Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTZ3W5XWEDY24BEP6DK36JH

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Duration:
48.9s
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$0.047181
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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Literary Fiction genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The glass shattered against the floor before Rory's mind caught up with her hands. Silas looked up from wiping down the bar, one grey-streaked eyebrow raised. The Raven's Nest was empty this Tuesday afternoon, the green neon sign above the entrance flickering through the rain-streaked windows. Old maps covered the walls like accusations of places neither of them could return to. "Steady on, Carter." She crouched, gathering shards with trembling fingers. The woman at the corner table hadn't moved. Still had that same way of sitting, spine straight, hands folded in her lap like she was waiting for the headmistress to call her name. Eva Bennett. Eva fucking Bennett. "You alright?" Silas limped over with a dustpan. "Fine." Rory dumped the glass fragments, stood, wiped her palms on her jeans. The small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist caught the dim light. Childhood accidents left marks. So did the adult kind. Eva rose from her seat. Designer coat, pristine navy wool that probably cost more than Rory's monthly rent. Her blonde hair was shorter now, cut in a sharp bob that grazed her jawline. The girl who'd worn charity shop jumpers and laughed too loud had been sanded down, polished, remade into something that belonged in Mayfair boardrooms. "Rory." "Thought you were in Edinburgh." "Was." Eva crossed the worn floorboards, heels clicking against wood that had seen decades of secrets. "Came back last month. Merger and acquisitions for Hartley & Cross." "Fancy." "It pays." Eva glanced at the Golden Empress logo on Rory's jacket. "You're delivering for Chinese restaurants now?" The question landed like a fist. Not cruel. Worse. Curious. As if Rory had become something to be catalogued, explained to colleagues over after-work drinks. *Remember that brilliant girl from Cardiff? Yes, the one who was going to be a barrister. Bit of a shame, really.* "Someone's got to eat." "Of course." Eva smiled. The kind of smile that meant nothing. "I didn't mean anything by it. Just surprised, that's all. Your father was so proud when you got into the Pre-Law programme." Silas cleared his throat behind them. "Can I get you ladies something? On the house." "Gin and tonic," Eva said. "Hendrick's if you have it." "Pint of whatever's closest," Rory muttered. They sat at one of the small tables near the window. Rain hammered against the glass. Outside, Soho carried on being Soho, indifferent to reunions and the ghosts they dragged behind them. Eva pulled out her mobile, checked the screen, silenced it. "Still have your number saved. Thought about calling a hundred times." "Didn't though." "No." "Why?" Eva's fingers traced patterns on the table. She'd had a nervous tic back in Cardiff, used to pull at her left earlobe when she was thinking. The habit had vanished along with everything else that used to make her recognisable. Silas brought their drinks. Eva sipped hers like she was at a work function. Rory drank half her pint in one pull. "I heard about Evan," Eva said finally. "From who?" "Does it matter?" "Suppose not." Rory set her glass down too hard. Foam sloshed over the rim. "What did you hear?" "That you left. That it got bad before you did." The maps on the walls seemed to press inward. Prague. Berlin. Damascus. Places Silas had been, operations he'd run before his knee gave out and he'd traded fieldwork for poured whisky and whispered intelligence. Rory wondered if he'd ever regretted it. The leaving. The after. "You told me to come to London," Rory said. "Remember? Summer before final year. You said there was a job waiting. A place to stay." "I remember." "Then you stopped answering your phone." Eva's jaw tightened. Just a flicker, there and gone. "Things got complicated." "What things?" "Work things. Life things." She took another sip. "I met someone. James. He's a partner at the firm. We got engaged last year." "Congratulations." "Don't do that." "Do what?" "Use that voice." Eva leaned forward. "You think I don't know what you're thinking? That I sold out. That I'm some corporate shell who forgot where she came from." "I didn't say anything." "You didn't have to." Eva's hand moved to her earlobe, caught herself, pulled back. Old habits died hard. They just learned to hide better. "You always were so bloody righteous. Even at Cardiff. Walking around like the world owed you something for being clever." The accusation hung between them like cigarette smoke. Rory's fingers found the scar on her wrist. She'd got it falling from a tree, nine years old, reaching for something just beyond her grasp. Funny how some wounds became habit. "You called me," Rory said. "That night. After I left him. You said come to London, you said there was a flat, a job, a fresh start. So I got on the train with one bag and forty quid in my pocket. And when I arrived? Nothing. No answer. No flat. No you." "I know." "Silas found me sleeping in Victoria Station. Gave me the flat upstairs. Got me the delivery job through his mate at the Golden Empress." Rory drained her pint. "So yeah. I'm delivering spring rolls. And you're doing mergers and acquisitions. We've both landed somewhere." Eva's mobile buzzed again. She ignored it this time. Outside, a siren wailed past, chasing some emergency that had nothing to do with them. "James doesn't like complications," Eva said quietly. "He's from old money. Very particular about appearances. About who he's seen with." She met Rory's eyes. "I convinced myself I was protecting you. That you'd sort yourself out and I'd get in touch once things calmed down. Once I had everything arranged properly." "Did they? Calm down?" "No." Eva's laugh cracked in the middle. "They never do, do they? You just get better at pretending they have." A couple pushed through the door, shaking rain from their coats. Silas moved to serve them, his limp more pronounced in the damp weather. He'd told Rory once, late-night confidence over shared whisky, that he didn't miss the work. Just the person he'd been when he was doing it. The difference mattered. "I should go," Eva said. "Meeting in an hour." "Right." She stood, pulled on her coat. Paused. "Do you hate me?" Rory considered the question. Hating Eva would require caring enough to feel something that sharp. Mostly she just felt tired. "No." "Liar." Eva's smile was genuine this time. Sad, but genuine. "You were always a terrible liar. Remember that time you tried to convince Professor Matthews you'd read all of *Crime and Punishment* when you'd only watched the film?" "She saw right through me." "Everyone did. That was your problem. You wore everything on your face." Eva buttoned her coat. "Still do." She walked to the door. Stopped with her hand on the frame. "The flat I promised. It was my aunt's place in Hackney. She died six months after I told you about it. Left everything to her church." Eva's knuckles whitened against the wood. "I should have told you. Should have called, explained, helped you figure something else out. But James and I had just started dating and I was so desperate not to fuck it up. So I just... didn't. Didn't call. Didn't think about it. Didn't think about you sleeping in a train station because I was too much of a coward to admit I'd made a promise I couldn't keep." The door opened. Rain and traffic noise rushed in. "Eva." She looked back. "Is it worth it? The job, the fiancé, all of it?" Eva's hand went to her earlobe. Pulled. An old habit surfacing like a body in the Thames. She didn't answer. Just stepped into the rain and disappeared into the grey afternoon. Rory sat alone at the table. Silas brought another pint without being asked. "Friend of yours?" "Used to be." He nodded, limped back to the bar. The couple by the door were laughing about something, heads bent together like the world began and ended in their conversation. The maps on the walls marked countries neither would ever visit, battles long finished, borders redrawn by hands that had signed death warrants in triplicate. Rory's mobile buzzed. Delivery pickup in twenty minutes. Spring rolls and sweet and sour chicken to a flat in Marylebone. She'd ride her bike through the rain, arrive drenched, collect her tip, move on to the next address. Tomorrow she'd do it again. Next week. Next month. The green neon sign flickered outside. She picked up her pint. The glass was cold and solid and real. Eva was gone. Had been for years, really. Tonight was just the funeral.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Eva said finally [finally]"
1"Eva said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences70
tagDensity0.3
leniency0.6
rawRatio0.095
effectiveRatio0.057
89.63% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1447
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
79.27% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1447
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"shattered"
count1
1
word"eyebrow"
count1
2
word"pristine"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"flicker"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"shattered"
1"eyebrow"
2"pristine"
3"traced"
4"flicker"
5"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences117
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences117
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences165
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen70
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords24
totalWords1442
ratio0.017
matches
0"Remember that brilliant girl from Cardiff? Yes, the one who was going to be a barrister. Bit of a shame, really."
1"Crime and Punishment"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
13.01% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions67
wordCount876
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity2.74
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Rory18
Raven1
Nest1
Tuesday1
Bennett2
Mayfair1
Eva24
Golden1
Empress1
Cardiff2
Soho2
Foam1
Silas7
Old2
Sad1
Thames1
Marylebone1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Raven"
2"Bennett"
3"Eva"
4"Foam"
5"Silas"
6"Old"
places
0"Mayfair"
1"Golden"
2"Cardiff"
3"Soho"
4"Thames"
5"Marylebone"
globalScore0.13
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1442
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences165
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
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std19.03
cv1.03
sampleLengths
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402
4129
424
4344
4439
4553
462
4744
4824
4951
96.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences117
matches
0"been sanded"
1"being asked"
2"was gone"
44.96% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs172
matches
0"was waiting"
1"was thinking"
2"was doing"
3"were laughing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences165
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount881
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.032917139614074914
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.007945516458569807
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences165
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences165
mean8.74
std8.62
cv0.986
sampleLengths
014
112
220
315
43
57
68
725
82
93
108
1113
1212
134
145
155
1613
1715
1824
191
205
2116
2211
231
2412
256
266
272
281
291
3015
316
3210
335
344
354
367
3722
386
399
405
415
426
4311
445
4516
4610
4711
482
491
80.40% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.49696969696969695
totalSentences165
uniqueOpeners82
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences98
matches
0"Still had that same way"
1"Just a flicker, there and"
2"Just the person he'd been"
3"Mostly she just felt tired."
4"Just stepped into the rain"
ratio0.051
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences98
matches
0"She crouched, gathering shards with"
1"Her blonde hair was shorter"
2"They sat at one of"
3"She'd had a nervous tic"
4"She took another sip"
5"They just learned to hide"
6"She'd got it falling from"
7"She ignored it this time."
8"She met Rory's eyes"
9"He'd told Rory once, late-night"
10"She stood, pulled on her"
11"She walked to the door."
12"She looked back."
13"She didn't answer."
14"He nodded, limped back to"
15"She'd ride her bike through"
16"She picked up her pint."
ratio0.173
72.24% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences98
matches
0"The glass shattered against the"
1"Silas looked up from wiping"
2"The Raven's Nest was empty"
3"She crouched, gathering shards with"
4"The woman at the corner"
5"Eva fucking Bennett."
6"Silas limped over with a"
7"Rory dumped the glass fragments,"
8"The small crescent-shaped scar on"
9"Childhood accidents left marks."
10"Eva rose from her seat."
11"Designer coat, pristine navy wool"
12"Her blonde hair was shorter"
13"The girl who'd worn charity"
14"Eva crossed the worn floorboards,"
15"Eva glanced at the Golden"
16"The question landed like a"
17"Bit of a shame, really.*"
18"The kind of smile that"
19"Silas cleared his throat behind"
ratio0.776
51.02% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"As if Rory had become"
ratio0.01
73.73% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The girl who'd worn charity shop jumpers and laughed too loud had been sanded down, polished, remade into something that belonged in Mayfair boardrooms."
1"As if Rory had become something to be catalogued, explained to colleagues over after-work drinks."
2"The maps on the walls marked countries neither would ever visit, battles long finished, borders redrawn by hands that had signed death warrants in triplicate."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Eva crossed, heels clicking against wood that had seen decades of secrets"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences70
tagDensity0.1
leniency0.2
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.029
89.8181%