Run: 2026-02-19-01KHVP4Q4ZVEQ9479P5PE1Q79D

Run Details

Duration:
1m 43s
Cost:
$0.089682
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory killed the moped’s engine. The sudden absence of the sputtering motor left a vacuum of sound in the deepest, most isolated stretch of Richmond Park. Midnight pressed firmly against the sprawling greens. Mist clung to the knobby roots of ancient trees, pooling in the dips of the wet earth. London felt entirely detached from this place. The relentless hum of the city, the sirens, the grinding gears of double-decker buses—none of it penetrated the dense thicket. Yu-Fei Cheung’s handwritten directions weighed heavily in her jacket pocket. A special, prepaid midnight order for the Golden Empress. She grabbed the crinkling foil bag from the delivery box. The rich, sharp smells of garlic, ginger, and fried pork offered a bizarre, comforting contrast to the damp bite of the autumn night. She stepped off the paved trail. Her boots crushed fallen leaves and rotting twigs. Darkness swallowed her within ten paces. She navigated by the faint beam of her phone flashlight until the path terminated at a steep incline. At the crest, two colossal ancient oak trees jutted from the damp loam. The standing stones. Their massive, gnarled trunks twisted together near the canopy, forming a jagged, natural archway that looked far too deliberate to be a random act of nature. Boundary markers. Rory stepped through the arch. The atmospheric pressure spiked. Her ears popped with a sharp, pain-filled seal. The flashlight beam flickered, dimmed, and died. The bone-deep chill of the autumn night vanished. A cloying, stagnant humidity replaced it. The Fae Grove. Isolde’s pocket dimension. Down by the soil, violent violet, sickly cerulean, and pearlescent white petals unfurled. Wildflowers carpeted every square inch of the clearing, blooming fiercely out of season, defying the frost she had just walked through. A rhythmic pulse hammered against her collarbone. Rory dropped her chin. The Heartstone pendant rested flat against her sternum, the silver chain tight around her neck. The deep crimson gemstone, usually a dead, glassy rock, emitted a steady luminescence. A faint inner glow swirled beneath the facets, throwing a bloody cast across her pale skin. Heat seeped from the stone directly into her blood. The pendant only acted up for one reason. A Hel portal. She rubbed her thumb over the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. A grounding mechanism. Reconnecting with her body when the world tipped sideways. The heat from the Heartstone increased, radiating through her thin cotton shirt. "Order for Isolde." She tossed the words into the oppressive air. The sound fell entirely flat. The heavy, perfumed oxygen swallowed her voice before it crossed the nearest bed of white asters. No echo. No reverberation. Just dead acoustics. She took another step into the clearing. The wildflowers beneath her boots did not snap. They flattened with a sickening, fleshy crunch, weeping a thick sap that smelled of pure sugar and rot. The overwhelming sweetness made her stomach turn. Time felt entirely unmoored in the Grove. The span between inhaling the rotting-flower scent and exhaling it stretched into an unbearable eternity. Rory glanced at her watch. The second hand jittered in place. It ticked backward three times, stopped for a long minute, then sprang forward. The rules of Earth ended at the oak boundary. An hour in this pocket could trap her for days in the real world. The crimson light flared brighter. The glow painted the trunks of the perimeter trees in dark, wet hues. A shadow detached from a massive oak to her left. Rory froze. Her bright blue eyes darted to the periphery. The straight black hair framing her face shifted as she pivoted her head. Nothing stood there. Just bark and interlaced branches forming a cage around the clearing. She shifted her grip on the foil bag. The paper rustled loudly. A sound answered. A wet, tearing drag over the earth. "I'm leaving the food right here." She set the Golden Empress bag onto a flat, moss-covered slab of rock jutting from the floral sea. "Enjoy." The pendant burned. The heat escalated from a warning warmth to a localized fever stamped directly against her skin. A portal wasn't just near. Something had just crawled out of it. A thick branch snapped above her. The crack split the silence like a gunshot. Rory whipped around. She swept her shoulder-length hair back, clearing her vision. She scanned the towering wall of oaks. To her right, a patch of violent violet blooms parted. A deep, wide groove formed in the floral carpet, pressing down in the shape of a massive, distorted footprint. The crushed flowers did not spring back. They withered instantly beneath the unseen weight, curling into a fine, black ash. Another wet drag. Another patch of flowers turned to ash ten feet closer. No wind stirred the stagnant air, but a copper taste flooded Rory’s mouth. Ozone and dried blood. "Step out." She widened her stance, plunging her hands into her jacket pockets. Her fingers curled around her keyring. She slipped the longest brass house key tightly between her knuckles. "I deliver food, not patience." A guttural, vibrating chitter pulsed from the canopy. She jerked her chin up. The Heartstone’s crimson glow failed to pierce the dense leaves overhead. A massive silhouette blotted out the meager starlight filtering through the interlaced branches. It shifted. Joint by joint. *Pop. Crack. Squelch.* The noise resembled cracking knuckles amplified through a hollow pipe. The creature reoriented its limbs. Long, spindly appendages wrapped around the thick oak branches. Large chunks of bark peeled away and rained down onto the wildflowers around Rory’s boots. The Heartstone seared her chest. Actual pain lanced through her ribs. This wasn't a minor breach. The silhouette descended. It did not climb down the trunk. It slithered out of the canopy, a mass of fluid, twitching geometry. The angles of its movement possessed a wrongness that brought immediate tears to Rory’s eyes. Limbs bent at impossible, jagged inversions. A low, subsonic vibration rattled her teeth. The creature inhaled. The overpowering stench of ancient, rotting meat obliterated the aggressive perfume of the asters. Rory backed away slowly. Her heel found no solid ground, catching on a thick root hidden beneath the petals. She stumbled. Her hand slapped hard against the flat rock next to the crushed delivery bag to keep from falling backward. The creature hit the ground. The impact sent a violent tremor through the loam. The ash-trail of dead flowers smoked around it. Thick, black plumes rose heavily into the humid air, refusing to dissipate. It stood directly between her and the standing stones. Her only exit. The Heartstone flashed rapidly, a frantic strobe light of blood-red warnings against her shirt. The silver chain scorched the back of her neck. The black smoke parted just enough to reveal a pale, elongated limb pressing into the earth. Fingers with far too many knuckles dug deep into the soil. Claws longer than skinning knives gouged the dirt, anchoring the massive shape. The wet popping sound escalated into a rapid-fire drumbeat. The entity uncoiled. The mass of shadow and impossibly angled limbs stretched upward, rising over eight feet tall and eclipsing the boundary oaks. Rory inhaled deeply, forcing the copper taste down her throat. "You have a problem with pork?" She gripped the rock edge, her muscles coiled entirely tight. A horrible noise slithered from the towering shadow. A flawed mimicry of human speech ground through a throat comprised of wet meat and broken glass. "Rrrrrr...ooo...rrrr...yyyy." The syllables stretched and distorted, repeating her name in a sickening loop. The mass of shadow took a huge, shuddering step forward. The ground heaved. The wildflowers dissolved to ash in a sweeping arc around its ungodly feet. Rory stood entirely still among the dying flowers, watching the darkness reach for her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.571
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.32% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1302
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"tightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"tightly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
42.40% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1302
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"firmly"
count1
1
word"comforting"
count1
2
word"navigated"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"chill"
count1
5
word"rhythmic"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"oppressive"
count1
8
word"echo"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count1
11
word"silence"
count1
12
word"scanned"
count1
13
word"weight"
count1
14
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"firmly"
1"comforting"
2"navigated"
3"flickered"
4"chill"
5"rhythmic"
6"pulse"
7"oppressive"
8"echo"
9"stomach"
10"warmth"
11"silence"
12"scanned"
13"weight"
14"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences141
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences141
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences144
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords3
totalWords1290
ratio0.002
matches
0"Pop. Crack. Squelch."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount1266
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.95
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Cheung1
Golden2
Empress2
Fae1
Grove2
Heartstone5
Hel1
Earth1
Rory12
persons
0"Cheung"
1"Heartstone"
2"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences99
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1290
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences144
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean24.34
std17.78
cv0.731
sampleLengths
077
152
220
362
45
519
654
755
89
911
1037
1111
1228
1340
1469
1518
1610
1723
1814
1912
203
217
2225
2331
2414
2519
2649
2713
2817
2935
308
3129
325
333
3439
3516
3643
3710
3814
3940
405
4129
4212
4323
4439
4532
4610
4716
4825
491
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences141
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs195
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences144
ratio0.007
matches
0"The relentless hum of the city, the sirens, the grinding gears of double-decker buses—none of it penetrated the dense thicket."
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1278
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"sharp, pain-filled seal."
1"small crescent-shaped scar"
2"flat, moss-covered slab"
adverbCount49
adverbRatio0.03834115805946792
lyAdverbCount25
lyAdverbRatio0.019561815336463225
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences144
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences144
mean8.96
std5.4
cv0.603
sampleLengths
05
121
27
317
47
520
610
79
810
923
106
118
126
1318
1413
153
1626
172
185
194
208
217
228
236
243
253
2613
2721
287
294
3015
3113
3216
339
348
353
3613
373
389
3912
4011
415
4216
432
442
453
467
478
4818
497
39.12% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats22
diversityRatio0.3263888888888889
totalSentences144
uniqueOpeners47
50.51% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences132
matches
0"Just dead acoustics."
1"Just bark and interlaced branches"
ratio0.015
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences132
matches
0"She grabbed the crinkling foil"
1"She stepped off the paved"
2"Her boots crushed fallen leaves"
3"She navigated by the faint"
4"Their massive, gnarled trunks twisted"
5"Her ears popped with a"
6"She rubbed her thumb over"
7"She tossed the words into"
8"She took another step into"
9"They flattened with a sickening,"
10"It ticked backward three times,"
11"Her bright blue eyes darted"
12"She shifted her grip on"
13"She set the Golden Empress"
14"She swept her shoulder-length hair"
15"She scanned the towering wall"
16"They withered instantly beneath the"
17"She widened her stance, plunging"
18"Her fingers curled around her"
19"She slipped the longest brass"
ratio0.212
1.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount121
totalSentences132
matches
0"Rory killed the moped’s engine."
1"The sudden absence of the"
2"Midnight pressed firmly against the"
3"Mist clung to the knobby"
4"London felt entirely detached from"
5"The relentless hum of the"
6"Yu-Fei Cheung’s handwritten directions weighed"
7"A special, prepaid midnight order"
8"She grabbed the crinkling foil"
9"The rich, sharp smells of"
10"She stepped off the paved"
11"Her boots crushed fallen leaves"
12"Darkness swallowed her within ten"
13"She navigated by the faint"
14"The standing stones."
15"Their massive, gnarled trunks twisted"
16"Rory stepped through the arch."
17"The atmospheric pressure spiked."
18"Her ears popped with a"
19"The flashlight beam flickered, dimmed,"
ratio0.917
37.88% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences132
matches
0"To her right, a patch"
ratio0.008
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Their massive, gnarled trunks twisted together near the canopy, forming a jagged, natural archway that looked far too deliberate to be a random act of nature."
1"They flattened with a sickening, fleshy crunch, weeping a thick sap that smelled of pure sugar and rot."
2"The angles of its movement possessed a wrongness that brought immediate tears to Rory’s eyes."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
88.1962%