Run: 2026-02-19-01KHVP23EV4NQEC3XNGME91YYQ

Run Details

Duration:
1m 25s
Cost:
$0.066474
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Richmond Park stretched into a sea of absolute black. Rory stood at the perimeter. The ancient oak standing stones loomed ahead, stripped of leaves, their heavy trunks twisted into shapes resembling splintered bones. Isolde’s grove. The boundary line into a pocket dimension. She stepped past the petrified wood. The air shifted the moment her boots crossed the threshold. The familiar hum of London traffic, the distant, unending drone of the M4, vanished. Silence slammed into her ears. An unnatural, suffocating quiet hung over the clearing. Beneath her, wildflowers blanketed the soil, blooming in a riot of colors the moonless night bled into shades of gray. The blossoms opened wide, drinking in the freezing midnight air. Fae territory bred impossibilities. Winter or summer, the Richmond grove stayed eternally in bloom. Rory rubbed her left wrist. Her thumb traced the crescent-shaped scar, a physical grounding ritual. She came here for a name. The unknown benefactor who dropped the artifact into her life needed to answer for the chaos unspooling in her wake. Yu-Fei’s restaurant, Silas’s bar, the flat in the city—none of it felt secure anymore. She brought the object back to the source. Against her collarbone, a dull heat stirred. Rory hooked a finger under the silver chain, pulling the thumbnail-sized gemstone from beneath her jacket collar. The deep crimson facets pulsed. A faint inner glow cast a sickly red sheen over her throat. It vibrated. A rhythmic, thudding warmth seeped into her skin. Hel. The Heartstone only reacted to under-realm rifts. The grove belonged to the Fae court. A Hel portal inside an Earth-bound boundary meant a severe, deliberate breach. The magic in the air felt infected. A violent crack echoed through the clearing. Rory dropped into a crouch. Her bright blue eyes scanned the darkness, tracking the silhouettes of the oak stones. The noise originated from the forest canopy, not the forest floor. A wet, heavy thud followed. Something dropped from the branches. "Show yourself." Nothing moved. The blooming wildflowers swayed, though no breeze disturbed the heavy air. Rory remained motionless. She possessed no weapons, just quick, out-of-the-box reasoning and an artifact she barely understood. Running back out past the oak stones meant turning her back to the dark. Her legal-trained mind demanded logic, sifting through angles and environmental escapes. She noted the distance to the outer standing stones. Twenty paces. She spotted a dense thicket of briars to the east. Impassable. A low scraping noise drifted from her left. Wood dragging across stone. The heels of her boots ground into the soil. She kept her gaze fixed on the periphery. Another scrape. A rhythmic, uneven slide-and-thud. Someone—or something—paced the perimeter of the standing stones, keeping just outside her direct line of sight. She focused on the gaps between the massive oaks. The darkness congealed. A cluster of twisted branches detached itself from a trunk, stretching unnaturally long before snapping back into place. Her brain processed the shadows as threats, assembling limbs out of empty space. A faint, rhythmic clicking broke the silence. Teeth chattering. Rory exhaled a sharp breath. The air bloomed around her mouth in a thick white cloud. The temperature plunged well below freezing in the span of a single heartbeat. The cloying Fae scent of crushed pearls and ozone vanished, replaced entirely by the stench of an open cellar. The wildflowers curled inward, petals blackening and shriveling against the unnatural frost. She unzipped her jacket pocket, fishing out her phone. The screen blazed to life, casting harsh light over the dying flora. The digital clock read 11:42 PM. She tapped the flashlight icon. The LED strobed once, flickered, and died. The battery drained from eighty percent to three in a fraction of a second. The clock warped, numbers glitching into garbled symbols before the screen went entirely black. Time distortion. The pocket grove swallowed hours and spat out minutes. She risked standing in this exact spot for days in the outside world, trapped in a single, endlessly stretching night. The clicking grew louder. It echoed from the opposite direction now. Her right. "I have the pendant." Rory held the silver chain out, dangling the Heartstone from her fist. The crimson glow intensified, spilling a pooling, bloody light over her boots and the frostbitten soil. The warmth escalated to a searing brand against her palm. She ignored the pain. "You want it. Come take it." The clicking stopped abruptly. A profound, inescapable wrongness crashed down on her shoulders. The invisible weight bowed her spine. Evan’s intimidation tactics back in Cardiff used to make her pulse race with adrenaline, a primitive biological response to a physical threat. This struck deeper. This bypassed the nervous system and injected ice straight into her marrow. The certainty of outnumbering, of being hunted by things that defied natural law, settled heavy in her gut. A silhouette carved itself out of the negative space beside the largest oak stone twenty feet ahead. It stood too tall. The proportions defied basic anatomy. Limbs hung like loose ropes, swinging with a jerky, disjointed rhythm. It didn't step forward. It glided, the ongoing dragging sound entirely out of sync with its physical movements. Rory forced her legs to hold steady. She refused to retreat. She categorized and cataloged the approaching shape, stripping away the supernatural dread to locate a mechanical weakness. No eyes visible. No face. Just a void wrapped in peeling, gray tissue. The creature tilted an elongated head. The air pressure dropped violently. Rory's ears popped. The Heartstone pulsed a frantic, erratic beat against her knuckles. The crimson light flared, illuminating the creature's lower half. Pale, translucent flesh stretched tight over jagged, protruding joints. The thing possessed too many articulation points. Knees bent backward. Ankles rotated at impossible angles. Rory snatched a heavy fallen branch from the frost-covered ground. She tested the weight, wrapping both hands around the textured bark. The wood felt brittle, slick with frozen condensation. "Last chance to stay in the dark." A guttural hiss scraped against the inside of her skull, bypassing her auditory canals entirely. The creature stepped into the perimeter ring, crossing the boundary of the oak stones. Then, three more shadows peeled themselves away from the surrounding trees. Rory backed away, her boot heel hitting the central altar stone of the clearing. Solid rock blocked her escape. The shadows synced their movements. Slide. Drag. Thud. They corralled her toward the center, closing the circle. The blinding red glow of the pendant revealed more anomalies lurking deeper in the trees, a dozen pairs of elongated limbs weaving through the petrified wood. The collective chattering of invisible teeth drowned out the sound of her own harsh breathing. The vast isolation of Richmond Park compressed into a tiny, inescapable cage. The wrongness saturated every frozen blade of grass, every withered flower petal. She tightened her grip on the makeshift weapon. The pendant burned a blister into her palm, marking her skin with the heat of the under-realm.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1171
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1171
totalAiIsms26
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count2
5
word"vibrated"
count1
6
word"rhythmic"
count3
7
word"warmth"
count2
8
word"echoed"
count2
9
word"scanned"
count1
10
word"processed"
count1
11
word"flickered"
count1
12
word"searing"
count1
13
word"profound"
count1
14
word"weight"
count2
15
word"pulse"
count1
16
word"race"
count1
17
word"cataloged"
count1
18
word"mechanical"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"familiar"
2"silence"
3"traced"
4"pulsed"
5"vibrated"
6"rhythmic"
7"warmth"
8"echoed"
9"scanned"
10"processed"
11"flickered"
12"searing"
13"profound"
14"weight"
15"pulse"
16"race"
17"cataloged"
18"mechanical"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences129
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences129
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences132
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1158
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount1139
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.97
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Park2
London1
Richmond3
Silas1
Heartstone3
Fae3
Hel2
Earth-bound1
Cardiff1
Rory11
persons
0"Silas"
1"Heartstone"
2"Rory"
places
0"Park"
1"London"
2"Richmond"
3"Fae"
4"Earth-bound"
5"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences86
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1158
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences132
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean34.06
std25.05
cv0.736
sampleLengths
048
181
263
37
444
51
633
77
830
910
102
1177
1212
1339
1443
159
1660
1798
1813
1952
204
2170
2217
2338
2441
2514
2643
2729
287
2929
3011
3162
3239
3325
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences129
matches
0"being hunted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs184
matches(empty)
99.57% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences132
ratio0.015
matches
0"Yu-Fei’s restaurant, Silas’s bar, the flat in the city—none of it felt secure anymore."
1"Someone—or something—paced the perimeter of the standing stones, keeping just outside her direct line of sight."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1152
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"rhythmic, uneven slide-and-thud."
1"tight over jagged, protruding"
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.026909722222222224
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.010416666666666666
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences132
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences132
mean8.77
std5.23
cv0.597
sampleLengths
09
15
219
32
47
56
610
714
85
98
1020
1110
124
1310
145
1510
166
1720
1814
198
207
2117
225
2312
242
258
261
277
287
2912
307
317
325
3314
3411
355
365
372
382
3911
403
4114
4214
4311
449
452
4610
471
488
494
41.92% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.3333333333333333
totalSentences132
uniqueOpeners44
86.96% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences115
matches
0"Just a void wrapped in"
1"Pale, translucent flesh stretched tight"
2"Then, three more shadows peeled"
ratio0.026
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences115
matches
0"She stepped past the petrified"
1"Her thumb traced the crescent-shaped"
2"She came here for a"
3"She brought the object back"
4"Her bright blue eyes scanned"
5"She possessed no weapons, just"
6"Her legal-trained mind demanded logic,"
7"She noted the distance to"
8"She spotted a dense thicket"
9"She kept her gaze fixed"
10"She focused on the gaps"
11"Her brain processed the shadows"
12"She unzipped her jacket pocket,"
13"She tapped the flashlight icon."
14"She risked standing in this"
15"It echoed from the opposite"
16"She ignored the pain."
17"It stood too tall."
18"It didn't step forward."
19"It glided, the ongoing dragging"
ratio0.217
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount107
totalSentences115
matches
0"Richmond Park stretched into a"
1"Rory stood at the perimeter."
2"The ancient oak standing stones"
3"The boundary line into a"
4"She stepped past the petrified"
5"The air shifted the moment"
6"The familiar hum of London"
7"Silence slammed into her ears."
8"An unnatural, suffocating quiet hung"
9"The blossoms opened wide, drinking"
10"Fae territory bred impossibilities."
11"Winter or summer, the Richmond"
12"Rory rubbed her left wrist."
13"Her thumb traced the crescent-shaped"
14"She came here for a"
15"The unknown benefactor who dropped"
16"Yu-Fei’s restaurant, Silas’s bar, the"
17"She brought the object back"
18"Rory hooked a finger under"
19"The deep crimson facets pulsed."
ratio0.93
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The unknown benefactor who dropped the artifact into her life needed to answer for the chaos unspooling in her wake."
1"The certainty of outnumbering, of being hunted by things that defied natural law, settled heavy in her gut."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
87.2148%