They faced her. No eyes, yet she felt their gaze. The air pressure dropped. Her ears popped. The wildflowers around the figures turned grey and crumbled to dust. The dust hung in the air, choking her. She reached into her pocket for her phone. The screen remained black. Dead. The battery icon showed full charge a moment ago. "Great." She slipped the phone back into her pocket. Her hand trembled. She clenched it into a fist to stop the shaking. The heat from the pendant spread up her neck. She could smell singed hair. Her own hair. One of the shadows raised an arm. It pointed at the ground beneath her feet. The gesture jerked, mechanical. "You want me to dig?" The shadow didn't move. The hum from the stone increased in pitch. It whined, sharp and painful. She covered her ears. The sound came from inside her head now. Drilling into her brain. She dropped to her knees. The dirt felt warm. Soft. She dug with her bare hands. The soil gave way easily, too easily, like rotting meat. Her fingernails broke. Dirt packed under them. Mud coated her wrists. "How deep?" The shadows stepped closer. The circle tightened. The crimson light from the pendant illuminated the patch of earth. Something white glinted in the dirt. Bone. A finger bone. She stopped digging. Her breath came in short gasps. The cold from the ground seeped into her knees. The scar on her wrist throbbed in time with the pendant. The blood on her wrist dripped onto the bone. "This is a grave." The shadows leaned in. The scent of ozone overwhelmed the smell of earth. The hair on her arms stood up. Static electricity crackled around her. Sparks jumped from her fingers to the dirt. She looked up. The figures loomed over her. The moonlight vanished behind clouds that hadn't been there a moment ago. Total darkness swallowed the Grove, save for the crimson glow of the stone around her neck. The light cast long, distorted shadows of her own making. The pendant jerked. It pulled toward the hole she dug. Hard. It felt like a fish on a line. "It's not a portal." The shadows reached for her. Their fingers passed through her jacket without touching the fabric. Cold fire raced across her skin. It burned without heat. She scrambled back, kicking dirt into the hole. The bone disappeared under the soil. The hum stopped. Silence returned. Heavier than before. The pressure in her ears equalized with a pop. She stood up. Her legs shook. She wiped her hands on her trousers. The dirt smeared, dark and wet. Blood mixed with the mud. "What do you want?" The shadows receded. They merged back into the trees. The wildflowers bloomed again, vibrant and fresh. The scent of rot vanished. The air smelled clean. Too clean. Sterile. She stood alone in the clearing. The pendant cooled against her skin. The glow faded to a dull ember. The silver chain felt light again. She waited. Her heart hammered against her ribs. The silence stretched. Seconds turned into minutes. Or hours. She couldn't tell. The watch face remained fogged. A twig snapped. Close. Right behind her. She held her breath. The air remained still. No wind. No movement. The flowers didn't sway. The hair on the back of her neck rose. Warm breath brushed against her ear. Moist. Human. "Found you." She spun around. Her fist flew up. The clearing stood empty. The oak stones watched in silence. The pendant remained cold. The moonlight returned, pale and weak. She looked down at her wrist. The scar bled. A single drop of red welled up and traced the crescent moon shape. The blood ran down her hand, dripping onto the wildflowers. Where it landed, the flowers died. She wiped it away. The blood smeared across her palm. It didn't come off. "Enough." She turned toward the boundary stones. The path back to Richmond Park looked further away than before. The distance stretched. The stones seemed to move away as she approached. She walked. The stones didn't get closer. The flowers whispered as she passed. Words she couldn't understand. Hisses and clicks. She stopped. The whispering stopped. She took another step. The whispering started again. Louder. Angrier. She ran. Her boots pounded the earth. The stones remained distant. The shadows lengthened again, reaching for her heels. They grabbed at her ankles. She kicked them off. The pendant burned. She grabbed it. The heat seared her palm. She didn't let go. The skin smoked. "Open." The air in front of her shimmered. Heat waves distorted the view of the stones. A crack appeared in the air. Grey light bled through the tear. The light looked like static. The shadows surged forward. They moved faster now. Blurs of darkness. She reached for the crack. Her fingers brushed the grey light. It felt like static. It tasted like copper. A hand grabbed her shoulder. Fingers dug into the muscle. Real. Solid. She screamed.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.1
leniency0.2
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1605
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
12.77% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1605
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"silence"
count4
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"scanned"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"depths"
count1
10
word"crystal"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count1
12
word"vibrated"
count2
13
word"resonated"
count1
14
word"pulsed"
count1
15
word"rhythmic"
count1
16
word"trembled"
count1
17
word"mechanical"
count1
18
word"throbbed"
count1
19
word"grave"
count1
20
word"loomed"
count1
21
word"raced"
count1
22
word"traced"
count1
23
word"shimmered"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"stomach"
2"warmth"
3"pulse"
4"silence"
5"weight"
6"echoed"
7"scanned"
8"flickered"
9"depths"
10"crystal"
11"whisper"
12"vibrated"
13"resonated"
14"pulsed"
15"rhythmic"
16"trembled"
17"mechanical"
18"throbbed"
19"grave"
20"loomed"
21"raced"
22"traced"
23"shimmered"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences276
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences276
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences294
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen19
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1603
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions12
wordCount1546
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.19
worstName"Thump"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Thump"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Grove2
November1
Heartstone2
Thump3
persons
0"Grove"
1"November"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences125
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"sounded like her name, but stretched out,"
1"felt like a fish on a line"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1603
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences294
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs71
mean22.58
std17.9
cv0.793
sampleLengths
087
145
217
365
446
54
643
736
88
939
1029
114
1259
1315
141
1514
162
1746
186
193
2048
2142
222
2339
2431
2525
265
2742
2822
291
3038
3119
325
3333
3437
352
3628
3738
384
3933
4046
4119
424
4339
4417
4524
464
4728
4825
4925
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences276
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs292
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences294
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1548
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.021963824289405683
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.002583979328165375
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences294
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences294
mean5.45
std3.43
cv0.628
sampleLengths
015
113
219
317
417
56
67
710
816
97
101
112
122
134
149
154
163
173
183
199
208
2114
2213
2312
242
256
266
2712
2810
293
307
314
323
338
343
3519
363
377
388
396
4013
419
424
434
444
458
469
477
487
494
35.03% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats44
diversityRatio0.24829931972789115
totalSentences294
uniqueOpeners73
14.31% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences233
matches
0"Bright blue eyes scanned the"
ratio0.004
82.66% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount80
totalSentences233
matches
0"She adjusted the collar of"
1"She pressed her thumb against"
2"Her breath plumed in the"
3"She walked toward the centre"
4"Her boots crushed dry leaves,"
5"She turned in a slow"
6"She rubbed the small crescent-shaped"
7"She spun around."
8"She pulled the pendant from"
9"It carried the scent of"
10"She tightened her grip on"
11"Her knuckles turned white."
12"She checked her watch."
13"She forced her shoulders to"
14"She needed clarity."
15"She needed to find the"
16"She took a step forward."
17"She lifted her foot."
18"It sounded like her name,"
19"It vibrated in her teeth."
ratio0.343
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount216
totalSentences233
matches
0"The ancient oak standing stones"
1"Rory stepped past the threshold"
2"Darkness clung to the clearing,"
3"Petals of violet and burnt"
4"The air smelled of ozone"
5"The scent made her stomach"
6"She adjusted the collar of"
7"The silver chain bit into"
8"The Heartstone pendant rested against"
9"She pressed her thumb against"
10"Her breath plumed in the"
11"The silence answered."
12"The stillness pressed against her"
13"She walked toward the centre"
14"Her boots crushed dry leaves,"
15"The sound echoed too loud,"
16"The trunks leaned inward, creating"
17"She turned in a slow"
18"The shadows between the trunks"
19"She rubbed the small crescent-shaped"
ratio0.927
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences233
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Petals of violet and burnt orange opened wide, drinking in moonlight that shouldn't reach the forest floor."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
50.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.1
leniency0.2
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.2
81.8480%