Run: 2026-02-19-01KHVP10AQ9V12E6JC94ZKGW0A

Run Details

Duration:
2m
Cost:
$0.096942
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Aurora passed the ancient oak standing stones, stepping out of the dreary overcast of Richmond Park and into a pocket of impossible, vibrant spring. The damp, biting chill of the London winter simply vanished. Beneath her heavy boots, wildly out-of-season bluebells and vivid foxgloves carpeted the earth in thick, fragrant clusters. This was the Grove, a fracture in reality tucked securely away from mortal eyes, where time folded back on itself in strange and unpredictable ways. An hour spent wandering these trees could amount to a single minute on the street outside, or it could cost her a month. She rubbed her left wrist, her thumb automatically tracing the raised edge of a small, crescent-shaped scar left over from a childhood accident. Her analytical mind, trained by years of law textbooks and the harsh realities of fleeing her old life in Cardiff, rebelled against the sight of the blooming flowers. She forced herself to take a deep, grounding breath, leaning heavily on the street-smart pragmatism that kept her alive when she was just running deliveries for the Golden Empress. Adapt to the environment, and survive the route. Ahead of her, Isolde Varga glided through the flowers. The Half-Fae seer possessed an ethereal, unbothered grace that made her seem entirely detached from the physical world. Her silver hair fell in a perfectly straight, luminous line to her waist, catching the dappled light of the canopy overhead. Aurora watched the grass directly beneath Isolde's feet. The green blades did not bend or crush. There were no footprints left behind in the soft loam to mark her passing. "Are we close?" Aurora asked, her voice sounding abnormally loud and flat in the hushed, sacred clearing. Isolde turned gracefully. Her pale lavender eyes seemed to look both directly at Aurora and through her all at once. "The door is where the lock resides, and the key turns only when the house is truly ready to be entered." Aurora pressed her lips together into a thin line. The seer could not lie, bound by some ancient Fae compulsion woven into her blood, but she rarely chose to be straightforward. A localized chill rushed past Aurora's right shoulder, bringing with it the scent of cold stone and static electricity. Nyx materialized from the dense shade of a weeping willow tree. The Shade expanded upward, stretching out of a two-dimensional cast into a solid, imposing humanoid figure at least six feet, two inches tall. Formed entirely of living, shifting darkness, Nyx had no true features save for a pair of faintly glowing violet eyes that peered out from the deep void of a face. "The boundary thins," Nyx said. Their voice lacked vocal cords entirely; the sound resembled a harsh whisper carried on a distant, restless wind. "I feel the friction of two worlds bleeding into one another." Against Aurora's collarbone, a sudden, localized heat flared. She reached under the collar of her worn jacket and drew out the Heartstone pendant. Suspended on a delicate silver chain, the thumbnail-sized gemstone pulsed with a deep crimson inner glow. The warmth seeped into her fingers, a steady, rhythmic beat warning her of the proximity. The artifact was reacting to the immediate environment. "A rift point," Aurora muttered, her bright blue eyes scanning the tree line. There it was. Between two massive, twisted oaks, the air warped into a localized heat haze. It was a shimmering, rippling distortion, an oil-slick tear floating in midair that only she and her companions could see. This was the Veil. The metaphysical barrier separating Earth from the realms beyond. Aurora reached to her belt and drew her weapon. The Fae-Forged blade she unsheathed was slender and leaf-shaped, forged entirely of absolute moonsilver. The metal remained perpetually cold to the touch, providing a stark, grounding contrast to the burning heat of the pendant against her chest. Even in the shadowy Grove, the blade emitted a faint luminescence beneath the canopy. She approached the shimmering distortion. It hummed in the air, vibrating the teeth in her skull. The Veil usually weakened naturally during the extreme winter solstices, but the sheer concentration of ambient magic in the Grove forced an artificial tear in the fabric of the boundary. Gripping the cold hilt, Aurora raised the dagger and sliced downward through the center of the distortion. The blade, designed specifically to cut through magical wards and localized barriers, parted the rippling air like a heavy silk curtain. A rush of warm, heavy wind spilled out from the incision, smelling instantly of crushed sugar, roasting fat, and dark, fermented fruit. "Through," Nyx whispered, breaking their solid silhouette and shifting back into an incorporeal, shadowy mist to flow effortlessly through the gap. Isolde stepped through without hesitation, her long silver hair vanishing into the tear. Aurora took one last breath of crisp Earth air, adjusted her grip on the moonsilver dagger, and stepped forward into the rift. The transition felt like forcing her body through a wall of warm water. The pressure spiked in her ears, then popped. When her vision adjusted to the intense new light, the dense oak woods of the Fae Grove were entirely gone. She stood on a high earthen ridge overlooking a staggering, impossible landscape. The sky above held no sun, no clouds, and no horizon. It was a suffocating ceiling of warm, heavy amber, casting a permanent, syrupy golden-hour glow over the entire world. "Dymas," Aurora breathed, blinking against the saturated colors. They had entered Gluttony. The personal domain of Prince Belphegor. The realm unfolded beneath them in an orchestrated display of overwhelming, terrifying excess. Sprawling vineyards stretched out for miles across the rolling hills, but the vines themselves were as thick as ancient tree trunks, coiling around massive, rusted iron trellises that scraped the amber sky. Below the ridge lay an orchard of utterly alien flora. Trees with dark, bruised-purple bark wept constant streams of heavy golden sap, their branches bowing under the weight of fruits that resembled swollen, faceted gemstones rather than apples or pears. Pomegranates the size of human skulls hung low to the ground, bursting open from their own ripeness to reveal dense seed clusters that glistened like wet rubies. The sensory input was nearly paralyzing. The atmosphere here was practically a dense meal in itself. A heavy warmth coated Aurora's skin, carrying the intoxicating aroma of a thousand grand feasts blending together. She could distinguish the smell of whole hogs turning on massive spits, heavily spiced meats crackling in fat, butter melted over exotic underground mushrooms, and the sharp, acidic tang of masterfully crafted, ancient wine. Distant sounds drifted on the breeze—the clinking of heavy crystal goblets, the roar of massive hearth fires, and a low, persistent hum of desperate feasting. Isolde stood perfectly still on a garden path paved with crushed, iridescent mother-of-pearl. "Do not let the hunger find a home in your marrow," the seer cautioned, her ethereal voice cutting sharply through the sluggish, intoxicating atmosphere. "A bite taken here is a chain forged forever. To consume the master's table is to bind your soul to the kitchen." "I am not exactly hungry," Aurora said, though she noticed with a spike of alarm that her mouth was actively watering. She carefully advanced down the ridge, keeping the cold, Fae-Forged dagger drawn and held out at an angle. The crushed pearl path brought them to the absolute edge of the great vineyard. The dark leaves of the looming grapevines were larger than dining tables, woven through with intricate, bioluminescent veins of spun gold that pulsed in rhythm with the soil. Dense clusters of grapes, each individual sphere the size of a plum and glowing with a faint, hypnotic violet light, hung just inches from her face. Nyx slid along the mother-of-pearl path beside her. Their immense shadow form drank in the warm amber light, physically dimming the immediate area around them and providing a blessed pocket of visual relief. A featureless, shadowy arm emerged from their core, pointing toward a grand, sprawling estate nestled miles deep in the valley center. Vast stone chimneys rose from marble kitchens, spewing fragrant, thick white smoke into the amber sky. "The souls of the Helbound chefs toil over those fires," the Shade whispered to Aurora, the sound like dry autumn leaves skittering across pavement. "Contracts signed on Earth, paid in eternal, desperate service to the Prince of Excess. They hunt these gardens for new flavors to feed the ever-starving mouth of their lord." Aurora studied the massive, decadent estate in the distance. Her boots crunched loudly on the pearls beneath her—a stark, clumsy contrast to Isolde's silent gliding and Nyx's wind-like rustling. It struck her suddenly how utterly vulnerable and out of place she was. A law school dropout wearing a bruised leather jacket, a woman who practically lived on a delivery scooter, standing in the middle of a demonic dimension designed exclusively to devour souls through indulgence. She reached out with her left hand and lightly tapped one of the massive, golden-veined grape leaves with the flat side of her cold blade. The enormous leaf shuddered away from the metal, not from the wind, but with a fleshy, muscular twitch. Aurora jumped back, her heart hammering violently against her ribs. "It is alive." "Everything in Dymas consumes," Isolde said softly, tilting her head to watch a thick drop of golden sap fall from a nearby branch. The syrup sizzled as it hit the earth, instantly sprouting a frantic, fast-growing stalk of bright pink sugar-cane that flowered, withered, and rotted back into the earth in the space of three short seconds. "Life here is a continuous loop of devouring and being devoured." "Good to know," Aurora said, forcing her racing pulse to slow. Her bright blue eyes darted across the oversized, pulsing foliage, looking for movement, searching for a safe path through the predatory garden. "So if we are going to find a way forward, we move fast. We do not touch the plants. We do not eat the food. And we definitely do not stop to admire the view." Nyx let out a sound that might have been a laugh, dry and rasping in the heavy air. The violent, glowing eyes narrowed in the empty shade of their face. "Agreed, human. Let us walk lightly through the belly of the beast." Aurora gave a single nod. She slipped the pulsing, hot crimson Heartstone back beneath the fabric of her shirt. The heat of the gem felt like a brand demanding her constant attention, but she focused her analytical mind firmly ahead, stepping off the ridge and plunging into the dark, fragrant labyrinth of the living vines.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Isolde said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.556
leniency1
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.1
69.38% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1796
totalAiIsmAdverbs11
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count2
1
adverb"truly"
count1
2
adverb"utterly"
count2
3
adverb"sharply"
count1
4
adverb"carefully"
count1
5
adverb"suddenly"
count1
6
adverb"lightly"
count2
7
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"truly"
2"utterly"
3"sharply"
4"carefully"
5"suddenly"
6"lightly"
7"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
35.97% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1796
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"chill"
count2
1
word"tracing"
count1
2
word"imposing"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count2
5
word"warmth"
count2
6
word"rhythmic"
count1
7
word"scanning"
count1
8
word"stark"
count2
9
word"silk"
count1
10
word"weight"
count1
11
word"input"
count1
12
word"crystal"
count1
13
word"looming"
count1
14
word"intricate"
count1
15
word"marble"
count1
16
word"racing"
count1
17
word"pulse"
count1
18
word"firmly"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"tracing"
2"imposing"
3"whisper"
4"pulsed"
5"warmth"
6"rhythmic"
7"scanning"
8"stark"
9"silk"
10"weight"
11"input"
12"crystal"
13"looming"
14"intricate"
15"marble"
16"racing"
17"pulse"
18"firmly"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences97
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1775
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions63
wordCount1587
uniqueNames21
maxNameDensity1.2
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
London1
Grove4
Cardiff1
Golden1
Empress1
Isolde7
Varga1
Half-Fae1
Aurora19
Fae5
Shade2
Nyx7
Heartstone2
Veil2
Earth2
Fae-Forged2
Gluttony1
Prince1
Belphegor1
persons
0"Isolde"
1"Varga"
2"Aurora"
3"Shade"
4"Nyx"
5"Veil"
6"Prince"
7"Belphegor"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Grove"
4"Cardiff"
5"Fae"
globalScore0.901
windowScore0.667
94.44% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences90
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like forcing her body through a wa"
1"felt like a brand demanding her constan"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.563
wordCount1775
matches
0"not from the wind, but with a fleshy, muscular twitch"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean52.21
std26.92
cv0.516
sampleLengths
099
188
278
317
441
531
683
734
862
913
1049
1160
1246
1360
1434
1522
1641
1742
188
1910
20112
2192
2259
2321
2486
2570
2653
2775
2843
2913
3068
3168
3242
3355
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs244
matches
0"was reacting"
61.22% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences105
ratio0.029
matches
0"Their voice lacked vocal cords entirely; the sound resembled a harsh whisper carried on a distant, restless wind."
1"Distant sounds drifted on the breeze—the clinking of heavy crystal goblets, the roar of massive hearth fires, and a low, persistent hum of desperate feasting."
2"Her boots crunched loudly on the pearls beneath her—a stark, clumsy contrast to Isolde's silent gliding and Nyx's wind-like rustling."
62.37% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1607
adjectiveStacks5
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
1"over exotic underground mushrooms,"
2"fragrant, thick white smoke"
3"massive, golden-veined grape"
4"frantic, fast-growing stalk"
adverbCount67
adverbRatio0.04169259489732421
lyAdverbCount44
lyAdverbRatio0.027380211574362167
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean16.9
std8.18
cv0.484
sampleLengths
024
110
217
325
423
523
628
729
88
99
1018
1121
128
138
1414
1517
163
1717
1821
199
2022
2119
2211
2323
2430
255
2618
2711
288
2915
3016
3115
328
3313
343
3513
3620
374
389
399
4014
4123
4214
435
4411
4530
4617
4721
4822
4921
59.37% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3904761904761905
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners41
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences96
matches
0"She rubbed her left wrist,"
1"Her analytical mind, trained by"
2"She forced herself to take"
3"Her silver hair fell in"
4"Her pale lavender eyes seemed"
5"Their voice lacked vocal cords"
6"She reached under the collar"
7"It was a shimmering, rippling"
8"She approached the shimmering distortion."
9"It hummed in the air,"
10"She stood on a high"
11"It was a suffocating ceiling"
12"They had entered Gluttony."
13"She could distinguish the smell"
14"She carefully advanced down the"
15"Their immense shadow form drank"
16"Her boots crunched loudly on"
17"It struck her suddenly how"
18"She reached out with her"
19"Her bright blue eyes darted"
ratio0.219
53.75% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences96
matches
0"Aurora passed the ancient oak"
1"The damp, biting chill of"
2"This was the Grove, a"
3"An hour spent wandering these"
4"She rubbed her left wrist,"
5"Her analytical mind, trained by"
6"She forced herself to take"
7"The Half-Fae seer possessed an"
8"Her silver hair fell in"
9"Aurora watched the grass directly"
10"The green blades did not"
11"Aurora asked, her voice sounding"
12"Isolde turned gracefully."
13"Her pale lavender eyes seemed"
14"Aurora pressed her lips together"
15"The seer could not lie,"
16"A localized chill rushed past"
17"Nyx materialized from the dense"
18"The Shade expanded upward, stretching"
19"Their voice lacked vocal cords"
ratio0.813
52.08% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences96
matches
0"Even in the shadowy Grove,"
ratio0.01
79.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences68
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"She forced herself to take a deep, grounding breath, leaning heavily on the street-smart pragmatism that kept her alive when she was just running deliveries for…"
1"The Half-Fae seer possessed an ethereal, unbothered grace that made her seem entirely detached from the physical world."
2"Trees with dark, bruised-purple bark wept constant streams of heavy golden sap, their branches bowing under the weight of fruits that resembled swollen, faceted…"
3"Pomegranates the size of human skulls hung low to the ground, bursting open from their own ripeness to reveal dense seed clusters that glistened like wet rubies…"
4"A heavy warmth coated Aurora's skin, carrying the intoxicating aroma of a thousand grand feasts blending together."
5"The syrup sizzled as it hit the earth, instantly sprouting a frantic, fast-growing stalk of bright pink sugar-cane that flowered, withered, and rotted back into…"
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"the seer cautioned, her ethereal voice cutting sharply through the sluggish, intoxicating atmosphere"
1"the Shade whispered, the sound like dry autumn leaves skittering across pavement"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Aurora muttered (mutter)"
1"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
2"Aurora breathed (breathe)"
3"the Shade whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.444
effectiveRatio0.444
78.6693%