Run: 2026-02-19-01KHVP3RCWQ1K2X4JYA003P0Y9

Run Details

Duration:
1m 58s
Cost:
$0.151118
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rough bark of the ancient oak standing stones scraped Rory Carter's shoulder. She squeezed between the colossal twin trunks, boots slipping on the damp London mud. The chill of Richmond Park vanished as a wall of shimmering air rippled in front of her. The distortion resembled spilled oil floating on a puddle, twisting the winter landscape behind it into a funhouse mirror. Isolde Varga glided toward the anomaly. The Fae seer's silver hair cascaded down to her waist, catching a strange, ambient luminescence. Her bare feet brushed the frost-coated grass, leaving the blades uncrushed. She left absolutely no footprints in the wet earth. "Step through the glass. Leave the mundane rot behind." Rory glanced back at Nyx. The shade towered behind her at an imposing six feet two inches. Violet light bled from the empty eye sockets within their shifting, ink-black silhouette. "The boundary wears thin tonight." Rory turned her attention back to the ripple. She pushed her hand forward. The barrier offered a faint, gelatinous resistance. The world beyond sucked her in with a sudden, vacuum-like pop. Her boots hit solid ground with a heavy thud. The air immediately flooded her sinuses with the smell of crushed lavender, ozone, and wet copper. Instead of the bleak, leafless park, an explosion of color assaulted her eyes. Blankets of azure and magenta wildflowers choked the forest floor. The blooms stretched infinitely among towering oak and ash trees. The bark on the trunks shimmered with an iridescent sheen. Isolde stood waiting in a patch of impossibly bright, golden sunlight. Pale lavender eyes locked onto Rory. "A beautiful snare catches the most flies." Rory checked her wristwatch. The second hand ticked backward, froze in place, then spun in a dizzying blur. She tapped the glass face. "Forget the machine. The sun weaves a different path here. A heartbeat is a century. A day is a dying breath." Nyx oozed through the shimmering boundary. The shade coalesced into a solid humanoid shape beside Rory. The shadows under the strange, iridescent trees stretched toward them, drawn like iron filings to a magnet. "Fascinating. The darkness breathes in this place." Rory unzipped her thick jacket. The ambient temperature matched a balmy midsummer evening, making her sweat. She adjusted her shirt, revealing the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. "You live here. In a pocket dimension right off the A3 motorway." Isolde smiled. The expression lacked any trace of human warmth. "The roots drink from two rivers. One of mud, one of starlight." Rory rubbed her chest. Beneath her shirt, the Heartstone pendant pulsed against her sternum. The crimson gem sent rhythmic waves of heat into her skin. She pulled the silver chain out, laying the thumbnail-sized stone over her collar. A faint inner glow illuminated the intricate facets. "It senses the seams. The magic bleeds here. Other realms tug at the fabric." Rory dropped the stone back inside her shirt. "Lead the way, Isolde. Show us the heart of the grove." Isolde turned and drifted deeper into the woods. She hovered inches above beds of blooming, alien orchids. Rory followed, boots crunching on fallen leaves that shattered with the distinct noise of breaking green glass. The foliage ahead thickened into an impassable jungle. Trees twisted into unnatural corkscrews, their branches forming dense organic archways. Glowing moss dripped from the canopy in thick, emerald tendrils. The light in the grove did not originate from a sun above, but seeped directly from the flora. A low hum vibrated through the soles of Rory's boots. The sound mimicked an entire choir of tuning forks humming in perfect unison. Nyx glided past a cluster of silver ferns. The shade extended a smoky hand. The ferns shrank away, curling their fronds tightly inward. "Life rejects the void. The rampant growth here recoils from my nature." Rory touched a massive, twisted tree trunk. The pale bark mimicked warm human skin. A pulse throbbed beneath her palm, matching the rhythm of the ambient tuning-fork hum. She snatched her hand away, wiping her palm on her jeans. "Everything is alive. Too alive." Rory scanned the dense canopy, tracking a sudden scurrying sound. "The earth remembers every footstep. It speaks your name before your mother gives it." They stepped into a narrow ravine flanked by walls of pure, unpolished amethyst. Vines thick as pythons crisscrossed the path, coated in venomous-looking purple thorns. Rory gripped the moonsilver hilt of the Fae-forged dagger strapped to her belt. The metal radiated a localized chill, biting through the leather sheath against her hip. She drew the slender, leaf-shaped blade. The weapon emitted a faint, ghostly luminescence. "Allow me." Rory stepped ahead of Isolde. She swung the dagger at the thickest cluster of vines. The moonsilver sliced through the thick, woody plant matter with zero resistance. The severed vines shrieked like boiling kettles, snapping back against the amethyst walls. Clear, sap-like fluid sprayed the rocks, hissing and dissolving the crystal on contact. "Hostile landscaping." Rory kept her blade raised, watching the remaining vines slither out of her path. "They taste the iron in your blood. They mistake you for a meal." Nyx drifted through the gap, stepping over the bubbling sap. "Your blade carries the authority of the Fae Courts. The lesser flora understands submission." Rory wiped the flat of the glowing dagger on her jeans to clean off a drop of sizzling sap. She sheathed the cold weapon. "Good to know I rank higher than a weed." They emerged from the ravine into a wide clearing. A colossal structure of entwined ancient roots formed a natural amphitheater. The flowers here bloomed in shades of pitch black and deep obsidian, petals shimmering with an oil-slick rainbow sheen. A thick mist rolled across the ground, completely obscuring their ankles in a dense white cloud. Rory kicked through the mist. The fog parted, revealing a glassy obsidian floor beneath the dirt. Shadows danced inside the dark stone under her boots, swirling in hypnotic, dizzying patterns. The Heartstone scorched Rory's chest with sudden ferocity. She hissed, lifting the silver chain away from her neck. The gem glowed bright cherry-red, the light visible right through the cotton fabric of her shirt. "The fabric tears completely." Nyx pointed a long finger toward a jagged anomaly hovering in the air at the center of the amphitheater. Rory squinted. A gash in spacetime hovered three feet off the ground, edged with a harsh, warm amber light. The fresh, lavender-scented air of the grove instantly shifted. A heavy breeze rolled out of the rift, bringing the smell of roasting meats, fermenting fruit, and dark, exotic spices. "Dymas. The dominion of Prince Belphegor. A rift leading straight into gluttony." Rory gripped the cold hilt of her dagger again. Isolde stopped at the edge of the obsidian floor. She stared directly into the amber glow. "The hungry mouth opens wide. The endless feast calls out to the empty stomach." Rory stepped closer to the jagged tear. The amber light washed over her face, painting her straight black hair in shades of fiery gold. The oppressive heat radiating from the rift felt heavy. Muted sounds of raucous laughter, clinking crystal goblets, and crackling hearth fires drifted through the gap into the peaceful grove. "A backdoor into Hel. Unmonitored. The Wardens missed this tear." Nyx dissolved their solid legs into a swirling stream of smoke, floating over the unnatural black flowers. Rory inspected the perimeter of the rift. The edges of the tear sizzled, burning the localized air into a wavy mirage. Deep scorch marks marred the glassy obsidian ground directly below the anomaly. "Someone forced this open from the other side. Look at the spacing. Those are claw marks." Rory pointed at a series of massive gouges carved deep into the indestructible stone near the scorch marks. Nyx drifted down, hovering beside the ruined stone. The shade traced the deep grooves with a wispy, shadow-formed appendage. "Violent entry. A frantic scratching to escape the amber skies." Isolde knelt next to a crushed black flower on the perimeter of the claw marks. She brushed her pale fingers over the absolute ruin of the petals. "The pig breaks the sturdy pen to find the buried truffle." Rory stepped back from the amber light. The intense heat pouring from the Dymasian rift clashed violently with the cool, magical air of the Fae Grove. The contrasting temperatures created a turbulent miniature vortex of wind that whipped her hair across her face. "We need to report this to a Warden. Or figure out what crawled out." Rory drew the moonsilver blade a second time. The icy metal hissed as it met the hot wind spilling out of the rift. "Metal forged in moonlight cannot sew reality back together. It only severs." Isolde stood tall, her silver hair whipping in the vortex. "Then I plan to sever whoever carved up the floor." Rory examined the blade. The luminescent dagger glowed blindingly white, feeding off the dense ambient magic saturating the amphitheater. A low, guttural growl echoed from the dark trees located just beyond the rift. The deep sound vibrated right through Rory's jaw and teeth. The amber light spilling from the tear flickered as a massive, hulking shape blotted out the glow for a fraction of a second. Nyx solidified their human form entirely. The violet light in their eye sockets intensified, casting an eerie purple hue over the dark side of the clearing. "Company approaches." Nyx raised both hands. Thick black smoke began to curl and writhe around their elongated fingers in preparation. Rory adjusted her grip on the moonsilver dagger. She planted her boots wide on the slippery obsidian, lowering her center of gravity. The heavy scent of cinnamon mixed with rotting meat washed over them in a suffocating, nauseating wave. "Whatever is out there, it completely reeks." Rory tracked a heavy rustling sound in the canopy directly above the twisted root structures. Isolde tilted her chin upward, her pale lavender eyes reflecting the shifting amber light of the rift. "The uninvited guest arrives, carrying a bottomless hunger in its miserable belly." A snapping branch cracked through the air like a rifle shot. A colossal thud resonated across the obsidian floor, sending a visible shockwave through the shifting white mist.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
88.37% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1719
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"tightly"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count3
highlights
0"tightly"
1"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
18.56% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1719
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"chill"
count2
1
word"absolutely"
count1
2
word"imposing"
count1
3
word"shimmered"
count1
4
word"fascinating"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count1
7
word"rhythmic"
count1
8
word"intricate"
count1
9
word"shattered"
count1
10
word"vibrated"
count2
11
word"perfect"
count1
12
word"pulse"
count1
13
word"throbbed"
count1
14
word"scanned"
count1
15
word"crystal"
count2
16
word"structure"
count1
17
word"stomach"
count1
18
word"oppressive"
count1
19
word"traced"
count1
20
word"sturdy"
count1
21
word"echoed"
count1
22
word"flickered"
count1
23
word"hulking"
count1
24
word"resonated"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"absolutely"
2"imposing"
3"shimmered"
4"fascinating"
5"warmth"
6"pulsed"
7"rhythmic"
8"intricate"
9"shattered"
10"vibrated"
11"perfect"
12"pulse"
13"throbbed"
14"scanned"
15"crystal"
16"structure"
17"stomach"
18"oppressive"
19"traced"
20"sturdy"
21"echoed"
22"flickered"
23"hulking"
24"resonated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences125
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences125
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences155
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1707
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
43.16% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions61
wordCount1404
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity2.14
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory30
Carter1
London1
Richmond1
Park1
Varga1
Fae3
Nyx9
Heartstone2
Fae-forged1
Isolde9
Dymasian1
Grove1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Carter"
2"Varga"
3"Nyx"
4"Heartstone"
5"Isolde"
places
0"London"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"Fae"
4"Dymasian"
5"Grove"
globalScore0.432
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences112
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1707
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences155
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs80
mean21.34
std14.93
cv0.7
sampleLengths
063
141
29
330
45
531
668
717
87
923
1021
1133
127
1329
1412
1510
1612
1746
1814
198
2011
2117
2264
2323
2423
2512
2639
275
2810
2914
3025
3140
322
3315
3438
352
3614
3713
3810
3914
4024
419
4255
4330
4434
454
4619
4748
4812
499
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences125
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs218
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences155
ratio0
matches(empty)
76.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1416
adjectiveStacks4
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
1"slender, leaf-shaped blade."
2"fresh, lavender-scented air"
3"wispy, shadow-formed appendage."
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.021892655367231638
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.012711864406779662
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences155
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences155
mean11.01
std4.47
cv0.406
sampleLengths
013
114
217
319
46
515
611
79
89
95
1012
1113
125
138
145
157
1611
179
1816
1913
2010
2110
2210
2311
246
257
264
2714
285
2921
306
3110
3217
337
345
3511
3613
3712
382
398
4012
414
4210
4311
4413
458
4614
478
4811
498
42.26% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.2645161290322581
totalSentences155
uniqueOpeners41
27.10% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences123
matches
0"Instead of the bleak, leafless"
ratio0.008
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences123
matches
0"She squeezed between the colossal"
1"Her bare feet brushed the"
2"She left absolutely no footprints"
3"She pushed her hand forward."
4"Her boots hit solid ground"
5"She tapped the glass face."
6"She adjusted her shirt, revealing"
7"She pulled the silver chain"
8"She hovered inches above beds"
9"She snatched her hand away,"
10"They stepped into a narrow"
11"She drew the slender, leaf-shaped"
12"She swung the dagger at"
13"She sheathed the cold weapon."
14"They emerged from the ravine"
15"She hissed, lifting the silver"
16"She stared directly into the"
17"She brushed her pale fingers"
18"She planted her boots wide"
ratio0.154
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount115
totalSentences123
matches
0"The rough bark of the"
1"She squeezed between the colossal"
2"The chill of Richmond Park"
3"The distortion resembled spilled oil"
4"Isolde Varga glided toward the"
5"The Fae seer's silver hair"
6"Her bare feet brushed the"
7"She left absolutely no footprints"
8"Rory glanced back at Nyx."
9"The shade towered behind her"
10"Violet light bled from the"
11"Rory turned her attention back"
12"She pushed her hand forward."
13"The barrier offered a faint,"
14"The world beyond sucked her"
15"Her boots hit solid ground"
16"The air immediately flooded her"
17"Blankets of azure and magenta"
18"The blooms stretched infinitely among"
19"The bark on the trunks"
ratio0.935
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences123
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences79
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Rory followed, boots crunching on fallen leaves that shattered with the distinct noise of breaking green glass."
1"The contrasting temperatures created a turbulent miniature vortex of wind that whipped her hair across her face."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.1814%