Run: 2026-02-19-01KHV72HMWHVFE0CGYEEG32AH9

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Duration:
29.4s
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came at half past ten, three sharp raps that cut through the low murmur of the curry house below and the scratch of Ptolemy's claws on the floorboards. Rory was halfway through the third paragraph of a scroll Eva had left her with strict instructions not to crumple, a glass of red balanced on her knee, when the sound reached her. She waited. Sometimes the neighbours knocked on the wrong door. The building had terrible acoustics and worse lighting on the stairwell. Three more raps. Deliberate. She set the scroll down on the coffee table — carefully, because she had once crumpled a corner and Eva had not let it go for a fortnight — and crossed the flat. Ptolemy watched from his perch on the arm of the sofa with the detached interest of a creature who had never once experienced surprise. She checked the peephole. Then she took a step back and looked at the ceiling and breathed out slowly through her nose. Lucien Moreau stood on the other side of the door in his charcoal suit, cane in hand, head angled slightly downward as though he were reading the grain of the wood between them. Rory opened the door. She left the chain on. "Eva's not here." One amber eye, one black — both trained on her through the gap. He looked exactly the same as he had three months ago, which felt deeply unfair. The platinum hair was swept back in its customary fashion, every strand obedient. There was a small cut along his jaw, fresh enough that the skin around it was still slightly swollen. "I know." "Then you also know this isn't my flat." "I know that as well." She looked at the cut. He noticed her looking. "It's nothing." "I didn't ask." "You were about to." She unhooked the chain because arguing through a gap in a door was not something she was willing to do twice in one lifetime, and she stepped back. He came in, and she was immediately reminded of how much space he occupied without trying, some quality of attention he carried that made the room reorganise itself around him. He noticed the scroll on the coffee table and the wine glass beside it and the particular arrangement of Eva's chaos that Rory had learned to navigate without disturbing. He didn't sit. He stood near the window with his cane planted between his shoes and looked at her in that way he had, patient and precise, as though she were a text he was translating. "You need to stop doing that," she said. "What?" "Looking at me like I'm a problem you're working out." "Old habit." He set the cane against the windowsill and turned away from her to look out at Brick Lane below, where two men were arguing over a parking spot and the curry house was still doing brisk business judging by the smell that drifted up through Eva's floorboards on a nightly basis regardless of the season. Rory crossed her arms. The flat felt smaller than usual. "What happened to your face?" "A disagreement." "With who?" "A gentleman who had strong opinions about a document I was in possession of." He turned back from the window. "It's resolved." "That's not an answer." "It's the answer you're getting." She picked up the wine glass because she needed something to do with her hands, and she leaned against the bookshelf that Eva had wedged between the sofa and the kitchenette. Ptolemy dropped from the sofa arm and wound around Lucien's ankles, which was a betrayal Rory filed away to examine later. "Why are you here, Lucien?" He looked at the cat and then back at her. Something shifted in his expression, not by much — Lucien Moreau did not deal in much — but enough. "I had information I needed to pass on." "You have a phone." "You stopped answering it." That landed in the room between them. She had stopped answering it. She had stopped answering it after the night in Southwark when he had said something to her in the dark that she had not known what to do with, and she had handled it badly, and then he had handled it badly in return, and then there had been three months of silence that she had told herself was fine and manageable and absolutely not something she thought about at odd hours. "The information," she said. "It can wait." "Then why are you here?" He picked up his cane from the windowsill, not because he needed it to walk, she had worked that much out — he used it when he was thinking. He turned it slowly in his hand. "I came to see if you were all right." "I'm fine." "You're working through Eva's research alone at half ten on a Thursday, which suggests otherwise." "I like research." "Rory." The way he said her name — her real name, not Laila, not Carter — with that slight softening that she doubted he was even aware of, was the thing that had undone her in Southwark and was threatening to do it again now. She set the wine glass down. "You don't get to show up here with a split jaw and concern and expect me to just—" She stopped. Tried again. "We left things in a bad place." "Yes." "And you just—" She gestured at the door, at the general concept of him arriving uninvited at ten-thirty. "Knocked." "I knocked," he agreed, as though this were a perfectly ordinary thing to do. "I don't know what you want from me." He was quiet for a moment. The argument from the street below had resolved itself, and the building had settled into its usual nighttime creaks. Ptolemy sat between them and cleaned his ear. "I think," Lucien said carefully, "that you do know. I think that's the difficulty."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
94.74% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He turned back [back]"
1"Lucien said carefully [carefully]"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.211
leniency0.421
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.105
64.25% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount979
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
2
adverb"slightly"
count2
3
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"slowly"
2"slightly"
3"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
74.46% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount979
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"navigate"
count1
1
word"resolved"
count2
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"absolutely"
count1
highlights
0"navigate"
1"resolved"
2"silence"
3"absolutely"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences50
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences50
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences80
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen72
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords986
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount794
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.63
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy4
Eva5
Moreau2
Rory5
Brick1
Lane1
Lucien4
Southwark2
Laila1
Carter1
Tried1
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Eva"
2"Moreau"
3"Rory"
4"Lucien"
5"Laila"
6"Carter"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Southwark"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences34
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount986
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"worked that much"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean18.96
std22.99
cv1.212
sampleLengths
084
14
257
322
433
59
63
760
82
98
105
119
122
133
144
1587
1636
178
181
1910
2057
2110
225
232
242
2522
264
275
2852
295
3029
318
324
334
3484
354
363
375
3836
399
402
4115
423
431
4444
4535
461
4719
4814
498
98.25% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences50
matches
0"was swept"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs122
matches
0"were reading"
1"was willing"
2"was translating"
3"were arguing"
4"was thinking"
5"was threatening"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences80
ratio0.063
matches
0"She set the scroll down on the coffee table — carefully, because she had once crumpled a corner and Eva had not let it go for a fortnight — and crossed the flat."
1"One amber eye, one black — both trained on her through the gap."
2"Something shifted in his expression, not by much — Lucien Moreau did not deal in much — but enough."
3"He picked up his cane from the windowsill, not because he needed it to walk, she had worked that much out — he used it when he was thinking."
4"The way he said her name — her real name, not Laila, not Carter — with that slight softening that she doubted he was even aware of, was the thing that had undone her in Southwark and was threatening to do it again now."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount787
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.03811944091486658
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.017789072426937738
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences80
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences80
mean12.33
std13.23
cv1.073
sampleLengths
030
133
22
38
411
53
61
733
824
94
1018
1133
124
135
143
1513
1615
1713
1819
192
208
215
225
234
242
253
264
2728
2830
2929
303
3133
328
331
3410
3557
364
376
385
392
402
4120
422
434
445
4531
4621
475
4810
4919
50.42% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3625
totalSentences80
uniqueOpeners29
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences44
matches
0"Sometimes the neighbours knocked on"
1"Then she took a step"
ratio0.045
10.91% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences44
matches
0"She set the scroll down"
1"She checked the peephole."
2"She left the chain on."
3"He looked exactly the same"
4"She looked at the cut."
5"He noticed her looking."
6"She unhooked the chain because"
7"He came in, and she"
8"He noticed the scroll on"
9"He didn't sit."
10"He stood near the window"
11"He set the cane against"
12"He turned back from the"
13"She picked up the wine"
14"He looked at the cat"
15"She had stopped answering it."
16"She had stopped answering it"
17"He picked up his cane"
18"He turned it slowly in"
19"She set the wine glass"
ratio0.523
16.82% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount39
totalSentences44
matches
0"The knock came at half"
1"Rory was halfway through the"
2"The building had terrible acoustics"
3"She set the scroll down"
4"Ptolemy watched from his perch"
5"She checked the peephole."
6"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
7"Rory opened the door."
8"She left the chain on."
9"He looked exactly the same"
10"The platinum hair was swept"
11"She looked at the cut."
12"He noticed her looking."
13"She unhooked the chain because"
14"He came in, and she"
15"He noticed the scroll on"
16"He didn't sit."
17"He stood near the window"
18"He set the cane against"
19"Rory crossed her arms."
ratio0.886
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences44
matches(empty)
ratio0
18.63% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The knock came at half past ten, three sharp raps that cut through the low murmur of the curry house below and the scratch of Ptolemy's claws on the floorboards…"
1"Lucien Moreau stood on the other side of the door in his charcoal suit, cane in hand, head angled slightly downward as though he were reading the grain of the w…"
2"He stood near the window with his cane planted between his shoes and looked at her in that way he had, patient and precise, as though she were a text he was tra…"
3"The way he said her name — her real name, not Laila, not Carter — with that slight softening that she doubted he was even aware of, was the thing that had undon…"
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he agreed, as though this were a perfectly ordinary thing to do"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.105
leniency0.211
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.053
76.3658%