| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1682 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 28.66% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1682 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "scanned" | | 5 | "sentinel" | | 6 | "echo" | | 7 | "comforting" | | 8 | "flicker" | | 9 | "vibrated" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "familiar" | | 13 | "stomach" | | 14 | "throbbed" | | 15 | "echoed" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "knuckles turned white" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "knuckles turned white" | | 1 | "hung in the air" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 309 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 3 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 309 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 309 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 20 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 15 | | markdownWords | 65 | | totalWords | 1681 | | ratio | 0.039 | | matches | | 0 | "You brought the key." | | 1 | "You woke it." | | 2 | "Time runs out, Aurora." | | 3 | "Death is a door." | | 4 | "You do not own the stone." | | 5 | "There is no home." | | 6 | "You are already dreaming." | | 7 | "The Grove keeps what it takes." | | 8 | "You offer yourself?" | | 9 | "The stone is not mine to give." | | 10 | "The mark binds you." | | 11 | "Then you cannot leave." | | 12 | "Not yet." | | 13 | "When the portal opens." | | 14 | "Where the blood meets the stone." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 0 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 96.46% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 45 | | wordCount | 1681 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.07 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 2 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Grove | 6 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 18 | | Evan | 2 | | You | 9 | | Real | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Grove" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Carter" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Evan" | | 5 | "You" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.965 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 127 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1681 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 309 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 110 | | mean | 15.28 | | std | 12.96 | | cv | 0.848 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 71 | | 1 | 42 | | 2 | 38 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 40 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 31 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 44 | | 12 | 45 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 31 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 27 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 36 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 47 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 42 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 33 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 28 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 22 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 34 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 26 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 309 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 326 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 309 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1682 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.021997621878715814 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004161712247324614 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 309 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 309 | | mean | 5.44 | | std | 3.12 | | cv | 0.574 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 36.08% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 43 | | diversityRatio | 0.23300970873786409 | | totalSentences | 309 | | uniqueOpeners | 72 | |
| 75.19% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 266 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the wind moved the" | | 1 | "Then it stopped." | | 2 | "Only the moonlight outside the" | | 3 | "Just smooth skin where sockets" | | 4 | "Then give me back my" | | 5 | "*Then you cannot leave.*" |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 74.14% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 97 | | totalSentences | 266 | | matches | | 0 | "She pulled her jacket tighter" | | 1 | "Her fingers found the silver" | | 2 | "She scanned the tree line." | | 3 | "She touched the small crescent-shaped" | | 4 | "You wanted answers." | | 5 | "You walked through the door." | | 6 | "Her breath plumed in the" | | 7 | "She moved deeper into the" | | 8 | "She turned back to the" | | 9 | "She slipped the chain over" | | 10 | "She snapped her head toward" | | 11 | "Her hair stuck to her" | | 12 | "I am not doing this." | | 13 | "I am not losing it" | | 14 | "She walked toward the oak." | | 15 | "She held her breath until" | | 16 | "They pooled around the base" | | 17 | "She took a step back." | | 18 | "She checked her watch." | | 19 | "She shoved the watch into" |
| | ratio | 0.365 | |
| 20.15% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 234 | | totalSentences | 266 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 1 | "Rory stepped across the boundary" | | 2 | "The air changed instantly." | | 3 | "The city hum faded into" | | 4 | "She pulled her jacket tighter" | | 5 | "Her fingers found the silver" | | 6 | "The Heartstone pendant rested against" | | 7 | "A steady rhythm, like a" | | 8 | "Warmth radiated from the gemstone," | | 9 | "She scanned the tree line." | | 10 | "Wildflowers bloomed in the shadows," | | 11 | "Poppies bled into violets, and" | | 12 | "This place does not follow" | | 13 | "She touched the small crescent-shaped" | | 14 | "The skin tingled." | | 15 | "You wanted answers." | | 16 | "You walked through the door." | | 17 | "Her breath plumed in the" | | 18 | "She moved deeper into the" | | 19 | "The ground felt spongy, absorbing" |
| | ratio | 0.88 | |
| 18.80% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 266 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.004 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |