Run: 2026-02-19-01KHV72HMP1FWNC3F862YM406Y

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Duration:
31.7s
Cost:
$0.026679
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest was quiet on Tuesday evenings. Rory had come to depend on that. She sat at the far end of the bar with a glass of red she hadn't asked for — Silas had set it down in front of her without a word, reading whatever it was he always read in the way she held her shoulders — and she was working through a crossword that had already defeated her twice. Silas moved glassware at the other end of the bar, the clink of it a slow, unhurried rhythm. Two men in the corner shared a bottle of something amber. The old maps on the walls soaked up the low light and gave nothing back. The door opened. Rory didn't look up. Doors opened. But then Silas said, "Evening," in the particular register he used for strangers, and something in the quality of the silence that followed made her lift her eyes. The woman standing just inside the entrance was shaking rain from a pale mac, her dark hair cut short in a way that changed the whole geography of her face. She was thinner than Rory remembered. She had a new way of holding herself — upright, composed, the kind of stillness that looked practised. She was scanning the room the way people scan rooms when they expect to recognise no one. Then she saw Rory. Neither of them moved for a moment. "Rory." The name came out soft, almost experimental, like she was testing whether it still fit. "Priya." Rory set the crossword face down on the bar. "What are you doing here?" Priya walked over slowly, unbuttoning her mac as she came. Up close, the changes were sharper. There was a tiredness behind her eyes that hadn't been there at twenty-two, and something else, something more guarded. She'd always been the one who talked with her whole face. Rory used to tease her about it — you couldn't lie to save your life, she'd said once, you broadcast everything. The face in front of her now broadcast very little. "I'm meeting someone." Priya glanced down the bar, then back. "They're not here yet." "Sit down." She hesitated, just briefly enough to notice, then pulled out the stool two along from Rory's. Not adjacent. Silas materialised, unhurried as weather, and Priya ordered a gin and tonic without looking at the bottles. Silas withdrew. "You live above here," Priya said. "I didn't know that." "How did you know that?" "Mina told me." A pause. "She mentioned it when I called her at Christmas." "You call Mina at Christmas." "I call Mina at Christmas." Rory turned the crossword over, more for something to do with her hands than from any interest in finishing it. Three years. Three years since she'd last seen Priya, and that occasion had not been a good one — a going-away party for someone whose name she barely remembered now, a flat in Bethnal Green, and Priya telling her across a kitchen counter that she thought Rory was making a terrible mistake staying with Evan. Rory had told her to mind her own life. They'd not spoken since. "You cut your hair," Rory said. "Eighteen months ago." Priya wrapped both hands around her glass. "You kept yours." "Mine's shorter than it was." "Is it?" "A bit." Priya smiled, small and brief, and for just a second it was the old smile, the one that arrived without warning and took over her whole face. Then it receded. "You look well," Priya said. "You don't have to do that." "I'm not doing anything." "The polite thing. You're doing the polite thing and it's strange coming from you." Rory drank some of her wine. "You look tired." Priya absorbed this without offence. "I've been in Singapore for two years. Jet lag's become a sort of permanent condition." "Singapore." Rory hadn't known that. "Work?" "Regional director. Financial services." She said it flatly, as if reading from a document. "It's a good role." "But?" "No but. It's a good role." Rory said nothing. The two men in the corner laughed at something, the sound bouncing off the old maps, and then the bar went quiet again. "How's your dad?" Priya asked. "Fine. I don't speak to him much." "And your mum?" "Priya." "What?" "We're not doing the family round-robin." Rory turned on her stool to look at her directly. "We haven't spoken in three years. You can ask me the actual thing." Something shifted in Priya's expression. The composure didn't crack exactly, but it thinned slightly, like ice in February. She looked down at her glass, moved it a quarter-turn on the bar. "Are you alright?" she said. "After — are you alright?" "I am." Rory held her gaze. "I left. Eventually." Priya nodded slowly. Whatever she was feeling, she kept it behind her eyes. The old Priya would have reached over and grabbed her arm by now, would have had tears in, would have said something urgent and heartfelt and slightly too loud for the room. This Priya sat with her hands still around her glass and nodded. "I should have called," she said. "When I heard." "You didn't know I was in London." "Mina knew." Rory didn't answer that. "I thought about it," Priya said. "Calling. A few times." "What stopped you?" The question sat between them. Priya lifted her gin and took a long sip before setting it down with the kind of care that meant she was buying herself time to find an honest answer. "I didn't know if you'd want me to," she said finally. "And Singapore was easier." "Singapore was —" She stopped. Started again. "Singapore was something I could make sense of. Targets, timelines, outcomes." Her thumb traced the rim of her glass. "You and I were never tidy." "We were best friends for nine years." "I know what we were." Silas passed at the far end of the bar, unhurried, not looking at them. The neon green from the sign above the door threw a faint wash of colour through the front window onto the floorboards. "I'm sorry," Priya said. "For the party. For what I said." "You were right." "That doesn't mean I said it well."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.328
leniency0.656
rawRatio0.05
effectiveRatio0.033
75.85% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1035
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count2
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
80.68% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1035
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"sense of"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"scanning"
2"sense of"
3"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences69
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences109
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen57
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1037
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount765
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.35
worstName"Priya"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Priya"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Tuesday1
Silas6
Rory17
Priya18
Bethnal1
Green1
Evan1
February1
Started1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Silas"
2"Rory"
3"Priya"
4"Evan"
places
0"Bethnal"
1"February"
globalScore0.324
windowScore0.167
89.02% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences41
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if reading from a document"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1037
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs62
mean16.73
std20.01
cv1.196
sampleLengths
074
144
23
36
428
571
64
77
816
915
1077
1114
122
1337
1410
155
1614
175
185
1988
206
2113
225
232
242
2530
265
276
284
2923
3020
316
3218
331
346
3526
365
377
383
391
401
4129
4231
4310
449
4557
469
477
482
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount7
totalVerbs142
matches
0"was working"
1"was shaking"
2"was scanning"
3"was testing"
4"was making"
5"was feeling"
6"was buying"
38.01% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences109
ratio0.037
matches
0"She sat at the far end of the bar with a glass of red she hadn't asked for — Silas had set it down in front of her without a word, reading whatever it was he always read in the way she held her shoulders — and she was working through a crossword that had already defeated her twice."
1"She had a new way of holding herself — upright, composed, the kind of stillness that looked practised."
2"Rory used to tease her about it — you couldn't lie to save your life, she'd said once, you broadcast everything."
3"Three years since she'd last seen Priya, and that occasion had not been a good one — a going-away party for someone whose name she barely remembered now, a flat in Bethnal Green, and Priya telling her across a kitchen counter that she thought Rory was making a terrible mistake staying with Evan."
95.17% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount747
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.04551539491298527
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.013386880856760375
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean9.51
std9.5
cv0.998
sampleLengths
08
17
259
318
411
515
63
74
82
928
1030
116
1218
1317
144
157
1616
1710
185
1910
206
2119
2211
2321
2410
2510
264
272
2816
292
3017
312
326
334
345
355
369
375
385
3920
402
4153
429
434
446
4510
463
475
482
492
58.41% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3944954128440367
totalSentences109
uniqueOpeners43
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences55
matches
0"Then she saw Rory."
1"Then it receded."
ratio0.036
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences55
matches
0"She sat at the far"
1"She was thinner than Rory"
2"She had a new way"
3"She was scanning the room"
4"She'd always been the one"
5"She hesitated, just briefly enough"
6"They'd not spoken since."
7"She said it flatly, as"
8"She looked down at her"
9"she said finally"
10"Her thumb traced the rim"
ratio0.2
23.64% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences55
matches
0"The Raven's Nest was quiet"
1"Rory had come to depend"
2"She sat at the far"
3"Silas moved glassware at the"
4"The old maps on the"
5"The door opened."
6"Rory didn't look up."
7"The woman standing just inside"
8"She was thinner than Rory"
9"She had a new way"
10"She was scanning the room"
11"Neither of them moved for"
12"The name came out soft,"
13"Rory set the crossword face"
14"Priya walked over slowly, unbuttoning"
15"She'd always been the one"
16"Rory used to tease her"
17"The face in front of"
18"Priya glanced down the bar,"
19"She hesitated, just briefly enough"
ratio0.873
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
ratio0
5.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"She sat at the far end of the bar with a glass of red she hadn't asked for — Silas had set it down in front of her without a word, reading whatever it was he al…"
1"The woman standing just inside the entrance was shaking rain from a pale mac, her dark hair cut short in a way that changed the whole geography of her face."
2"She had a new way of holding herself — upright, composed, the kind of stillness that looked practised."
3"There was a tiredness behind her eyes that hadn't been there at twenty-two, and something else, something more guarded."
4"Priya lifted her gin and took a long sip before setting it down with the kind of care that meant she was buying herself time to find an honest answer."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She said, as if reading from a document"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.18
leniency0.361
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.4312%