Run: 2026-02-19-01KHVP2ZR6CZ8V205EZ0TX1XJC

Run Details

Duration:
1m 14s
Cost:
$0.057498
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air between the ancient oak standing stones shivered, distorting the vibrant wildflowers that carpeted the hidden clearing in Richmond Park. Rory stood before the shimmering ripple in space, the tip of her leaf-shaped dagger hovering just inches from the anomaly. The moonsilver metal of the Fae-forged blade leached a steady, biting cold into her grip, a stark contrast to the heavy, throbbing warmth radiating from the Heartstone pendant resting against her collarbone. She pressed her left thumb to the small, crescent-shaped scar on her wrist—a grounding habit she had carried since childhood. Cardiff, her father’s law books, the rainy streets of London, the endless deliveries for the Golden Empress—all of that felt a million miles away. "The Veil is thinnest here," Isolde murmured softly from behind her. The half-fae seer seemed to float above the lush grass, her waist-length silver hair catching the ambient twilight of the Grove. "Cut the thread, Aurora. The doorway waits, patient and hungry." Rory drew a slow breath, tightened her grip on the frigid dagger, and sliced downward through empty air. The blade caught on nothing, yet the resistance was immense, like dragging heavy iron through thick mud. The distortion tore open with a wet, tearing sound. A rush of hot, sweet wind spilled out of the rift, carrying the cloying scent of roasted sugar, overripe fruit, and heavy spices. Nyx stepped forward to flank her. The Shade was a towering silhouette of living, shifting darkness stretching to six feet and two inches, their faintly glowing violet eyes fixed on the tear. "The space between realms groans," Nyx said. Their voice lacked the resonance of vocal cords; instead, it washed over Rory like a hollow whisper carried on a chilled autumn wind. "Step quickly, Carter. Rifts do not bleed forever." Rory nodded, tucking her dark, shoulder-length hair behind one ear. She tightened her jaw, stepped through the oak stones, and plunged into the breach. The transition was violent, a momentary sensation of being stretched thin across a cosmic loom, followed by a sudden plunge into suffocating warmth. Gravity asserted itself, and Rory’s boots slammed onto soft, loamy earth. She blinked, her bright blue eyes struggling to adjust. Forget the rainy overcast skies of Earth or the eternal silver twilight of the Fae Court. The sky above them was a sprawling, unbroken canopy of warm amber. It cast a golden, syrupy light over everything, making the landscape look as though it were dripping in honey. They stood at the crest of a sloping hill. Endless rows of exotic vineyards curled down the sweeping valley below, the vines thicker than ancient tree trunks. Their leaves were a bruised, vibrant magenta, and clusters of fruit the size of human fists hung heavy from the branches, glistening with nectar. Further down, geometric orchards separated vast, blooming gardens. "Where are we?" Rory asked, her voice sounding muffled in the thick air. The pendant beneath her shirt was practically burning now, pulsing in a frantic, steady rhythm. "Dymas," Isolde said. She stepped smoothly out of the shimmering rift, her bare feet touching the rich soil without leaving a single footprint. "The amber jewel of Hel. The domain of Prince Belphegor." Rory’s stomach gave a sharp, involuntary rumble. The air smelled magnificent. It was a chaotic, intoxicating blend of roasting meats, steeped wine, caramelized marrow, and blooming night-jasmine. As a delivery driver who spent her nights boxing up fragrant curries and crispy duck, Rory knew the power of a good aroma. But this was an assault. The scent seemed to worm its way directly into her bloodstream, bypassing logic. Nyx slid from the rift last, the localized reality twisting to accommodate them. Here, beneath the amber sky, the Shade’s form solidified, the wisps of darkness coalescing into a sharp, humanoid shape. Nyx knelt, trailing long, shadowy fingers over the base of a nearby vine. The shadows stretching from the colossal twisted roots seemed to reach out and coil around their wrist, welcoming them. "Gluttony," Nyx whispered to the shadows. "A realm of unending appetite. A trap woven of spun sugar and fermented dread." "Exactly," Rory muttered, forcing herself to look away from a particularly plump cluster of deep purple grapes hanging just an arm's length away. A droplet of golden juice swelled at the base of the lowest grape, catching the amber light before falling to the soil with a heavy plop. She took a step back. "Don’t touch the food. Don’t even lick your lips. This whole place is a psychological bear trap." Rory began walking down the grassy path between the sweeping rows of vines. She let her quick mind catalog the environment. The soil was a dark, russet brown, rich with moisture and giving slightly beneath her boots. The air temperature was perfectly, insidiously comfortable—exactly the sort of warmth that made one want to unbutton their collar, lie back in the grass, and let time slip away. She noticed movement in the distance. At the bottom of the valley slope, colossal stone structures entirely lacking walls or doors squatted amid the orchards. Giant spires of smoke rose from bronze chimneys. "Kitchens," Isolde observed, following Rory’s gaze. The seer’s pale lavender eyes were distant, tracking threads of fate only she could perceive. "Mortal souls, bound by contracts signed in blood, laboring over braziers of hellfire to perfect a single pastry, a singular sauce. They chop and boil for centuries, praying to conjure a dish that will earn the Prince’s mercy." Rory paused, staring at the distant, sprawling pavilions. Even from here, she could make out the impossibly long banquet tables, piled high with towering confections, whole roasted beasts, and pyramids of shimmering alien fruit. Shadowy figures moved frantically around the blazing hearths. "And does he?" Rory asked, her grip tightening on the hilt of the moonsilver blade at her thigh. Its biting cold was the only thing keeping her mind sharp against the drowsy, intoxicating warmth of the valley. "Grant them mercy?" Isolde turned her head slightly, offering a serene, enigmatic smile. "A starving dog cares nothing for the leash that binds it, only for the bowl. The Prince eats, and the Prince forgets. To remember is to be satisfied, and there is no satisfaction here." Rory filed the riddle away. She knew Isolde couldn't lie, but the seer rarely handed over a straight answer. It meant no. The contracts were a sham. Belphegor never let them go. Something rustled heavily in the vines to their right. Nyx shifted, their solid silhouette instantly dissolving into incorporeal smoke, sliding along the darkened soil like spilled ink to investigate. The violet eyes ignited brightly within the shade beneath the broad magenta leaves. Rory raised her dagger. "What is it?" "Harvesters," Nyx whispered, the sound drifting from multiple directions at once. "Scavengers of the rotting excess. They are blind, driven only by the smell of hunger." Rory took another step back, her boot snapping a fallen twig. In the ensuing silence, the rustling stopped. Then, a low, wet chittering began, accompanied by the sound of tearing flesh and slurping juice. She exchanged a glance with Isolde, who stood completely still, her silver hair drifting softly in a breeze Rory couldn't feel. The seer’s expression was an unreadable mask, but Rory didn’t need prophecy to know they had overstayed their welcome on this ridge. Out-of-the-box thinking had kept her alive in London when her ex Evan had tried to corner her, and it would keep her alive in Hel. They couldn't fight an unknown enemy when the very air was trying to sedate them. "Move," Rory commanded, keeping her voice low but steady. She pointed her dagger down the winding path, away from the rustling vines and the grand kitchens below. "We stay away from the orchards, we avoid the main roads, and we keep moving. No stopping, no matter how hungry you feel." Nyx coalesced beside her, nodding once, their solid form blocking the space between Rory and the chittering darkness. Together, the trio stepped deeper into the amber-lit heart of Gluttony, leaving the safety of the Veil behind.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Isolde murmured softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.476
leniency0.952
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.095
70.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1358
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"softly"
count2
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count2
3
adverb"perfectly"
count1
4
adverb"completely"
count1
5
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"quickly"
2"slightly"
3"perfectly"
4"completely"
5"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
41.09% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1358
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"stark"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count4
2
word"resonance"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count1
4
word"chilled"
count1
5
word"glistening"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"chaotic"
count1
8
word"comfortable"
count1
9
word"perfect"
count1
10
word"enigmatic"
count1
11
word"silence"
count1
12
word"unreadable"
count1
highlights
0"stark"
1"warmth"
2"resonance"
3"whisper"
4"chilled"
5"glistening"
6"stomach"
7"chaotic"
8"comfortable"
9"perfect"
10"enigmatic"
11"silence"
12"unreadable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences81
matches(empty)
54.67% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences81
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences92
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1347
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
63.04% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions53
wordCount1150
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity1.74
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Fae-forged1
Heartstone1
London2
Golden1
Empress1
Grove1
Shade2
Rory20
Earth1
Fae2
Court1
Isolde6
Evan1
Hel1
Gluttony1
Veil1
Nyx8
persons
0"Rory"
1"Isolde"
2"Evan"
3"Gluttony"
4"Nyx"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Heartstone"
3"London"
4"Shade"
5"Hel"
globalScore0.63
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1347
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
82.36% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean42.09
std18.45
cv0.438
sampleLengths
073
144
242
318
449
532
638
724
834
956
1059
1128
1233
1368
1464
1520
1671
1766
1833
1959
2042
2140
2244
2332
249
2533
267
2726
2834
2983
3050
3136
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"being stretched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs187
matches
0"were dripping"
1"was trying"
18.63% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences92
ratio0.043
matches
0"She pressed her left thumb to the small, crescent-shaped scar on her wrist—a grounding habit she had carried since childhood."
1"Cardiff, her father’s law books, the rainy streets of London, the endless deliveries for the Golden Empress—all of that felt a million miles away."
2"Their voice lacked the resonance of vocal cords; instead, it washed over Rory like a hollow whisper carried on a chilled autumn wind."
3"The air temperature was perfectly, insidiously comfortable—exactly the sort of warmth that made one want to unbutton their collar, lie back in the grass, and let time slip away."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1164
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.0352233676975945
lyAdverbCount23
lyAdverbRatio0.019759450171821305
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences92
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences92
mean14.64
std7.58
cv0.518
sampleLengths
021
120
232
320
424
511
621
710
818
917
109
1123
126
1326
147
1523
168
1710
1814
1923
2011
219
2216
2312
2419
259
2618
2724
288
2913
3015
313
3220
3310
347
354
3616
3723
385
3913
4013
4119
4213
4319
446
4514
4623
4726
485
4917
75.36% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4782608695652174
totalSentences92
uniqueOpeners44
84.39% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences79
matches
0"Further down, geometric orchards separated"
1"Then, a low, wet chittering"
ratio0.025
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences79
matches
0"She pressed her left thumb"
1"Their voice lacked the resonance"
2"She tightened her jaw, stepped"
3"She blinked, her bright blue"
4"It cast a golden, syrupy"
5"They stood at the crest"
6"Their leaves were a bruised,"
7"She stepped smoothly out of"
8"It was a chaotic, intoxicating"
9"She took a step back."
10"She let her quick mind"
11"She noticed movement in the"
12"Its biting cold was the"
13"She knew Isolde couldn't lie,"
14"It meant no."
15"She exchanged a glance with"
16"They couldn't fight an unknown"
17"She pointed her dagger down"
ratio0.228
35.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences79
matches
0"The air between the ancient"
1"Rory stood before the shimmering"
2"The moonsilver metal of the"
3"She pressed her left thumb"
4"Cardiff, her father’s law books,"
5"Isolde murmured softly from behind"
6"The half-fae seer seemed to"
7"Rory drew a slow breath,"
8"The blade caught on nothing,"
9"The distortion tore open with"
10"A rush of hot, sweet"
11"Nyx stepped forward to flank"
12"The Shade was a towering"
13"Their voice lacked the resonance"
14"Rory nodded, tucking her dark,"
15"She tightened her jaw, stepped"
16"The transition was violent, a"
17"Gravity asserted itself, and Rory’s"
18"She blinked, her bright blue"
19"The sky above them was"
ratio0.848
63.29% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"Even from here, she could"
ratio0.013
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The air between the ancient oak standing stones shivered, distorting the vibrant wildflowers that carpeted the hidden clearing in Richmond Park."
1"It cast a golden, syrupy light over everything, making the landscape look as though it were dripping in honey."
2"As a delivery driver who spent her nights boxing up fragrant curries and crispy duck, Rory knew the power of a good aroma."
3"The air temperature was perfectly, insidiously comfortable—exactly the sort of warmth that made one want to unbutton their collar, lie back in the grass, and le…"
4"She exchanged a glance with Isolde, who stood completely still, her silver hair drifting softly in a breeze Rory couldn't feel."
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Rory asked, her voice sounding muffled in the thick air"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Isolde murmured softly (murmur)"
1"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
2"Rory muttered (mutter)"
3"Isolde observed (observe)"
4"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0.556
effectiveRatio0.476
80.9922%