| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 20 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 61 | | tagDensity | 0.328 | | leniency | 0.656 | | rawRatio | 0.05 | | effectiveRatio | 0.033 | |
| 75.85% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1035 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 80.68% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1035 | | totalAiIsms | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "scanning" | | 2 | "sense of" | | 3 | "traced" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 109 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 57 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1037 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 23 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 49 | | wordCount | 765 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 2.35 | | worstName | "Priya" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Priya" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Tuesday | 1 | | Silas | 6 | | Rory | 17 | | Priya | 18 | | Bethnal | 1 | | Green | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | February | 1 | | Started | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Silas" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Priya" | | 4 | "Evan" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.324 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 89.02% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if reading from a document" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1037 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 62 | | mean | 16.73 | | std | 20.01 | | cv | 1.196 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 74 | | 1 | 44 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 28 | | 5 | 71 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 77 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 37 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 88 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 30 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 26 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 29 | | 42 | 31 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 57 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 142 | | matches | | 0 | "was working" | | 1 | "was shaking" | | 2 | "was scanning" | | 3 | "was testing" | | 4 | "was making" | | 5 | "was feeling" | | 6 | "was buying" |
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| 38.01% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 109 | | ratio | 0.037 | | matches | | 0 | "She sat at the far end of the bar with a glass of red she hadn't asked for — Silas had set it down in front of her without a word, reading whatever it was he always read in the way she held her shoulders — and she was working through a crossword that had already defeated her twice." | | 1 | "She had a new way of holding herself — upright, composed, the kind of stillness that looked practised." | | 2 | "Rory used to tease her about it — you couldn't lie to save your life, she'd said once, you broadcast everything." | | 3 | "Three years since she'd last seen Priya, and that occasion had not been a good one — a going-away party for someone whose name she barely remembered now, a flat in Bethnal Green, and Priya telling her across a kitchen counter that she thought Rory was making a terrible mistake staying with Evan." |
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| 95.17% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 747 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.04551539491298527 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013386880856760375 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 109 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 109 | | mean | 9.51 | | std | 9.5 | | cv | 0.998 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 59 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 30 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 53 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 58.41% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.3944954128440367 | | totalSentences | 109 | | uniqueOpeners | 43 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she saw Rory." | | 1 | "Then it receded." |
| | ratio | 0.036 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "She sat at the far" | | 1 | "She was thinner than Rory" | | 2 | "She had a new way" | | 3 | "She was scanning the room" | | 4 | "She'd always been the one" | | 5 | "She hesitated, just briefly enough" | | 6 | "They'd not spoken since." | | 7 | "She said it flatly, as" | | 8 | "She looked down at her" | | 9 | "she said finally" | | 10 | "Her thumb traced the rim" |
| | ratio | 0.2 | |
| 23.64% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "The Raven's Nest was quiet" | | 1 | "Rory had come to depend" | | 2 | "She sat at the far" | | 3 | "Silas moved glassware at the" | | 4 | "The old maps on the" | | 5 | "The door opened." | | 6 | "Rory didn't look up." | | 7 | "The woman standing just inside" | | 8 | "She was thinner than Rory" | | 9 | "She had a new way" | | 10 | "She was scanning the room" | | 11 | "Neither of them moved for" | | 12 | "The name came out soft," | | 13 | "Rory set the crossword face" | | 14 | "Priya walked over slowly, unbuttoning" | | 15 | "She'd always been the one" | | 16 | "Rory used to tease her" | | 17 | "The face in front of" | | 18 | "Priya glanced down the bar," | | 19 | "She hesitated, just briefly enough" |
| | ratio | 0.873 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 5.49% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 26 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "She sat at the far end of the bar with a glass of red she hadn't asked for — Silas had set it down in front of her without a word, reading whatever it was he al…" | | 1 | "The woman standing just inside the entrance was shaking rain from a pale mac, her dark hair cut short in a way that changed the whole geography of her face." | | 2 | "She had a new way of holding herself — upright, composed, the kind of stillness that looked practised." | | 3 | "There was a tiredness behind her eyes that hadn't been there at twenty-two, and something else, something more guarded." | | 4 | "Priya lifted her gin and took a long sip before setting it down with the kind of care that meant she was buying herself time to find an honest answer." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 20 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "She said, as if reading from a document" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 61 | | tagDensity | 0.18 | | leniency | 0.361 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |