Run: 2026-02-19-01KHV72HMPP50XR33BAG5QKBC9

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came at half past nine, and Eva's tabby was already at the door. Ptolemy pressed his grey-striped face against the gap at the bottom, ears flat, tail lashing. Rory knew that posture. He reserved it for pigeons and people he didn't trust. She set down the scroll she'd been failing to read for the past hour and crossed the flat in three steps, nudging Ptolemy aside with her foot. The deadbolts were a ritual: top, middle, bottom. Each one releasing with a heavy clunk. She opened the door. Lucien Moreau stood in the narrow stairwell above the curry house, one hand resting on the ivory handle of his cane, the other holding a brown paper bag that smelled of garlic and something sharper underneath, something that didn't belong in any kitchen. His platinum hair was slicked back as always, his charcoal suit immaculate despite the fact that it was raining outside. One amber eye caught the light from the hallway bulb. The other, black as ink, did not. "You changed the locks," he said. "Three times." He held up the paper bag. "I brought food." "I can see that." Neither of them moved. Ptolemy solved the standoff by turning his back on both of them and walking away, tail still lashing. Rory stepped aside. Lucien ducked through the door frame, cane tapping once on the worn threshold, and she caught it then, beneath the rain and the garlic and the faint sulfurous trace that always clung to him when he'd been working: something from the bag that made her stomach turn in recognition. She'd smelled it before. In the basement of a Whitechapel warehouse, four months ago, the last time she'd seen him. He set the bag on the kitchen table, which was Eva's kitchen table, covered in Eva's books and Eva's half-finished translations, because Eva was in Edinburgh until Thursday and had left Rory with a key, a list of instructions for the cat, and absolutely no warning that Lucien bloody Moreau might materialise at her door. "How did you know I was here?" Rory said. "Yu-Fei mentioned you'd been doing deliveries to Brick Lane." "Yu-Fei doesn't know I'm here." He turned. The amber eye assessed her, calm and unhurried, the way he always looked at things he'd already calculated three moves ahead. "No. But the smell of her spring rolls clings to carrier bags, and her carrier bags were in your recycling." Rory stared at him. "I looked in your bin," he said. "I'm not proud." "Somehow I doubt that." He almost smiled. The corner of his mouth made the smallest movement and then thought better of it, and that restraint was worse, somehow, than if he'd just smiled properly. Rory turned away and filled the kettle because she needed something to do with her hands. "You could have called," she said. "You blocked my number." "I blocked you on everything." "You did." He pulled out a chair, examined it briefly for structural confidence, and sat. "And yet here I am." The kettle began to hiss. Ptolemy reappeared from behind the sofa and sat directly in front of Lucien's chair, staring up at him with the focused, unblinking accusation that only cats and detectives could sustain. "What's in the bag?" Rory said. A beat. "Dinner, as I said. And something else." She turned. He'd placed a small glass vial on the table beside the paper bag. Dark liquid inside, nearly black. It caught the overhead light and gave nothing back. She knew what it was. Knew the weight of a vial that size, the faint warmth it carried, the way the liquid moved too slowly when you tilted it. She'd spent six weeks trying to obtain it before concluding it was impossible. Lucien had apparently brought it with takeaway. "That's Avarosian bloodink," she said. "The genuine article. Not the diluted filth they sell in Camden." She crossed the flat and stood on the opposite side of the table, not touching it. "How?" "Contacts." "Lucien." "Family," he said. His voice didn't change. It never changed, that was the trouble with him: even, precise, modulated like an instrument kept in perfect tune. But his jaw tightened, just once, just barely. "It cost me rather more than the dinner." The bloodink was the only thing in the world that could reliably translate the sigil Eva had been stuck on for three months. The sigil that was, in Rory's estimation, the only remaining key to finding what had been taken from her. What had been taken from them both, in that Whitechapel basement, the night everything had gone wrong and they'd left separately and in silence. She sat down across from him. "Why?" she said. He didn't pretend to misunderstand. He picked up his cane, turned it once in his hands, set it down. A restless gesture she'd seen once before, the night she'd told him what Evan had done, and he'd listened without interrupting, and she'd watched that same cane turn and turn in his grip like a compass that couldn't find north. "Because the sigil leads to Malphora," he said. Her own name in the old tongue, the name she'd found written in her father's handwriting in a notebook she wasn't meant to see, the name that had brought her to London in the first place, to Eva and to this cramped flat and to a world she still hadn't found the edges of. "I know," she said. He looked up. "Eva translated part of it before she left." Rory reached across the table, pushed aside a stack of scrolls, and placed a single sheet of paper between them. Dense script in Eva's cramped hand, annotations in three colours of ink. "Not all of it. But enough." Lucien looked at the page for a long moment. "Enough to know," he said slowly, "that whoever created that sigil knew your name before you did." "Yes." "And that the same person left a second one." She watched his face. "You didn't know," he said. "Where?" He reached into the breast pocket of his jacket and produced a photograph, printed on glossy paper, edges slightly damp from the rain. He placed it on top of Eva's notes. Rory's hand went to her left wrist before she could stop it, fingers pressing the small crescent scar that sat just below her pulse point. Because the second sigil was not drawn on a wall or a floor or any surface in any basement. It was drawn on her. And it had been there, in the photograph, her own wrist, her own scar, photographed through the glass of the delivery restaurant window not forty-eight hours ago by someone who'd been watching her long before Lucien knocked on this door. The kettle screamed.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.057
86.76% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1133
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
64.70% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1133
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"absolutely"
count1
2
word"calculated"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count1
5
word"perfect"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"absolutely"
2"calculated"
3"weight"
4"warmth"
5"perfect"
6"silence"
7"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences74
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"tend to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences95
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1128
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount954
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.05
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva9
Ptolemy4
Moreau2
Whitechapel2
Edinburgh1
Thursday1
Rory10
Lucien7
Evan1
London1
Dense1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Moreau"
3"Rory"
4"Lucien"
5"Evan"
places
0"Edinburgh"
1"London"
globalScore0.976
windowScore0.833
91.86% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"Lucien had apparently brought it with tak"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1128
matches(empty)
96.49% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences95
matches
0"knew that posture"
1"warning that Lucien"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs61
mean18.49
std20.3
cv1.098
sampleLengths
015
129
242
34
480
56
62
79
84
94
1018
113
1269
1355
149
159
165
1743
184
1910
204
2146
226
234
245
2520
2635
276
282
297
302
3127
3249
335
3411
3517
361
371
3842
3966
406
413
4259
438
4454
454
463
4746
489
4917
81.56% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences74
matches
0"was slicked"
1"been stuck"
2"been taken"
3"been taken"
4"was drawn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs164
matches
0"was raining"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences95
ratio0
matches(empty)
96.60% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount957
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.0438871473354232
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.01567398119122257
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences95
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences95
mean11.87
std11.72
cv0.987
sampleLengths
015
115
24
310
427
58
67
74
843
920
1010
117
126
132
146
153
164
174
1818
193
2049
214
2216
2355
249
259
265
272
2821
2920
304
317
323
334
343
3527
3616
376
384
395
4015
415
425
4330
446
452
467
472
4813
495
59.30% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.4
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners38
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
46.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences60
matches
0"He reserved it for pigeons"
1"She set down the scroll"
2"She opened the door."
3"His platinum hair was slicked"
4"He held up the paper"
5"She'd smelled it before."
6"He set the bag on"
7"He almost smiled."
8"He pulled out a chair,"
9"He'd placed a small glass"
10"It caught the overhead light"
11"She knew what it was."
12"She'd spent six weeks trying"
13"She crossed the flat and"
14"His voice didn't change."
15"It never changed, that was"
16"She sat down across from"
17"He didn't pretend to misunderstand."
18"He picked up his cane,"
19"Her own name in the"
ratio0.433
35.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences60
matches
0"The knock came at half"
1"Ptolemy pressed his grey-striped face"
2"Rory knew that posture."
3"He reserved it for pigeons"
4"She set down the scroll"
5"The deadbolts were a ritual:"
6"Each one releasing with a"
7"She opened the door."
8"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
9"His platinum hair was slicked"
10"The other, black as ink,"
11"He held up the paper"
12"Neither of them moved."
13"Ptolemy solved the standoff by"
14"Rory stepped aside."
15"Lucien ducked through the door"
16"She'd smelled it before."
17"He set the bag on"
18"The amber eye assessed her,"
19"Rory stared at him."
ratio0.85
83.33% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences60
matches
0"Because the second sigil was"
ratio0.017
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Lucien Moreau stood in the narrow stairwell above the curry house, one hand resting on the ivory handle of his cane, the other holding a brown paper bag that sm…"
1"Lucien ducked through the door frame, cane tapping once on the worn threshold, and she caught it then, beneath the rain and the garlic and the faint sulfurous t…"
2"He set the bag on the kitchen table, which was Eva's kitchen table, covered in Eva's books and Eva's half-finished translations, because Eva was in Edinburgh un…"
3"The sigil that was, in Rory's estimation, the only remaining key to finding what had been taken from her."
4"A restless gesture she'd seen once before, the night she'd told him what Evan had done, and he'd listened without interrupting, and she'd watched that same cane…"
5"Her own name in the old tongue, the name she'd found written in her father's handwriting in a notebook she wasn't meant to see, the name that had brought her to…"
6"Rory's hand went to her left wrist before she could stop it, fingers pressing the small crescent scar that sat just below her pulse point."
7"And it had been there, in the photograph, her own wrist, her own scar, photographed through the glass of the delivery restaurant window not forty-eight hours ag…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.343
leniency0.686
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.1865%