Run: 2026-02-19-01KHVP2T0H5E9MXS03JC9YJPFF

Run Details

Duration:
1m 40s
Cost:
$0.076638
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The mud of Richmond Park sucked at Aurora’s boots, a thick, freezing sludge that threatened to swallow her ankles with every step. She pulled her coat tighter against the biting London chill, her bright blue eyes tracking the ethereal figure gliding several paces ahead. Isolde moved like a ghost. Her waist-length silver hair drifted behind her in a wind Rory could not feel, and despite the marshy ground, the Half-Fae seer left absolutely no footprints. Not a bent blade of grass. Not a single indentation in the mud. Rory frowned, her logical brain, the one that had rigorously parsed legal texts at Cardiff University before she abandoned the discipline entirely, itching desperately to find a mechanical explanation for the impossible sight. We approach the boundary, a voice murmured near Rory’s ear. It sounded less like a person speaking and more like dry leaves scraping across a stone pavement, a hollow whisper carried on the breeze. Rory glanced to her right. Nyx towered beside her, their frame shifting continuously between a solid, six-foot-two humanoid silhouette and plumes of dark, ink-like mist. Faintly glowing violet eyes studied the dense thicket of trees ahead. The Shade seemed agitated, their edges blurring and reforming in rapid succession. I know, Rory said, keeping her voice low. She rubbed her left wrist, her thumb tracing the familiar crescent-shaped scar hidden beneath her sleeve. It was a nervous habit, one she actively tried to suppress, especially when running late-night deliveries for the Golden Empress in less-than-savory neighborhoods. But she was far off the clock now, and a long way from the familiar concrete sprawl of the city streets. Ahead, a ring of ancient oak standing stones loomed through the gray mist. Their bark was scarred and gnarled, twisted into vague shapes that looked entirely too much like screaming faces. Isolde passed between two of the largest monoliths without breaking her stride. As she crossed the threshold, the gloomy atmosphere of the park visibly fractured around her. Rory took a deep breath, steeling herself, and followed the seer through the stones. Nyx slipped through the gap beside her, their shadowy form sliding effortlessly over the damp earth. The transition was violent in its suddenness. The biting winter chill vanished, replaced instantly by a heavy, humid warmth that smelled of blooming jasmine and damp, fertile earth. Rory stumbled slightly, disoriented. They stood in a hidden clearing, cloistered away from the rest of the world. Wildflowers carpeted the ground in brilliant, impossible profusion. Foxgloves, bluebells, and snowdrops grew tangled together, ignoring every law of season and climate. The air in the grove felt thick, almost gelatinous, humming with dormant energy. Rory pushed her straight, shoulder-length black hair out of her eyes and glanced at her wristwatch. The second hand ticked forward seamlessly, then shuddered, snapped backward three spaces, and froze. The sun chases his own tail in this garden, Isolde said, turning to face them. Her pale lavender eyes held a vast, ageless distance. A heartbeat may span a season, and a season may wither in a single breath. The mortal clock has no mastery here. Time moves differently, Rory translated in her head, drawing on her pragmatic nature to ground the seer's riddles. She scanned the edge of the clearing. The trees here did not look out into the park; they looked out into a void of swirling, indistinct colors. I need a clear head for this. We aren't here for the flowers. Where the fabric of the world grows tired, a mouth waits in the unseen, Isolde continued, pointing a pale finger toward a cluster of weeping willows. The truth hides behind a trembling glass. Nyx drifted toward the willows. The air beneath the drooping branches was warping, shimmering like heat rising off hot tarmac on a summer afternoon. As the Shade drew near, the shimmering distortion reacted, rippling outward in concentric circles. The Veil, Nyx whispered, their voice echoing from all directions at once. The boundary between realms. The winter solstice approaches. The dark of the year pulls the threads taut until they fray. A rift point lies here. Before Rory could respond, a sharp, searing heat bloomed against her collarbone. She gasped, dropping her hand from her scarred wrist to clutch her chest. Beneath her sweater, against bare skin, the silver chain she wore felt like a hot wire. She hurriedly pulled the heavy pendant out from under her collar. The Heartstone, roughly the size of her thumbnail, was fully awake. The deep crimson gemstone possessed a faint inner glow that now pulsed in a frantic, rhythmic beat, casting a bloody light over her fingers. It only behaved this way when it sensed a gateway. Hel, Rory said, the word tasting like ash in her mouth. A Hell portal. Right here in Richmond. A domain of sweet rot and bitter honey, Isolde corrected gently, her Fae compulsion preventing her from speaking an outright lie, yet compelling her to obscure the raw truth. The belly of the beast is lined with spun sugar. The path is open, yet locked to those without the teeth to sever the illusion. Rory understood the prompt. She let the pulsing Heartstone rest against her jacket and reached into her pocket, her fingers closing around a slender hilt. She drew the Fae-Forged blade Isolde had gifted her days ago. The dagger was immaculate, its leaf-shaped blade forged from pure moonsilver. In the strange twilight of the grove, the metal was faintly luminescent. Despite the humid warmth of the clearing, the hilt was freezing cold, leaching the warmth right out of her palm. The weapon felt eager, practically vibrating with latent magic. It was designed to cut through magical wards, to carve a path where none existed. Rory stepped up beside Nyx. Through the shimmering distortion of the Veil, she could see absolutely nothing but a blurry haze. She raised the moonsilver blade, aimed for the center of the warping air, and slashed downward in a single, clean motion. The blade parted the magic like sheer silk. A sound like tearing canvas shrieked through the grove, forcing Rory to wince. The edges of the distortion peeled back, curling away from the cut to reveal a vertical tear in reality itself. Intense, warm amber light spilled out of the rift, casting long shadows across the wildflower meadow. The scent that wafted through the opening hit Rory like a physical blow. It was an overwhelming, intoxicating blend of exotic spices, caramelized sugar, roasted meats, and heavy, sweet wine. It smelled absolutely divine, which, given its origin, made it deeply terrifying. Nyx did not hesitate. The Shade melted into their incorporeal form and flowed seamlessly through the jagged tear, vanishing into the amber light. Isolde followed, her silver hair catching the golden glow as she stepped through without a sound. Taking a final, steadying breath, Rory braced herself and walked into the rift. The sensation of crossing the Veil was like pushing through a wall of thick, electrified water. Her skin tingled violently, her eardrums popped, and for one terrifying second, she felt entirely weightless. Then her boots hit solid ground, crunching against loose gravel. Rory opened her eyes and simply stared. Whatever she had expected of Hel, it wasn't this. There was no fire. There was no brimstone, no jagged obsidian peaks, no rivers of boiling blood. Instead, an amber sky arched endlessly overhead, radiating a gentle, perpetual golden-hour haze. There was no sun to be seen, yet the light was ubiquitous and warm. Rolling hills stretched out in every direction, blanketed entirely by sprawling, meticulously cultivated vineyards. The vines were impossibly thick, twisted like coiled serpents, bursting with heavy clusters of grapes that shimmered like polished amethyst. Beyond the vineyards lay vast orchards. The trees drooped under the sheer weight of enormous, glowing fruits that dripped golden sap onto the rich, dark soil below. The air was thick, nearly suffocatingly sweet, carrying the distant, musical sounds of clinking glass, uproarious laughter, and the sizzle of grand feasts. This is Dymas, Nyx whispered. The Shade had reformed into a solid silhouette beside her, their violet eyes sweeping the lush landscape with evident distrust. The domain of Prince Belphegor. The realm of Gluttony. It looks like a paradise, Rory murmured, utterly bewildered. She took a few steps forward, the gravel crunching loudly beneath her boots. It looks beautiful. The honey trap is always beautiful to the fly, Isolde said. She stood near the edge of the vineyard, examining a dripping cluster of fruit without touching it. To devour the world, one must first make the world look appetizing. Look beneath the rind, mortal. Rory squinted, forcing herself to look past the overwhelming sensory assault of perfection. As her eyes adjusted to the amber light, the subtle wrongness of the place began to bleed through. The dark soil beneath the vines was littered with crushed, rotting fruit that gave off a cloying scent of decay beneath the spice. The massive vines didn't just crawl along the trellises; they strangled them, twisting in agonizing contortions that looked suspiciously like reaching, desperate hands. The distant laughter carried on the wind lacked joy. It was manic, frantic, endless, the sound of an indulgence that could never be satisfied. Her Heartstone pendant was practically burning against her chest now, a constant, panicked rhythm. She slipped the freezing moonsilver blade back into her coat pocket, keeping her hand resting lightly on the hilt. A place of excess, Rory said aloud, her mind working rapidly through the implications. Master chefs, exotic ingredients, endless consumption. If the entire realm is built on an insatiable appetite, we're essentially walking into a giant dining room as the main course. The hunger here is absolute, Nyx agreed. Their shadowy form billowed out slightly, curling defensively around Rory’s flank. We must not partake. We must not drink the wine, we must not taste the sap, and we must not linger where the feasts are held. Contracted souls labor in these orchards, but the masters of the house are rarely forgiving to uninvited guests. Rory nodded, tightening her grip on the hidden blade. Let's find what we came for and get back to the right side of the Veil. I deliver the food, I don't become it. Keeping close together, the small group left the gravel path and stepped into the dizzying, fragrant labyrinth of the Dymasian vineyards, moving deeper into the beautiful nightmare.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
85.69% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1747
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"utterly"
count1
3
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"gently"
2"utterly"
3"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
34.17% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1747
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"chill"
count2
1
word"absolutely"
count3
2
word"mechanical"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count1
4
word"tracing"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count2
6
word"loomed"
count1
7
word"fractured"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count3
9
word"scanned"
count1
10
word"echoing"
count1
11
word"searing"
count1
12
word"pulsed"
count1
13
word"rhythmic"
count1
14
word"silk"
count1
15
word"shimmered"
count1
16
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"absolutely"
2"mechanical"
3"whisper"
4"tracing"
5"familiar"
6"loomed"
7"fractured"
8"warmth"
9"scanned"
10"echoing"
11"searing"
12"pulsed"
13"rhythmic"
14"silk"
15"shimmered"
16"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences131
matches(empty)
99.24% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences131
filterMatches
0"know"
1"look"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences131
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1735
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions11
matches
0"I know, Rory said, keeping her voice low."
1"The sun chases his own tail in this garden, Isolde said, turning to face them."
2"Where the fabric of the world grows tired, a mouth waits in the unseen, Isolde continued, pointing a pale finger toward …"
3"The Veil, Nyx whispered, their voice echoing from all directions at once."
4"Hel, Rory said, the word tasting like ash in her mouth."
5"A domain of sweet rot and bitter honey, Isolde corrected gently, her Fae compulsion preventing her from speaking an outr…"
6"This is Dymas, Nyx whispered."
7"It looks like a paradise, Rory murmured, utterly bewildered."
8"The honey trap is always beautiful to the fly, Isolde said."
9"A place of excess, Rory said aloud, her mind working rapidly through the implications."
10"The hunger here is absolute, Nyx agreed."
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions71
wordCount1735
uniqueNames24
maxNameDensity1.27
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park1
Aurora1
London1
Rory22
Half-Fae1
Cardiff1
University1
Shade4
Golden1
Empress1
Isolde8
Veil4
Nyx8
Heartstone3
Hell1
Fae3
Fae-Forged1
Hel2
Dymas1
Prince1
Belphegor1
Gluttony1
Dymasian1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Shade"
2"Isolde"
3"Nyx"
4"Prince"
5"Belphegor"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Aurora"
3"London"
4"Cardiff"
globalScore0.866
windowScore0.833
83.04% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences112
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"seemed agitated their edges blurring and reforming in rapid succession"
1"re of the park visibly fractured around he"
2"felt like a hot wire"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1735
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences131
matches(empty)
71.51% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean44.49
std17.81
cv0.4
sampleLengths
044
177
234
348
468
558
630
768
843
946
1058
1133
1238
1337
1452
1545
1618
1754
1836
1967
2042
2141
2258
2339
2413
2542
267
2726
2861
2950
3034
3125
3245
33101
3433
3542
3662
3733
3827
89.19% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences131
matches
0"was scarred"
1"is lined"
2"was designed"
3"was littered"
4"is built"
5"are held"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs297
matches
0"was warping"
99.24% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences131
ratio0.015
matches
0"The trees here did not look out into the park; they looked out into a void of swirling, indistinct colors."
1"The massive vines didn't just crawl along the trellises; they strangled them, twisting in agonizing contortions that looked suspiciously like reaching, desperate hands."
81.19% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1747
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"familiar crescent-shaped scar"
1"gentle, perpetual golden-hour"
adverbCount72
adverbRatio0.0412135088723526
lyAdverbCount47
lyAdverbRatio0.026903262736119062
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences131
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences131
mean13.24
std6.37
cv0.481
sampleLengths
022
122
25
326
46
57
633
710
824
95
1020
1111
1212
138
1416
1523
1621
1713
1818
1912
2015
2114
2216
237
2421
254
2614
278
2814
2913
3016
3114
3215
339
3415
357
3618
377
3820
397
406
4126
427
435
4419
4514
4612
474
484
4912
43.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.33587786259541985
totalSentences131
uniqueOpeners44
76.34% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences131
matches
0"Faintly glowing violet eyes studied"
1"Then her boots hit solid"
2"Instead, an amber sky arched"
ratio0.023
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences131
matches
0"She pulled her coat tighter"
1"Her waist-length silver hair drifted"
2"We approach the boundary, a"
3"It sounded less like a"
4"I know, Rory said, keeping"
5"She rubbed her left wrist,"
6"It was a nervous habit,"
7"Their bark was scarred and"
8"They stood in a hidden"
9"Her pale lavender eyes held"
10"She scanned the edge of"
11"I need a clear head"
12"We aren't here for the"
13"She gasped, dropping her hand"
14"She hurriedly pulled the heavy"
15"It only behaved this way"
16"She let the pulsing Heartstone"
17"She drew the Fae-Forged blade"
18"It was designed to cut"
19"She raised the moonsilver blade,"
ratio0.26
78.32% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount100
totalSentences131
matches
0"The mud of Richmond Park"
1"She pulled her coat tighter"
2"Isolde moved like a ghost."
3"Her waist-length silver hair drifted"
4"Rory frowned, her logical brain,"
5"We approach the boundary, a"
6"It sounded less like a"
7"Rory glanced to her right."
8"Nyx towered beside her, their"
9"The Shade seemed agitated, their"
10"I know, Rory said, keeping"
11"She rubbed her left wrist,"
12"It was a nervous habit,"
13"Their bark was scarred and"
14"Isolde passed between two of"
15"Rory took a deep breath,"
16"Nyx slipped through the gap"
17"The transition was violent in"
18"The biting winter chill vanished,"
19"Rory stumbled slightly, disoriented."
ratio0.763
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences131
matches
0"Before Rory could respond, a"
1"To devour the world, one"
2"If the entire realm is"
ratio0.023
79.37% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences90
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The Shade seemed agitated, their edges blurring and reforming in rapid succession."
1"Their bark was scarred and gnarled, twisted into vague shapes that looked entirely too much like screaming faces."
2"The biting winter chill vanished, replaced instantly by a heavy, humid warmth that smelled of blooming jasmine and damp, fertile earth."
3"The vines were impossibly thick, twisted like coiled serpents, bursting with heavy clusters of grapes that shimmered like polished amethyst."
4"The trees drooped under the sheer weight of enormous, glowing fruits that dripped golden sap onto the rich, dark soil below."
5"The massive vines didn't just crawl along the trellises; they strangled them, twisting in agonizing contortions that looked suspiciously like reaching, desperat…"
6"It was manic, frantic, endless, the sound of an indulgence that could never be satisfied."
7"She slipped the freezing moonsilver blade back into her coat pocket, keeping her hand resting lightly on the hilt."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
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100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
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86.7873%