| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 79.34% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 968 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "truly" | | 1 | "deliberately" | | 2 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 48.35% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 968 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "footsteps" | | 4 | "rhythmic" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "throb" | | 7 | "absolutely" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 978 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 18 | | wordCount | 969 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.62 | | worstName | "Isolde" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 5 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Isolde | 6 | | Tuesday | 1 | | Hammersmith | 1 | | South | 1 | | Circular | 1 | | November | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Circular" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.75% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.022 | | wordCount | 978 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the creeping cold of a November night but a sudden subtraction of warmth, the way heat leaves a room" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 30.56 | | std | 27.41 | | cv | 0.897 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 34 | | 1 | 92 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 74 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 71 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 86 | | 11 | 30 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 42 | | 14 | 39 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 57 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 51 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 49 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 44 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 61 | | 28 | 59 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 50 | | 31 | 32 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 150 | | matches | | 0 | "were facing" | | 1 | "was watching" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 85 | | ratio | 0.094 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd walked it twice before, both times in daylight with Isolde beside her, the old woman pointing out the markers — a split elm, a cairn of three flat stones, the place where the ground dipped and the air turned faintly sweet." | | 1 | "What she hadn't expected was the quality of the silence she walked into now — a silence that felt less like the absence of sound and more like the held breath before one." | | 2 | "Not frightened — just contained, as though the grove had walls she couldn't see." | | 3 | "She caught it in her periphery — a shift of shadow against shadow, low to the ground and too deliberate to be wind." | | 4 | "She was almost certain — she fixed on it, pressing it flat in her mind rather than letting it unseat her — she was almost certain they'd been facing outward when she'd arrived." | | 5 | "Rory crouched and pressed her palm flat to the earth the way Isolde had shown her, feeling for what the old woman called the current — the low rhythmic thrum of the grove's pocket boundary, regular as a heartbeat." | | 6 | "Her scar ached — the crescent on her left wrist, the one she barely noticed anymore — a deep cold ache that started in the bone." | | 7 | "Not the gradual dimming of cloud crossing the moon — instantaneous, total." |
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| 92.50% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 959 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 40 | | adverbRatio | 0.04171011470281543 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013555787278415016 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 85 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 85 | | mean | 11.51 | | std | 11.06 | | cv | 0.961 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 34 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 42 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 32 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 33 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 38 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 35 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 31 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 23 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 33 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 50.20% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.32941176470588235 | | totalSentences | 85 | | uniqueOpeners | 28 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the dark between the" | | 1 | "Twice this time, in quick" | | 2 | "Then the grove went absolutely" |
| | ratio | 0.043 | |
| 40.29% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 31 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "She knew the path." | | 1 | "She'd walked it twice before," | | 2 | "She hadn't expected to need" | | 3 | "She found the split elm" | | 4 | "She walked on." | | 5 | "She'd checked it on the" | | 6 | "She pulled her jacket tighter" | | 7 | "She focused on them." | | 8 | "Her voice sounded smaller than" | | 9 | "She walked toward the centre" | | 10 | "She stopped and stamped once," | | 11 | "She took out her phone." | | 12 | "She tried the number anyway." | | 13 | "It rang four times and" | | 14 | "She lowered the phone." | | 15 | "She caught it in her" | | 16 | "She turned her head slowly." | | 17 | "She turned back." | | 18 | "She was almost certain —" | | 19 | "She pressed down and felt" |
| | ratio | 0.449 | |
| 61.45% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "The last bus had dropped" | | 1 | "She knew the path." | | 2 | "She'd walked it twice before," | | 3 | "Rory had memorised it the" | | 4 | "She hadn't expected to need" | | 5 | "The way a person taps" | | 6 | "She found the split elm" | | 7 | "The park was never truly" | | 8 | "Foxes moved through the bracken," | | 9 | "Rory had expected all of" | | 10 | "The pendant pulsed once, slow" | | 11 | "She walked on." | | 12 | "The standing stones came into" | | 13 | "She'd checked it on the" | | 14 | "Rory stepped between two of" | | 15 | "The temperature dropped." | | 16 | "She pulled her jacket tighter" | | 17 | "The wildflowers were there, white" | | 18 | "She focused on them." | | 19 | "Something ordinary to look at." |
| | ratio | 0.797 | |
| 72.46% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "Now their heads were turned" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 79.83% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 34 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory had memorised it the way she memorised everything that mattered: methodically, without sentiment." | | 1 | "The standing stones came into view between the oaks, eight of them arranged in a rough ellipse, their surfaces silvered by a moon that sat too bright and too fu…" | | 2 | "Full signal, which meant nothing here, Isolde had warned her." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |