| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 71.51% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1053 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "really" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 52.52% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1053 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "navigated" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "could feel" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "quickened" | | 7 | "measured" | | 8 | "tension" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 84.94% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "started to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 54 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1060 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 10 | | wordCount | 1060 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.28 | | worstName | "Grove" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Park | 2 | | Richmond | 2 | | Heartstone | 1 | | July | 1 | | November | 1 | | Grove | 3 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Park" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "July" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "sound that seemed to carry for miles in the stillness" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1060 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 76.58% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "matter, that she'd" | | 1 | "noticed that the" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 33.13 | | std | 27.77 | | cv | 0.838 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 75 | | 2 | 51 | | 3 | 73 | | 4 | 53 | | 5 | 51 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 88 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 31 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 71 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 92 | | 15 | 51 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 27 | | 18 | 43 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 41 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 58 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 61 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 56 | | 31 | 20 |
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| 81.56% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "been locked" | | 1 | "been told" | | 2 | "been frightened" | | 3 | "was primed" | | 4 | "been told" | | 5 | "been open" |
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| 85.71% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 175 | | matches | | 0 | "was looking" | | 1 | "was heading" | | 2 | "was looking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 74 | | ratio | 0.108 | | matches | | 0 | "The path she knew from daytime visits — the one that curved south past the ponds and into the denser treeline — looked different now." | | 1 | "The beam of her torch swept their bark and found faces in the grooves — not really, she knew, just shadows and pattern recognition doing what brains did in the dark." | | 2 | "A stag — rutting season had been recent enough that a large male might still be jumpy and aggressive." | | 3 | "Wildflowers grew at their bases in defiance of the season — small white things, and something pale yellow she couldn't name, their petals open as though it were noon in July rather than a November night close to midnight." | | 4 | "She could feel the air change as she passed the first stone — a pressure shift, like descending in a lift, like the world had adjusted its hold on her very slightly." | | 5 | "Hers she could account for — the careful, measured pull and push of someone trying to stay calm." | | 6 | "The torch beam slid across the grass, and she saw the depression in the ground she'd been looking for — shallow, circular, the soil slightly darker — and there was the split stone at its edge, just as she'd been told." | | 7 | "Not cooler — cold." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1053 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "lay warm against her" | | 1 | "kept moving beside her." |
| | adverbCount | 41 | | adverbRatio | 0.0389363722697056 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011396011396011397 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 74 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 74 | | mean | 14.32 | | std | 11.63 | | cv | 0.812 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 37 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 29 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 24 | | 21 | 31 | | 22 | 31 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 29 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 39 | | 38 | 39 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 32 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 23 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 45.50% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.3783783783783784 | | totalSentences | 74 | | uniqueOpeners | 28 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 29.23% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 31 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd told herself it didn't" | | 1 | "She'd told herself a lot" | | 2 | "She'd climbed the side wall" | | 3 | "She stood there a moment," | | 4 | "She kept her torch low," | | 5 | "She'd read somewhere that you" | | 6 | "She wasn't entirely certain that" | | 7 | "She pressed her fingers to" | | 8 | "It pulsed with a faint," | | 9 | "She heard the deer before" | | 10 | "She stopped walking and held" | | 11 | "She told herself this one" | | 12 | "She told herself this and" | | 13 | "She reached the boundary stones" | | 14 | "They stood in a rough" | | 15 | "She crouched beside one and" | | 16 | "It was soft and entirely" | | 17 | "She could feel the air" | | 18 | "She went in." | | 19 | "She unzipped her jacket and" |
| | ratio | 0.477 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 60 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "Richmond Park at night belonged" | | 1 | "Rory had known that before" | | 2 | "She'd told herself it didn't" | | 3 | "She'd told herself a lot" | | 4 | "The main gates had been" | | 5 | "She'd climbed the side wall" | | 6 | "She stood there a moment," | | 7 | "The park stretched ahead of" | | 8 | "The path she knew from" | | 9 | "The grass on either side" | | 10 | "Cloud cover had eaten the" | | 11 | "She kept her torch low," | | 12 | "She'd read somewhere that you" | | 13 | "She wasn't entirely certain that" | | 14 | "The Heartstone pendant lay warm" | | 15 | "She pressed her fingers to" | | 16 | "It pulsed with a faint," | | 17 | "That was good, she reminded" | | 18 | "That meant she was heading" | | 19 | "The path dissolved into open" |
| | ratio | 0.923 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 48.87% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The grass on either side rose higher than she remembered, and the distant silhouettes of the old oaks sat hunched against a sky that gave almost no light." | | 1 | "The oaks here were enormous, older than anything that had a right to still be standing, their roots buckling up through the ground in long arches she had to ste…" | | 2 | "They stood in a rough arc at the edge of the clearing, ancient oaks split and weathered into shapes that weren't quite natural, their angles too deliberate, the…" | | 3 | "Wildflowers grew at their bases in defiance of the season — small white things, and something pale yellow she couldn't name, their petals open as though it were…" | | 4 | "Ice-against-skin cold, a sudden drop that made her breath catch, and she pulled her hand away from it and pressed it to her side and stood in the centre of the …" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |