Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTZ440E7BKN5F90KRX0TQH2

Run Details

Duration:
1m 19s
Cost:
$0.003305
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain slicked the pavement into a mosaic of broken reflections as Detective Harlow Quinn descended the crumbling steps into the abandoned Tube station. Her footsteps echoed against the tiled walls, each sound swallowed by the vast darkness beyond the emergency lighting. The air hung thick with the scent of damp earth and something else—something metallic and wrong. DCI Wilkinson stood near the platform edge, his face illuminated by the harsh beam of a torch. He adjusted his glasses, the lenses fogged from the humidity. "Evening, Quinn." Harlow nodded, her eyes already scanning the scene. "What have we got?" "Jane Doe. Early thirties, no ID. Transit workers found her during their routine checks of the sealed stations." Wilkinson gestured toward the figure on the tracks. "Looks straightforward. Trespasser, probably drunk, fell onto the rails." Harlow approached the body, her movements precise. The victim lay on her back, arms outstretched as if embracing the darkness. Her clothes were expensive—a tailored coat, designer jeans—but torn in places, revealing pale skin beneath. No visible wounds, no signs of a struggle. No blood. "Too clean," Harlow murmured, crouching beside the remains. Her leather watch caught the light as she reached into her coat pocket for a pair of latex gloves. "Pardon?" "If she'd fallen, there'd be more damage. Scrapes, bruises, something." Harlow gently lifted the victim's hand. The nails were immaculate, dirt-free despite lying on the grimy tracks. "And these tracks haven't seen a train in fifteen years. The rails are rusted solid. No risk of electrocution." Wilkinson shone his torch at the rails. "Maybe she came down here to take her own life. Found a nice quiet spot." Harlow's gaze drifted upward, to the arched ceiling of the station. Water dripped somewhere in the distance, the sound echoing like a clock counting down. She noticed something glinting near the victim's feet and reached for it. A small brass compass, its casing etched with intricate symbols, green with age. The needle spun lazily, never settling in one direction. "Weird place to carry a compass," Wilkinson noted. "Especially underground." Harlow closed her fingers around it, the metal cold against her skin. "Not if you're looking for something." Footsteps echoed from the tunnel entrance. Harlow looked up to see a woman with curly red hair and round glasses approaching cautiously, a worn leather satchel slung over her shoulder. She stopped when she saw the police tape. "Detective Quinn? Eva Kowalski. You called me?" Harlow stood, slipping the compass into her pocket. "Thank you for coming, Ms. Kowalski. I understand you specialize in... unusual artifacts." Eva's eyes darted to the body, then quickly away. She tucked a strand of hair behind her left ear, a nervous habit. "I work in the British Museum's restricted archives. Ancient artifacts, yes. But I'm not sure how I can help with a police investigation." Wilkinson stepped forward. "The detective seems to think this is more than a simple accident." Harlow ignored him, focusing on Eva. "Have you ever seen anything like this?" She pulled the compass from her pocket and held it out. Eva's eyes widened as she reached for it, her fingers trembling slightly. "Where did you get this?" "It was with the victim." Eva turned the compass over in her hands, examining the etchings. "This is a Veil Compass. It points to supernatural rifts or portals. They're not common—in fact, they're supposed to be impossible to find outside of certain markets." She looked up, her green eyes serious. "This was crafted by a Shade artisan." Wilkinson scoffed. "Supernatural rifts? Shade artisans? What are you talking about?" Harlow's attention remained fixed on Eva. "The Veil Market?" Eva's grip tightened on the compass. "You know about it?" "I've heard rumors. An underground market that moves locations every full moon. Sells things that shouldn't exist." Harlow's voice dropped. "Three years ago, my partner DS Morris was investigating something similar before he died." "Morris..." Eva's eyes flickered with recognition. "I remember that case. Everyone said it was a heart attack, but the autopsy was inconclusive." Harlow knelt beside the body again, her movements methodical. "Wilkinson, look at her eyes." The DCI bent down, shining his torch on the victim's face. "What am I looking for?" "They're completely black. No pupil, no iris, just solid black." Wilkinson adjusted his glasses. "That's impossible. Must be a trick of the light." "Touch them," Harlow said flatly. Wilkinson recoiled. "I'm not touching a corpse's eyes!" Harlow gently pressed her gloved finger against the victim's eyelid. The skin was cold, unnaturally so, almost like stone. "They're not human anymore. Whatever she was, she became something else down here." Eva stepped closer, her curiosity overcoming her fear. "The Veil Compass... if she had this, she was either looking for a portal or trying to escape from one." She paused, tucking her hair behind her ear again. "The Market moves locations, but it always has an entrance somewhere in the abandoned tunnels beneath Camden." Harlow stood, her sharp jaw set in determination. "That's where we need to go." Wilkinson shook his head. "We can't just go chasing fairy tales based on a compass and some black eyes. There's a rational explanation for all of this." "Is there?" Harlow gestured around the abandoned station. "Then explain why there's no dirt under her nails, no torn clothing from a fall, no signs of how she got down here. Explain why her body temperature is dropping faster than normal, and why her skin is turning this peculiar shade of grey." Wilkinson fell silent, his torch beam trembling slightly as it illuminated the victim's face, which was indeed beginning to take on an ashen hue. Eva held up the compass. "If you're serious about going to the Market, you'll need a bone token to enter. They won't let just anyone in, especially not police." Harlow's eyes met Eva's. "Can you get one?" "I know people who might help. But Quinn, whatever happened to this woman, it's connected to things most people don't want to acknowledge exist. Things that got your partner killed." Harlow's expression didn't change, but her hand instinctively touched the worn leather watch on her left wrist—a gift from Morris on his last birthday. "That's exactly why I need to find out the truth." In the distance, the sound of dripping water continued, steady and persistent, like a heartbeat counting down to something none of them yet understood.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Harlow said flatly [flatly]"
1"Harlow gestured around [around]"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.222
leniency0.444
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.089
62.69% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1072
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"gently"
count2
1
adverb"lazily"
count1
2
adverb"cautiously"
count1
3
adverb"quickly"
count1
4
adverb"slightly"
count2
5
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"lazily"
2"cautiously"
3"quickly"
4"slightly"
5"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
44.03% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1072
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"mosaic"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count2
2
word"echoed"
count2
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"echoing"
count1
5
word"glinting"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
7
word"intricate"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"methodical"
count1
highlights
0"mosaic"
1"footsteps"
2"echoed"
3"scanning"
4"echoing"
5"glinting"
6"etched"
7"intricate"
8"flickered"
9"methodical"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences58
matches
0"t in determination"
93.60% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences58
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences92
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1066
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount572
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity3.32
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Detective1
Harlow19
Quinn1
Tube1
Wilkinson10
Eva10
Morris1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Wilkinson"
3"Eva"
4"Morris"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
95.65% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if embracing the darkness"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1066
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean23.69
std14.95
cv0.631
sampleLengths
058
127
22
312
435
545
627
71
846
922
1037
1122
1210
1318
1438
157
1621
1745
1815
1924
2017
215
2252
2311
249
2510
2634
2722
2814
2916
3010
3113
325
338
3432
3554
3614
3727
3852
3924
4029
418
4230
4334
4424
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs99
matches(empty)
49.69% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences92
ratio0.033
matches
0"The air hung thick with the scent of damp earth and something else—something metallic and wrong."
1"Her clothes were expensive—a tailored coat, designer jeans—but torn in places, revealing pale skin beneath."
2"Harlow's expression didn't change, but her hand instinctively touched the worn leather watch on her left wrist—a gift from Morris on his last birthday."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount577
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.038128249566724434
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.019064124783362217
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences92
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences92
mean11.59
std7.97
cv0.688
sampleLengths
024
118
216
317
410
52
68
74
826
99
107
1113
1215
138
142
158
1619
171
1816
1911
2019
217
2215
2311
2414
2512
2613
279
288
292
3012
316
326
3324
348
357
368
3713
389
3913
4023
413
4212
436
4418
4512
465
475
4811
4934
74.64% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4673913043478261
totalSentences92
uniqueOpeners43
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences54
matches
0"Her footsteps echoed against the"
1"He adjusted his glasses, the"
2"Her clothes were expensive—a tailored"
3"Her leather watch caught the"
4"She noticed something glinting near"
5"She stopped when she saw"
6"She tucked a strand of"
7"She pulled the compass from"
8"She looked up, her green"
9"She paused, tucking her hair"
ratio0.185
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences54
matches
0"The rain slicked the pavement"
1"Her footsteps echoed against the"
2"The air hung thick with"
3"He adjusted his glasses, the"
4"Harlow nodded, her eyes already"
5"Wilkinson gestured toward the figure"
6"Harlow approached the body, her"
7"The victim lay on her"
8"Her clothes were expensive—a tailored"
9"Harlow murmured, crouching beside the"
10"Her leather watch caught the"
11"Harlow gently lifted the victim's"
12"The nails were immaculate, dirt-free"
13"Wilkinson shone his torch at"
14"Harlow's gaze drifted upward, to"
15"Water dripped somewhere in the"
16"She noticed something glinting near"
17"A small brass compass, its"
18"The needle spun lazily, never"
19"Harlow closed her fingers around"
ratio0.944
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Wilkinson fell silent, his torch beam trembling slightly as it illuminated the victim's face, which was indeed beginning to take on an ashen hue."
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She looked up, her green eyes serious"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Harlow murmured (murmur)"
1"Wilkinson noted (note)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.067
leniency0.133
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.089
79.8431%