Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTZ45B42YYM5JET0YE02C3W

Run Details

Duration:
1m 59s
Cost:
$0.000933
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign flickered against the wet pavement of Soho, casting a sickly glow on the puddles. Inside The Raven’s Nest, the air was thick with the scent of old wood, cheap gin, and cigarette smoke that had long since soaked into the walls. Rory wiped down the bar’s mahogany surface with a damp cloth, her movements automatic. Silas was in the back, sorting inventory, leaving her to mind the few Tuesday night stragglers. The bell above the door jangled. A figure stepped in, shaking rain from a dark wool coat. Rory glanced up, her polite smile already forming. It faltered, then vanished completely. The man shrugged off his coat, revealing a tailored charcoal suit that fit him like a second skin. His hair, once a messy shock of blonde, was now trimmed close at the sides, a controlled sweep of silver-grey on top. He had the lean, sharp look of a blade. But the eyes were the same. A clear, unsettling green. Evan. He didn’t see her at first. He surveyed the room with a detached efficiency, his gaze skimming over the maps and photographs like they were exhibits in a poorly curated museum. Then his eyes landed on her, and the detachment shattered. Something flickered there—surprise, a quick calculation, then a smooth, practiced smile that didn’t reach his eyes. “Well,” he said, his voice deeper than she remembered, polished with a London accent that had buried the Cardiff lilt. “Aurora Carter. In the flesh.” “Evan.” “Just Evan these days. Dropped the ‘s.’ Cleaner.” He approached the bar, placing his hands flat on the wood. His signet ring—a new one, heavy and gold—clicked against the surface. “I heard you’d come to London. Didn’t expect to find you here.” He looked around, his smile turning faintly dismissive. “Behind a bar.” “I’m not behind it. I’m just wiping it.” She tossed the cloth under the counter. “What can I get you?” “Scotch. Neat. Whatever’s top shelf. He’ll know.” Evan gestured vaguely towards the back room. Rory didn’t move. “He’s busy.” Evan’s eyebrows lifted. A silent challenge. He leaned forward slightly. “You look well, Rory.” She didn’t answer. She turned, selected a bottle of Oban from the shelf, and poured a generous measure into a crystal tumbler. She set it before him with a quiet thud. The liquid shimmered amber in the dim light. He picked it up, swirled it, took a sip. “Excellent. You’ve developed a taste for the good stuff.” “I’ve developed a job that requires knowing what it is.” He chuckled, a dry, humorless sound. “Still sharp. I always liked that.” He took another sip, his eyes never leaving her face. “So. London. Running deliveries by day, wiping bars by night. Quite the career pivot from pre-law.” “It’s a living.” “Is it?” He let the question hang. “Your father must be thrilled. Brendan Carter’s daughter, a part-time courier.” The old tactic. A needle, disguised as conversation. She felt the familiar cold tighten in her stomach, the urge to justify, to explain. She swallowed it. “What brings you to this part of town, Evan? Slumming it?” “Business. I have interests in the area. Property development.” He gestured with his glass towards the window. “This whole block has potential. Underutilized.” A chill that had nothing to do with the damp evening seeped into her bones. “This bar isn’t for sale.” “Everything is for sale, Rory. It’s just a matter of price and persuasion.” He finished his scotch, set the glass down with a definitive click. “I’m surprised at you, holed up in a place like this. It’s… quaint. But it’s a dead end. You were meant for more.” “Were you?” The question, so flat and direct, seemed to catch him off guard. His polished composure cracked for a second, revealing a hardness beneath. “I adapted. The world isn’t a seminar room. It’s a market. I learned to play the game.” “And what game are you playing now?” “The only one that matters.” He signaled for another drink. This time, she poured it slowly, watching him. He had changed. The boy who wrote bad poetry and talked about joining the Peace Corps was gone, sanded away and replaced with this sleek, calculating man. But the essence was there, magnified. The need for control. The charm that could ice over in a heartbeat. “You left without a word,” he said, his tone conversational, as if discussing the weather. “I left a note.” “A note.” He snorted. “‘It’s not you, it’s me.’ Very original.” “It was true.” “Was it?” He leaned in closer, his voice dropping. “Or was it that you couldn’t handle the pressure? Couldn’t handle someone who actually expected something of you? Who saw your potential and wanted you to live up to it?” The words were like keys turning in old, rusted locks. She felt the ghost of his hand on her arm, not gripping, just resting, a warning. *You’re being irrational, Aurora. Think it through. I only want what’s best.* She looked down at her own hands, at the small crescent scar on her left wrist. A childhood fall from a tree. He used to trace it with his thumb. *A little mark,* he’d say. *Proof you survived.* Now, she saw it for what it was. Just a scar. “You mistook anxiety for ambition,” she said, her voice quiet but clear in the hushed bar. “Your ambition. I wasn’t living up to my potential. I was failing to live up to yours.” Evan stared at her. The polished veneer was back, but it was brittle. “And you think this is living up to it? Hiding in a pub?” “I’m not hiding. I’m working. I’m breathing. There’s a difference.” He shook his head, a gesture of profound disappointment. “Time has made you small, Rory. It’s a shame. We could have been spectacular.” The door to the back room opened. Silas emerged, his slight limp noticeable as he crossed the worn floorboards. He took in the scene with a single glance—Rory behind the bar, Evan facing her, the tension like a third person in the room. “Evening,” Silas said, his voice a low rumble. He didn’t look at Evan but moved to stand beside Rory, a silent, solid presence. He picked up the bottle of Oban and examined the label. “Help yourself to my best single malt, did you?” Evan turned, his smile returning, professional and cool. “Silas Blackwood. I’ve heard of you. I was just telling Aurora how much potential this location has.” “It realizes its potential every night it’s open,” Silas said, placing the bottle back on the shelf with deliberate care. “Which is by my say-so. Was there something else you wanted?” The dismissal was absolute. Evan’s jaw tightened. He looked from Silas to Rory, his gaze lingering on her face, searching for a crack, a hint of the old uncertainty. He found none. “No,” Evan said, straightening his cuffs. “I believe I have everything I came for.” He pulled a fifty-pound note from his wallet and laid it on the bar, covering the cost of the drinks with a sizable tip he knew would insult her. “For your trouble, Aurora.” He turned and walked to the door, shrugging his coat back on with a single, fluid motion. He paused with his hand on the latch, half-turning. The green neon light from outside caught the sharp planes of his face. For a fleeting moment, he looked like the ghost of the boy she’d known, superimposed on the stranger he’d become. Then he was gone, the bell jangling once more before falling silent. The note lay on the bar like a dead thing. Rory stared at it, then picked it up slowly. She walked to the till, opened it, and fed the note inside. The mechanism clanged shut with a final, heavy sound. Silas picked up Evan’s empty glass and held it to the light. “An old friend?” “Once.” He nodded, as if he’d expected that answer. He took the glass to the sink and began washing it with methodical care. “People change. Sometimes for the better. Sometimes they just calcify.” Rory looked at her reflection in the dark mirror behind the bottles. Her own face looked back, pale under the dim lights, her blue eyes watchful. She saw the girl she had been, nervous and eager to please. She saw the woman she was now, tired, working a job that wasn’t hers in a bar that wasn’t hers. But she was there. She was present. She had breathed through the encounter without breaking. “He wanted to buy the block,” she said quietly. Silas didn’t look up from the sink. “I gathered.” “He said I’d gotten small.” Silas rinsed the glass, dried it with a clean towel, and placed it back on the shelf. He turned, leaning against the sink, his hazel eyes steady on her. “Did you believe him?” Outside, a car sped through a puddle, sending a wave of water against the pavement. The neon sign buzzed. Rory looked away from her reflection, towards the door, where the ghost of Evan had finally dissipated into the London night. “No,” she said. “I didn’t.”
created_at"2026-02-19T12:48:45.419Z" 2/19/2026, 12:48:45 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
94.74% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"He looked around [around]"
1"Evan gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
2"she said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.351
leniency0.702
rawRatio0.15
effectiveRatio0.105
83.71% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1535
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count2
3
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
1"slightly"
2"slowly"
3"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
31.60% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1535
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"shattered"
count1
2
word"lilt"
count1
3
word"crystal"
count1
4
word"shimmered"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"potential"
count5
8
word"chill"
count1
9
word"calculating"
count1
10
word"charm"
count1
11
word"profound"
count1
12
word"tension"
count1
13
word"fleeting"
count1
14
word"methodical"
count1
15
word"encounter"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"shattered"
2"lilt"
3"crystal"
4"shimmered"
5"familiar"
6"stomach"
7"potential"
8"chill"
9"calculating"
10"charm"
11"profound"
12"tension"
13"fleeting"
14"methodical"
15"encounter"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"the air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences111
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences111
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences148
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords18
totalWords1526
ratio0.012
matches
0"You’re being irrational, Aurora. Think it through. I only want what’s best."
1"A little mark,"
2"Proof you survived."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount1110
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.99
worstName"Evan"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Tuesday1
London2
Cardiff1
Evan11
Rory9
Oban2
Peace1
Corps1
Aurora1
Silas8
persons
0"Evan"
1"Rory"
2"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
2"London"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore0.667
87.50% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if discussing the weather"
1"looked like the ghost of the boy she’d kn"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1526
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences148
matches
0"expected that answer"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean27.75
std19.41
cv0.699
sampleLengths
075
130
260
357
425
51
653
720
814
95
1014
1139
1218
1310
1438
153
1618
1737
1823
1920
2048
212
2240
237
2464
2515
264
2711
283
2939
3038
3149
3233
3326
3410
3523
3643
3743
3825
3931
4032
4147
4259
4312
4440
4515
461
4732
4873
499
98.94% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences111
matches
0"was gone"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs206
matches(empty)
84.94% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences148
ratio0.02
matches
0"Something flickered there—surprise, a quick calculation, then a smooth, practiced smile that didn’t reach his eyes."
1"His signet ring—a new one, heavy and gold—clicked against the surface."
2"He took in the scene with a single glance—Rory behind the bar, Evan facing her, the tension like a third person in the room."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1117
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.02775290957923008
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.009847806624888093
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences148
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences148
mean10.31
std6.71
cv0.651
sampleLengths
018
127
214
316
46
511
68
75
818
922
109
116
124
131
146
1525
1610
1716
1820
195
201
2119
2211
2320
243
2515
265
2714
283
292
303
313
324
334
343
3519
369
378
389
399
4010
416
4216
4316
443
457
4611
473
485
4915
44.82% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.31756756756756754
totalSentences148
uniqueOpeners47
92.59% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences108
matches
0"Then his eyes landed on"
1"Just a scar."
2"Then he was gone, the"
ratio0.028
27.41% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount52
totalSentences108
matches
0"It faltered, then vanished completely."
1"His hair, once a messy"
2"He had the lean, sharp"
3"He didn’t see her at"
4"He surveyed the room with"
5"he said, his voice deeper"
6"He approached the bar, placing"
7"His signet ring—a new one,"
8"He looked around, his smile"
9"She tossed the cloth under"
10"He leaned forward slightly."
11"She didn’t answer."
12"She turned, selected a bottle"
13"She set it before him"
14"He picked it up, swirled"
15"He chuckled, a dry, humorless"
16"He took another sip, his"
17"He let the question hang"
18"She felt the familiar cold"
19"She swallowed it."
ratio0.481
6.30% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount98
totalSentences108
matches
0"The green neon sign flickered"
1"Rory wiped down the bar’s"
2"Silas was in the back,"
3"The bell above the door"
4"A figure stepped in, shaking"
5"Rory glanced up, her polite"
6"It faltered, then vanished completely."
7"The man shrugged off his"
8"His hair, once a messy"
9"He had the lean, sharp"
10"A clear, unsettling green."
11"He didn’t see her at"
12"He surveyed the room with"
13"Something flickered there—surprise, a quick"
14"he said, his voice deeper"
15"He approached the bar, placing"
16"His signet ring—a new one,"
17"He looked around, his smile"
18"She tossed the cloth under"
19"Evan gestured vaguely towards the"
ratio0.907
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
ratio0
76.41% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Inside The Raven’s Nest, the air was thick with the scent of old wood, cheap gin, and cigarette smoke that had long since soaked into the walls."
1"Something flickered there—surprise, a quick calculation, then a smooth, practiced smile that didn’t reach his eyes."
2"The boy who wrote bad poetry and talked about joining the Peace Corps was gone, sanded away and replaced with this sleek, calculating man."
3"He looked from Silas to Rory, his gaze lingering on her face, searching for a crack, a hint of the old uncertainty."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"He looked around, his smile turning faintly dismissive"
1"he said, his tone conversational, as if discussing the weather"
2"He leaned, his voice dropping"
3"she said, her voice quiet but clear in the hushed bar"
4"Silas said, his voice a low rumble"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.14
leniency0.281
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.8541%