Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTZ3VMR4T0VJW44T77JE34P

Run Details

Duration:
8.0s
Cost:
$0.000274
Provider:
Clarifai

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The brass knocker echoed like a gunshot in the quiet hallway. Rory froze mid-reach for her keys, her breath catching. That sound wasn’t just any visitor. It was the sound of the past slamming against her door. She turned slowly, her eyes narrowing as she saw the silhouette framed in the dim light beyond the peephole. Lucien Moreau. The Frenchman. Her ex. Her complicated, dangerous, infuriating ex. She didn’t bother with the peephole. She yanked the door open, the deadbolts scraping against the frame with a harsh, metallic screech. "What the hell, Evan?" she snapped, her voice tight. "I told you to stay away." He didn’t flinch. He stood there, impeccably tailored charcoal suit perfectly creased, the ivory-handled cane resting against his thigh. His platinum blond hair was slicked back, sharp angles under the hallway light. His heterochromatic eyes – one amber, one black – held a cold, unreadable gaze. "Rory," he said, his voice smooth as polished obsidian, cutting through the sudden silence. "It’s not Evan." Her heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic rhythm she couldn’t silence. "Then who the hell are you?" she demanded, stepping back into the cramped hallway, the scent of curry and old books from Eva’s flat thick in the air. The tabby cat, Ptolemy, blinked sleepily from the threshold. "Lucien Moreau," he replied, pushing the door open further, his presence filling the narrow space. "I believe you know who I am." He didn’t wait for an invitation. He stepped inside, the door swinging shut behind him with a soft click. The scent of expensive leather and something faintly metallic – his cane, perhaps – mingled with the familiar curry fumes. Rory’s gaze flicked to the cane, then back to his face. The scar on her own left wrist, a small crescent moon, pulsed with a familiar ache. "You’re here for the same reason you always were," she said, her voice low, dangerous. "Information. A job. A favor." He raised an eyebrow, a ghost of a smile touching his lips. "You assume too much, Rory. Or perhaps you assume too little. I’m here for you." She took a step back, her hand instinctively going to the scar. "Me? Why would you want me?" The question hung in the air, thick and charged. The attraction, the hurt, the things left unsaid – it all crashed down on her like a wave. She remembered the heat of his touch, the dangerous allure of his world, the way he’d shattered her heart with a single, cold command. "You left me," she finished, the words bitter on her tongue. He closed the distance between them, his eyes never leaving hers. "I didn’t leave you, Rory. I was expelled. By forces far beyond my control." He gestured vaguely towards the door, then back into the flat. "This place... it’s a sanctuary. Eva’s flat. But it’s also a trap. Someone knows you’re here. Someone dangerous." Rory’s eyes darted around the cluttered living room – the towering stacks of books, the scrolls spilling from shelves, the worn sofa where she’d cried herself to sleep after Evan. "Who?" she whispered, the fear she’d buried resurfacing. "Who knows?" "Someone who wants what you have," Lucien said, his voice dropping to a dangerous whisper. "Or rather, what you *were*. Before you ran. Before you hid." He reached into his tailored jacket, his movements precise. He didn’t pull out a weapon. He pulled out a small, intricately carved silver key. "This unlocks a box in Eva’s storage unit. Inside... there’s something that proves everything. Everything about you, Rory. And about me." He held the key out to her. She stared at it, then at his face, then back at the key. The past, the danger, the undeniable pull – it all swirled in her mind. "Why tell me now?" she asked, her voice barely a breath. "Why not just take it?" "Because," Lucien said, his amber eye locking onto hers, "I need you. Not just the key, but you. Your mind. Your... unique perspective. The things you see that others miss." He leaned in slightly, his breath warm against her ear. "And perhaps," he murmured, his voice dropping even lower, "because I still want you." The words hung in the air, thick and intoxicating. The scar on her wrist burned. The memory of his touch, the danger, the passion – it all surged back, a tidal wave she couldn’t resist. She didn’t take the key. She didn’t push him away. She simply looked at him, her blue eyes wide and uncertain, the past and the present colliding in that cramped, book-filled flat. The door was open. The past was standing on her threshold. The future, whatever it held, was about to unfold.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:48:35.488Z" 2/19/2026, 12:48:35 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.652
leniency1
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.067
80.82% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount782
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"perfectly"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
16.88% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount782
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"unreadable"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"familiar"
count2
4
word"flicked"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"eyebrow"
count1
7
word"charged"
count1
8
word"shattered"
count1
9
word"sanctuary"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"unreadable"
2"silence"
3"familiar"
4"flicked"
5"pulsed"
6"eyebrow"
7"charged"
8"shattered"
9"sanctuary"
10"whisper"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count2
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences56
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences56
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences64
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords787
ratio0.001
matches
0"were"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions11
wordCount609
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.49
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Frenchman1
Eva1
Ptolemy1
Rory3
Evan1
Lucien3
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Rory"
4"Evan"
5"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
72.94% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.271
wordCount787
matches
0"Not just the key, but you"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
38.51% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs14
mean56.21
std16.01
cv0.285
sampleLengths
067
137
263
349
461
547
627
780
854
940
1071
1150
1254
1387
99.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences56
matches
0"was slicked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs90
matches
0"was standing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences64
ratio0.094
matches
0"His heterochromatic eyes – one amber, one black – held a cold, unreadable gaze."
1"The scent of expensive leather and something faintly metallic – his cane, perhaps – mingled with the familiar curry fumes."
2"The attraction, the hurt, the things left unsaid – it all crashed down on her like a wave."
3"Rory’s eyes darted around the cluttered living room – the towering stacks of books, the scrolls spilling from shelves, the worn sofa where she’d cried herself to sleep after Evan."
4"The past, the danger, the undeniable pull – it all swirled in her mind."
5"The memory of his touch, the danger, the passion – it all surged back, a tidal wave she couldn’t resist."
91.54% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount604
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.04966887417218543
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.018211920529801324
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences64
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences64
mean12.3
std7.35
cv0.598
sampleLengths
011
19
26
311
419
52
62
72
85
96
1016
119
126
133
1416
1513
1614
1714
183
1912
2028
219
2215
2313
2413
2520
2611
2716
2815
295
3012
3115
3212
3315
3418
3524
3611
3711
3825
3918
4030
418
422
4315
4420
456
469
4721
487
4913
36.98% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.34375
totalSentences64
uniqueOpeners22
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences53
matches
0"It was the sound of"
1"She turned slowly, her eyes"
2"Her complicated, dangerous, infuriating ex."
3"She didn’t bother with the"
4"She yanked the door open,"
5"she snapped, her voice tight"
6"He didn’t flinch."
7"He stood there, impeccably tailored"
8"His platinum blond hair was"
9"His heterochromatic eyes – one"
10"he said, his voice smooth"
11"Her heart hammered against her"
12"she demanded, stepping back into"
13"he replied, pushing the door"
14"He didn’t wait for an"
15"He stepped inside, the door"
16"she said, her voice low,"
17"He raised an eyebrow, a"
18"She took a step back,"
19"She remembered the heat of"
ratio0.642
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences53
matches
0"The brass knocker echoed like"
1"Rory froze mid-reach for her"
2"That sound wasn’t just any"
3"It was the sound of"
4"She turned slowly, her eyes"
5"Her complicated, dangerous, infuriating ex."
6"She didn’t bother with the"
7"She yanked the door open,"
8"she snapped, her voice tight"
9"He didn’t flinch."
10"He stood there, impeccably tailored"
11"His platinum blond hair was"
12"His heterochromatic eyes – one"
13"he said, his voice smooth"
14"Her heart hammered against her"
15"she demanded, stepping back into"
16"The tabby cat, Ptolemy, blinked"
17"he replied, pushing the door"
18"He didn’t wait for an"
19"He stepped inside, the door"
ratio1
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"she snapped, her voice tight"
1"she said, her voice low, dangerous"
2"Lucien said, his voice dropping to a dangerous whisper"
3"He reached, his movements precise"
4"she asked, her voice barely a breath"
5"Lucien said, his amber eye locking onto hers,"
6"he murmured, his voice dropping even lower,"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she snapped (snap)"
1"she demanded (demand)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.435
leniency0.87
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.348
66.7777%