Run: 2026-02-19-01KHVP0TNK7EEYJYA5NGWHPV70

Run Details

Duration:
1m 20s
Cost:
$0.076560
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The scent of toasted cumin and heavy garlic drifted up through the floorboards, a constant reminder that Eva's cramped one-bedroom flat sat directly above the busiest curry house on Brick Lane. Aurora Carter stood in the narrow kitchen, nudging a stack of translated Aramaic scrolls away from the sink so she could wash her hands. Her shift delivering for the Golden Empress had left her smelling faintly of sesame oil and exhaust fumes. She dried her hands on a towel, brushing her straight, shoulder-length black hair out of her bright blue eyes. At her feet, Ptolemy the tabby cat let out a sharp, demanding yowl. Rory bent down to scratch behind his ears, but before her fingers made contact, an authoritative knock echoed through the tiny apartment. Ptolemy hissed and darted under a leaning tower of leather-bound research notes. Rory froze. Eva was not due back from the archives until morning, and nobody else knew she was house-sitting. Her mind, usually cool and analytical, raced through the possibilities. It could be Silas, though the bartender rarely left his own establishment. It could be someone from her past. Evan. The thought sent a cold spike of adrenaline into her chest, but she pushed it down, relying on the pragmatic detachment that had kept her alive this long. She approached the front door, her grip tightening on the nearest heavy object—a brass paperweight doubling as a bookend. She flipped the first deadbolt. The heavy clack sounded loud in the hallway. She turned the second. Then the third. Pulling the door open a few inches, Rory prepared a sharp dismissal. The words died in her throat. Lucien Moreau stood in the dim light of the stairwell. He was impeccably dressed, as always, wearing a tailored charcoal suit that looked entirely out of place against the peeling wallpaper of the East London landing. His slicked-back platinum blond hair caught the flickering overhead bulb, but it was his eyes that pinned her in place. One amber. One pitch black. The heterochromatic gaze of a half-demon. He leaned slightly on his ivory-handled cane, a deceptive accessory she knew concealed a razor-thin blade. For a long second, neither of them moved. The ambient noise of the street below faded into a dull roar. Hello, Aurora, he said, his voice a low, smooth baritone wrapping around the vowels with a lingering trace of Marseille. Rory stared at him, acutely aware of the space between them and the sudden lack of oxygen in her lungs. He was six months of silence standing on her doorstep. He was the reason she had spent weeks jumping at shadows, replaying their final, explosive argument in her head until she felt entirely hollowed out. What are you doing here, Lucien? Her voice was steady, betraying none of the chaos crashing against her ribs. I told you I never wanted to see you again. You told me to go to hell, he corrected mildly, though a muscle feathered along his jawline. I considered it. Avaros is lovely this time of year. But I find the company lacking. May I come in? No. She started to push the door completely shut. He did not force his way inside. He simply placed the tip of his cane against the threshold. It was not an aggressive move, but the sheer weight of his presence made the barrier feel insurmountable. Please, Rory. Hearing him use her nickname cracked a tiny fissure in her armor. She hated that he still had that effect on her. Standing at five-foot-six, she had to look up to meet his eyes. Lucien was not remarkably tall at five-foot-eleven, but the way he carried himself made him seem like he took up all the oxygen in a room. You have three seconds to give me a reason, she said, her grip on the door tightening. He looked past her shoulder, scanning the chaotic interior of Eva's flat. The books, the scattered papers, the general disarray. I need your help. And the people I am currently hiding from do not care about collateral damage. If I stay out here, I draw them to you. Rory evaluated him. Beneath the tailored elegance of the charcoal suit, he looked exhausted. The sharp lines of his face were a fraction too hollow, and his posture favored the cane more than usual. Her instinct was to slam the door, lock the three deadbolts, and vanish out the fire escape. But her curiosity, that relentless, logical drive to solve puzzles, rebelled against the idea. She stepped back and pulled the door open wide. Lucien stepped across the threshold, bringing with him the scent of rain, expensive tobacco, and something intrinsically darker—like struck flint. Rory locked the three deadbolts behind him with quick, methodical snaps. When she turned around, Lucien was observing the sheer volume of clutter in the flat. The space was so cramped they were standing less than two feet apart. Ptolemy peered out from beneath a stack of books, his tail twitching as he assessed the half-demon. Your friend Eva has a fascinating filing system, Lucien murmured, using the ivory handle of his cane to carefully nudge aside an unraveling scroll on the low coffee table. Don't touch anything, Rory said, crossing her arms over her chest. And don't change the subject. Six months, Luc. You disappear without a word after nearly getting both of us killed, you leave all my messages unread, and now you show up because you need a favor? I did not leave you to face danger. I left to remove the danger from entirely around you. I didn't ask you to protect me. Rory took a step forward, the anger finally bleeding through her cool facade. I'm not a child. I'm not a fragile little human you need to handle with kid gloves. I survived Evan long before I knew demons existed. I survived moving to London. I survived you. I don't need a self-sacrificing martyr. Lucien turned to face her. The nonchalance vanished. The black eye seemed to swallow the light, while the amber one flared with a terrifying, ancient heat. He stepped into her space, closing the distance between them until the ivory grip of his cane brushed against her hip. Do you think it was easy for me to walk away? His voice dropped, losing its polished edge. Do you think I did not spend every single night pacing the floors of my office, wondering if you were safe, if you were eating, if you had forgotten me entirely? Rory held her ground, refusing to let him intimidate her. Then why did you leave? Because I am exactly what my father made me. He raised his free hand, hesitating for a fraction of a second before his fingers wrapped gently over her left wrist. His thumb brushed over the small, crescent-shaped scar on her skin—a mark from a childhood accident she had told him about on a rainy night in a Parisian hotel, a lifetime ago. Because I ruin everything I touch, Aurora. And I refused to ruin you. The heat of his touch sent a shockwave up her arm. It was maddening how naturally they fell back into this orbit, completely consumed by the gravity of one another. She looked down at his long, pale fingers against her skin, then back up to his face. You don't get to decide what ruins me, she said quietly. Lucien let out a breath that sounded suspiciously like a laugh. You have always been impossibly stubborn. You're an information broker, she replied, tilting her chin up. You should have known that about me. He did not let go of her wrist. Instead, he slid his hand up her arm, his palm coming to rest against the curve of her jaw. His fingers were slightly rough, entirely at odds with his pristine charcoal suit. Rory felt her pulse jump in her throat. She should pull away. She had promised herself that if she ever saw him again, she would be cold. She would be indifferent. But the way he looked at her—like she was the only anchor holding him to the earth—unraveled all her logic. Je suis désolé, he whispered, the French slipping out as his thumb stroked her cheekbone. I am sorry, Rory. I handled it poorly. I was terrified. You? Terrified? Rory let out a shaky breath, finally leaning a fraction of an inch into his palm. The great Lucien Moreau, afraid of a little risk? Afraid of losing the only thing that has ever made me feel human, he corrected softly. Silence thickened in the cramped apartment, heavier than the scent of the curry spices from below. The air between them crackled. Every unspoken argument, every resentful thought Rory had harbored for the last half-year seemed to burn away under his touch. He leaned down, his eyes scanning her face, asking a silent question. Rory reached up, her hand curling into the lapel of his immaculate suit, and pulled him the rest of the way down. The kiss was not gentle. It was a collision. Lucien dropped his cane. The heavy ivory handle hit the wooden floorboards with a loud clatter that sent Ptolemy scrambling into the bedroom, but neither of them cared. Lucien wrapped both arms around her waist, pulling her flush against his chest, sweeping her backward until her spine hit the edge of the kitchen counter. Rory tangled her hands in his slicked-back platinum hair, ruining the perfect styling, gripping him as if she needed tangible proof he was real. He tasted of mint, expensive whiskey, and rain. The desperation in the way his mouth moved over hers matched the frantic pounding of her own heart. It was messy and consuming, an exorcism of six months of lonely nights and bitter memories. When they finally broke apart, both of them were breathing heavily. Lucien rested his forehead against hers, his eyes closed. His hands remained tightly gripping her waist. Don't ever do that to me again, Rory said, her voice trembling slightly, though she kept her grip on the collar of his suit. Don't ever decide what is best for me. I swear it, he murmured, opening his eyes. The amber and black were bright and entirely focused on her. You are a brilliant, infuriating woman, Aurora Carter. And I am entirely at your mercy. Rory finally let out a genuine, albeit breathless, laugh. Good. Now pick up your cane, tell me exactly who is trying to kill you this time, and we'll figure out how to ruin their week. Lucien smiled, a slow, dangerous expression that made him look every bit the demonic offspring he was. He bent to retrieve the concealed blade, smoothing down his charcoal jacket with his free hand. As you wish, he said. Let us begin.
created_at"2026-02-19T19:28:53.277Z" 2/19/2026, 7:28:53 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
75.33% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1824
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
1
adverb"completely"
count2
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"gently"
count1
4
adverb"softly"
count1
5
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"completely"
2"carefully"
3"gently"
4"softly"
5"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.92% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1824
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"reminder"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count1
2
word"raced"
count1
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"scanning"
count2
6
word"chaotic"
count1
7
word"methodical"
count1
8
word"fascinating"
count1
9
word"unraveling"
count1
10
word"facade"
count1
11
word"pristine"
count1
12
word"pulse"
count1
13
word"unspoken"
count1
14
word"perfect"
count1
15
word"tangible"
count1
16
word"pounding"
count1
highlights
0"reminder"
1"echoed"
2"raced"
3"silence"
4"weight"
5"scanning"
6"chaotic"
7"methodical"
8"fascinating"
9"unraveling"
10"facade"
11"pristine"
12"pulse"
13"unspoken"
14"perfect"
15"tangible"
16"pounding"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences153
matches
0"was terrified"
68.16% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount5
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences153
filterMatches
0"feel"
1"think"
2"look"
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences153
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1804
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions8
matches
0"Hello, Aurora, he said, his voice a low, smooth baritone wrapping around the vowels with a lingering trace of Marseille."
1"You told me to go to hell, he corrected mildly, though a muscle feathered along his jawline."
2"You have three seconds to give me a reason, she said, her grip on the door tightening."
3"Your friend Eva has a fascinating filing system, Lucien murmured, using the ivory handle of his cane to carefully nudge …"
4"Je suis désolé, he whispered, the French slipping out as his thumb stroked her cheekbone."
5"Afraid of losing the only thing that has ever made me feel human, he corrected softly."
6"I swear it, he murmured, opening his eyes."
7"As you wish, he said."
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions74
wordCount1804
uniqueNames22
maxNameDensity1
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva4
Brick1
Lane1
Carter2
Aramaic1
Golden1
Empress1
Ptolemy4
Silas1
Rory18
Moreau2
East1
London2
Aurora4
Marseille1
Lucien13
Luc1
Evan2
Parisian1
French1
You9
Don3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Carter"
2"Aramaic"
3"Empress"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Silas"
6"Rory"
7"Moreau"
8"Aurora"
9"Lucien"
10"Luc"
11"Evan"
12"You"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"East"
3"London"
4"Marseille"
5"Parisian"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences118
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
89.14% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.109
wordCount1804
matches
0"not an aggressive move, but the sheer weight of his presence made the barrier feel insur"
1"not remarkably tall at five-foot-eleven, but the way he carried himself made him seem like he took up all"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences153
matches
0"hated that he had that effect"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean37.58
std21.79
cv0.58
sampleLengths
092
113
234
377
439
518
667
736
820
955
1029
1137
129
1336
142
1560
1617
1748
1865
199
2031
2145
2229
2347
2418
2560
2647
2749
2815
2975
3047
3111
3217
3317
3491
3526
3627
3716
3841
3934
4063
4166
4227
4332
4434
4535
4633
478
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences153
matches
0"was terrified"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs326
matches
0"was observing"
1"were standing"
2"were eating"
3"were breathing"
68.16% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences153
ratio0.026
matches
0"She approached the front door, her grip tightening on the nearest heavy object—a brass paperweight doubling as a bookend."
1"Lucien stepped across the threshold, bringing with him the scent of rain, expensive tobacco, and something intrinsically darker—like struck flint."
2"His thumb brushed over the small, crescent-shaped scar on her skin—a mark from a childhood accident she had told him about on a rainy night in a Parisian hotel, a lifetime ago."
3"But the way he looked at her—like she was the only anchor holding him to the earth—unraveled all her logic."
90.07% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1824
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount74
adverbRatio0.04057017543859649
lyAdverbCount44
lyAdverbRatio0.02412280701754386
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences153
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences153
mean11.79
std7.37
cv0.625
sampleLengths
031
124
218
319
413
522
612
72
817
910
1012
117
121
1328
1419
155
168
174
183
1912
206
2110
2226
2320
242
253
266
2716
288
2912
3020
3120
3210
3325
346
3513
3610
3717
383
397
406
414
421
438
447
4511
4618
472
4812
4910
38.13% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.30718954248366015
totalSentences153
uniqueOpeners47
68.97% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences145
matches
0"Then the third."
1"Then why did you leave?"
2"Instead, he slid his hand"
ratio0.021
43.45% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount64
totalSentences145
matches
0"Her shift delivering for the"
1"She dried her hands on"
2"Her mind, usually cool and"
3"It could be Silas, though"
4"It could be someone from"
5"She approached the front door,"
6"She flipped the first deadbolt."
7"She turned the second."
8"He was impeccably dressed, as"
9"His slicked-back platinum blond hair"
10"He leaned slightly on his"
11"He was six months of"
12"He was the reason she"
13"Her voice was steady, betraying"
14"I told you I never"
15"You told me to go"
16"I considered it."
17"She started to push the"
18"He did not force his"
19"He simply placed the tip"
ratio0.441
80.69% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount110
totalSentences145
matches
0"The scent of toasted cumin"
1"Aurora Carter stood in the"
2"Her shift delivering for the"
3"She dried her hands on"
4"Rory bent down to scratch"
5"Ptolemy hissed and darted under"
6"Eva was not due back"
7"Her mind, usually cool and"
8"It could be Silas, though"
9"It could be someone from"
10"The thought sent a cold"
11"She approached the front door,"
12"She flipped the first deadbolt."
13"The heavy clack sounded loud"
14"She turned the second."
15"The words died in her"
16"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
17"He was impeccably dressed, as"
18"His slicked-back platinum blond hair"
19"The heterochromatic gaze of a"
ratio0.759
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount4
totalSentences145
matches
0"If I stay out here,"
1"Because I am exactly what"
2"Because I ruin everything I"
3"Now pick up your cane,"
ratio0.028
58.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences85
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"The thought sent a cold spike of adrenaline into her chest, but she pushed it down, relying on the pragmatic detachment that had kept her alive this long."
1"She approached the front door, her grip tightening on the nearest heavy object—a brass paperweight doubling as a bookend."
2"He was impeccably dressed, as always, wearing a tailored charcoal suit that looked entirely out of place against the peeling wallpaper of the East London landin…"
3"His slicked-back platinum blond hair caught the flickering overhead bulb, but it was his eyes that pinned her in place."
4"Do you think I did not spend every single night pacing the floors of my office, wondering if you were safe, if you were eating, if you had forgotten me entirely…"
5"He leaned down, his eyes scanning her face, asking a silent question."
6"The heavy ivory handle hit the wooden floorboards with a loud clatter that sent Ptolemy scrambling into the bedroom, but neither of them cared."
7"Lucien wrapped both arms around her waist, pulling her flush against his chest, sweeping her backward until her spine hit the edge of the kitchen counter."
8"Rory tangled her hands in his slicked-back platinum hair, ruining the perfect styling, gripping him as if she needed tangible proof he was real."
9"Lucien smiled, a slow, dangerous expression that made him look every bit the demonic offspring he was."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.7385%