Run: 2026-02-19-01KHV16Z6M0HF7WESG4J96CXPY

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Duration:
1m
Cost:
$0.005116
Provider:
AtlasCloud

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the pavement outside The Raven's Nest, blurring the distinctive green neon sign into a smeared emerald ghost. Aurora pushed open the heavy oak door and stepped out of the London downpour. Water dripped from the hem of her jacket onto the worn floorboards. The air inside smelled of stale beer, lemon polish, and old paper. Maps covered the walls, their edges curling in the humidity. Black-and-white photographs watched from the shadows, faces frozen in moments of history. Aurora scanned the room. Only one customer sat at the bar. Silas Blackwood wiped a glass with a rag, his movements slow and deliberate. The grey streaks in his auburn hair caught the low light. He wore a waistcoat over a white shirt, the sleeves rolled to his elbows. A silver signet ring glinted on his right hand as he turned the glass. He looked up. The rag stopped moving. Aurora walked toward him. Her boots clicked against the wood. She stopped two stools away from him. Silas set the glass down on the counter. The clink echoed in the quiet room. He studied her face, his hazel eyes narrowing. Aurora tucked a strand of straight black hair behind her ear. The movement exposed the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. Silas reached for a bottle of whiskey. He poured two fingers into a tumbler. He slid it across the bar toward her. You look different. Aurora wrapped her hands around the glass. The warmth seeped into her palms. Time does that. Five years. Six. Silas leaned on the bar. His weight shifted to his right leg. The left knee stayed stiff. He rubbed his thumb over the rim of his own glass. Cardiff feels like a lifetime ago. It was. You left without saying goodbye. Aurora took a sip. The alcohol burned her throat. She set the glass down. There wasn't time for goodbyes. Silas nodded. He looked at the maps on the wall behind her. His gaze lingered on a chart of the English Channel. Eva told me you were in London. She didn't say you were hiding. I'm not hiding. You walk like someone checking the exits. Aurora turned on her stool. She faced the room. The door stood behind her. The kitchen lay to the left. One way out. Old habits. Silas poured himself a drink. He raised the glass but didn't drink. You studied law. Pre-Law at Cardiff. You wanted to argue cases in a courtroom. Stand behind a desk. Wear a suit. Plans change. They do. Silas took a sip. He winced as the liquid went down. He placed the glass back on the coaster with precision. What do you do now? I deliver food. For who? Yu-Fei. Golden Empress. Silas let out a short breath. It sounded like a laugh but lacked humour. From barrister's daughter to delivery rider. That's a shift. It pays the rent. And the flat above the bar? Aurora tightened her grip on the tumbler. I haven't moved in yet. Silas tilted his head. You say that like you're convincing yourself. Aurora looked into the amber liquid. Her reflection stared back, distorted by the curve of the glass. Her bright blue eyes looked darker in the dim light. I needed space. From me? From everything. Silas straightened up. He walked around the bar. The limp pronounced itself with every step. He stopped in front of her. He smelled of sandalwood and tobacco. You ran from Evan. Aurora flinched. The name hung in the air between them. Everyone knows that. Not everyone. I know. Silas reached out. He hovered his hand near her wrist. He didn't touch the scar. He pulled his hand back. He hurt you. He's gone. Is he? He's not here. Silas turned away. He walked back to the taps. He checked the pressure gauge on the beer line. His back remained straight, but his shoulders slumped slightly. You were brilliant, Rory. You could have dismantled any argument they put in front of you. You had the mind for it. I have a different mind now. For survival. Yes. Silas turned back. He leaned against the counter. He crossed his arms. The silver ring caught the light again. I could have helped. You were in Prague. I came back. You were recovering. I could have made time. Aurora stood up. She walked to the window. Rain streaked the glass. The green neon sign buzzed outside. You had your own wounds. That doesn't mean I abandoned you. You didn't abandon me. I left. Same thing. Aurora turned around. She leaned against the window ledge. The condensation soaked into her jacket. I couldn't ask you for anything. Not after what happened to your leg. Not after the operation went wrong. You lost your career. I lost a job. I didn't lose my friends. You lost a part of yourself. I saw it. Silas walked toward her. He stopped a foot away. He looked down at her. He stood a head taller. We all lose parts. It's what we keep that matters. Aurora looked at his knee. She remembered the stories about the botched operation. The silence that followed his return to London. The bar opening as a cover. You opened this place to watch the city. I opened it to have a place where people could find me. Did you want me to find you? Silas looked at the door. The lock clicked as the wind pushed against it. I hoped. Aurora pushed off the window. She walked back to the bar. She picked up her glass. She drained the rest of the whiskey. I'm here now. For how long? I live in the city. That's not an answer. It's the only one I have. Silas picked up the bottle. He offered to pour more. Aurora shook her head. He put the bottle down. Eva worries. She worries too much. She loves you. I know. Silas rubbed his beard. The grey hairs stood out against the auburn. You look tired, Rory. I am. Sleep helps. Not always. Silas reached under the counter. He pulled out a set of keys. He placed them on the bar. The metal clattered against the wood. What are these? The flat. Above the bar. Aurora stared at the keys. I told you. I haven't moved in. You will. I didn't ask for this. You don't have to ask. Silas pushed the keys closer. They slid across the polished surface. They stopped against her hand. Take them. Aurora looked at the keys. Then at Silas. Why? Because you're safe here. The locks are good. The walls are thick. And you? I'll be downstairs. Aurora picked up the keys. The metal felt cold. This doesn't fix the last six years. No. It doesn't fix Evan. No. It doesn't fix Prague. Silas picked up his glass. He finished the whiskey. He set the glass down. The sound was final. Nothing fixes the past. We just build around it. Aurora closed her hand around the keys. She slipped them into her pocket. I have a shift tomorrow. At the restaurant? Yes. Go home. Rest. I need to work. You need to sleep. Aurora grabbed her jacket. She pulled it tight around her. I'll think about it. Silas nodded. He picked up the rag. He started wiping the counter again. The circular motion resumed. Don't think too long. The rain isn't stopping. Aurora walked to the door. She put her hand on the handle. She looked back. Silas didn't look up. He focused on the wood grain. Goodnight, Silas. Night, Rory. Aurora opened the door. The sound of the rain rushed in. She stepped out into the night. The green neon sign flickered above her head. She pulled her collar up. She walked down the street. Her hand stayed in her pocket. Her fingers traced the teeth of the key.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.20% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1315
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
73.38% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1315
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"echoed"
2"warmth"
3"weight"
4"silence"
5"flickered"
6"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences256
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences256
filterMatches
0"look"
1"know"
hedgeMatches
0"happened to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences256
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen19
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1311
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions85
wordCount1311
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.83
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
London3
Blackwood1
English1
Channel1
Cardiff2
Empress1
Evan2
Rory3
Prague2
Silas24
Aurora22
You21
persons
0"Nest"
1"Blackwood"
2"Evan"
3"Rory"
4"Silas"
5"Aurora"
6"You"
places
0"Raven"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
3"Prague"
globalScore0.585
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences93
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like a laugh but lacked humour"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1311
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences256
matches
0"say that like"
1"keep that matters"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs137
mean9.57
std11.39
cv1.19
sampleLengths
079
163
27
340
422
522
63
713
83
92
101
1128
126
132
145
1514
165
1722
1813
193
207
2123
222
2312
2421
252
262
2721
285
293
302
313
3214
339
344
356
367
375
384
397
4027
413
422
432
4427
454
4610
473
482
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences256
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs260
matches
0"were hiding"
1"were recovering"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences256
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1316
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.018996960486322188
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0022796352583586625
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences256
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences256
mean5.12
std2.74
cv0.536
sampleLengths
019
114
212
312
410
512
64
77
813
911
1014
1114
123
134
144
156
167
178
187
198
2011
2111
227
237
248
253
267
276
283
292
301
315
327
335
3411
356
362
375
384
395
405
415
422
4310
4410
457
466
473
487
495
37.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats31
diversityRatio0.2265625
totalSentences256
uniqueOpeners58
30.86% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences216
matches
0"Only one customer sat at"
1"Then at Silas."
ratio0.009
10.74% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount113
totalSentences216
matches
0"He wore a waistcoat over"
1"He looked up."
2"Her boots clicked against the"
3"She stopped two stools away"
4"He studied her face, his"
5"He poured two fingers into"
6"He slid it across the"
7"You look different."
8"His weight shifted to his"
9"He rubbed his thumb over"
10"You left without saying goodbye."
11"She set the glass down."
12"He looked at the maps"
13"His gaze lingered on a"
14"She didn't say you were"
15"I'm not hiding."
16"You walk like someone checking"
17"She faced the room."
18"He raised the glass but"
19"You studied law."
ratio0.523
6.30% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount196
totalSentences216
matches
0"Aurora pushed open the heavy"
1"Water dripped from the hem"
2"The air inside smelled of"
3"Maps covered the walls, their"
4"Aurora scanned the room."
5"Silas Blackwood wiped a glass"
6"The grey streaks in his"
7"He wore a waistcoat over"
8"A silver signet ring glinted"
9"He looked up."
10"The rag stopped moving."
11"Aurora walked toward him."
12"Her boots clicked against the"
13"She stopped two stools away"
14"Silas set the glass down"
15"The clink echoed in the"
16"He studied her face, his"
17"Aurora tucked a strand of"
18"The movement exposed the small"
19"Silas reached for a bottle"
ratio0.907
23.15% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences216
matches
0"Because you're safe here."
ratio0.005
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences20
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
82.9729%